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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderul update. Loved it.
That was a bit or reckless move by Geet, what if she has slit open her nerve really bad....but glad she is ok.
Thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
what to say. no words to describe your fiction. awesome. i knowit is not worth to describe truly magical .must say truly magical is creating magic in my life.
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Posted: 14 years ago
updates

finally geet ko kuch kuch hota he.

geet was restless all day, the more she thought about it the more she got confused
lekin unhe itni mehengi gift nahi deni chahiya thi. nahi deni chahiya thi nahi deni
chahiya ti kya bol rahi hain, itni problem hain to return kar de. kud hi ek bar bhi
aapne haat se usse nahi inkala, aur itna footage kha rahi hain. aisa nahi hain
I tried removing, inkla nahi, Geet Handa stop it!! u like his ring & like him..
nahi nahi..how can I, woh bikul mera type ke nahi hain. I can't fall for him
uski tu koi girl friend bhi nahi rahi kabhi, kitna seda seda types hain, he won't
be able to handle me & my pranks, agar hum saat rahen to I will be the person
taking ride on him, aise thodi hota hain, relation main to equal rahna hota hain na
bechar mujhe samjta hi rah jaeyga, nahi nahi its all not happening. main unhe seda seda
bol donghi ke aisa kuch nahi hain. waise bhi unhe to salwar suit wali pasand hogina
jo ghar main rah kar unka wait karen, chi chi...Geet Handa & waiting no ways

geet - mujhe woh
no response
geet - mujhe khana nahi banana, she bit her lips
maan - WHAT

geet - I am breaking up with u

rano was little shocked but her daughter could know the whole world

daadi wondered both mother & daughter where so ignorant about the Maan Singh Khurana


rano could not believe this was her jhali daughter getting so concious.
they were just stepping out when raji came running
raji - didi duppata to pehen lo
geet pulled the duppata on
raji - aise nahi didi, she set it across her neck pulling it back.
geet - aise mat kar I am getting chocked
raji - pyari lag rahi ho
geet - are u sure

maan - nakul towel pass karna
she looked for the towel & passed it in.
maan saw her hand & pulled her in - tum

geet - itna gussa mat karo na, kalse aapne mujse baat nahi kiya
she slowly lifts her hand & holds her ears I am sorry, please
he snaps out & turns his back - tum bahar javoo
she moved closer - pehle kaho mujhe maaf kiya
maan moving away - mujhe tumhe maaf nahi karna
she comes in front of him - sorry kaha na baba please & gives the rose to him
break up cancel
maan snaps back holding her arms - tum kya break up kar rahi thi
geet - humara humara..woh
maan in stirn voice - woh kya geet
geet - woh woh
maan tauntingly - hum to sirf training wale BF/GF hain na !!

she broke off her glass bangel & slit her
hand...& wrote sorry with her blood on the floor...kick this if u can
he turned to..& fell down to hold her hand, yeh kya kiya tumne
geet - main ne kya kiya, aap hi mujhse naraz ho.
maan - tum pagal ho kya

when they came back to the car...maan - tum kuch karne se pehle sochathi kyun nahi
geet made a face & looked away.
maan - agar tumhe kuch ho jata to
geet - as if you care
maan - what if I do
geet - phir mujhe maaf kar do
maan shook his head & smiled, she hugged him really tight
please mujhese kabhi aise gussa mat hona main mar hi javoon ghi
maan - aur jo tum mujhe gussa dilathi rah thi ho, uska main kya karoon
geet - aap dant lena, lekin mujhse bina baat kiya mat rahna



plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz conti soon




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cute-aly

updates

finally geet ko kuch kuch hota he.

geet was restless all day, the more she thought about it the more she got confused
lekin unhe itni mehengi gift nahi deni chahiya thi. nahi deni chahiya thi nahi deni
chahiya ti kya bol rahi hain, itni problem hain to return kar de. kud hi ek bar bhi
aapne haat se usse nahi inkala, aur itna footage kha rahi hain. aisa nahi hain
I tried removing, inkla nahi, Geet Handa stop it!! u like his ring & like him..
nahi nahi..how can I, woh bikul mera type ke nahi hain. I can't fall for him
uski tu koi girl friend bhi nahi rahi kabhi, kitna seda seda types hain, he won't
be able to handle me & my pranks, agar hum saat rahen to I will be the person
taking ride on him, aise thodi hota hain, relation main to equal rahna hota hain na
bechar mujhe samjta hi rah jaeyga, nahi nahi its all not happening. main unhe seda seda
bol donghi ke aisa kuch nahi hain. waise bhi unhe to salwar suit wali pasand hogina
jo ghar main rah kar unka wait karen, chi chi...Geet Handa & waiting no ways

geet - mujhe woh
no response
geet - mujhe khana nahi banana, she bit her lips
maan - WHAT

geet - I am breaking up with u

rano was little shocked but her daughter could know the whole world

daadi wondered both mother & daughter where so ignorant about the Maan Singh Khurana


rano could not believe this was her jhali daughter getting so concious.
they were just stepping out when raji came running
raji - didi duppata to pehen lo
geet pulled the duppata on
raji - aise nahi didi, she set it across her neck pulling it back.
geet - aise mat kar I am getting chocked
raji - pyari lag rahi ho
geet - are u sure

maan - nakul towel pass karna
she looked for the towel & passed it in.
maan saw her hand & pulled her in - tum

geet - itna gussa mat karo na, kalse aapne mujse baat nahi kiya
she slowly lifts her hand & holds her ears I am sorry, please
he snaps out & turns his back - tum bahar javoo
she moved closer - pehle kaho mujhe maaf kiya
maan moving away - mujhe tumhe maaf nahi karna
she comes in front of him - sorry kaha na baba please & gives the rose to him
break up cancel
maan snaps back holding her arms - tum kya break up kar rahi thi
geet - humara humara..woh
maan in stirn voice - woh kya geet
geet - woh woh
maan tauntingly - hum to sirf training wale BF/GF hain na !!

she broke off her glass bangel & slit her
hand...& wrote sorry with her blood on the floor...kick this if u can
he turned to..& fell down to hold her hand, yeh kya kiya tumne
geet - main ne kya kiya, aap hi mujhse naraz ho.
maan - tum pagal ho kya

when they came back to the car...maan - tum kuch karne se pehle sochathi kyun nahi
geet made a face & looked away.
maan - agar tumhe kuch ho jata to
geet - as if you care
maan - what if I do
geet - phir mujhe maaf kar do
maan shook his head & smiled, she hugged him really tight
please mujhese kabhi aise gussa mat hona main mar hi javoon ghi
maan - aur jo tum mujhe gussa dilathi rah thi ho, uska main kya karoon
geet - aap dant lena, lekin mujhse bina baat kiya mat rahna



plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz conti soon





I read muskan's update twice. First I read it as soon as I see the update. then again I read it when you post your comment with colorful objects. Love your presentation.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Bravo Muskan....she looked for the towel & passed it in.
maan saw her hand & pulled her in - tum
the whole bathroom was filled with steam, light yellow lights refelecting from the
mirror, she could see his bare back, she hid her face in her palms holding her
the end of her duppata in one hand & the rose in another.
he moved closer to her, he slowly moved her hand down, she closed her eyes still
tighter, maan was mesmerised looking at her. red suit, straight hair, face red blushing
turning deeper if it could. she looked nothing less than his angel.
he raised his hands to her face & moved moved her silky hair strands behind
she gasped & cluctched her duppata & fluttered opened her eyes feeling his fingers
caresing her cheeks then back of her ears. she looked at his wet hair & the
the water droplets falling from his temple to his cheeks down to his firm jaw line
both of them were swept to a different world lost looking at each other.
geet reluctantly - main woh
maan not registering what she saying, moved still closer
geet looking at him - I am sorry
maan was still quite & kept looking at her

ab kaise pata chale ga???MSK
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Posted: 14 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzz di atleast open d secret of bachan only maan 2 geet plzzzzzz
really nice update ,luved it
precap is nice
😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG..Ye Geet toh Bikul Pagal Hai but Wow yaar, so much love and passion. If she can't understand why she slit her wrist then she really needs help 😆.
The funniest part was how she went without her dupatta on 😆.


Thanks for the update Di!
Loved it!
🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi di... Superb update... Geet bikul pagal hai.. But I love her madness & dewaanigi... Hope that usse jaldi ehsaas ho jaye that she loves Maan... Cant believe she did all this just bcoz he wasnt talking to her for 1 day,.. Agar sach much ka break-up ho gaya toh pata nahi Geet madam ka kya haal hoga... Maan rocks as always...
Please update soon... I hope that in d next update u will reveal Maan's truth to Geet... Geet going ga ga abt MSK... Kya usse pata hai Maan kaun hai??????????
Please jaldi update karnaaaaaa........
Thanks for the pm... Love u Muski di...
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG wht a Updat u rock yaar they are so perfect in FF also love it u did gr8 work keep rocking jaan
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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet pataofied Maan
Yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
She is jus stubborn lik him n got wat she wanted
She was really restless n did sumthg wat she shuldnt
Maan bechara atlast had to give in her
It was really sweet update
Precap was shocker waise😆😆

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