NEW FF: Persuasion of Khurana *Final Part* Pg. 15 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
Whoa! That was amazing! Lolz at Geet.....she is full of herself.....a pampered brat.....and Maan and her know each other already.......they have even kissed before......it sure is damn interesting! Do continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
Geet is really different here
Jus love her frankness n papmpered nature
She takes her sis for granted
Her dare is sumthg whch will get her life in trouble i feel
Anji was hell nervous in frnt of police
Her answer was really fab😆😆😆
Geet's entry
Sab pe pani phr gaya
Lets c wat happens aage
Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
what a wromg place to stop...mmmm GEET in white..gosh thats not something any of us will not love..update jaldi..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Wow now that was amazing good to see geet in a different avatar and awe just love the whole thing and haha anji and rids also and haha the speeding part was so funny how anji was trembling and ridz and geet where calm but loved the answer because it gets you home faster lol and ooh the grand entrance may have been ruined but I suppose her dare would be a lot easier I think she must have fell in maans arm lol I can see that they have an history which would be intersting to know anyways great loved it and yes to continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
loved it.....please add me 2 ur pm list😊 Its so different and interesting.....please update soon
Edited by khwaishfan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
hey its awesome just like ur other ff so pls do pm me 4 dis one too
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: bluedreamz953

Wow!!This is awesome yaar!

Please add me to the pm list!
Loved this FF
Please continue soon
Thanks a heap babes!
Love you

Btw,I'm Shaila!
And you are??



Hey Shaila, thank you for loving my ff, have you read my other ff "Out of Darkness"? if not, then i would request you to give that one a try, you will love it more then this one... 😳 Anyways, everyone here on IF know me as "Angel" but my name is Sarah!
I hope you enjoy reading part 2. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

grt part angel........

loved the christmas gift.👏👏
but let me clarify one pt...
since this is a christmas gift we need to get it b4 christmas .right?😉😉😉
that means u will finish it early....right????😉😉😉
i dont mind u turning it into an FF also...
that wud be cool....😃😃
now about the story....
spoilt brat geet......😆😆😆
already kissed by MSK.....😆😆😆
is she less than 18 here????
and u said msk is friends uncle????
but i have faith in u....
i kno u will totally deliver what u promised....😳😳😳
plz update soon....😊😊




Happy to know that you loved my christmas gift..... and yes, this SS will be finished by friday night... 😛 and about turning this into a ff... well... i haven't decided on that but this SS will end in a way that will keep you all in guessing what happened after the end! 😉 Geet is 17 in this FF, very selfish and spoiled. Maan is Pari's Mamaji... 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Geet is really different here

Jus love her frankness n papmpered nature
She takes her sis for granted
Her dare is sumthg whch will get her life in trouble i feel
Anji was hell nervous in frnt of police
Her answer was really fab😆😆😆
Geet's entry
Sab pe pani phr gaya
Lets c wat happens aage
Update soon



Afsha, You are so right with you feeling of the dare leading to trouble in Geet's life.... and as for Anji's answer, I have to admit that was inspired by real life incident.... my friend gave that answer to the police officer....😆😆 so, well just couldn't resist using it in my ff...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: -shamima-

Wow now that was amazing good to see geet in a different avatar and awe just love the whole thing and haha anji and rids also and haha the speeding part was so funny how anji was trembling and ridz and geet where calm but loved the answer because it gets you home faster lol and ooh the grand entrance may have been ruined but I suppose her dare would be a lot easier I think she must have fell in maans arm lol I can see that they have an history which would be intersting to know anyways great loved it and yes to continue soon 😊




"It gets you home faster" was the answer my friend gave when he was asked the reason for speeding, the whole speeding scene was lifted from real life incident.... It was very hilarious, i still laugh remembering that incident.... 😆 Maneet do have a history together but i do not plan on disclosing it.... this is a SS so the focus is just on completing the dare and ending the SS with a cliff hanger..... leaving you all to guess what really happened after the Christmas Eve!
Edited by Angelskiss - 14 years ago

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