#Devils Den# Ander Maja,Baher Majedar..2 - Page 96

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Posted: 14 years ago
Rhea...i love youuuuuuuuuuuuuu❤️ Muah......in a very platonic way 😉
Rash...thank you....i knew my fellow Devils would like Devatrd in teh toilet 😆
AK, Winona......hellos 🤗
Jaya....Dadi and Nakewl ki Prem Katha 🤣
A woman she was of many viles
with a big body and a radiat smiles
Nakewl was Besotted and Smitten
He was traced by the Love Bug and Bitten
They Met ,They Shared Many Days and Nights
With Gentle Hugs and Kisses that Ignites
Since Mahiii and Maan Geet are such a Bore
The time has Come to Open this Door
Dadi and Nakewl's Tale to come Fore
And new recesses of Love to Explore
😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
@winona Only for you hun!
Love is truly blind
Dadi and Nakuls lifes are together interwined
Love is truly undefined
coz dadi and Nakul are forever together inclined!
cheers,
ak
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Winonaa🤗 i am Resmi..😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ok i might as well play the entertaining

here is part 1

The union

"Maan ki Geet" she thought, as she let the tears fall and a small smile played up her lips. Maan pulled Geet up against him and hugged her tight now wanting to tell her the worst is over. She is no longer alone and he is there to fight this battle with her. The storm had calmed, as the rain had changed its course to a light drizzle, leaves and twigs destroyed by the storm flew in circles carried by the wind not wanting to leave their home. As the clouds cleared, the moon played hide and seek with the clouds. But Geet was home, home where she belonged at last, happily ensconced in the arms of her Maan and she wanted no more.

Maan, was calmer atlast. His anger had literally been ready to tear out of his soul and rip him apart, had it not been for Geet and her presence right in front of him. He would never let anyone or anything, including himself hurt her. As he vowed to himself, he could feel her tremble despite being in his arms. He cursed himself, they were soaking wet and in her condition this was highly unfavorable. He should know better than to stand in the rain and find solutions to their problems.

Where to go from here? wondered Maan. The house was quite far from here, as Geet had walked a long way. Driving out of the jungle in the night was not something Maan wanted to undertake! Stories of highway robbers had been splashed all across the headlines for the past week and they were not in a situation where they could handle to confront these men. Best solution in the current situation would be to wait around in the car till dawn struck!! "Geet..." whispered Maan. "hmmm..." murmured Geet, "tumhe thand lag rahi hai....." said Maan, "hmmm...nahi aap ho na mere paas" murmured Geet, as she settled more comfortably against his chest, nuzzling her head against him. Much against his wishes Maan pulled her away from him and said, "Tumhari is haalat mein yahaan rehna theek nahi, chalo gadi mein jaakar beth jaate hai"!! "Gaadi…?? asked Geet, suddenly all the coziness vanished from her voice and she was back to her ebullient self, "Lekin raat bhar…gaadi mein?? Hum theek se soyenge kaise??" Geet complained! "Ab gaadi mein kya problem hai? Tumhe humeesha har cheez say koi na koi problem hoti rahti hai!!"Maan countered. Geet was outraged, how dare he suggest that she was the one with problems? "Problem mujhe hai??" Geet was angry now!! She pulled out of his grasp and turned away, grumbling to herself! "Hai babaji, sab kuch karo aur tane bhi saho, kya yahi dekhne ko mila tha?" Maan, this is foolish, she just managed to calm down and you are back to picking bones with her, you should have thought better than that. You better remedy the situation now, thought Maan.

"Geet…."Maan tried to turn her around and pull her back, "Mera matlab who nahi tha..., acha…tum batao hume itne raat gaye kya karna chaahiye??" Maan questioned. "Kyun humesha toh aapko tent lagane ka aur camping ka bhoot sawar rehta hai, ab kya hua?" Geet asked, looking at him grudgingly. "Lekin tum tent mein…comfortable rahogi??" Maan asked. "Kyun mein kya itni nazook hun? "Hoshiarpur ki kheton mein maine raat bitaye hai, aap ki tarah humesha, dilli ki aalishaan gharon mein nahi"Geet retorted! Maan wanted to retort to her cheeky comment, but decided otherwise. "Acha..toh, tum tent mein raat bitana chahati ho..theek hai…phir baad mein yeh mat kehna ki maine tumhe pehle nahi kaha!" Maan countered, as he went to get the tent from the back of the car.


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Posted: 14 years ago
Naku to Dadi: Kard do apne pyar ka izhar
Mere liye age no bar
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sin - Heyyy! Mrs. Zoolander is fine and Mr. Zoolander is even better. due to some private lessons i have been giving him. 😃 🤣 🤣

Jaya - Heyy! 🤗

btw way u two....we have to talk privately.....there is more hand positioning talk about a certain someone. 😉

Sumz
- u need 3000 to be a dazzler.
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Yash phir aage kya hua?😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ykannan :Hi!I loved your teaser :D
Are you planning on writing an FF or is it an OS?
Whatever is it I loved the start...both Maan and Geet truly in their essence,I have always loved their banter except that CVs now have started showing a lovey-dovey Maan whom I don't like.I like fire and I like passion all else is plain and boring blah....😉😆
All the best anyways! :D
cheers,
ak
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ann which hand positioning thing u talking about😉,bolo na 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yassssssssh...that was goodie goodie 😛 yeh dil mangey morreeeee
AnnZoolander69......cool cool....private lessons haan 😉🤣...so are also monitoring the amount of Protein shakes intake??🤣
Jaya and AZL69......hand positioning talks 😲 woh bhi without me?? how could you ?????*fake dramatic tears* How could you...😡😭
Edited by sinistera - 14 years ago

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