24th November: Written + Video Update

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Maneet close dance...'Tumko paya hai'


Part 1

Begins wit Geet telling MSK... shall we go... theres a lot of work pending..!! MSK says angrily that u wont stay here for a minute..we are leaving from here rightaway..!! MSK grabs Geets hand and starts walking..!! Geet tries to stop him...!! MSK feels the struggle ..turns and says 'I m sorry Geet..I m forcing u again.. But Geet i dun wanna leave u alone and go..!!' Geet says..'Where am i alone.. ur always with me...near to me..!! And u dun worry...wit u around..nothing can happen to me..!! But yes... without finishing my work..i wont go from here..!!' MSK gets angry and says..'Fine ..then i will also go to office and finish my work..' and starts to leave..!! Geet grabs hold of his arm and says..'But why sir??' MSK stops and turns.. Geet feels shy and starts to remove her hand and MSK holds her hand in his....and comes near *Mahiiii in bg* and says.. 'Geet i came here..coz someone had made a promise to me... but now when that promise-breaker is not ready to fulfill the promise ..then why should i stay back here..!! I should go to office and finish my work..!! And well if u really want to stop me..then its not that difficult..!! Its a matter of only 3 words..!!' Geet says..'Well u dun need a reason to stay here.. Pindi Queen is afterall ur client only .. U cant leave her party right??' MSK says...' I dun care about clients..but only about loved ones.. but if only someone considered me to be their loved one..!! *Turns and walks while grinning* Just to hear..those three words..i have to do so much...!!' MSK comes near Geet and asks.. 'Geet..are u saying or...' Geet looks away shyly.. n MSK turns to leave..!! Geet tries to say something but stops n MSK leaves from there!!


Pindi Queen in golden dress n black Capris arrives n says 'Todays evening is dedicated to my new music album.. Cheers' All clap n its a RETRO party *70s style* Tasha arrives n prays that ..Hopefully she finds her Prince Charming in this partyyy!! Scene shifts to Romeo who turns n sees Tasha n whistles n comes near Tasha wit his face covered n comments 'I m not a poet but o beauty ur love has taught me poetry!!' n removes the cover on his face n offers flowers to Tasha!! Tasha is annoyed...... On the other side Manisha bumps into Sasha n both r in pink colour outfts n Manisha says.. 'Wow same same... look today we appear lke Twin Sisters right??' Sasha starts hitting Manisha wit her purse n says.. 'Dare u call me ur twin sister' n walks away..!! Romeo is tailing Tasha n bumps into Manisha!!


Geet resplendant in white lehnga-choli n glittering jewellery arrives ... n Romeo n Manisha gape at her n Manisha says 'Wow...gorgeous na my baby' !! Geet walking towards them...while looking around with anxious eyes.... Romeo.. Manisha n Tasha come near Geet....n Romeo says..'She is looking more beautiful than even Bobby.!!' Romeo calls Geet.. n says..'Ur looking very beautiful..!!' Tasha tells Geet that.. 'The one ur looking for hasnt come in the party yet..!!' Geet defends saying 'No..i wanst looking for him...I was just looking around.. ' Tasha says.. 'Really?? If ur looking around just like that..then how do u know..i was talking about MSK??' Geet lost for words !! Sasha comes and says...'So Geet ....u hv come...all ready...to impress MK.... !! And well whatever u say..u dun leave any opportunity to impress MK..!!' Geet angrily turns to Sasha and says..'Shall i tell u something Sasha... just stop boiling ur blood unnecessarily...coz even if i wasnt there.. u had no chance with MK' .........Sasha gets angry n leaves in a huff..!! NT shown driving towards the party venue..n self thot...'Let anything happen today..but i will make my plan reach its destination..! Geet will have her miscarriage today itself..!!'


Adi comes to Geet and says 'Geet' and Geet says...'Adi Sir...have u..'..n Adi says..'seen MSK?? *smiles* No. .he hasnt come yet..!!' *MSK shown ...near the entry... his eyes set on Geet....n has a smile on his lips...!!* MSK arrives....wearing black sherwani style coat with glittery border..!! MSK walking while looking at Geet n Geet keeps looking around to try n locate MSK!!! MSK says ....'Ur eyes are searching for me Geet...but i have to ask u today ..what u feel for me..in ur heart..!! Today u have to speak Geet..!!' .. MSK self thot...'Today u hv to tell me Geet...!!' Geet self thot...'Why do i feel as if he is nearby...!!' *MAHIIIIIIIIIIi in bg*


NT arrives n Pindi says..'Naintarey.. come here... its gud u came here..!! God has saved us today...else if anything wuld have happened to Geet.. .ur Jeth *brother in law* wuld have created havoc here..!! I dun understand one thing...why is he so crazy about Geet..!!' Sasha arrives and Pindi leaves saying..she has to look at the party ....!! Sasha looks sad..n NT asks 'Whats the matter why do u look sad??' Sasha says..'Till Geet is before my eyes..how can i be happy !! I wanna see her break.!!' .n NT says..'It will happen Sasha...coz today..something will happen to her that..will make her forget smiling..forever..!!'


Maneet play hide n seek .. !! Geet self thot..'Why do i feel as if.. MSK is looking at me from somewhere..!!' n MSK comes near Geet and drops his hanky...n walks past Geet n looks at her from other side!! Geet turns ...as if she felt MSK..n says..'Maan sir..!!'..MSK says...'Miss HP..the truth thats in ur eyes...shall come on ur lips soon...n i will force u to tell the truth..n soon..!!' Geet then sees the hanky n says.. 'This is MSKs....that means he is here....nearby...... n doing this intentionally!!' n keeps looking for MSK..!! Geet says..'Babaji.. know that he is nearby.. but i dunno why he doesnt come before me..!!' MSK calls out..'Geet' n Geet turns..n bg..'Tumko paya hai to...' Maneet eyelock



Part 2

Maneet start walking towards each other ..n MSK takes Geets hand and puts on his shoulder one after another..! n puts his hand on Geets back!! Maneet sway on the music...n r quite close..n eyelocks..n sweet smiles exchanged..!! *Flashback of old Maneet moments..on the side *It looks like a VM on Maneet* Geet rests her head on MSKs shoulder!



Part 3

Maneet standing in an alley a bit away from the dance floor.....Geet tells MSK...'When i was searching for u and i culdn find u..i felt as if..there was nothing in life!! Without u...nothing matters..!! If i dun see u for a few minutes..i feel suffocated..!! Ur doing all this..only so that i say those three words..right?? Then ok..i shall say those three words... but after this..u wont go away from my sight ever..!!' Screen freezes with MSK looking at Geet n Geet looking at MSK...!!



Precap- MSK looks on..n Geet says.. 'I.....U'...


-END-


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thanx soo much Tanu!! :))
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thank you sooooo much 😊
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oh Goddddddddddddd

maan plz don't leave geet alone

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Thanks, Thanks, Thanks...
waiting for more!!
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thank you so much dear....
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please nt have an accident before you arrive😛
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Originally posted by: kirti_fiji

please nt have an accident before you arrive😛



i wish in that accident she will die
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OH godddddddd
i hate NT........................
plz plz some one kill NT plZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Originally posted by: Armu4eva


NT arrives n Pindi says..i dun understand..why he is so crazy abt Geet....


thats becasue you NT dont have a heart😡 and you are🤪
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