SS: Mere Yaar ka Pyar!(Last part:pg 57) - Page 34

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely ss i read it all in one go
please make it a happy ending
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Posted: 14 years ago
plz continue soon it was gr8!
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it was nyce plz continue soon:)
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wow..awsum part........geet confessed...yayieeeeeeeeeeeeeee
omg..geet listened....😭
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Recap:Geet confessed her love for maan.Maan told about his revenge to yash.Geet heard it.

SS:Mere Yaar Ka pyar!

Part 13

Last part!

Geet decided to come home soon.She was about to enter her room when she heard maan telling about his past and revenge.She was shocked to hear that and she went downstairs while controlling her tears.She banged the door of madhavi's room.

Madhavi:Pari beta!Tum theek tu ho?

Geet(Cried loudly):Aap ke galti ke saza mujhe mil rahe hai.Kyu kiya aap ne aise???Aap ne tu kaha ta ka dad usha mom ko pasand karte tha.Iss liye inho ne aap ko chor diya aur aap ne sunil uncle se shadi kar le.Kyu mom kyu aap ne mujh se jhoot bola????(Her eyes had turned red due to crying).Mom aaj aap ke wajah se maan mujhe chor dein ge.Main inse bohat pyar karte hoon aaj sirf aap ke wajah se main apna pyar kho doon ge.

Sunil:Beta ro mat.Maan tumhi nahi chori ga.

Geet(Tears were flowing from her eyes):Nahi uncle woh mujhe divorce de dein ge.Per main kaise rahoon ge(She was about to faint)

Madhavi(Could not see her crying):Beta apne aap ko sambhalo.

Geet:.....Main inhe kise aur ke saath kaise dekh pao ge.Main bhi shilpa aunty ke tara aur nahi jee pao ge.Main mar jao ge (She fainted).

After two days,Her eyes opened in hospital.She saw maan was holding her hands.

Geet(Cried):Aap please mujhe mat chorna.Main aapse bohat pyar karte hoon.Please mom ke saza mujhe mat dein.

Maan(Kissed her tears):Please geet rona band kar do.Main tumhi kabhi nahi chor sakta kyuki mere aik majboori hai.

Geet(Confused):Kya?

Maan(Smiled):Main tumse bohat pyar karta hoon.Tum mere zindagi ho aur koi apne zindagi ko chor sakta hai kya?Waise sweetheart agar tum mere aur yash ke pori baat sun lete tu mere aur tumhare do din waste na hote.

Geet:Matlab?

Flashback:

After listening to whole the story,

Yash(Comforting maan):Maan main tumhare situation samijh sakta hoon.Per yaar geet ka tu iss main koi kosur nahi hai na?Tu tum isse kyu saza de rahe ho?Kya tum chahte ho ke tumhara beta ya beti bhi isse tara suffer karein jaisa tumne kiya?Tumhi pata hai tumhare khawab main jo aunty ro rahe thi woh apne liye nahi bilke geet ka liye ro rahein thi.Woh nahi chahte ka jo in ka saath ho woh geet ka saath bhi ho.Aur in sab main tum jis ko hurt karna cha rahe ho iss se zayada tum aur geet suffer ho ge.

Maan(Hugged yash):Thanxx yash!Aaj tumhare wajah se mere dil aur damag main jo jang chal rahe thi khatam ho gaye.Thank you so much buddy!

Flashback ended.

Madhavi and sunil entered in hospital room.

Madhavi:I'm sorry maan aaj mujhe ehsas hua hai ka maine shilpa ka saath bohat bura kiya tum dono mujhe maaf kar do.

Geet:Sorry mom per main aap ko maaf nahi kar sakte.Apne shilpa maa ke saath bohat bura kiya hai.Aur mera bhi bharosa tora hai.Aaj se main maan ke saath hoon.Main in ka zindagi ke har mor per saath doon ge.Ab aap please hum dono ko akela chor dein ge.

Madhavi and sunil left the room.Maan smiled and he started to love his wife more and promised to give her all the happiness she deserved.

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Yash:And they lived happily ever after.Tu yeh tha mere yaar ka pyar.

Nupur(age:sixyears):Per uncle, maine tu suna hai ke romeo aur juliet mar gaye tha end main.

Gunjan(age:five years):Per romeo juliet tu uncle ke friends hain na?

Mayank(age:six years):Whatever,Yeh love stories time waste karne ka liye hote hain.

Samrat(age:five years):Time waste tu nahi time pass zarur hota hai inse.

Shantanu(age:Six years):Uncle apke pehle wale story jab maine teacher ko sunaye tu woh haans rahe thi.

Nupur:Konsi wale?

Shantanu:Jis main uncle ne bataya tha ke shahjahan jisne taj mahal banaya hai isse uncle mirror main dekh sakte hain.

Maan and geet enter in the room.

Geet:Chalo,Everyone now get back to sleep.Uncle ko bhi sone do kal humne barat le kar jane hai meera aunty ke ghar.

Yash:Haan tum sab so jao.

Shantanu:Main aaj uncle ka saath soa ga.

Yash:Acha theek hai.Chalo room main chalte hain.

(What yash doesn't know that shantanu will become his son in law in future)

Next day,Geet has made shantanu ready and comes to her room.

Maan:Geet tie band kar do.

Geet:Oh ho!Maan apko bhi na ab tak tie bandne nahi aate.

Maan:Aate tu hai tie bandna per tum jab bandte ho na tu acha lagta hai (He comes close to her)

Geet:Aap ko bhi na har waqt romance sojta rahta hai.

Geet tries to go away.Maan pulls her back.He is about to kiss her when shantanu comes.Maan whispers betay ne bachaliye tumhi in geet's ear and picks shantanu and holds geet from the waist and they go downstairs for joining with the barat.Maneet look at eachother and smiled.They remember the time when they got married.They knew that they were together in happiness and sorrow and they promised in their hearts that they will be there for eachother and love eachother and their child more.

****************************************The End****************************

Note:*sigh* atlast i have finished this ss.Thanxxx for the wonderful comments and support of all of the readers.I have made happy ending because of ur requests.I know this part is not gud.But please leave ur comments.I have started a new ss.This is the link of the character sketch of my new maneet ss


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1620729/maneet-ss-predicament-last-part-page-52

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
fan ending
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr8 ending
Luvd dis SS
Awwww da kids r so cute wen yash was telling em about his story Xx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful, so cute aww shantanu gna b yash's son in law hahaha
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...............happy happy ending................waise sirf shantanu unka beta hain ki pure mandali unke bache hain
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Posted: 14 years ago
@preethia:Only shantanu is their son.Other r friends of shantanu.
Edited by pickachu - 14 years ago

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