#*Devil's Den#* - So close YET so far! - Page 2

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No analysis.. just some notes

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A filler episode today. Not great but it moved the story line along.

I love it when episodes start where the previous one ended. So...showing perfect continuity, today's episode started with Geet waiting for Aditya with the kids. Now, I have no idea why the writers had Geet wait for 2 hours...guess she was completely preoccupied in her thoughts of Maan! 😆

The kids continuing to behave like little "rakshasas" was very cliche'd but I guess this track was already established yesterday. Personally speaking, I found it very over-the-top to have the kids go into Maan's room, Geet sense Maan's presence, be distracted & then leave. Only positive with that was unconscious Maan started waking up...yeah!!! ⭐️

Naintara in the meanwhile is spreading her brand of joy to Dev & Dadima! I like how the writers showed her manipulate her way in to being asked to manage KC. Predictable...but it moved the story forward. Now, I am very sure the writers will have her come and threaten the staff with dire consequences if they say anything about the office confrontation to Maan. This gives the writes the flexibility to have the screenplay show everybody quiet about it long enough to have Maan meet Geet again without the knowledge of what Dev/NT did to her. It also leaves the door open for the creatives to reuse the previously shot engagement scene since Maan's character did not know of Dev's crime when that sequence was shot. Reuse of previously shot scenes will hopefully give CVS the chance to bank a few episodes at least! 👏

The last sequence in the discotheque was my least favorite of today. Way to reminiscent of the whole "Where's the party tonight" one. Don't like how the writers are showing Aditya as the type of person who could just leave the kids with a stranger and run away to party...but...yep there is a but...I understand how they do not have the luxury of taking time establish the basic fundamentals of his character with the viewers. From that perspective, I guess they want to the viewers to see him as this carefree-happy-go-lucky guy who has the burden of caring for two kids. I am sure it will come out, like all such similar stories, that the responsibility was thrust on him by circumstances beyond his control!

Closing notes:

Please add some sequences on Adi/Pinky/Sasha & Tasha thinking about the office Geet - Dev confrontation. I understand the focus on the hospital but do not forget to show the supporting casts stories and groW*H too. 😡

Got to say that I like having a carefree happy character in the show to balance Maan! So I am all for Aditya. 😃

Finally, it was great to have GC back in action...even if it was for less than a minute.😃

good episode.😊

Hope .... Geet shld have

Hello friends and viwers of geet. Yup I know u have never
seen me before atleast not with what I am gonna write but doodle is busy so I
am doing it today. Yes that does not mean that Mr.Parvez,or any one is spared I
have a huge list to talk about to each one..so without further delay lets
start.

Now since I am doing it I have a diiferent view but the
essence remains same..MAKE geet HSP a masterpiece.

So lets start with this weeks epi..or the current track..

SO here I address Swati pande, richa and all the other
writers. First of all congrats on such a good change in storyline overnight.
Hats off to u for that. But I have a
small issue here that I would like to bring to ur notice.

I don't have to tell you whats the USP of ur show..we all
know what it is. So pls keep that intact that's all I would like to say. People
who have issues about the separation of Maan and geet at the moment I would
just say one line "Distance makes the heart grow fonder". So pls just wait and
let the story take its shape. It will be for good. Don't worry we will have
them back together in some time and let them be separate they will realize what
they mean to each other, how incomplete they are without each other in their
lives. And about MU where is it..U think Maan will doubt her or u think GEET
will trust NT..oh come on we know them better.isnt it..

The writers this goes for u too..we didn't waste two months
of time building trust between these two if they cant believe each other this
much also. I would now love to see how both of them though separate never doubt
each other for a minute. OH pls if I want MUs I can watch ZEE or any other
channel. BUT I am not in for that..atleast not those clich love stories or the
typical saas bahu saga I am done with that. I had been watching all cartoons
for months before I shifted to geet. Coz geet was not a love story only, it was
much deeper than that. It was a social issue it was a eye opener to all who
thought a girl can not do anything on her own or a pregnanat lady is not
allowed to work. And here GEET stands up against the world and proves everyone
wrong.

Now and last line for the writers Please I know we have a
small (in ur lang MU in my lang distance) not for too long..i mean its ok for
two three weeks but pls not more than that.

Next dress designer..Whoever it is..Can I ask one
question..are there only two colours in GEETs wardrobe..Pink, red and if I am
not wrong one oranage and blue..Thats all..and worse they are all of the same
pattern..Excuse me..Mumbai still hasn't run out of stocks for different
designs..If Mumbai has pls try rest of the country..My fav Jalandhar or
Delhi..try that..and MSK..poor guy..only Black..i agree GC looks best in
that..but why stick to one colour..whites, blues ..we have tons of
shades..atleast try that..thanks for improving on meera and NT wardrobe
though..

Ah next on my list my fav..MR. Dhillion..Yup I know u gave u
the best Confession in tele worls till date and even keeping intact the word
SIR in geets dictionary was a success..but we needed better dialogues this
week..oh come on that was the only thing that could have kept us glued..but sad
they were not that good..pls till we have the story back on track can we have
some better dialogues..and yes when that lift was falling we had past tense for
maan ..why..pls that was misleding..take care of that..

Next is BG score..who set up that score for 14^th oct
epi when GEET is in the hospital room where maan is..can we know wht that music
was..and on Monday after geet walks out of the office why MAHIIIIIIIIII there'didn't
make sense to me..

Next on my list..MR.Parvez

Now where do I start..too many things..Ok lets start with
good things..

The epi are fine..I know its difficult with lead actors
missing audience demanding, story at a crucial stage, the things to tend to
become difficult..

And I can see that in some episodes..It was not that
great..Now u wonder why..first all thanks to ur editors'they edit it so bad
that its so obvious its been edited and second the episodes lack logic too..

How..Logic one..i mean can u think how high is third
floor..exactly the lift sequence..Ok I know u wanted to buy time there..but u
could have made that 10^th floor..coz really falling from 3^rd
floor also nothing will happen and here u tell me in a lift he is seriously
injured..I am not buying that..and sec the entry of those kids was so ODD..i
mean people running out seeings kids..from which movie did u get that..Oh come
on I live in INDIA so I know its famous in our HINDI movies..pls cut that out..

And Jay 'the actor is fine but his entry was odd too..if he
is supposed to be a business man isn't he supposed to be responsible..where ws
that..Ok he is a Casanova I don't mind that..but leaving kids with geet and
going to club that was ridiculous to the core..and worst why was he limping,
the paint on him..it didn't make any sense altogether..

And I know u were shooting with Gurmeet at his house but
that doesn't mean u use orange colour on his face as blood and worst u keep
zooming on that too..wow..i mean it was supposed to be a serious scene and I was
just blank..i was like whats that..so pls next time take care..i don't want
orange blood next time..

Good things..In 14^th October epi..the taveez, the
way maan calls geet and the way geet can hear him across the city that was beautiful..Yup
that was shot well..so the only problem goes with the kids..

If I talk about scientific logics there were too many
bloopers..me will overrule that..u see I am a science student so when u
ridicule science it makes me mad..but its ok it was not tha great and all..

Now the story..

Ok since we having DEV as positive make him do something
good..u know what I am hinting at..but that does not mean he should be forgiven
or anything..he should be punished..nothing in the world can repair what he has
done..

And now its time to reveal maans past and even all sashas
game regarding the saree fiasco too..

When we are having confessions and opening of truths lets
add these two also to the list..

Last to the actors..

Drishti: Love u as
geet..i haven't watched any of ur shows before so for me this your first show
and I love it..and u make me cry too much..14^th oct that one scene
wher geet turns around at the disc when maan calls her..ahhh..that touched me..

Gurmeet: Ah maan says geet and the TRps will be on top after
a week..U can count on that..All thanks to u for creating such a madness about
maan across the globe..

Karishma: U know I love to hate NT..ah if I find her I could
slap her right across her face..

Abhinav: can we have some more expressions pls..

That's all from me..

PS: feel free to shoot me..

Lines from me before i sign off..

Love is not In hugs and kisses,

Love is not in time we stand together,

Love is in those unsaid words,

Love is in those emotions that binds us together,

I know when u are near,

I know when u have a fear,

Fear of being alone,

Fear of losing an unturned stone ,

The bitter sweet memories we have,

The times u cared we carry forward,

Love is about sharing the pain,

Love is about having no refrain,

Love is in those words u understand,

Not the ones spoken but the ones that we never can,

Love is in those moments we knew each other,

Love in those moments when we hear each other,

Within a crowd, within a sphere,

All that u need is just a lovely heart dear'

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Dear Devils,

My peace offerings for today

NT is not gonna take over the company. She has no time.
NT has exactly one day to do whatever she wants with KC. She cannot do much in one day. She will take the day to figure out the things in Maan's office. There is no way she can get the property in her name, unless Dadi signs it off along with Maan coz' right now all she has is Dadi's word. No signed document
She didnt expect for Maan to wake up. So her plan will backfire. And we will see Maan in the office by tuesday atleast, if I am not wrong. Maan will kick her a** on tuesday. SO well wait for that.

Geet is not leaving Maan
Geet still feels Maan. She is still wearing the ring and holding on to the Taveez. She is just taking time to assimilate all that has occurred. In the process she ends up meeting Aditya and his neice and nephew. They distract her focus, but at the back of her mind she is still thinking about Maan. When she enters the hospital room, she can feel him but is trying to find the kids and hence distracted, so does not see him. Even when she goes to the club, she remembers them together. When she sees Aditya dancing she remembers Maan and herself together and all the moments past. So she is not leaving Maan.

Geet falling for Aditya
Not happening. Two reasons: Her Tan, Maan and Dhan belongs to Maan. She is constantly thinking about him. There is no way there can be anyone else in her life who manages to break all those defenses and see the innocent, bubbly Geet again.
Second: Today's episode clearly paved way for her being irritated with Aditya as he left her with the kids and took off clubbing. That shows her displeasure towards him and one of the many reasons she got attracted to Maan is that he was highly responsible and mature. And with that he managed to get her to see the reality of the world and helped her stand up for herself. Hence Aditya and Maan are portrayed as complete opposites. So there is no way Aditya will become Maan for Geet.

Maan will leave Geet
Not happening, as the first thing that even enters his subconscious mind is : "Every day beings with you and ends with you" and Geet!!! He will search high and low for her, for he knows she would never do something without a reason and he knows something was wrong which is why she left him during the engagement.

Other points
Dev is remaining the chicken. He has noone to even push him now. So I doubt he is going to tell the truth about Geet to Maan, thus conforming to the Confused Selfish Soul.
Dadi, might swing either way when the time comes. Depends on how the evidence is presented to her.
Myra might have some positive role to play, now that she knows Geet's plight. She might help the love-birds unite.

Ok I cant see any reasons other for negativity to arise.

Just one question to the creatives: A guy fell from 3rd Floor!! He would be hurt, but not that badly that you would give up hope on reviving him!! Please I would have liked it if your accident/doctors opinions are more realistic.

A tiny dedication to today