#*Devil's Den*# Cold, Fast, Justice to go please!

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MY TAKE FOR TODAY!

Hi everyone!

Well well...we got a rushed episode to say the least.
what happened GEET team? Hurry to go somewhere?
I am NOT very happy with the episode myself but I will wait for tomorrow.

I will try my best to find the logic and trace what happened today- it will be chronological here...
Seriously- There was linear progression in this episode.

I LOVED the slaps..but it seemed Dev has suddenly become stronger than Maan..he was supposed to REEL under the effect of so much force..but even his specs refuse to fall off.

I LOVED Geet stopping Maan. As I had mentioned yesterday, she will not let him become the man who will take decisions in "josh" not "hosh". MSK is not one who will slap his own brother out of a lack of control. And So, she stopped him from doing something he will keep regretting for a long long time.

what's with the black and white effect in the middle???

Red flowers brought at that moment-
A reminder of the happiness Maan had promised Geet. A reminder of their life again.
All those dreams shattered by her past. By his brother.

NOW , here- Maan should have remembered what he had said earlier..but with GC's expression..it was okay
"mere phool dekh kar ek baar toh muskuraayegi"
He wanted to bring smiles and happiness..instead, he brought sadness to her through his brother.(he thinks)

Geet knows this is the first time she has been given flowers by Maan...And she really cannot bear it anymore. She feels now what she will say later- that their lives will change- their world isn't only theirs anymore, adorned by those flowers

Geet- NT scene
👏

I loved that scene.
Both DD and Karishma were awesome!
Man- She really makes me hate her- that NT
Geet showed the finger!!!YES!!! and the SLAP!!
It was long overdue!
What Geet said - I talked about in the symbolism yesterday- not repeating again..
the dialogues alluded to that!😊

Geet's answers back to NT were nice...particularly this one
"main chup chap rone waalon mein se nahi hoon"
she will fight for her rights and justice..Yes Geet..!!
Look at the change this woman has come to..the maturity and the strength.
she reminds NT of the fact that she was left at the airport crying- NOW she's not that girl anymore.

I love NT's characterization- She is such an amoralist! I love hating her!

DEV- MAAN scene
The previous scene- we had both actors brilliantly emoting
Here- GC had most of the lines. Good.
the sense of anger, and anguish at her pain was visible in Maan's eyes and his voice.
The image produced by his words was pretty strong- The Geet that was innocent- exploited forever- HOW many of us were NOT reminded by all the HP scenes in our flashbacks?
😳
The justice meted out to Dev by Maan was cold. detatched. the only feelings he had were those of SHAME at what Dev did to Geet. That's it. He was determined about what he needed to do. And he did it.
Perhaps he did it quickly because if he had stopped..he would have perhaps weakened?
That's why the title- the justice was cold(Maan was indifferent to his brother's plight it seemed to me), Fast(if he had stopped..perhaps he would have weakened..it must not be delayed any longer)

Geet narrating the entire story in presence of Maan and Dadi.
The house- the mansion has been ripped apart by this..
Dadi is silent- what was she supposed to say to that?
did she even have any say in that?
It was Geet's story

NOW THIS part I would have loved to see in detail..

I know it was edited- it was plainly visible..Why? why could you guys not show this properly?
Wasn't this important? the most important?
Again- IT was cold and fast.

Maan's eyes had the expression of shame

In this dialogue- there could have been a clear parallel shown between the scene in HP where the land becomes MAAN's in the registrar's office in Amritsar.
HERE,there was a need for that.
As well as the need for MAan and Geet remembering- Main hamesha tumhara saath doonga

Yes-their eyes say it all- but it would have added lots more to this scene..

This music- was played in the Dargah scene- when they were being separated by that thread of destiny- which of course- inevitably and inextricably bound them.

"yeh sab kuch bhula ke khushiyon se aage bhadein"
"bro aap apne aap ko zimmedaar nahi thehraayein"

Dev does know his brother well.
Geet looks at Maan when Dev says the latter dialogue- She knows he will blame himself too.

Perhaps allusion to this blame- I AM hoping here..that we might see MAAN remembering everything...and blaming himself...I WISH we do get something like this

Dadi fainting-
NO closure was given to this segment.
Dadi was about to do something when NT called out to her. But she stopped
but NT's dialogues have definitely hit home-
"KHURANA khandhaan ki izzat mitti mein mil jayegi Dadima"

Will this be the trigger for Dadima to avoid scandal and bail out Dev and NT from jail..and send them out secretively to Canada?

We see Dadi looking at Geet. Maan looking at Dadi and then turning to look at Geet.
Refusing to meet her eyes but then meeting them. And Gee running away.
This was very important..I think for coming up track because we saw for a moment- Maan almost saying
"what do I do?" he refused to meet her eyes.
And she ran away at this.
She was sad because MAAN was ashamed( or am I imagining here??)
She was sad because YES, their lives will change.

MAan supported Geet.
He went after her to the terrace.

GEET remembers Dadi's look when Dev was being handcuffed.
She knows that although she is right, and she has gotten justice..it is a COLD one( ALL candles except one are snuffed out)
she has destroyed that family, she's not responsible for it. But she has been the instrument through which it has been destroyed( oh God..I had written the exact same lines in defending Draupadi against male critics!)

The warmth of the Khurana hearth has become cold.

Maan comes from behind...
We see 1 candle lit.
THAT is their love.
That won't be extinguished..
With darkness all around them right now in life-
That candle..that glow of their love will help them see
That glow is their love which will show them the way
though all around them is dark- Nature(through moon AKA God/taqdir ) and their love for each other will warm them through the snowy road.

MAan holds her by the shoulders- Giving her strength and support. Reassuring her that he's there and he always will be

"yeh chaand gawaah hai ki humare beech ab sab kuchh badal jayega. Humari duniya sirf humari nahi..humari duniya badal gayi hai"
👏

Remember the mention of moon- taqdir talk during Nature- engagement?

Once Again..it's a vow taken ..accepted in Nature's presence-like all their vows..it is approved by Nature.

Geet is not an outcast in society anymore.
Maan has stood up for her. Maan has signed, and stood by her against all odds- his own family.
their relation is now more mature- can develop.
NOW there is nothing anymore in her past to reveal.
he knows all.
Unless his past intrudes(which I think will soon) they have time to work on their relationship.
That chapter is closed..her past isn't between them at all.

more importantly- NOW they cannot live in their dream house- that dream has been shattered.
So now they will make a home in the real world- within society.

HIS cupping of her face and wiping away her tears-
Well- he IS the one within whose arms she will be protected.
He will wipe those tears if they come again- he promises her silently.

THE HUG
That hug was one of uncertainty...was of pain.
HEr needing him as much as He needed her. That hug was filled with pain too..for each other.
👏
I liked it

Through thick and thin,
through darkness and rain,
I will be there through it all,
I will be the one on whom you can fall

GC, DD-👏
AS- you have such nice expressions off-screen..what happened?
Karishma- 👏Fabulous!

Cv's- Why the hurry??? Please Please show that pain at recollection of flashbacks..please!
That is needed...it's needed.
Maan between Geet and Dadi, in pain- also needed.
dadi's full reaction- we're waiting for it.

I will NOT rate today's episode.
I did not hate it...is all I will say

jhapkisses!


From Jyoti Di


Dadi's dil doobofied na..so i was right..she will bring devtara out of jail and then dev will change his colors..mark my words..cvs r trying hard to manaofy him to turn grey..haha

Things went a bit too fast today.police scene could hv come tomorrow..what was the hurry?.i wanted to see msk's dillemma today

Episode had some hidden gems of future story even if it was avg and a hurried one..i already hinted it to anj in another thread.i wish i could do an analysis today as today's episode gives clear pic of future story especially the last part where msk leaves dadi and runs after geet..tells her world may change but i m with u and geet telling our world might change tomorrow:)

sending them to jail is not end of this track as court verdict is not out and they can get bail..my only complaint is they hv not shown msk's dillema and rushed in with police..but track ain't over:)



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ANJANA's TAKE

1) loved it n even the pace of it!

2) This n the Creatves of It never cease to amaze me. Wat others wud ve dragged 4 weeks they covered in 2 days....

3) the next track is here - his name is Yash Malhotra:D Rumplestiltskin will find de queen wit de king and befriend them...

4)Every needed scene was there that had to be there. Dev's remorse even infront of Daadi n wishing them well. Maan standing up for his Geet n making it clear Dev's conduct was unpardonable n he will ensure justice watever the cost to himself be. U think he has not thot through the societal impact? D'uh he his MSK - to him the world is irrelevant. Geet is the sherni that Maan created... She did not for a moment cow or bow to NT's threats but, used her brains. She also knows that there peace is forever shattered... their private existence is no more private. But, Maan her true mate will be by her side watever road they take. Them against the world if need be.

5. The audience may gripe there was not enuff interspection here. There is room 4 that tomorrow. But, is interspection needed? Maan knows wat Geet suffered. He heard her story b4. All that is new is who is the culprit. N y shud MSK blame himself 4 his bros deeds? Dev surely had alternatives. As for not being nice to Geet in HP, etc. He could not know wat she did not choose to share wit him at that time, so y shud he regret that conduct? Wen she asked him 4 help or she truly required it then he was there. Also, his toughness made her stand up n fight. So, wat again shud he regret? His stay in the hospital maybe?

GOURI DI's TAKE

Average episopde which moved far too fast to digest.....
had bloppers.... bad editing.... n very bad dubbing....no break down by maan.... no Geet pain FBs... :(.... over all 7/10

but story wise opens new avenues

i think we r getting our live in track.... The look daadi gave geet was exactly like someone wud give an outsider who topsy turvied a perfectly happy family.... daadi is 99.99% likely to support NT ... ask geet to take back the case..... but here what maan said will come true..neither will he forgive dev nor will he allow geet to forgive dev....so to let daadi know that MSK will want to leave the khurana mansion with geet.... may be just shift to their cozy single bedroon huge outhouse.....

Jyo - correct - this friday or next monday the real drama will start unfolding.....


what i totally loved in today's episode was that for the first time since coming to delhi.... Geet din say maan sir even once in the episode... all three times it was Maan.... finally an episode without Maan Sir.... lol....

though dramatic n editing issues I liked Geet-NT scene...


INDEX
page 1- analyses by Geet.a+Jyoti Di's comments, Ashi(Cute_Ash), Cacoethes(LOVE TSD!), Pooju(rdfan), Geeti(49erFan), Jhan (liv2laugh), Yash( Ykannan),

Page 2- analyses by AK(Crazilycrazy), Shree(shreya_I), Nabzy( Taqdir), Bea(Beagleboy), Suj(suj01), sumz(sumz3), aadu(Adits7),

Page 3- Analyses by Marshu(MarshP), Tanu(Armu4eva), Star(Starlite7), Reet (minnie.reet), shali, Bluey(blueberry_07), Swati(swatichowdhry ), shradz(shradhav)

page 4- Takes by Pennu, swan20
Bluey definitely speaks up for the majority- indeed they are disappointed!
Arwen is angry with the Cv's😆
page 5-Opti makes a great point!👏
Nabzy is watching hindi twilight *bats eyelashes*
Gargi is angry with editing teams! GO Gargi- I'm so with ya!
Reet says she was OK with the epi- MISSES DOODLE ANDJYO(so do we!)

page 6-Geeti posts her take for online devils,
Tanu imagines MSK-Geet and hil hil ke naachho😆
Yash is still very angry!thand paao ji!
Page 7-Nabzy has shifted to commercials...😆😲😆 and is COnfused about the episode
Bluey gives a ray of light- MAAN may still break down!! See..it's not that bad!
Geeti compares episode to Concorde...😲YES!
Page 8- Adu gives HOPE!
Bluey makes a great point- Dadi was tired after baking the cake!!

Page 9- Caco decides to turn to Yash and Meera...😆Doobti kashti mein kyun baithna hua..haina Caco?
shali thinks Geet going to go for separation..NOOO!!!
page 10- complementing and agreement going on on this page!

Page 11- JAavu is caught stalking!

Page 12- ZARMYNA gives a different take! Good one!
my take pe comments!
Page 13- I post Jyoti di's thoughts!
Page 14- Jyoti di's comments given hope to Geeti about future !Your welcome sweets!
Yasu willing to give a chance! good!
Reet requests AS to turn NEGATIVE- we all second,third..nth that request!

Page 15-md410 also decides to wait for track to unfold!Nice thoughts!
Yash has calmed down a bit..thank god..LOL..
luvmaneet's Take
Vini Bluey CONfusing words..TSD..STD..🤣

page 16- Swati raises a v imp question..Dev khaane mein kyaa khaata hai..itna strong??😕
Swan thinks FAST is good 😆
Page 17- Shreya comes...and goes..😆 the epi went over her head she says
Swati wants Maneet to LICK each others' wounds...😲 Ek din mein Kudi itni FAST!!🤣
Bluey imagining DEV in jail chakee peesing and peesing and peesing...(I realized and edited cuz I had put an 'i' instead of 'ee')🤣

Page 18- Pooju says doodle needs to get Noodle back on Track

Page 19- Daaku An posts 4 significant lines! Brilliant!!🤗
Beagle is in Kabhi hasi kabhi gussa mode..What's up?
Bluey makes a huge point about DEV's crime and his punishment being disproportionate! I agree there!

Page 20...
Bas..I'm tired...
Continue devils!!

Page 41-55- POETRY session!!MUST READ!!👏







Edited by geet.a - 14 years ago
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My song Dedication for today's episode
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1R9NgrcO83w[/YOUTUBE]
Tense Tense O terii MY Heart was beating fast thruout the episode and I was shivering😆...I think my heart is still stuck in my throat..I am seirously tht moved...
-Ok this is one episode where I was totally restless jus not sitting I was jumping up nd down. shivering, breathing in & out lol I dun knw it was da headache I had as well..😆
-Dhadam dhadam dhadam he kept on slapping and i kept on going He wuldn't hav stopped if Geet didn't stop him😆...
-A LIE😡Dev said I have been looking for her since I am came back from Canada huh HELL no..
he wasn't bothered until he saw Geet calling for a taxi..there h got worried she has cum to find me..and take revenge and stuff..he was apprently regretting nd as soon as NT told him Geet is Maan's secretary he pissed in his pants and started lukin for Maan to confess the truth b4 Geet does..
-Geet-NT Face off was A-M-H-A-Z-I-N-G Dat attitude and confidence.OONGLI how much I missed it after Rasika ka face off loved tht...Ish reality sumtym ppl jus take advanatge of innocent ppl's silence and they hulf fyt tht.. tht was da only bit where I was smiling in 2day's episode and there cums da best SLAP of the world from a woman DHADAM DHADAM DHADAM Mindblowing job Karishma and DD..but me iz cnfused as usual abt tht da passport fell nd NT bent to pick it..She did and then wen She was leaving Geet has it in hher hands😆Hmmm..Waah Kya chorni hai...Geet u hav a backup job if u dun remain a secretary😆
-Police arresting DevTara which I thot was a dream from maan so tht he knws this will hav a bad effect on Daadi but oh well it was real Sab kitna jaldi ho gaya I still can;t believe the truth has been revealed😕..
-NT being dragged AHAAA wat a scene to watch when u r half dead...My eyes bcame fresh wen I saw tht..
-Da YaRa scene I guess was to make da atmosphere lighter.. It myt have worked on other ppl but I was still into Khurana Mansion ka Drama..😆but it was random I dun even knw how da heck did he get Geet's adress to be Meera's! from hospital? but how wen did geet even go to da reception Logic PLZ😕oh well it was nice to see them together again😳..
-Da Moon Scene..Moon again witnesses da promise tht Maan makes I will be with you no matter how much the world changes..😳so Barry u can take one jhappi from me for tht dialogue
-The Hug AHHAA this is the bit where Ash cried😭 for the first time while watching geet her tears came down rolling my cheeks they r still warm😆..cumin bak GC nd DD le lo yaar pappiyas nd jhappiyas 4 makin me go thru tht...
-GC I love you Ur eyes poppin out dat anger hurt guilt care the way u expressed those emotions me cannot help but give u pappiyasMaan wuld neva be my fav character if it weren't for you...dun knw wat more to say
-DD ur expressions were totally flawless too me iz still shaking...all expressions were perfect whether it was anger pain or forgiving.. 😳
-GC & DD u guys have blown me again I am not jokin I was shivering and moving up nd down on ma bed...It was outta world feeling the way both of u expressed the emotions of Love, hatred, broken, guilt, care, concern..aur aur kya bolu ash ko emosanal kar diya yaar
Flawless performances by both of you ish only gem of an actors who can go on the verge to bring tears in my eyes ...
My heart goes out to Maan he has just discovered tht is brother is a fraud and he has commited a sin..He himself called the police for tht..And his brother has betrayed his own fiancee..It is always really hard to support truth when u have love or relationships in between but MSK didn't backoff from following the path of truth..He did it even tho he is completely broken he didn't show it on his face bcoz he has 2 other women to look after Geet and Daadi..On one side daadi is in shock and on the other Geet is worried abt da change in relationship tht they will go thru nd ppl will witness..
He can be with boh Console them..
But who i consoling him.. I knw he is broken he is not taking his pain out I want a confrontation..I want Geet to console him..If Maan cannot do tht in front of everyone Go in tht spooky room Maan it will be a secret tht u burst out in tears...but plz take it out..Sorrow always minuses if you share it with sumone..
BUT I am still a bit shocked tht all this we waited for soo many months is jus finished in lyk sum mins...😕I wanted lyk sum self-talks..Maan's broken side...I mean was it tht easy for Maan to jus punish Dev lyk tht..Is he still not a bit shocked tht after Dev left Geet Maan was there with Geet since then and he had seen her, he has accused her, and what not..I mean was it tht easy for him..I am still a bit shocked abt tht..he shuld hav been thru self-talks to express it and say how he was unknown to all tht pain even wen he was ryt beside her..how brave she was to live her life even when she went thru all tht..
Now wat do we have left Sam aunty and Vicky??
Jas as usual u didn't fail to disappoint wid da editing Goof uparghh u piss me off wid tht..Can u give me one day wen u want me to praise you
PS: Ash is too lenient today bcoz she is weak so forgive me for tht dun hav da energy..
PPS: Everyone Thinking Daadi gonna be upset and might be pissed wid Geet..tht was I thot before and I wanted tht to happen nd Maaneet move out start their life afresh against the world they create their own world..
but then was jus drinking ma medicine nd I knw how random this is but Swati Pandey's comment popped in to mind at tht moment wen she had mentioned we have shown daadi with a modern thoughts of the 21st Century and a broad mind..so I knw it is hard for Daadi to accept the fact tht the grandson she pleaded Maan to bring bak is back to Jail and she will neva be able to see him..
I might sound harsh but tough it is reality tht Daadi has to face she has to accept the fact tht her one grandson commited a sin nd it is fair for him to be punished..She cannot go blaming Geet for tht..Tht is illogical and totlly Ekta Maai Type..If there was a grandmother of the modern age she shuld accept the harsh reality she has no other choice..
I knw I sound heartless nd ppl myt be even be ready wid jootis but ppl tht is how lyf is..The reality of Dev being a criminal won't change if Daadi blames it on Geet and Maaneet move out..The khurana izzat won't cum bak if Daadi blames it on Geet..It will all be the same tht it is now
Maan won't leave Geet
Geet has been the victim of Dev's fraud business and he is punished tht's it......
I am not suggesting tht after this night the next day Daadi shuld go nd do Pooja of geet to how much she suffered coz of her grandson nd plead in front of her or sumfin..I want it to be slow process which makes sense where I want Maan nd Daadi both to think tht their blood has done sumthing wrong and he has been punished they will hav to move on with tht fact they cannot go around blamin ppl or lock themselves in a room to hide from the world
I want Daadi to be portrayed as da 21st century Grandmom..I want her to be strong and much better if she is the one to give a shoulder to Maan is he falls weak which I doubt he will but still I want to see da strong phase of her..😃
PPPS: Ash has neva written soo much so she is sorry if u r bored reading all this😆..Will try to make u smile wid a VM
CVz wat do u expect from me sum more appreaciation then I have sum for you Thanku for not takin the OTT way where Geet wuld hav neva told Maan the truth for his good.he myt hav found it out from NT or Sasha nd then he wuld be double pissed wid her take all da anger out make her cry nd go on da streeets daaru ka bottle in hand nd Jag Soona soona playing in da BG..Typical thing but u did sumfin hatke which no one has ever witnessed among Indian Television..This culd have been a drag for lyk a month but u took a diff way so my appreciation for trying different ways😃
Edited by Cute_Ash - 14 years ago
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From THE STALKER DIARIES

Drama....Drama...Drama....i want my Momma

It's time to move over to Swizzerland coz there is nothing left to do in India anymore....HAAN! There i shall open a strip kulub....and also a discotheque where people will only dance to Salsa.....me and Geet nacho to Kurbaan Hua all day and night....amen after all Zindagi ki har subah Geet se shuru aur har raat Geet par khatam....hmmm🤔

We can also go to deenar every night....aur phir Hum Tum Ek Kamrein Mein Bandh Ho Aur Chabi Kho Jaye coz i want to Pee Loon usko 😈 and then in the Swiss Alps we shall go camping and finally do jungle mein mungle...😉

About Dadi Ma....well she has her Dooba hua Dil to keep her company while me and Geet are away in the snowy Swizzerland and telling each other Roop Tera Mastana 😉


-Maan Singh Khurana

😆
Edited by cacoethes - 14 years ago
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Please read page 41 onwards for some great poetry ...which will leave you in splits ..or may be teary eyed 😳

Imp Bits

- A request to the actor playing Dev ..U r so full of expressions off screen ...what happens when u start acting ...I am really confused when u r so spontaneous and bang on with yr expressions in those sbs segments n all then why not on screen ...pls do look into this

-The CV's ...very rushed the whole thing ...the basic high point ,the crux of the story ...but very poorly done ...opportunity lost once again


Analysis

NT wanted to catch a flight

She doesn't want to be a part of dev's plight

Dev ko pade do char aur

Finally the police is called for

Geet ne Nt ko bhi ek jamaa diya

Cause she isn't willing to acknowledge usne kuch galat kiya

Nt ne bhi Geet ko khoob daraya

But who kyun daregi jab MSK hai uska saya

Passport leke Geet ne kya Nt ko kiya totally out

Ab Dadi ne sab kuch dekha aur suna hope she doesn't have any doubt

Dev aur NT gaye jail

Dadi ya Meera dilaygi use bail

Nt ka to sabh kuch ho gaya fail

Faint hui bechari Dadi

Dev doesn't want Maaneet ke rishte ki barbaadi

Dadi looking hurt cause now

On the khurana's everyone shall uchalo dirt

Yash in search of Geet

But that doesn't stop him from trying to make meera his meet

Maaneet are together with their love stronger than before

Why worry Geet the dude loves u to the core

Remember MSk is yr star

For he stood for u in yr darkest hr

In Msk's arms Geet found solace

And felt the world was a different place

So Maaneet wrapped in a hug

All Hail Sameera for she is now here for sure to bug

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Why look at the moon and the stars
My love shall take care of all yr scars
My love for u has no bar
So why look at sky
and why sit and cry
Never think u r alone
Never feel torn
Everytime its this way the winds of love have blown
Never shed a single tear
From now the road to happiness is wide and clear
So dont look at the night sky or here or there
Just look behind u for u'll always find me there

Tomorrow: Nothing is gonna change my Love for U

Nothing's gonna change my love for you
You ought to know by now how much I love you
One thing you can be sure of
I'll never ask for more than your love

Nothing's gonna change my love for you
You ought to know by now how much I love you
The world may change my whole life through
But nothing's gonna change my love for you


Edited by rdfan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#6
Where do I start!😡

What was the rush for, just can't believe this is what we get for watching this show. The day all were waiting for comes and goes in 20 minutes time, wow great going creatives, really not happy with this. Just like the pregnancy revelation, same thing here!!! Mad, yes I am. Creatives I'd really like for you to answer us on this issue, why the hell was this all rushed! Where is Maan's realization, where is his self talk. Where are the HP scenes on the land! Lots of unanswered issues for him. Again I ask why the dam rush!😡

Dev getting his butt whipped by Maan, justified, yet again nothing can punish him for what he has done to Geet. By goin to jail, it will not bring back her family, nor she will get her virginity, nor will she ever live as bubbly as she did before the fake marriage. NOTHING!!!😡AGain, now knowing the man that ruined her life is younger brother of the man she loves. Life just got more complicated for her! 😕

NT and Geet showdown, loved it. Loved how Geet slapped NT and gave her a few choice words. Is NT really dense or what, does she really think she can do with another gal if its a profit to her. My god that was really sad, why did creatives give her such dialouge, Im uttererly shocked!😡

Dadi watching everything with tears in her eyes. Why was she silent, I guess she knows what Dev has done and I believe she might support Maneet here, maybe Im wrong, but let's see kya hota hai.

Maaneet hug and Chand (khadoos wala or good one 😆) Geet is so right, no matter what, things will be very different and difficult for Maneet now. I truly hope CV's show this cause no one can just overcome this overnight. Show us some logic please!

Disappointed, yes very much so!!!!😡😡😡😡
Edited by 49erFan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#7
Warning to the Geet team
I had a very interesting conversation with my sister in which she shared that she always rushed home from work to watch Geet and after watching the eppy she felt like it was worth it and it was really something to look forward to. She has not felt that in the last 2 days and is very disappointed. Her friends apparently share the same sentiments. 😲 😒 ..... they were all disappointed in how this was rushed and by the incompetent execution. Their comment was "We did not expect this from the team of Geet" and if this continues we will stop watching.

This is a red flag that you must not ignore because my sis and her friends are not the only ones. I am beginning to feel the same way. I have a feeling my fellow denians feel the same way. I am beginning to lose interest because I get the feeling you do not really care what the viewers want anymore. You just want your TRPs and well if you keep this on you ain't gonna get them. Time to pull your socks up and get back to working hard. 😡

Things I absolutely did not like 😒


First things First

Jhan's hit list 😈
People who need to learn to do how to do their job 😡
1) The editors 😡
2) The editors 😡
3) The background sound people 😡

I am dedicating this song to their lousy editing
Sing to the tune of Old MacDonald had a farm

Star One Channel had some editors
eeeeyaaaheeeeyaaahoooooooooo
A Star One editor had some scissors
eeeeyaaaheeeeyaaahoooooooooo
Here a snip there a snip
everywhere a snip snip 😡
Star One Channel had some editors
eeeeyaaaheeeeyaaahoooooooooo


Star One Channel had some editors
eeeeyaaaheeeeyaaahoooooooooo
A Star One editor had a knife
eeeeyaaaheeeeyaaahoooooooooo
Here a cut there a cut
everywhere a cut cut 😡
Star One Channel had some editors
eeeeyaaaheeeeyaaahoooooooooo


Star One Channel had some editors
eeeeyaaaheeeeyaaahoooooooooo
A Star One editor had a blade
eeeeyaaaheeeeyaaahoooooooooo
Here a slash there a slash
everywhere a slash slash 😡
Star One Channel had some editors
eeeeyaaaheeeeyaaahoooooooooo


Star One Channel had some editors
eeeeyaaaheeeeyaaahoooooooooo
A Star One editor had an axe
eeeeyaaaheeeeyaaahoooooooooo
Here a chop there a chop
everywhere a chop chop 😡
Star One Channel had some editors
eeeeyaaaheeeeyaaahoooooooooo


Star One Channel had some editors
eeeeyaaaheeeeyaaahoooooooooo
The Star One editors made a mess
eeeeyaaaheeeeyaaahoooooooooo
Here a blooper there a blooper
everywhere a mess mess 😡
Star One Channel had some editors
eeeeyaaaheeeeyaaahoooooooooo

The editors single handedly spearheaded the downfall of today's episode which should have been the highpoint of drama with their shoddy and incompetent editing. A round of applause for their feat
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Do you sense my sarcasm here. I think I have every right to be sarcastic - don't you? This is one bunch of people who fail to learn from their mistakes and keep making the same mistakes over and over again. 😡 😒

Other problems with today's episode

1) The drama lacked punch (pun intended). Dev looked like he had gotten a massage instead of a bashing from his brother 🤣 🤣 🤣 I mean seriously 😡 .......does it take a genius to figure out that his face should be a little swollen and a little black and blue? A two year old can tell you that 😒 ....... a little bit of blood would not have gone amiss. 😡. The makeup man and the director dropped the ball big time 😡

2) NT saying she will get Dev married again to another girl if necessary 🤔 ......ahem we have a teensy weensy problem with that.........you see I do not think Dev will be game cause he is up for canonization 🤣 🤣......it made a mockery of what you had shown and I was ROFLing at that dialogue......I understand the purpose of the dialogue but it was just that the execution was shoddy and incompetent. 😡 Maybe NT can marry some sitting duck herself 🤣 🤣 ......phir toh sabooth ki problem bhi nahin rahegi 😉

3) That Yash-Meera sequence was a good laugh 😆 😆 😆 but entirely random and inserted in the wrong place. 😒



4) The conversation between the brothers after the women left was a complete letdown 👎🏼. I expected Maan to say so much more to Dev. All he said was that Geet's family tried to kill her . This was a golden opportunity to deliver a social message that was lost because you were too busy getting on the bullet train. 😡 Imagine if you had Maan deliver a monologue for a few minutes about how Geet had to suffer because of Dev's actions and how his crimes are so huge that he should not even be contemplating being forgiven for his sins. 😡

5) What in the bejesus was up with that awful background music. It was loud to the point that it drowned out the dialogues. 😡 Why does Barry Dhillon do all the hard work writing them and the actors memorizing and then mouthing them if these clowns are going to make it go down the drain anyways 😡. Might as well save everybody the trouble and just have loud music and make the actors act. 😡

6) I know I am being redundant but you know what they say "Tell em what you are going to tell em, tell em, then tell em what you told em." 🤣 . THE EDITING WAS AWFUL AND ATROCIOUS 😡. Everything seemed to be moving so fast 😡. Slow down will ya. 😡



Things I did like

1) The Geet-NT confrontation.
Both DD and KR were excellent 👏 👏 👏
Hats off to both of them ⭐️
This was the single sequence that saved the day for me.
In the Maan-Dev confrontation, the effect was diluted because AS did not deliver.
Here both DD and KR delivered amazing knockout performances. 👍🏼
KR was at her scheming and menacing best .......mwwaaahh....my favorite vamp ❤️
DD was also awesome as the woman who has been wronged and wants to see justice done ❤️
The chemistry between the two was so mind-blowing. ❤️

2) Daadi was too good. She portrayed the emotions of shock, not completely comprehending what is going on, not knowing what to believe and someone who was powerless to react to the way events were shaping up. We still do not know what her reaction will be and at this point it is anyone's guess. But Anju Mahendroo's acting in this sequence was just brilliant.

3) Maan standing by Geet come what may. 👍🏼

4) Your actors saved the episode with their performances.

Scorecard (out of 10 points):
Actors: 9 (Abhinav was not convincing enough but the rest were outstanding)
Editors: minus 10 (yeah they deserve negative points) 😡
Background music: 0 yeah a big fat zero
Dialogues: 9 (took one point off for NT'sI will get Dev married again dialogue 🤣)
Direction: 7/10 (pay more attention to details) 😉


What I would really like to see

Daadi as a broad-minded woman who realizes that Geet has been through hell not once but twice over. She should be the one who tells them that they should remain together. This should be done to show that not all women are enemies of other women as portrayed in most soaps. She should insist they get married quickly for the baby's sake. Maaneet love each other - who cares if daadi thinks they should get married for the baby 😃

Geet should tell her what about the family honor and Daadi should say that honor comes from supporting the truth. People will gossip for a few days and then move on. If you want to give a social message do a good job of it, not the half baked approach you have used in the last 2 days 😒





Edited by liv2laugh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#8
Ok you makers of GHSP, I have been rating and raving despite all the flaws in every episode, hoping that this one place you will have an epic creation. But I was foolish to have such expectations.

But like all realities of life, this was another let down. Such a big let down that you have not just made it extremely difficult for me to appreciate anything that is to come forth but also you have made incredible actors like GC and DD lose their opportunity to express themselves on this portal which would have been life changing for their careers.

I would like to know what was the problem? Was it the lack of time, the TRPs, the lack of appreciation, pressure from the channel?? What was it?

I can tell you for a fact that it could not have been the TRPs!! These kind of emotionally moving story lines with all the drama and crying are the ones that have the other channels like Star Plus and Zee TV raking the numbers. All you had to do was work your story without holding on to the Saas-bahu quotient and show us some realistic emotions, dilemmas, human behavior and the final win of justice!!

Instead you wrapped up the whole plot into a 15 min rushed drama for God knows whom??
I refuse to believe that there wouldnt have been a ounce of Guilt on Maan's part for Dev's behavior. I refuse to believe that he didnt feel any pain or suffering before taking the decision to send his brother to jail.

Atleast you gave some sustainable dialogues to Geet questioning her future happiness, but then again, you have Maan come back to console her?? Fine, the scene was not that bad, but it was misplaced. I would have liked it have come, after a lot of self-thought by Maan and Geet about their respective stances on the situation and then deciding to move forth together into the future.

Then what happened with Dadi? Anju Mahendroo is an extraordinary actress!! I have followed her career for long now to never question her acting skills. Why was she made to stand with minimalistic expressions on her face??

And the Yash-Myra scene, so out of the flow. You have some serious dialogues about giving the punishement and stuff and lo behold..Yash props up from somewhere?? What was that??😕

I am highly disappointed!! Very bad editing and very bad screenplay!!

Three things which I liked:
1) Mr. Dillion was consistent with Geet's dialogue calling Maan by his name.
2) The irony of life portrayal by bringing in the roses at the in-opportune time.
3) Geet being made to slap Naintara!!

Rest all, complete letdown!! 😡


Edited by ykannan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#9

The episode started with Maan's solid punch
But still Dev didn't vomit out his lunch
Maan ko toh marne the do char aur
par Geet stopped him from initiating the third world war!

Everybody know that Dev is a opossum rat
aur uski wife NT fungus gnat
abhi bhi nahi aye hosh thikane pe
she should be subjected to radio active decay!

NT wanted to be out of this place
but Geet slapped her with the military pace
Beech me Meera ne Jay jay ke face pe kiya door lock
this was CV's plan to waste time on the clock

Phir Dev aur NT ko lay gai police
NT shouted that this is disturbance of peace
Dev munda was as usual expressionless
use pata tha he deserved to be in this mess!

Yeh sab sunke Dadi hogayi faint
unke khaandan ke chirag ne unka naam kiya taint
Maan aur Geet to went out
without caring for Dadi's where-abouts!!!!

Just for Dev and NT!
Betrayal, you are what you choose
Betrayal, got everything to loose
Betrayal, one day you'll know
Betrayal, you reap what you sow

Take that you suckers! (Betrayal lyrics by Rob Halford)🤣
Letters to the characters!
Dev Khurana,
You regret your actions...high time,but this is what you deserve,you only reap what you sow,ab apne paapo ke prayaschit karo!
ps I am sorry for you...tumhe NT ke saath jail me rahna hoga *tch-tch-tch*
pps tumne tumhare spects kaha se kharide?Bahut acche quality ke hai...toothe nahi yaar!🤣
Dear dear dear MSK😳,
You did the right thing,and I am proud of you!Justice is bigger than everything and people like Dev and Naintara deserve to get punished.Bravo!
ps Apni Daadi ko toh deekh lete yaar...baad me karlete Geet ke saath apne Mahii moments!
Dear Geet,
You slapped NT and I love you for it,,,just wish mein bhi tumhare saath hoti...bahut maaza ata then!
ps Nice earings😳
Naintara,
You deserve what you got!I can't tell you what I want to because this is a public forum but I assure you whatever I want to say is not good!
ps Bohoo sucker!😆🤣
Edited by crazilycrazy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#10

Maar peet ka lagta hai season

Maan lagaye Dev ko

Aur Geet lagaye Nt ko

Dono mein hain rudra avatar

Hoga tandav ab yehi hai upchaar...

Hey all

I'm posting my take

Which got delayed'with my hubby's heartbreak'

I was told I'm spending too much time in the Den

Watching Geet and writing poems '

seems all confusion from where should I begin

NT aur Dev ka khatam hua yeh khel

Kyunki ab dono ko jana hoga jail

Maan aur Geet ne diye do haat

Khusi hai thhapdo ki hui barsaat

Jin phoolon ko chuna tha

Bana ke dil ki saugaat

Aayein hain is mod par

Jahan hai gamon ka saath

Ujade se hain sab yeh khwaab

Chootaa phir se khushiyoon ka saath

Khushiyoon ki kaisi yeh ankh -micholi

Jitna aaoge paas utni hi roothongi boleen

Hum bolein kab hoga Maan aur Geet ka mail

Kya dadi saqmajh paayegi kismat ka yeh khel

Phirse karni hogi nayi shuruaat

Deke Dono ko ek duje ka saath

Diya inke pyaar ka hai roshni dikhata

Mat dar andheroon se yeh hai batlata'

What I Liked

1. I do not like beatings but today the slaps were much deserved by both Dev and NT.

2. Geet's and Maan's determination to punish & not forgive'While Maan put it to action immediately'

May 🤔be the rush in the episode was to show that justice is not denied'. As they say Justice delayed is justice denied....(Martin Luther king)

3. The single lamp lit in the darkness (may be the one Geet lit at the beginning of the Maula mere song) still shining brightly in the darkness and gloom, of course symbolizing Maneet's love which will conquer all the darkness in their paths ahead.

Looking ahead what will come over way

as CV play which game we do not know anyway....

Edited by shreya_l - 14 years ago

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