3 IDIOTS-Diya Sang....Maaneet ka jale Jiya.... - Page 29

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Posted: 14 years ago
We are already on page 37, only 3 more pages to go. Shivani, are you still here?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sksg


Great translation. Loved it to the core.



yes his i hate u depicted sooo much more than just i hate u!!! sooo much love his eyes were showing...his words were spitting out fire and venom....where as his eyes shined and brightened with love and only love for geet 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

sigh i have failed miserably!!

my mother is fuming now!!! i have to go sleep!! lolz...gn!!

thanks doc for ur help!!! maybe u might be able to do the job!!

gn all of u useless maans!! lolz jk...love u all!! have a wonderful day for those who will wake up...and a wonderful night full of maaneet dreams to those who will sleep!! i tried....but failed

thanks to those who helped....



i know just three more pages to go....but i have to go now!!! sorry!! 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sksg



Don't worry. I will try my best to make it to 40 pages. Go have some sleep.



thanks!!!
also thank you for helping me at least reach this far..or else i would have not gotten to page 37 on my own!! 🤗

love ya gn!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427



i know just three more pages to go....but i have to go now!!! sorry!! 😭



It is OK. Have a good night's rest, get refreshed and then you can be back again. By, then, I promise 40 pages goal will be crossed.
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Posted: 14 years ago
just one more post...maybe this post could be lucky and it might lead to page 38?? hmm lets c!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

From Maan's Perspective.................

Nafrat Kya Hoti Hai, Hum Se Na Pooch
Zeher Peena Kaisa Lagta Hai, Hum Se Na Pooch
Hum To Khud Saza Bhugat Rehe Hain
Qistoo'n Mei Khud-Khushi Ka Anjaam, Hum Se Na Pooch




From Geet's perspective............

Nafrat Thi Humse To Izhaar Kyoon Kiya?
Dena Tha Zehar To Pyar Kyoon Kiya?
Dekar Zehar Kehte Ho Pina Hi Hoga
Aur Jab Pee Gaye Zehar
To Kehte Ho Ab Jeena Hi Hoga

Halaaton ki waje se aaj Maan aur Geet pyaar karke bhi juda hain, wafa karke bhi tanha hain... Dono ki nighaien toh unka pyaar ka bayaan karti hain, par zubaan hain ho pyaar ka saath nahi deti.... Dil toh hain ek dusre ke liye dhadke, par zakham hain jo faasla nahi mita ta!!

Aaj Maan na chaah te huwe bhi Geet ke pass keecha jaa ta hain, aur Geet uski aankhon mein ghum hojati hain....

Maan approaches her beacuse he cannot resist, but his zakham makes him spew venom instead of love.

My favorite was the aarti scene, when he sees her doing pooja, then the aarti...and dil toh kuch hata hain, par zaban se bayaan nahi karpata, bahen toh chahti hain ke usse keench lu apne paas, par mehfil se katrata. Then when she approache dhim for the aarti....so hesitantly, he gives her the cold stare, she starts to walk away, but he can't let her go.....GOD there is so much tension between the two.....so much unsaid, so much to say...

He cannot simply let her walk away....so he does the nest best thing....he causes himself injury and pain...because he knew that she would not be able to tolerate that. She tries to stop him, reason with him, show him the pain she feels for him, but to no avail...Maan does not relent....

Then she does the only thing possible...she drops the aarti thal....even though its apshagun....better that then more pain for him.

I would love to have been in Maan's head for that minute....what did he think she would do....watch him burn himself.....enjoy his pain? Is that all he knows of Geet?

GOD...I'm dying for Monday, there was so much hurt in those words...i hate you.........which simply translates to I cannot live without you...plz come back to me!!!

Ab dekhna hain ke Geet yeh faasle kaise mita ti hain.........will she put malhalm or toothpaste on his burn like before, or will she be the malhalm and kiss his hand, inevitably kissing his soul??




Your depiction of the aarti scene is very good. I know it is so painful to wait till Monday and Monday better be good to compensate for this long wait.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

just one more post...maybe this post could be lucky and it might lead to page 38?? hmm lets c!



You did it buddy. You are on Page 38. Congrats.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Parisa-


The thaali scene..Oh How i wished Geet Covered his hands with her..instead of Dropping the thaali 😆..mai thodhi filmi hoon.Kiya karo 😆



Even I thought that she was going to pull his arm away or cover it so that she takes the heat instead of him. Her dropping the Thali was quite unexpected, but it did serve the purpose.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: LavZ

Maaneet :
pyaar hai ya saza, aai mere dil bata
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila
is pyaar mein hon kaise kaise imntihaan
ye pyaar likhe kaisi kaisi dastaan
ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
pyaar hai ya saza, aai mere dil bata
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila

kaisa hai safar wafa ki manjil ka
na hai koi hal dilon ki mushkil ka
dhadkan dhadkan bikhri ranjishein
saansein saansein tooti bandishein
kahi to har lamha honton pe fariyaad hai
kisi ki duniya chaahat mein barbaad hai
koi na sune sisakati aanhon ko
koi na dhare tadapati baahon ko
aadhi aadhi puri khwaishein
tooti footi sab farmaaishein

kahin shak hain kahin nafrat ki deewaar hai
kahin jeet mein bhi shamil palpal haar hain
ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho o o pyaar hai ya saza, aai mere dil bata
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila




Lovely poem! 👏👏👏 Did you write this yourself?

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