# Devils Den # - Arjun is cool daadi is a phool

Folks
I have written an idea for an alternative track. I am posting in in the post below this one. If everyone could please come up with more novel and innovative tracks than the current Arjun falls for Anvesha down, write it down and PM it to me within the next 24 hours. I will add it to my post.


Hello my darling denizens. Analysis was delayed but I am sure you can cut me a little slack having had to work, field phone calls all day and then come back and rush off to dinner. I managed to squeeze in watching the eppy but had no time for the analysis. I decided to analyze the mail exchange between Maaneet. 😉

Maan makes a list and Geet replies - what she said and what she actually meant 😉
Maan decides to budget his time since only 30 minutes are available and makes a list of things that he can do with Geet and sends it to Geet. 🤣🤣🤣
Her answers were hilarious so here are some of mine translated for easier understanding

Maan: Candle light dinner
Geet: Been there done that 😛
Literal tranlation: Arrey loser I do not want another astronomy lesson 🤣🤣. Knowing you and your kanjoosi and your proclivity for the heavens I will get another sermon on celestial bodies. I might be tempted to take the candle and use it to set you on fire so that you can see your favorite stars and planets up close. 🤣🤣 Otherwise I may get so mad at you that you will be wearing the food instead of eating it. 😛 I may also dump the water jug on you so that you feel one with nature like you seem to want to do. So let us just skip that Haan. 😉


Maan: Long drive
Geet: Delhi traffic and one little ice-cream
Literal translation: I do not trust you in the backseat of a car 🤣🤣.....kya pata aap ke dimaag mein kis tarah ke dusht vichaar aayenge 🤣🤣🤣........I refuse to sit with you in the backseat. 🤣🤣
I refuse to sit next to you when you drive because of your temper - we might have a road rage incident and I will be locked up along with you 🤣.......you and me akele akele in a jail cell together.....hai babaji......this is just plain scary 🤣🤣🤣
Upar se when the car engine is idling you may give me a lecture on petrol (gasoline) ka bhav. I am not going to risk that.....NO FREAKIN WAY 😆 😆 😆
In addition to that you will insist on sharing my ice-cream 😡......dude do you even realize I am eating for 2 now 😡..........get your own.


Maan: Movie
Geet: Movie is for 3 hours 🤔.....what are we gonna watch in 30 mins.
Literal tranlation: Yikes he is gonna take me to see some brainless art film jiss me mujhe kuccch samaj nahin aayega. 🤔
What if he takes me to see an "aise-waise film" 😲 😲 😲.....hai babaji I cannot take the risk 🤣
If he takes me to a hindi movie knowing him we will go back to the same theater like 50 times before we finish watching the movie. He will get bored in 10 mins and then start lecturing me about watching crap 🤔. I will go with Pinky baba not with him 🤣

Maan: Disco
Geet: Do not like it
Literal translation: I do not trust you around other chicks - especially those in short dresses 😡
You were happy to shake your booty with Pari and Anana peel (Arhana). I had to bring you back in drunk state the first time and the next time I ended up slapping you to bring you to your senses. My patience is running low these days upar se I am possessive of you - who knows what I might do . I might actually kill you this time. 😡
Jaana hai toh go with your darling sister who is the partying type.
Lekin ek baat yaad rakhna if you decide to go and blacken your face in the disco 😆 😆 😆, don't show me your kaala face ever again 😡

Maan: cell phone
Geet: Not necessary. Who will I talk to?
Literal translation: The only "me" time I get is when I am away from you. 😉 I need to bond with my baby and the other Khurana family members you know 😉. Plus I know you. YOu will get the cheapest phone on the market with the cheapest calling plan for me. 😡 🤣🤣I cannot talk to anyone but you - not even to my Pinky, Adi Sir, Romeo, Manisha or Pandeyji - whom I adore BTW. 😛 🤣🤣 To hell with your cell phone I am better off without one. 🤣




Mirror mirror on the wall
Why are the Geet TRPs in free fall
Why does the series no more viewers enthrall
Could you help us in this matter at all?

Mirror starts thinking hard 🤔
and then the mirror says

When they started the show was unique
Later they started showing more of the male physique 🤣
rather than paying attention to the storyline
They started serving a badly bottled version
of some really cheap quality old wine 🤣

Then the sis showed up out of well thin air 😳 🤔
This was a tad too much for the viewers to bear
The fact that the sister cannot act made matters worse 🤣
People are frustrated that they cannot do anything more than curse 😡

The CVs have already made mince meat of Maan's character
Then we heard NTs brother was going to be trapping the sister 🤔
Now we hear that courtesy Arjun, Maan will become bankrupt 🤣
The last time this happened in LNMDJ, the show's end was abrupt 😭


The new CVs seem hell-bent on going on a saas-bahu track
No wonder you are drawing from all sides nothing but flak
In such a track no Star One viewer will partake
The series itself they will completely forsake
Why are all your plot lines completely half-baked and lame
Does Star one realize that Geet is its one claim to fame
Trying to make it a saas-bahu show is insane
Come on people find a way to get back in the game 😡

This predictability needs to end
The light moments on the show we really miss
The track is too heavy and filled with negativity
Geet used be a series with so much positivity

Please take the suggestions we give you to heart
We are giving you some below to make a start
Please folks come on prove that you are smart
Give us a track and show that none can fault
We are with you provided you maintain the essence
We will ditch you without a second thought if you show us nonsense. 😡
Cheers
Jhan

Alternative track 1 by Jhan and Arpita

I know that the creatives have brought in Anwesha (Anie) with the intention of making Arjun fall in love with her for the purpose of revenge. I think that will be too Ektaish. The Star One crowd hates that track and will dump a serial that shows such a track (as proved with LNMDJ and Ajnabee).

I have a slightly different alternative to offer. What if Arjun courts Anie with the intention of dumping her as per your plan. He courts her but her considers her too rude and does not like her much. But he sees Geet somewhere and is actually taken with her - maybe at the mall or on the street. He starts developing a liking for her innocent looks and her nice nature. Maybe he is hurt and she helps him or maybe he drops something and she returns it to him or vice versa.

He sees her together with Anie and figures that she is either Anie's friend or a KC employee whom he can use as his pawn (like NT used Sasha). But every time he comes close to her, he ends up attracted to her more. Geet is her usual self more interested in Maan and everything that concerns him. Arjun can even overhear her talking to Maan Sir and he confirms that Geet is a KC employee. He plans to use her in his plot to charm the BOD. He has no idea she is Maan's fiancee and soon to be wife because NT never bothered to tell Arjun that Maan is engaged or about what she and Dev did to Geet.

Geet tells Maan about this guy she keeps running into and Maan is jealous because daadi is keeping Geet away from him. But he knows that Geet will never be unfaithful to him. So he teases her and sulks and Geet convinces him that she loves him. Scope for lots of cute mock fights and making up scenes between the two. Maan tells Geet that she is too trusting and that she should not talk to strangers. He makes her promise that she will tell him all about this guy.

When Arjun tries to get close to Geet, she does not reciprocate. He tries to woo her further. This is witnessed by Annie who gets jealous but takes pictures and leaves. When Geet does not reciprocate Arjun gets violent scaring Geet who runs away from there. When Geet comes home, Anie creates a scene and is mean to Geet. Maan sees Geet is shaking and realizes something is wrong and tells Anie to zip it. He then takes care of Geet as a fuming Anie stands by. Anie walks off in a huff. Geet finally spills beans and Maan consoles her and tells her to stay home and someone else will complete the shopping. He leaves her in daadima's care and goes to see Anie.

Anie is in a rage and out-of-control. She taunts Geet and questions her faithfulness to Maan. Maan tells Anie to stay in her limits. Anie gets mad because Maan stands up for his fiancee. Their elevated voices bring Geet and Daadima running. Anie turns on Geet and accuses her of stealing her man. Maan tells her to stop. She pulls out her cell phone and shows him the pictures and Maan's face changes because he recognizes Arjun. This is too much for Geet and she faints. Maan is worried and calls the doctor. While the doctor is examining Geet, Maan grills Anie and pieces together what happened. He then tells Annie the whole truth (about Dev, NT, Geet and Arjun) and they make a plan to get back at Arjun. Anie now hates Arjun but when she realizes what Arjun was upto she agrees to be part of the plan. When Geet wakes up they tell her that everything is fine. Anie apologizes to Geet. Maan and Anie set the plan in motion.

Zaraa si aahat hoti hai, kahin yeh wo to nahin, kahin yeh wo to nahin …

Welcome back Doodle ! <HUGS> Missed u a lot. So good to have u back … pls sharpen ur belans … GHSP really, really need it.

Maannie

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Ha ha , even the office staff is stumped seeing AnNE walk in with her bro. Adinki, 3Ms don't seem to be too pleased to see her. Another thing I personally did not like is AnNE's so called office attire. Who in their right mind would wear a sun dress to work ? So what if u r the boss' li'l sis. Doesn't KC have a dress code. If I were to wear such a dress to work, HR would show me the door with a pink slip.

Finally ! The 3 Musketeers are dressed in casual wear. Buh bye to the IP overalls ! So the costume dept seems to have some funding. Why not shell out some office attire for NE … or better yet, recycle some of NTs clothes.

So NE tries to rouse the crowd by saying the magic word 'GEET'. So now everyones in the secret to plan for a 'rcoking' Maaneet shaadi. Pandeyji is the only diplomat…Shreeman Maanji bhi to hamaare hi hain na (not just Gith, get that ?).

Maan seems like someone who's not had his favorite Starbucks coffee in the morning…obviously. Loved the way Maan the bro turned into MSK the boss…NE ur jaw should drop a lot lower….hehehe !

It's payback time sis…if u make my life miserable without Geet, I'll make yours miserable with a s**t load of real work. Now GIT !

So what's wrong with him calling Geet for the missing file …poor MSK. Absolutely loved the expression on Maan's face as he is waiting for his Gith to come to the phone. GC – fab job with ur expression. NE bhi to usi bro ki sis hai. If looks could kill NE, u'd be history.

So if you don't let me talk to my Geet I'm going to make everyones life miserable. But first, let me jot down how I'm going to spend the precious 30 minutes with my Gith. So plan is prepared but has to be approved by management so off goes the peon to get management's approval.

Cell phone…did I hear u right Maan ? Whoa….wooohoooo ….all the chillaoing in the den for the kanjoos Maan to gift a cell phone to Geet has come to fruition. Haaiiilaaa re, if we'd known earlier that a curfew was needed, we would have shouted ourselves hoarse a long time ago.

But I thoroughly enjoyed how Maan takes everyone to task. Barry – u seemed to have a blast with the dialogues. GC – u seemed to be enjoying it too !!! Even talking to 'Manisha' … LOL !

My fav dialogue in this scene –

Maan – Pandeyji

Pandeyji – Ji Bajrangbali

Maan – Pooja hui aapki

Pandeyji – Ji Shreemaan

Maan – Jaake file leke aao

ROFL….ROFL…ROFL !

Finally NE cries 'MOMMY'…I mean ….'DAAAADI'.

Arjun-Anwesha takkar

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Nissar, CVs are u trying to recreate Maaneet moments with these 2? Same old wine in a new bottle ? Pachtaoogey, haan !

Arjun – hope ur knee's doing better.

Nissar – what's with all ur main leads sporting a beard, Maan ishtyle … haan ?

Looks like NE will be Arjun's pawn … but looks like Arjun will be pawned in the end.

Dadi @ KC

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Maan does like the TLC Dadi is talking abt with Geet. But shay…NT walks in

NT looking smart….performance dhamaakedar….no regrets !

Maan-Arjun

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I loved this scene….very well done.

- Good intro…nothing confrontational. Laying down the playing field subtlely…very interesting.

- NT seems to be surprised with Arjun's moves…good…Arjun seems to be a guy who doesn't take his sis into confidence but plays his own game. Like it.

- A cool negotiator….KC shares in return for dismissal of charges to prevent immigration issues….logical.

- MSK still not bringing down his guard. That brain is ticking furiously.

- But Dadi seems to jump the gun by accepting Arjun's proposal.

- MSK is surprised. Arjun is surprised by Dadi's speech.

- Has Dadi met Arjun before – Dev/NT's wedding ?

- She seems to be a good judge of character – remember when she first met Geet in the office ?

- But could she be blinded by love for her pota combined with not knowing the full facts of NT's case and Arjun's real purpose behind this truce ?

- Arjun seems to be a good negative character…but will he stay negative for long ? What happens when he finds out NT's truth ?

- Per the latest news, Arjun is set to bankrupt the Khuranas. Arjun-Geet meeting will be something to look out for. Will Geet's female instinct kick in and see the danger? After all this is her fight.

- Where does NE fit in all this ?

- Liked I said, very interesting … a good mystery.

Management's response to Maan's 30-min plan

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Management does not approve.

- Candlelight dinner – what's new about that ?

- Long Drive – Have to paid attention to the evening traffic ?

- Ice cream – Hud hai kanjoosi ki … ROFL !

- Movie – now which movie ends in 30 min? Arey yaar Geet, movie jayenge to 30 min ke 3 ghante to ban jayenge … Dadi or NE ko to ullooo bana sakte…at least once.

- Mobile – ROFL …mujhe bhala kisse baat karni hai….ROFL. Maan may think he can talk to his Gith anytime, anywhere…but Geet is smart…mobile milne ke baad Maan coochie coo thodi na bolega…aur kaam hi to dega… Smart move Geet !

- Disco – R u kidding ? After seeing how u behave in the past, why would she risk a disco ?

Bahut badi samasya hai Maan … I feel for you …LOL !!!

Today, I

- Loved the fact that no BDs were used. GC seemed relieved

- GC proved that he can carry on the show when DD is not around

- Loved the comic relief in the office. Loved the see the old MSK back. He's a marshmallow only for his Geet, not the world. Arjun beware !

- Arjun – liked his intro to MSK and KC

- NT- you never disappoint us.

- Barry – good job

- Costumes – Be alert

- CVs – Keep an eye on the orginal characters of Maaneet and your storyline

- Nissar – Doodles back…need I say more

- Gurmeet – Fabulous…loved the different shades of MSK today.

- Drashti – Hurry back soon !

- GeetHSP – Need a lavish, trouble free wedding for Maaneet. No excuses ! U owe it to us !!!

HEllo guys!

Quick pointers sinse I hv no time for detailed analysisbut I loved the episode today and enjoyed it after a loog time😛

• Editing team doing consistently a good job now👍🏼
• No use of BDs😃
• MSK's dusht danav charm was back with a bang today😎
• CVs proved that MSK never lost his charm and was always the same dusht danav when it came to the world..only with Geet he becomes a romeo😃
• MSK's way of dealing with his sister in the office...zabardast👍🏼😆
• Fun element was back in KC...Adi..Pinky..Tasha..and three Idiots of IP all rocked👏..
• Arjun-MSK encounter was quite good..not over the top filmy👍🏼...Iiked the fact that MSK was not forming any opinion about Arjun and was silently trying to grasp the situation without believing anything
• Arjun's plan of returning those 25% shares back to KC and thus playing reverse psychology on MSK and Dadi was a good unexpected twist coming from the CVs👍🏼
• When Dadi decides to take NT's case back,MSK could hv opposed it but I liked the fact that he din't oppose Dadi's verdict in front of his office employees😊;Even though Dadi was wrong but MSK was right in showing respect to Dadi's decision in front of office staff.😊..later of course Geet should b taken into consideration and decision should b left on her..what she wants to do with NT😊
• CVs proved that they r reading the Den..so we have MSK showing his kanjoosgiri🤣..then finally MSK decidding to gift her a mobile and then making that historic 30min list🤣;Loved those witty replies that came from Geet via letter especially the kanjoos compliment from her🤣🤣🤣..Good job CVs👍🏼...I want to know which 30minute film MSK was plannnig to show Geet😉😆..mayb something related to the galaxies again🤣🤣🤣🤣

• Arjun-Anvesha meeting in the parking area...hmmmm not very impressive🤔..Also where did she go after that ??She went there to get the files but never came back when all this Arjun-NT tamasha was happening ??😕
• How come Anvesha doesn't recognise Arjun ??😕...Its weird even MSK doesn't recognise Arjun😕..So was NT's family not present fully during NT-Dev marriage ??🤔...From Dadi's reaction it seemed she recognises Arjun..but still not sure😕
• DD's presense was missed today😭..hope she is back tomorrow😳

Just finished watching the episode!!!

Just a short input for today!!

Loved bajrang bali 😆, oh man he was in full force today. He will do anything to get his Geeth back in office! Felt bad for office staff, all were jumping accept for pandey ji!😆😆😆NE was a bit OTT, but tolerable.

Thank god for no cheat shoots or body doubles or I would have screamed.

MSK's love for Geet, bechara is planning his 30 mins, I feel for him. Mr. stalker what is he gonna do now!😆

NT and Arjun entry in office, well it didnt impress me at all, if one wants to bring MSK down, play smart and don't come in with torn Jeans, big let down for me. Also, who is dadi to decide to withdraw the charges filed on NT.

Kanjoosi ke bhi hud hoti hai! 😆Cell phone, who do I need to talk to😆Loved the creatives responses from Geet! They do read the den for sure!

NE and Arjun car fiasco scene very very OTT, what was the purpose for that.

Well, I must say a better episode from past few days.

Just a question for CV's, Im sure when NT and Dev got married all the family was present na, unless they eloped, but I don't think so! How come no one knows any of the perspective families sibilings????🤔

One more thing to creatives, please don't show MSK failing against Arjun, it will be like other serials where bad people always succeed. MSK's character is not such where us fans will be able to digest this. Trust me u will loose TRP's if this happens!

Dear friends,

How have you been? Hopefully wonderful! So how did you like the episode today? Obviously wonderful!!! I mean some fairy godmother must have visited the Khurana Construction and gave romeo manisha and pandey ji some new suits! I hope the dresses won't disappear after 10:00PM like Cinderella's one! Geet almost got the much required cell phone but yes, who would she talk to now and why? I remember the first time geet expressed her need for a cell phone on the "hum tum ek kamre mein bandh ho" episode. Pinky's cell's battery was down, maan forgot to bring his own one and geet said that she doesn't get enough salary to buy herself a cell. Those were the days! Anyways lets talk about today.

No doubt that the episode was fully satisfying. I loved the way msk treated anne in the office. Thanks for that. Yes, he is the boss in the office and other than dadi no one ever received extra care in the office, not even geet and so shouldn't anne. Office is a professional place and should remain that way. We can see an exception only for our beloved geet. Love is blind; for siblings we have eyes!!!

I was thoroughly entertained by adi kind of juggling with the files, romeo's "kaun hai…..and then aaahhhhh", manisha's high jump and the whole office practicing to join the next Olympics as if! Liked the way the scene was captured when anne called dadi and behind unsatisfied maan surrounded by adi-tasha-pinky-manisha-romeo trying to please him! Excellent, excellent, excellent job there!

NT looked really good and classy today with the proper formal and official dress up. One very nice thing about NT and her brother is that they talks to people with right manners. Both called maan "aap" and even to each other. Liked those classy vamps. Today Maan-arjun interaction was acceptable but anne-arjun was kind of blank. Anne improved in her acting a little though. If anne is to stay in the show she better be utilized by helping maan out with handling upcoming arjun war rather than being a kamzori to maan by falling in love with the villain.

About dadi, at this stage I guess people gets peaceful. I mean she instantly loved the manners of arjun and wanted believe the sincerity he expressed and the apology he offered. Oh if only there was such an easy way of making life really trouble free! Forgiveness doesn't make everyone better dear dadi and I hope you don't torture yourself in the future for making such a decision.

Loves and prayers......