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Posted: 14 years ago
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Maan was in the Outhouse and Geet was in the Mansion thinking about what to do.

Geet - "I have to tell Maan Sir the truth. I have to. Maan Sir loves me, I can't break his trust!". So Geet started walking to the Outhouse and knocked on the door.
Maan who was on the sofa reading a magazine walked up and opened the door. "Geet? What are you doing here? Are you alright?"
Geet - "Yes Maan Sir, I'm alright. I need to tell you something Maan. You love me don't you? I can't break your trust."
Maan - "Okay. Go ahead"
Geet went to the sofa and sat down and gestured Maan to sit down with her. Maan came and sat down beside here and sat close to her seeing as Geet looked worried.
Geet - "I'm pregnant."
Maan - "What? You have to be joking. Your joking aren't you Geet?"
Geet - "I'm not Maan"
Maan was flabbergasted. He just sat there looking at her. Then looked at her belly then looked back up at Geet.. There was nothing there. Yet.
Geet - "I got married to this NRI. My family made me marry him even though I wasn't ready for getting married. I wanted to complete my studies first but I listened to my family anyway. I got married to this guy called Dev and he stole my land, my money, everything and he made me pregnant and left me at the airport the very next day. He was already married to this woman called Naintara.
Maan was gobsmacked. He just sat there looking at Geet. "Dev? You mean, Dev Khurana?"
Geet - "Yes"
Maan - "Your talking about my brother, do you know that?"
Geet - "What?!"
Maan took out a picture of his family from his wallet. "THIS is Dev Khurana and THIS is Naintara. Are they the ones who betrayed you?"
Geet was shocked "Y...Yes. He is the one"
Maan was shocked, disgusted, upset, and angry at the same time. His eyes turned red from anger. He got up and went to the Khurana Mansion immediately without saying anything to Geet. Geet followed him.
Geet - "Maan Sir! where are you going? Maan Sir! Listen to me! Maan Sir!".
Nothing could stop Maan now. He wanted to listen the truth from Dev and Naintara's mouth. He wanted to punish them so badly that they would never even think to do this kind of deed again. "How dare they do this to someone so beautiful, innocent, and naive like Geet?" Maan thought.
Maan walked inside the mansion in fury.
"DEV! NAINTARA! COME OUTSIDE NOW AT ONCE!!!" Maan shouted out.
Dev and Naintara came running out of fear. Daadi came out worried.
Geet entered the Khurana Mansion following Maan.
Dev and Naintara are shocked.
"DEV AND NAINTARA, IS WHAT GEET SAYING TRUE? YOU BETRAYED HER, TOOK EVERYTHING OF HERS, MADE HER PREGNANT, AND JUST LEFT HER AT THE AIRPORT THE VERY NEXT DAY!!!?"
Dev was feeling very guilty. He decided to admit all his mistakes. Naintara gave Dev a look. But Dev didn't listen. "Yes bro. Me and Naintara did it"
Maan was furious. Daadima was shocked.
Maan - "Right then Dev and Naintara, pack your bags and get out of the Khurana Mansion and don't you dare even look at the Khurana Mansion again otherwise i'll take your eyes out"
Dev - "Yes bro" he said sadly. Naintara was furious. Both went to their rooms.
Naintara - "Why did you have to admit everything? You could have made up a simple story and saved us. But no Dev, you are useless. Your an idiot!"
Dev - "I don't care Naintara. I'm sorry. But I can't live with this burden all my life anymore." Dev said while packing his suitcase.
Naintara just walked out without saying bye to anyone.
Dev - "I'm sorry Bro. I feel very guilty. I hope you can forgive me" said Dev with guilt.
Maan didn't say anything. He turned his back on Dev. Daadi was crying. Geet was happy that Dev and Naintara finally got their punishments.
Maan - "Geet, I won't let anything happen to you. I love you Geet." and while saying that he took out a ring from his pocket and proposed Geet right in front of Daadima. Daadima was crying tears of happiness and Geet was doing the same. Geet accepted.
Geet - "I love you too Maan"
Maan and Geet hugged, then both looked at Daadima embarrassed.
Geet - "Woh... Daadima... Woh I..."
Daadima - "Congratulations Geet and Maan Beta"
Maan and Geet seeked Daadi's blessings.

So guys, shall I continue? What do you think. This is my first OS so I'm sorry if I didn't reach your expectations.

Love,

Sameeha.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dude is it a simple trailer.. If yes then also continue if not then also cont. Nice efforts Keep it up.
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Originally posted by: DJ_Apurva

Dude is it a simple trailer.. If yes then also continue if not then also cont. Nice efforts Keep it up.

Thanks! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i wish were regular FF it's okay pls cont to write awesome

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