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@OfTheHeart

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

HEY.. IT WS AMAZING...

pls cont. if u can..

just loved it.. the way u potrayed.. ws amazing.. 👏👏

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Pushpa Reddy

@--Saavi--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

It was awesome, thumba thumba chanagide👏

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ansah

@SahSah

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

awesome...really loved it...

do keep writing

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asmara

@asmara19

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

MY MY MY!!!!! why such a short one???? that was the only complaint. in just this short OS you set me on fire!!!1 wow that was awesome. pls write more OS and do pm me next time.

FAB job

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Ayesha.

@cooldude10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

😍😍 need i say more?! 😆 loved it ash! really!

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shonuu

@shonuu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

oh darling that was awesome... these days i m feeding on these OS and FF..as maaneet are doing nothing.... even on the date its was just a dry hug.... your OS was perfect.... loved every bit of it....🤗...keep writing....

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Hopeless Romantique

@Ek.Romantique

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

ohhh Ash...even if they don't kiss on screen yours is enough to keep us dreaming with the imaginary one and what a kiss yours was...zero to sixty eh???

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Richie_Rich

@Richie_Rich

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

😍 😍 😍 😍 i wish to imagine more then this........

since all your work is good but this one i read thrice dont know why..wanted to read again and again.

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Oh Ash, i read this twice so far and i could so read it all over again....

That was one helluva of a First Kiss for Maan and Geet! 😍

Not many are lucky in their first kiss for obvious reasons (read WET).. 😆.......but Maan n Geet's one just seemed SO magical and purrrfect in ALL ways!

"Let me get back on my feet. I will take a rain check on the kiss."

Loved that line of Geets'! 😆 Do write more please, you've got a fan here! 😃

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Jenifer

@Jenifer.

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Ash! Long time! And madam, you write? All those beautiful comments on my once-upon-a-time *whispers* FF and all this time you had a writer in you? Tut tut.

This was amazingly written. I loved it and hope to read more. Anything else you've written?

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