Request to all wonderful writers

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Posted: 14 years ago
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It is a humble request to wonderful wrighters of Geet Forum like Kashish, Anjali, sksg, whitepearl stc.
Where are u all? We all are missing ur wonderful posts. Just like geet, reading of ur posts become our habbit. Your post just increase the charm of any episode.Now-a-days,even after wonderful episodes, we all are receiving so many negative post about Maan.
Kashish, who can better understand Maan than you. We need ur description about the behaviour of MAAN.
We know time is very crusial for all of u and negative post heart alot u, but for recovery we need some dogaese from u all. If every day is not possible, then special one just like saturday episodes.
Please find some time for all of us.😭😭
What is ur opinion?

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Posted: 14 years ago
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I am deeply touched Pal....Thanks for valuing my post.....Sunday's a very busy dear....try to write something today....

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: whitepearl

I am deeply touched Pal....Thanks for valuing my post.....Sunday's a very busy dear....try to write something today....


this is exactly what i posted earlier. With all these unneccessary negative posts, I am badly missing your, sksg and Kashish's beautiful and sound analysis. Without your analysis, all these posts create low charm. Hope to see your analysis soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I am so touched by your request. Even I miss Kashish's posts a lot. Hope she will find time soon. I myself have been busy too. For now, let me just share with you a poem I wrote for myself as a summary of the story from Maan's point of view. It is not as brilliant as the writings of others like Kashish, but hope it will do for now.
It was not so long ago
when I thought I'd never meet someone like you.
Wrong was I, thinking I'm in control
Believing I'd never fall.

All my life I thought no one would
melt a heart like mine, a heart so cold,
a heart hardened by the past,
protected by shields so vast.

Slowly I was falling
without even knowing.
Only to find out too late
I have no choice but to accept my fate.

You were my precious angel
Together we were clutching a field of dreams
Cruising through oceans of bliss
And I loved you like no one else

How could you look me in the eye and say the cruelest of words?
How could you say you listened to me when you never really heard?
How could you have said those things and pretended that they were true?
How could you have meant them all-I didn't understand what you're trying to do.

Everything you put me through,
Bled my heart and broke my soul,
The pain didn't fade away,
And I had to live with it every day.

In return, I didn't mean to hurt you
but I just couldn't let you go.
But still, I couldn't hold on much longer
because for us there seemed no forever.

I was sad because of what you did
But, I was mad because I blame myself
What if I said or did something different
Maybe we would've found happiness sooner.

I'm sorry for the times you cried,
and the loneliness you felt inside.
I'm sorry for the way things were,
and the setbacks that you endured.

I'm sorry for the empty space,
that lay beside you in my place.
I'm sorry for the empty arms;
you fell into when times were hard.

I'm sorry for the days that passed,
Our love now will surely last.
I'm sorry it took so long to vow,
to love you forever here and now.

It took you a while, but you gave me back my smile
Let us now hold our hands and make this vow
To erase all that pain and leave the past behind.
To forgive, forget and restore that tie that binds.

Though the trials of life will come by just the same,
The firmness of our love forever will remain.
In joy and in happiness, in heartache and in pain.
To you and you alone, I'll fall in love again and again.

The way I feel about you words can't say,
I want you in my life each and every day.
I know in my heart, we're meant to be together.
So through our ups and downs, let's make this last forever!

I love you not only for what you are,
But for what I am when I am with you
I love you not only for what you have made of yourself
But for what you are making me

My love is like an ocean
It goes down so deep
My love is like a rose
Whose beauty you want to keep.

My love is like a river
That will never end
My love is like a dove
With a beautiful message to send.

My love is like a song
That goes on and on forever
My love is like a prisoner
It's to you that I surrender.

We are together now,
and we shall never again be apart,
Remember this always and forever
I love only you with all of my heart.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: sksg

I am so touched by your request. Even I miss Kashish's posts a lot. Hope she will find time soon. I myself have been busy too. For now, let me just share with you a poem I wrote for myself as a summary of the story from Maan's point of view. It is not as brilliant as the writings of others like Kashish, but hope it will do for now.

It was not so long ago
when I thought I'd never meet someone like you.
Wrong was I, thinking I'm in control
Believing I'd never fall.

All my life I thought no one would
melt a heart like mine, a heart so cold,
a heart hardened by the past,
protected by shields so vast.

Slowly I was falling
without even knowing.
Only to find out too late
I have no choice but to accept my fate.

You were my precious angel
Together we were clutching a field of dreams
Cruising through oceans of bliss
And I loved you like no one else

How could you look me in the eye and say the cruelest of words?
How could you say you listened to me when you never really heard?
How could you have said those things and pretended that they were true?
How could you have meant them all-I didn't understand what you're trying to do.

Everything you put me through,
Bled my heart and broke my soul,
The pain didn't fade away,
And I had to live with it every day.

In return, I didn't mean to hurt you
but I just couldn't let you go.
But still, I couldn't hold on much longer
because for us there seemed no forever.

I was sad because of what you did
But, I was mad because I blame myself
What if I said or did something different
Maybe we would've found happiness sooner.

I'm sorry for the times you cried,
and the loneliness you felt inside.
I'm sorry for the way things were,
and the setbacks that you endured.

I'm sorry for the empty space,
that lay beside you in my place.
I'm sorry for the empty arms;
you fell into when times were hard.

I'm sorry for the days that passed,
Our love now will surely last.
I'm sorry it took so long to vow,
to love you forever here and now.

It took you a while, but you gave me back my smile
Let us now hold our hands and make this vow
To erase all that pain and leave the past behind.
To forgive, forget and restore that tie that binds.

Though the trials of life will come by just the same,
The firmness of our love forever will remain.
In joy and in happiness, in heartache and in pain.
To you and you alone, I'll fall in love again and again.

The way I feel about you words can't say,
I want you in my life each and every day.
I know in my heart, we're meant to be together.
So through our ups and downs, let's make this last forever!

I love you not only for what you are,
But for what I am when I am with you
I love you not only for what you have made of yourself
But for what you are making me

My love is like an ocean
It goes down so deep
My love is like a rose
Whose beauty you want to keep.

My love is like a river
That will never end
My love is like a dove
With a beautiful message to send.

My love is like a song
That goes on and on forever
My love is like a prisoner
It's to you that I surrender.

We are together now,
and we shall never again be apart,
Remember this always and forever
I love only you with all of my heart.


It's a lovely poem Sk and you are a wonderful writer...I miss K too...hope she will be back soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@sksg
If nt wrong u r sri am addressing!
Wonderful poem n a heart touching one.
Thanks a lot for putting these lines which soothes us from all those negative vibes barged into the forum!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sksg

I am so touched by your request. Even I miss Kashish's posts a lot. Hope she will find time soon. I myself have been busy too. For now, let me just share with you a poem I wrote for myself as a summary of the story from Maan's point of view. It is not as brilliant as the writings of others like Kashish, but hope it will do for now.

It was not so long ago
when I thought I'd never meet someone like you.
Wrong was I, thinking I'm in control
Believing I'd never fall.

All my life I thought no one would
melt a heart like mine, a heart so cold,
a heart hardened by the past,
protected by shields so vast.

Slowly I was falling
without even knowing.
Only to find out too late
I have no choice but to accept my fate.

You were my precious angel
Together we were clutching a field of dreams
Cruising through oceans of bliss
And I loved you like no one else

How could you look me in the eye and say the cruelest of words?
How could you say you listened to me when you never really heard?
How could you have said those things and pretended that they were true?
How could you have meant them all-I didn't understand what you're trying to do.

Everything you put me through,
Bled my heart and broke my soul,
The pain didn't fade away,
And I had to live with it every day.

In return, I didn't mean to hurt you
but I just couldn't let you go.
But still, I couldn't hold on much longer
because for us there seemed no forever.

I was sad because of what you did
But, I was mad because I blame myself
What if I said or did something different
Maybe we would've found happiness sooner.

I'm sorry for the times you cried,
and the loneliness you felt inside.
I'm sorry for the way things were,
and the setbacks that you endured.

I'm sorry for the empty space,
that lay beside you in my place.
I'm sorry for the empty arms;
you fell into when times were hard.

I'm sorry for the days that passed,
Our love now will surely last.
I'm sorry it took so long to vow,
to love you forever here and now.

It took you a while, but you gave me back my smile
Let us now hold our hands and make this vow
To erase all that pain and leave the past behind.
To forgive, forget and restore that tie that binds.

Though the trials of life will come by just the same,
The firmness of our love forever will remain.
In joy and in happiness, in heartache and in pain.
To you and you alone, I'll fall in love again and again.

The way I feel about you words can't say,
I want you in my life each and every day.
I know in my heart, we're meant to be together.
So through our ups and downs, let's make this last forever!

I love you not only for what you are,
But for what I am when I am with you
I love you not only for what you have made of yourself
But for what you are making me

My love is like an ocean
It goes down so deep
My love is like a rose
Whose beauty you want to keep.

My love is like a river
That will never end
My love is like a dove
With a beautiful message to send.

My love is like a song
That goes on and on forever
My love is like a prisoner
It's to you that I surrender.

We are together now,
and we shall never again be apart,
Remember this always and forever
I love only you with all of my heart.

Thanks for ur reply. Wonderful poem. You have told the whole journey of Maan's life.
We all are missing badly.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#8
Varsha, Rituparna & Pal, thanks for liking my poem.

Rituparna , Yes, I am called Sri.

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