FF:- meri jaan.{updt prt 04/pg12} - Page 3

Originally posted by: Bul3

Shabz I will only read this FF if you promise me that you will update it regularly and wont leave it midway..I still cannot forget one of my favouraite FF |Tere Liye| by you which hasnt been updated for months..plz promise me😊

Originally posted by: whitepearl

Very nice...Sweety...Carry on....wonderful begining...👏 love the way U connect it to Geet's doll.....can't wait to read more....do pm me.

Originally posted by: premeer928

great start dear...👏 looks interesting...continue soon...and do add me to your PM list...😊

Originally posted by: pritta

shabzii..🤗..pritta..🤗
good start meri jaan ;) thank u
title bhi bada kamal ka hai "meri jaan" ..hai na kamal?
waiting for ur nxt update..
plz cont soon..hmm try to..

Awesome Dear

Originally posted by: libra104

awesome.......😃 thnx dear..:)

please continue soon

and add me in pm list...? already done

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thnx all people..

will update soon..

and thanx all the silent readers,,:)

Maan scream:geettt'.

Tears roll down geets cheek..

Geet:main unhe aise nahi dekh sakti'

She was about to go near maan..

And stops mid way..

Geet:nahi geet ..tu yeh kya kar rahi hai??.agar tu unki zindagi main wapas jayegi toh dard ke siwa kuch nahi milega unhe..tu toh unhe dard main nahi dekh sakti na..

Turns around and starts going other way..

She feels her dupatta is tucked somewhere..

She slowly turns..

It's a small boy selling flowers..

Boy:didi ..ye phool lelo na..

She look at the flower..and recollect the moment when maan wanted to give her rose and she throwed it in dust bin'.geet have tears in eyes..

Geet gives money to the boy and starts moving..

Boy:arrey didi aapne toh phool liye hi nahi..

Geet:nahi beta in phoolon main..yaadon ke bahut kaante..

Boy(confused) : yaadon ke kaante?? Wo kya hotey hai didi..

\geet:ye who hotey hai jo bahut zakhm detey hai..jin zakhmon ko koi bhi malham bhar nahi pata..

Voice:log unhi yaadon ko zindagi bana letey hai..

Geet turns to the voice ..

And its none other than maan..

Geet starts leaving..

Maan:ek baar toh mauka dedo geet..

Geet:har mauke ke saath zindagi nahi milti..

Maan:par zindagi toh mauka deti hai..aur tum meri zindagi ho geet....

Geet:plz'

And again she starts leaving..

Maan:geet mujhe ek mauka dedo..plz..chahe meri zindagi lelo..

Geet turns to this words of maan..

Geeet:plz..maan..mera jaana itna mushkil math karo..bahut hi mushkil ke baad ye faisla le payi hoon..

people starts gathering around them..

maan:itna mushjkil horaha hai toh ja kyun rahi ho??

Geet:taki bahut si zindagiyan sudhar jaye..taki bahut si zindagiyon se uljhane door ho jaye..yehi faisla sabke liye thik hoga..

Maan:nahi geet..ye faisla thik nahi..tum aise chod kar ja rahi ho dadi ma.,pinkyaur adi to tumhare frnds hai na..aur'

Geet:aur....shayad kisi ka sudhra huwa bhavishy..

Maan:nahi geet..tumhare bina mera koi bhavishya nahi hoga..

Maan go down his knees..

Maan:geet k bina maan adhura..har wo pal adhura hai jisme geet na ho..tum meri zindagi ho..tum meri jaan ho geet..

On of the people:oye kudiye ..munda jab itna keh raha hai toh maan lena..kitna pyaar karta hai tujse..

Lady:aina pyaar karne wala munda nahi mileg atujhe..

Maan:geet ..mujhe chod kar math jao plz..

Geet:faces other side..:nahi maan..ye nahi ho sakta..

Maan:toh thik hai..jaisi tum chahti ho waisi hi hoga..main dadi ma kpo bhi samjha donga..par..shayad tumhe wo maan dubara na mile jisne geet ke aane ke baad jeena sikha..jisne geet se muskurana sikha..jisne zindagi ko apnaya'.shayad wohi maan na raha toh..

Geet turns nad put finger on his lips..

Geet:nahi aap ye kya keh rahey ho??

Maan take way her hand:jab itna pyar karti ho toh chod kar kyun ja rahi ho??

Geet:aap aisi baatein math kiya karo..

Maan:jab tumhe mere jeene ya marne se koi farq nahi padta hai toh tum kyun bol rahi ho??

Geet:fark padta hai..kyunki main aapko aise dukhi nahi dekh sakti..

And hugs him..

The people around starts clapping..

Lady:kinni soni Jodi hai..inhe kisi ki nazar na lage..

They both leave from the station..

Maan is driving and geet sitting in the passenger seat..

There was complete silence between them..

Maan:mujhe na'.tum khamosh achi nahi lagti..

Geet:kya main zyada baat karti hoon..

Maan:zyada nahi..but nonstop zaroor karti ho..

Geet:aaapka amtlab ahi main faltu baat karti hoon..

Maan:geet maine aisa toh nahi kaha..

Geet:aapne ais nahi kaha but aapka matlab toh wahi than a..

Maan was just smiling at his angel..who was now back to her normal self..

Don't u dare tell me im wrong geet..

They reached khurana mansion..

Maan walked with her to outhouse..with her luggage in his hand..

Geet tried hard to take it away..

But maan was far more strong..

She went right way to her room..

And banged the door ..

Maan opened the slowly..as if geet was going to punch him

He placed the bag on the couch..

Geet:paat nahi..bag wahan nahi rakha jaat..

Maan:wo bhi main hi karoon??

Geet:kyun..tabse toh bada maza araha tah..mera luggage uthane main..

Maan:geet..

Before he could speak..she left the room..

Maan:pagli..

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