Maan-Geet-Arjun OS: Goddammit!!!!

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euphoric

@euphoric

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+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Loved it!

Amazing and captivating to the core... i'm loving the essence of it and could so well picturize the whole sequence 👏 👏

And thanks you are a better updater than Anj 😆... waiting eargerly for the next update😳

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ash08

@ash08

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Wow Jaan, Brilliant. 👏

I loved the way you described the scene. Women always have been oblivious to their effect of men or so they portray. But why are you making Arjun fall for Geet?

LIke Sita for Ravan, his entrapment in her beauty will be the end of him?

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@bDgT

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

@Ash: Me thinks the story is poised for a change

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AnjanaYYZ

@AnjanaYYZ

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Beauty among beasts - wat a delicous feat.

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shreya_l

@shreya_l

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

@ Good Read Bri 👍🏼add me to you PM list ...

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@bDgT

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

@Anj: Beauty and 2 Beasts 😆

@Shreya: Thanks hon!!

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SStephy

@SStephy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Loved your OS, Bri....Well written..👍🏼

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ash08

@ash08

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

"The lion always resides in the midst of great danger but always comes out supreme!"

- Awesome!! 👏

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@bDgT

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

Gonna update it with another section in some time

Precap: Restless Remission

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Bri, I just came across this written piece of yours coz it was on the first page of the MF😆 Let me bookmark this place first. Will come back to comment proper. Love the writing BTW.

PS: I thought u were gonna have one part to it only? I see that u're updating it now!😆