predictions (scene)sweet dreams

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Posted: 14 years ago
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after watching today's episode ...my crazy thought
Geet: i will not let you go until you hear the truth.
Maan: you can't stop me
Geet: i can stop you .... she started telling about her past.... "aap na bola tha iss kamra mein jo cheeze tum ko takleef da iss ko bhool jao. aaj mein aap ko batai ho kya ha woh daard. ... she slowly started telling him about her past. maan started getting angry his anger from Geet vanished there was a soft corner for her ... he was looking at her Crying badly she hold his shirt she was shivering with pain & stress . he felt her trembling.
Geet: bola kya ha mera kasoor ... yeh meri kismat kharb ha aik dafa dhoka hoa aur aab... she paused
Maan stared in her eyes ... there was just pain .. he was not getting words to console her.
Geet: bola na.. she pull him close to him there was hardly any distance between them... "kya aap bhi muhje ko chor da ga .... mein tou haar gai thi aap na mujhe ko nai zindagi di kya aap bhi... "
Maan: gathering words ... ...flashback ... how he treated her.
Geet: theek ha na da mera saath .. jis ka koi nahi hota woh bhi to zinda rahta ha... she loosen her grip on his shirt.she turn back

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Geet: theek ha na da mera saath .. jis ka koi nahi hota woh bhi to zinda rahta ha... she loosen her grip on his shirt.she turn back
Maan: confused
Geet :Pinky darwaza khulo.. she knocked at door... door open... she turn back ...." aik aur baat zindagi mein pehle baar pyar mein na aap se kaya ha I love you Maan.... mein ja rahi ho"
she said & she collapse ... she fainted
Maan: shocked ...ran to catch her... "Geet" but it was late she was stress out. he hug her in his arms tightly
Maan:"ADI call dr Fast"
Saasha : ran hearing Maan shouting saw Maan hugging Geet.
Maan: "Geet open eyes plz Geet open eyes"patting her face holding her tight.
Sasha : kya huwa ha iss ko
Maan: "where is DR?"
Sasha : drama ha yeh...
Maan: get out. from here yahan per tamasha nahi horaha
ADI came with Dr...Dr: she is just stress out she need rest no tension no worries plz Mr Maan .he gave her injection.
Maan: was sitting next to her geet ,her head was in his lap.."will she be ok"
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dr: she will get up in sometime
he order everyone to go & work & close the door.
tasha : sasha ...oh sorry ma'am you said they had fight Mk is angry but see how much he is worried it doesn't look like that.
Sasha: yeh behen jee... 😡 walk out
Adi: Tasha jahan pyar hota ha wahan fights tou hoti ha...
Maan caressing Geet " i will never leave you Geet . never yeh Maan ka wada ha.
tum mujhe ko iss ka aik dafa naam bato mein iss ko nahi charo ga" he is just whisper in her ears
Maan: made her head rest on sofa.. recollected night how she murmur not to leave her. he sit back& waited for her to getup.
Geet: opened her eyes ....Maan mera kasoor kya ha.
Maan:shhh chup aik dum chup ..placed his finger at her lips
Geet: try to get up.."mujhe ko jana ha"
Maan didn't let her"muhje ko chor kar tum kaha joa gai" his eyes was teary too he hugged her tight kissed her forehead tear rolling down eyes he carefully wipe it with his lips.
Geet: hug him back.....
Maan: bus now i will not let you cry hug her
Geet: per woh .but maan didn't let her say a single word 😆 😳
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😉 sweet dreams 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was really sweet dear!!!
Loved it!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Zoya-

It was really sweet dear!!!
Loved it!!!


no comments i am 😕 i thought it is not worth reading
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fantastic. I think the creatives will pick it up as is and shoot
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Posted: 14 years ago
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brilliant!!!! hope this happens for real!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey naadiya it was gud and worth reading plz update it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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this was amazing! Loved it! Please write more!!
Great, now my mom things something is wrong with me cause you got me grinning like crazy! 😆

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