Maan Hui (Hue?) Sabse Parayai? OS

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello everyone! 😛 I used to write a Fan Fiction which thankfully now has ended. But on per request from a member (Aleeza 😈😆), she recommended me to write a chapter dedicated to Maan's newly discovered situation. 🤣 Please take NO offense, it is ONLY a joke! 😆


Maan Hui (Hue) Sabse Parayi?





The dense suffocating air personified his dark feelings as he slumped against the hard wall, and slid down dejectedly onto the tiled ground. Tears of remorse slid down his pale sunken cheeks as he pondered about the unfairness and brutality of the world. The innocence and joy that was once a significant aspect of his persona had been consequently stripped and deprived off of him. With a shudder of inward pain, Maan covered his face with the palm of his hands, his broad shoulders shaking in spasms of uncontrollable tears.


Suddenly, the thought of anyone hearing his wails caused Maan to shoot upright as he rapidly turned on the taps, allowing the water to disguise his quenching sobs. His knuckles whitened from the pressure, as he clenched his hands tightly around the side of the sink, bracing himself for the upcoming storm.


'Maan!' he heard her voice as she anxiously knocked on the bathroom door. 'Are you in there?' she asked in a worried tone. Maan quickly splashed cold water upon his face, rousing him back to reality. That done, he bent down and retrieved the hateful object from the ground. Through red rimmed eyes, Maan stared at the faint pink line ' indicating that his fears had come true. How would he face his grandma? How could he face Geet? Better yet, how could he face the world after the truth becomes palpable to all of society? With a grimace of disgust, Maan flung the object away and thus walked towards the door. He opened the lock and stepped outside, unable to meet Geet's questioning gaze.


'What was taking you so long?' she asked suspiciously.


'N-nothing' he stammered shamefacedly. Maan tried to walk away but was stopped instantly as Geet gripped his arms, digging her nails into his soft flesh.


'Ouch' he whimpered, as Geet twisted his arms from behind. 'Tell me the truth' she threatened angrily. Maan tried to shake her hands off, but to his dismay, her overwhelming strength was too much to bear. 'Geet your hurting me' he whispered. In response, Geet's clutch tightened ruthlessly, 'I don't want to hurt you Maan' she replied hoarsely, 'but your lies leave me with no choice'.


The pressure of her grip caused his wrist watch to break, thus compelling him to gasp in agony. 'What took you so long in the bathroom?' she asked again. Maan successfully wrenched away from her touch, and sadly rubbed his sore wrists. 'I c-cant tell you' he whispered through choked up tears. Geet's self control snapped as she pushed him against the wall, cornering him. She placed both of her arms on the side of his head and leaned in closer towards his face. Maan shrunk back in intimidated fear as she glowered at him.


Through uneven breaths, Maan stared at Geet in fright as he realized that she was once again staring intensely at his lips. With a moan, Maan closed his eyes as he remembered that fateful night when she had seduced him, stripping away all of his innocence. Taking a deep breath, Maan peeked through his thick curly lashes and noticed Geet licking her lips in anticipation.


Geet lowered one of her arms and gently grabbed hold of Maan's beautiful hands. Through guilt filled eyes, Geet realized that her grip had caused the watch to dig into his flesh. 'These hands are fit enough to be worshiped' she muttered huskily, 'not to be bruised'. Maan turned his face away, blushing in embarrassment. 'Don't Geet' he stated with a shaky voice as Geet began to stroke his slender long fingered hands.


'Koi dekh lega' he tried to warn her.


'Let them' she replied back with a knowing unabashed smirk.


'Geet please' he requested desperately.


'Fine' she replied as she took a step back. 'However if you don't tell me why you took so long in the bathroom then you will regret having ever met me' she warned.


Maan shuddered at her threat. 'Geet, it's a natural thing for someone to take so long in the bathroom' he stated rationally.


Geet squinted her eyes at his response, 'but it's not natural for them to cry in the bathroom' she muttered knowingly. Maan bit his lips as a slight blush penetrated his cheeks. 'Fine you wont tell me' she replied, 'then I'll find out myself'. Maan's eyes widened in protest as he watched her storm into the mans bathroom. 'I heard something being thrown against the wall' she stated as she looked around the tiled floors. Maan ran towards her, 'Geet no!' However his cry of dissent was cried out too late for Geet's entire being froze in astonishment as she glared at the object lying on the ground.


'No' she gasped, 'this can't be true'.


Maan closed his eyes as the tears threatened to overtake his entire existence. All of this was too sudden for him to consume as the stress hammered against his temples in a pounding headache. With a sigh, Maan touched his forehead with trembling fingers, whilst the entire room seemed to twirl in a nauseating manner. His eyes rolled, hence revealing his eye sockets. 'Geet' he whimpered as his long eyelashes fluttered dramatically from the sudden faint feeling.


Geet bent down and picked up the object, staring at it with absolute horror. The white object had a pink colour which meant that the results were indeed positive. 'Your pregnant!?' she shouted in accusation. But before he could utter a response, Geet saw Maan sway in dead faint. 'MAAN!' Geet screamed as she ran towards his falling figure. In order to prevent his fall, Geet's arms snaked out as she wrapped one arm around his waist ' crushing his unconscious figure against her chest. Maan's head was tilted back, his thick black eyelashes were spread beautifully upon his upper cheeks. Geet stared at his upturned face with disappointment. How could she tell the world this truth? She thought to herself in worriment. How could she tell his grandma that Geet (herself) had impregnated Maan Singh Khurana!



Altered Title Track


Sapne Sunereh Rabbaaaaa

Maan ghati, muskarati, sharmati hai rabba!

Maan ghati, muskarati, sharmati hai rabba!

Pardesiiiii! Sung eh jhor ke nataa

Pardesiiiii! Ho Jayegi

Maan Hui Sabse Parayi!

Maan Hui Sabse Parayiiiiii!



Lol who says Men can't faint away like the pregnant women 😉. Who says men can't be woman-handled and cornered against the wall by a woman? 🤣 Who says men can't be seduced and deprived of their innocence by a woman? 😆 Well this chapter proved to you all, that Man power is just a myth! Don't underestimate us ladies and our woman-handling skills! 🤣


PS. It's just a joke! Don't kill me! 😆 I just thought a role reversal would be good for a change.


Aleeza! This is for YOU! 🤣


Regards


Samira aka Mrs Maan Singh Phurana





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Posted: 14 years ago
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You are way too funny! I'm glad that at least you're writing OS's. Maybe one day you'll gift us with a short story?😃
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omg sami... im dead laughing... lol oly u can do it... so wen will v be getting a new FF from u ...Mrs. Maan singh phurana
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow never thought of it this way but loved the way geet striped him of his "innocence"
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Originally posted by: saomom

You are way too funny! I'm glad that at least you're writing OS's. Maybe one day you'll gift us with a short story?😃



Lol thank you! 😆 Yes maybe one day *strokes chin* one day 10 years later 😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: _SiinnceMaan_



Lol thank you! 😆 Yes maybe one day *strokes chin* one day 10 years later 😉😆


I'm old. *she feebly collapses on the bed, cough, cough* I'll be dead in 10 years. Could you maybe speed it up?🤣 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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You're EVIL😈...Hahahaha!!
Loved the OS
I was literally laughing my head off!!!

Hey,how was ur exam?

Originally posted by: _SiinnceMaan_



Lol thank you! 😆 Yes maybe one day *strokes chin* one day 10 years later 😉😆

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Sammy,

That was hilarious....lolz...................that was too funny....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣v
So does this mean you are going to start writing another FF for us?
Really! Yes! You will!
Thank you Sammy....
Love u....
Rachana (yeah i have changed my profile name to Water. from aarmanshilpa, just so that you know who this is)
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🤣That was hilarious....!!!🤣
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OMG this was soo funny!!! Loved the role reversal!!! i was 🤣 imagining it all!!!!

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