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Posted: 14 years ago

Love the pink saree maan got for geet. Maan looking handsome in pink shirt and geet looking beautiful in the pink saree.

Love the song and how maan teaches geet how to eat with chopsticks

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Posted: 14 years ago
oh wow im lykin this. Gna read all and then come bk.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...
loved it...
loved d maaneet parts..
thnx 4 d pm..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awhh Awesomeeeeee update
Loved it
soo cute
Love the saree maan gifted her
Continue soon
Thank u

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Posted: 14 years ago
ok so i finally read it all and i must say wow!!!!!!!!!!!! i feel for maan - poor dude having to go through soo much at such a tender age and then having to choose between love and revenge - hawwww
but i feel his mum was indicating not to take revenge - but alas he'll realise afterwards i guess
hehehe i like this concept
yash is strong to let go of his "fiance" for his best frend!
oooo geet is falling for him wah re wah but im scared for her 😔 i dnt want revenge from geet - i want geet to realise why everyone dislikes madhavi btw wat reason does geet knw of her mum leaving her and having to see her once a month only ??? and wouldnt the order be revoked now??
surely when geet finds out the pain that madhavi has caused she will help maan take revenge from her - geet shudnt pay for her mother's deeds
thats not fair
ok other thing is i have noticed ur updating frequency is slow - i understand fully but still wanna say
cannot wait for more
omg ur cutting down?? kyun???
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved ur ff and the song is just superb
plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanxxx for taking time for commenting and for ur wonderful comments.I hope u guys also like the next part.

@Tishuu:Lovee ur comment!!! the court order was until geet was unmarried.Now she can meet her mother anytime or live with her.I'm cutting the scenes b/c this is supposed to be ss but it is turning into ff.I will try to update soon.













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Posted: 14 years ago
Note:I have added the readers in my pm list who want to get pms.Please check the Page1.I think this is third last or fourth last part of this SS.
I hope u guys like this part. I want ur views please tell me do u want happy or sad ending???Actually i have both types of endings in my mind.So i just wanna ask u guys.Please leave ur comments.

Recap:Maneet went on the dinner.

SS:MereYaar Ka Pyar!
Part 11

In the next morning,madhavi was talking to geet on the dinning table.

Madhavi:Geet,Tum aur maan honeymoon per kahan jana chahte ho?

Geet stopped eating.She didnot know what to say.Suddenly maan came from the door.

Maan:Switzerland.
Sunil:Theek hai main tum dono ke switzerland ka tickets confirm karva deta hoon.Geet beta wahan maan ka apna mansion hai.Maan tu aaksar wahan jata rahta hai.Tum packing kar lo
Geet:Acha jee.

After finishing her breakfast,Geet came to her room.She started to do packing when maan also came to the room and started to help her in packing.

Maan:Geet tumhi switzerland jana ka shok hai na.Sorry maine tumhi kal apne friend se baatein karte suna tha.Iss liye maine socha ka switzerland jana chahiye.I know you don't wanna go with ME but main nahi chahta ka kaise ko humare bare main pata chale.

He went to the washroom for taking bath.

Geet(Thinking):He is not as bad as i thought.Infact he is very nice.He never forced me in the relation.He cares about me.I should atleast act good with him.I know he annoyed me before but now instead of feeling irritation when i'm around him.I feel good.What is happening to me??..Lets forget it.I want to do packing.Yipee!!!I'm going to switzerland.I have heard that it is very beautiful place.

Maan in washroom(Thinking):Geet you will see only my love till you will fell in love.I want to give you all my love.Sometimes i wish that you will never fell in love with me because i can't see you in pain.But sometimes i wish that you love me as much i love you because i want to experience this feeling of love.You don't know how hard is it for me.

(Now the story will continue from switzerland)

(Their Mansion)

Geet was very happy while watching the photos.Maan had taken her to every place.One week in switzerland was like heaven to her.Maan was taking good care of her.She felt like a princess.Rightnow she was watching pictures and also remembering the different situations.When maan's cell phone rang.Maan was in the washroom so she picked his cell.She heard some girl's voice.

Girl:Hello! Mr.Maan baat kar rahe hain?
Geet(Thinking):Yeh kon hai?Aur maan se kyu baat karna chahate hai??(She looked at the door of the washroom) Waise tu kahte hain main tumse bohat pyar karta hoon.
Girl:hello!!!!!
Geet(With attitude):Khaiye main Mrs Maan singh khurana baat kar rahe hoon.(She emphasing on Mrs).
Girl:Oh sorry ma'am,Woh actually Maan sir humare orphan house jo switzerland main hai.Iss main funds dete hain.Tu aaj bacho ka function hai.Agar sir ka saath aap bhi aa jate tu bachi aur bhi khush ho jate.Maine bas sir ko reminder ka liye phone kiya tha.
Geet(Embrassed):its ok.Main zarur aao ge.
Girl:Thank you ma'am.Good bye.
Geet:Good bye.

Maan came out of washroom.

Geet:Maan aap ko orphan house se call aaye thi.Main bhi aap ke saath jao ge.
Maan:Ok get ready you have only 30 minutes.

Geet quickly got ready and maneet went to the orphan house.Maan gave chocolates and many gifts to the children.Children were very happy to see him.He also introduced geet to them.Then he started playing with them.Geet was watching him lovingly.When they were coming to gates.

Maan:Geet,Maine aaj se pehle yeh baat kise ko nahi bataye ka main iss orphane house main funds deta hoon.
Geet:Kya aap aur bhi orphane house main paise dete hain.
Maan:Haan kyuki mujhe lagta hai ka main in logon ka dard samijh sakta hoon.

Maan cell phone rang.He talked on the cell.

Geet(Thinking):Maan i'm sorry maine jab iss ladke ke awaz suni tu maine aap per shak kiya.Maan you are very nice person.I respect you more now.Mujhe lagta tha ka aap ke wajah se maine apna pyar kho diya.Mujhe lagta tha ka main yash se pyar karte hoon.Per shadi ka baad se mujhe iss ka aik bar bhi khayal nahi aaya tu iss ka matlab yash theek tha main iss se pyar nahi karte thi bas pasand karte thi.Main jo aap ka liye feel karte hoon woh maine aaj tak feel nahi kiya.Tu kya mujhe aap se pyar ho gaya hai?......main aap ko kise ka saath dekhne ka bare main soch bhi nahi sakte,jab aap mere karab aate hain tu mere dhakanin bhar jatein hain,Mujhe aap ko naraz karna acha nahi lagta yeh sab pyar nahi tu kya hai............Haan main aapse pyar karte hoon (tears were coming from her eyes).I'm in loveeeee.


Precap:Geet is in love.Will she confess her love???

Edited by pickachu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yayy first 2 comment 😛 🥳 🥳
Awesome update
Do finally ms Geet has fallen in love wiv Maan Singh Khurana 😍 😍
Awww Maan is so sweet & caring dat he offers funds 2 an orphanage
Lol Geet got jealous hearing a womans voice so she tld ha dat he was mrs MSK
W8in 4 da confession 🥳
Cont soon Xx...
Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh lord! Maan is waitin 4 her to fall in love wit him so tat he cn break hr heart n take revenge! Plz fatima update soon as nw ths story is gettin very intrestin.

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