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Posted: 15 years ago
First of all, Sonia can you do more of your takes? It was fun reading it! 😆

Originally posted by: SuhaniSonia



If I was to criticize anything it would be how he hops/jumps (ex when he was running down with Geet) and sometimes even how he dances. He is like really fluid which is great and all but he comes across more feminine than masculine at times. 😕


Its great that she screamed Maan when he gets hit as she could have easily just screamed Sir. 😆 It meant alot to him but what was with the prolonged stare. They have to realize when to and when not to have eyelocks. 😆 Number one - No eye locks during fights!!


@Underlined: AGREED!! You know the "Where's the party tonight" dance seq...i felt that certain of his dance moves were abit feminine ....Reminded me of Hrithik Roshan and his rubber legs.....🤣
@2nd para:.......🤣...Well considering the fact that Maan and Sir are both one syllable..she could have just said "Sir" instead...😆😆😆....BUT there were some great sybolisms written for this "Maan" calling name part..and ageed..no eyelocks..but Munda was sharp enough to catch the punch that was coming his way..despite looking the other way at Geet....😆 Now THIS only happens on TV......😆😆😆..i bet in real life..someone who's in Maan's position and staring at the other side..would have gotten knocked down flat...😆😆😆
Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

@Lana - i don' thave tym now to read u r short take for the day.. will hopefully be able to treat myself to it later..

P.S. Ur ENTRY does not count unless u PM it or the link to me.
Edited by AnjanaToronto - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Today Epi. more like confession..I love the way Maan confess his feeling..That words more then ILU..
Today both accept truth that they can't leave with them..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

@Lana : Nicely said!

"And thus she held his hand & showed her pledge of concern, care & comfort by salvaging his wound with her honor!! She wrapped his hand with her dupatta & he as usual respecting her honor accepted it with grace & looked away! 😃 Really this guy is way too decent, too prim, too proper, too honorable for his own good!! And at that point of time maybe Maan was having doubts for confessing again as Geet was looking at him intensely. He didn't know whether she will reject him again or not but the moment she held his hands his doubts were wiped away. The look became hopeful again! That eye contact there professed love, promise, assurance, care & of being together! 👏 His all along 'I am there for u' is still ringing in my ears!! This is a true CONFESSION in every respect! ⭐️"
Esp that paragraph above!!..👍🏼



I am so glad you all can put these feelings into words. I was watching his every move as he looked away and all. I can never figure out how to express these scenes in phrases as such!! 👍🏼
Edited by SuhaniSonia - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Vini- I am watching the epi now ...so am gonna write but believe me nothing to match up what u guys have already written
Edited by rdfan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello everyone!! 🤗

@SuhaniSonia I just read your analysis. Good one. Maan is my dream man too. 😳 I actually wrote the same exact line about love oozing from their eyes, but then I changed it to "I saw so much love between them in this scene". 😆 Great minds think alike.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SuhaniSonia


Caco!! 🤣 Now that was fantastic!! Blow by blow of the whole fight!! 🤣

all those time spent on Maan-chi....kuch to kaam ana chahiye na


🤣

I so would love Dev stuck in the same jail as Brij!! 👍🏼



This show is blowing my mind so far!! Its challenging almost every prejudice I have had with Indian soaps.




thanks Sonia😆 Mehr asked for a blow by blow a/c of the whole fight 🤣 had to do it 🤣 but me enjoyed😆
and i agree what u said at last
Its challenging almost every prejudice I have had with Indian soaps.
true indeed!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: deniac

@Soni kudi... u did a complete take today??? wow i must read it... but will do that tomorrow morning.... its 3 am now... so off to sleep....



Good night Gouri!! 🤗
I just blabbed a little longer than usual. Nothing special.
I got your PM back. I know I am a little too sensitive over that topic. Thats just me.



Thanks Vandana!! 😃
I am sure you will just love the episode. There is no way not to.

Edited by SuhaniSonia - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
@caco - Queen of Emoticons ! Awesome yaar, tumne to woh poori fight scene mere aankhon ke samne khadi kar di 👏🤣🤣 After reading shonuu's update maine khudko badi mushkil se samhala tha .... n then u come along ....HOWLARIOUS !!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cacoethes

thanks Sonia😆 Mehr asked for a blow by blow a/c of the whole fight 🤣 had to do it 🤣 but me enjoyed😆
and i agree what u said at last
Its challenging almost every prejudice I have had with Indian soaps.
true indeed!



You probably had to pause it a million times to get all the moves in!! 😛😆 But thats what sets your analysis apart and makes it so much fun to read. 😆 I love dishum dishum scenes!! I hope there are more so you can write them up again. 😊

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