OS -' You, Me & The Rains' - Page 2

awww... that was such a cute update ... i could so visualize it.. amazing..!!! do write more...=)

awww that was a lovely one shot

'I love myself too...' Good one Zoya..

Awwwwwww.. zoyuu...😍😍😍this is so very very cute yaar..!! I just luvd it to bits..!! Fabulous OS...n my my..some intense Maneet moments.... me likey likey 😳😳😳

Wonderful Zoya.....we all are dying to see such intense chemistry of Maaneet on screen. Thanks for such a vivid LS. I love it to the core...one suggestion ...CV should take sone nice ideas from U.👏👏👏👏👏👏

oh...that was so nice....

Thats Awesome

its was written beautifully,,,,,,,.....!!!!! enjoyed every single word ov it..................

Hey Zoya!!

Originally posted by: -Zoya-

Hey all!!!
Well some of you guys might be knowing me...
Zoya... The writer of the FF "I Will Always Be Yours"...
Hope that rings the bell!!
Well here I am with ma very first MaanEet OS!!!
And well the idea of this OS came into ma mind this afternoon when I was getting drenched in the rains!!!
So Special Thanx To the Wonderful Weather In Karachi Today!!!
Without further bak bak...
Here it is!!!

You, Me & The Rain

"No!!!" The guy shouted

"Yes!!!" The girl replied in the same voice

"No means no jaan" The guy said with a tone calmer than before

"Please" The girl pleaded

"No" The guy said adamantly

"Please' Please let me go out na Please!!! Please' Please!!!"

"Chup' Aik dam chup!!!" Maan said getting frustrated of her pleadings

"You are such a... DUSHT DANAV!!!" Geet said folding her arms on chest

He melted as he saw her long sad face!!!

"Oh God!!! I can never win with this woman..." He thought,

"Okay... Fine... But not more than 15 minutes" He said finally giving up

"Thank you... thank you... thank you..." Geet said and soon after she kissed his cheeks but before he could respond, she was out of the room and into the rain!!!

Maan saw her from his room's window with his temptation rising as the dress clinged to her perfectly curved body!!!

He finally got up from there as he could not take it anymore and also the window was not giving the clear view as it was filled with the raindrops!!!

He got out into the terrace which was attached to their room.

He looked at her from a distance as she enjoyed the rain twirling around with her open hands enjoying every drop!!!

Pee Loon Tere Neele Neele Naino Se Shabnam,
Pee Loon Tere Geele Geele Honto ki Sargam,
Pee Loon Hai Peene Ka Musam,

Maan went to her and held her open arms from his hands

Tere Sang Ishq Kaari hai,
Tere Sang Ik Khumari Hai,

Geet turned around and saw him completely drenched looking at her with his seductive eyes!!!

Tere Sang Chain Bhi Mujhko,
Tere Sang Bekarari hai...

As he was looking deep into her eyes, Geet filled her palm with water and threw it on his face bringing her out of his dreamland

Tere Bin Jee nahy lagta
tere bin jee nahy sakta,

Maan followed her at the terrace as she ran but fell due to the slippery floor

tujh pe hai haare maine waare do jahan

Maan quickly rushed towards her but also fell down due to the wet floor and both looked at each other and laughed

Kurbaan Marhban Ke Main To Kurbarn,
Sun Le Sadaaa....

Maan got up and picked her up in his strong arms

Hosh Main Rahon Kiyun Aaj Main,

Tu Meri Bahon Main Simti Hai,
Mujh Main Samayi Hai Youn,

He took her to their room and carefully kept her on the floor

She was going to change her clothes but he held her arm and was getting close to her

Jis Tarah Tu thodi Ho Nadi,

Tu Mere Seene Main Chubti Hai,
Sagar Tumara Main Hon.

She freed her hand and quickly ran towards the washroom leaving her dupatta in his hand with him standing their passing a smile holding onto her dupatta

Pee Loon Teri Dheemi Dheemi Lahron Ki Chamcham.

Maan stopped in his tracks as he saw her coming out of the washroom wearing a light pink colored salwar suit

Pee Loon Teri Saundi Saundi Sanson Ko Har Dam,

He walked up to her and held her from her waist from behind as she was standing near the bed drying her bed and pulled her towards him

Pee Loon Hai Peene Ka Mausam,

He tied the undone dori of hers giving a kiss on her back

Tere Sang Ishq Kaari hai,

Tere Sang Ik Khumari Hai,

A chill ran down her spine and she turned around to see his eyes full of passion, unable to take it, she just hid herself in his chest

Tere Sang Chain Bhi Mujhko,
Tere Sang Bekarari hai...

He broke the hug and looked at her while she stood there with her face down

Tere Sang Ishq Kaari hai,
Tere Sang Ik Khumari Hai,

He held her chin and made her look at him and kissed her on her eyes!!1

Tere Sang Chain Bhi Mujhko,
Tere Sang Bekarari hai'

She tried moving from there but he held her hand and pulled her towards him with force but he himself lost his balance and he fell on the bed with her landing on him

Sham Ko Milu Jo Main Tujhe,

She tried moving from there but he held her hand and pulled her towards him with force but he himself lost his balance and he fell on the bed with her landing on him

To Bura Subha Na Jane
Kiyun Kuch Maan Jalati hai Yeh,

Maan moved the flicks which were covering her face

Har Lamha Har Ghari Har Pahir,
Bhi Teri Yadon Se Tadpa Ke.

Mujhko Jalati Hai Yeh,

He them took a turn and made her lie on the bed with him on her top, He kissed her on her cheeks and made his way towards her lips but she pushed him making his fall on her side and she ran before he could again lock her again in his arms

Pee Loon Main Dheere Dheere Jalne Ka Yeh Ghum,
Pee Loon In Gaure Gaure Hathon Se Humdum,

Maan looked at her as she ran to the window breathing heavily and looked at him

Pee Loon Hai Peene Ka Mausam.

He went to her and stood on the left side of the window while she was at the right

Tere Sang Ishq Kaari hai,
Tere Sang Ik Khumari Hai,

He looked at her as he saw her coming towards him

Tere Sang Chain Bhi Mujhko,
Tere Sang Bekarari hai...

She came to him and held his hand

Tere Sang Ishq Kaari hai,
Tere Sang Ik Khumari Hai,

She sat on the floor and made him sit also by pulling her hand

Tere Sang Chain Bhi Mujhko,
Tere Sang Bekarari hai...

As he sat there she rested her back on his chest intertwining his fingers into hers

Tere Bin Jee nahy lagta
tere bin jee nahy sakta,

He shifted her hair from her left shoulder and rested his head on her shoulder

tujh pe hai haare maine waare do jahan
Kurbaan Marhban Ke Main To Kurbarn,
Sun Le Sadaaa....

He intertwined his hand holding her from her waist and pulling her more close to him enjoying her sitting close to him and the rains!!!

"Achchi" Geet sneezed as he was taking her to the bed

"I told you not to go in the rains!!!" Maan said as he made her lie on the bed... "Now you have to pay for not listening to me" Maan said in a seductive voice as he sat on the bed,

He looked at her face which turned red; "By having those yummilicious medicines" Maan said teasing her as he took the first-aid box!!!

Geet looked at him and then felt embarrassed of what she was thinking, when she saw him giving her the medicine with a glass of water, she took them and saw him going towards his side of bed and lied there switching the lights off and snuggling close to her.

"I Love you Mr. Khurana" Geet said as she turned to face him

"I know you love me Mrs. Khurana and to tell you the secret..." Maan went to her ears and said in the most passionate voice "I love maself too..." Geet looked at him under the moonlight with an open face and then realizing what he did hit him on his chest and their night went on fighting, teasing and above all loving each other!!!

So That was all

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