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angelwords

@angelwords

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

hope u like it guys

geet sees the ring and pik it up and wears it

maan- door lock ho gaya hain geet par kaise?????

geet faints

romeo standing outside

romeo- ab geet ji se mil kar ata huin.....(he is happy)

maan shouting

maan - darwaza kholo

romeo hears it and open door

maan - geet darwaza khul gaya

and and see geet that see had fainted

maan picks up in his harm

than promo

adi, pinky pandey jiand manisha were shocked

maan stares at naintara

but sees geet

maan - tum yahan?? mein tumha baad mein dekhta huin

and move out

guys if want me to continue then tell me please😊😊😊😊

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angelwords

@angelwords

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

hope u like it truly shall i continue

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Saba Siddique

@Sabaah..

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

awesum...well-written👏
yes write more plzz😳

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angelwords

@angelwords

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

sry it is arm i worngly write it harm

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angelwords

@angelwords

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

maan takes geet to the hospital

maan- dr ab geet ki tabiyat kaise hain ?

dr-mr khurana mena apsa kaha tha ki mrs khurana ko stress na lana dein par ap log meri baat sunta nahi ... vaise mrs khurana ko thori time ma hosh agaya mein medicine likh dehti huin par unko medicine se gada aram karna ki garurat hain

maan - thank u docter

dr leaves

maan goes to geet room

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Tressa

@Tressa

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

Hi isha please continue... nice prediction... I wanna read more

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Lena

@.Lina.

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

da last line was very un-maanish😉. if u noe wat i mean. it shud b sumtin more angrier nd bolder.

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untamedtigress

@untamedtigress

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ishanidhi08

maan takes geet to the hospital
maan- dr ab geet ki tabiyat kaise hain ?
dr-mr khurana mena apsa kaha tha ki mrs khurana ko stress na lana dein par ap log meri baat sunta nahi ... vaise mrs khurana ko thori time ma hosh agaya mein medicine likh dehti huin par unko medicine se gada aram karna ki garurat hain

maan - thank u docter

dr leaves

maan goes to geet room

i will continue it frm here:maan holds geets hand places a kiss😳 and says geet daikha dr ne kia kaha,zara tum par se dehan hataya nai kia halat bana li hai apni tumne,geeet stammers s sssir woh maan sas angrily "chup bilkul chup"abse tumara koi behana nai chale ga tum aaj he out house shift ho rai ho taakay tum har wakt meri nazaron k samnay raho mera matlab hai men daikh sakun k tum apna khayal rakhti ho ya nai (maan recalls how he had seen naintara in the office and thinks zarur nainatara geet k saat men kuch bura karne k iraday se aai hai lekin mere rehte woh meri geet ko choo bhi nai sakti) and then he pats her shoulder saying tum aram karo men ata hun geet smiles at his concern and thanks BABAJI for making things better 😃