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Posted: 15 years ago
Pasted my take on page 2 ... here it is for those of you who are online...
will read all takes tomorrow... good night...
Ghar laute Geet???

Well y am I naming my take like that??? That statement blew me away'⭐️ am still smiling'😊 4 hrs after the episode and am not able to resist the faint smile'.😛

CVs, episode director, Nissar, dialogue writers, script writers, Actors ' u all will have to bear with me today as I might just be blabbering'. I'm still awestruck at the way Maan's confession was handled'.. 😍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

What an episode'. Phew'. all masala needed'. Action / fights, love, consoling, conversation, relationship being taken to a next level, trust, happiness, sadness' all in one package'. Wow'. 👏👏👏

Talwar , gun'dishum dishum' wow I love action scenes'. N Gurmeet was very good here'.👏👏 It was definitely filmy' but heck I love filmy dishum dishum as well'.😃 The first scene where Maan holds the talwar and his hand is bleeding' the determination on his face that I shall not let Geet be harmed was so evident that it scared me'. Wow'Geet was relived to see maan but was scared to see him that angry'. The fight scene here was good'. The gun scene''was it strictly necessary??😕 Well I wont crib today'😊 when maan got a blow on his face'.geet screaming Maaaaaaaaaan'..Maan was all 😲😲😲 - no sir?? well that did it all' the fight that followed was very filmy but the Geet's taking maan's name and not calling him sir was enough a hint for him to know that he means much more that sir or even a friend to her'.😛😉 It was like Geet yelling out to her Maan'😳😃 I like filmy stuff as well so I loved the fight scenes'😆😆😆.... loved the way Maan took geet's hand in his and took her away from that dungeon kind of cave😛

I am leaving Dev scene out for the time being' will write about it later' right not in Maan-Geet flow'

What followed totally blew me away' well all of u please don't get carried away with my praises'. I shall point out to silly matters for which I need to remind u guys to be careful' but that will come at the end'.

Geet wants to stay back for a while as maan is bleeding in the shoulder.. but all maan is worried bout is getting her to safety' awww'. Both of them thinking bout the other' its so nice'😊😛😃 Geet asking maan why did he follow her to Hoshiarpur?' continuing saying he is hurt becoz of her and that her shadow too is harmful for him'. Maan for the first time registered her words n then heard her carefully when she said the shadows of her past will never leave her so till when is he going to keep saving her? Maan is finally hearing some thing from her. I guess he realized that she is carrying some baggage which he is unaware of.

Oh I liked the way he pulled and held her 😛'. Maan's all in protecting my wife mode' he openly tells her that he will always stand between her and any danger and till he is alive her past will never be able to come near her as his life is incomplete without her' his life is habituated or rather addicted to her' am using the word addicted as I like it more..😃 am addicted to watching Geet'😆😆 well I loved the actual dialogues ' meri zindagi tumhare bina adhoori hai Geet... aadat ho gayi hain mere zindagi ko tumhari Geet.. 👏👏👏👏 well the haans came in today as well' but I like them' confirmation of whatever was just said by maan' its like repeating the sentence' this was confession no 4 from Maan's side' (1st - when he said that whatever differences they might hv he will never tolerate an outsider insulting her' that is protecting her honour' 2nd ' sharing of food from her plate asking apnonka to jhoota kha sakte hain na? 3rd ' trying to tell her about her gal who is making place in his heart)' this time he has totally told her that without her, his life is incomplete' he is submitting himself to her' ☺️☺️☺️☺️

Geet finally questioning herself why is she trying to push himaway when the fate keeps getting them closer? It all started in Hoshiarpur so is it a sign that she shud feel love again? why is she resisting from holding Maan's hand?? Well I liked this part'. This shows she is ready to move on in life' leave behind her pain that hoshiarpur gave, erase away her sad memories related to love, marriage'

Geet takes his hand n sees the blood '. Well another dupatta tearing scene and tying it round Maan's wound'. Here I have to state a symbolism' For geet dupatta has always been a symbol of izzat/honour'for the first time she took off her dupatta completely and then tore a part of it'taking off the dupatta meant that she knows her honour is safe with him.. she trusts him' even after tearing a part she dint wear the dupatta both ways' it stayed on one side' means she is opening up her honour for him' not fully yet but yes partially' submitting herself to him...

Then came the part revelation of truth'. Geet got brij behind bars'. Maan is happy that she did what he had told her'n seeing her tears he asks her if she is missing her family' Geet confided in him that she has no family or house here anymore as they have moved on in life without her' n awwww then came the fifth confession'.😍☺️☺️☺️ Ghar laute Geet'. awww'.😍☺️☺️☺️ Maan realized she has no family and no home' he has already offered himself as family to her, now he offered her his home as her own' the expression and smile on Gurmeet's face was awesome'👏👏. this confession was totally in MSK's character and Gurmeet today did not get out of character ever for a second' loved it' ⭐️👏👏 Maan took Geet's hand and led her towards the car (means home in delhi)' it 👏was so hubby like.. taking his bride home'. Geet just follows him means she too is submitting herself to fate now' 😃

The car moments in delhi' sweet' I wud hv loved if maan wud hv brushed aside some starnds of hair from geet's face or caressed her face a bit'☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ loved the way Geet snuggled into Maan when he is trying to pick her'. Well well am sure Geet isn't into deep sleep' all nautanki' wanting to feel safe in his arms haan??? ☺️☺️☺️☺️ No harm'am not complaining' it's a gal's right to do dat'. Hehehehe'😆😆😆😆 Maan placed her on the bed and she's still having a strong hold around his neck'aaaahh.. girl dint want him to leave her...😉😉😳😳 well lots of fans dont want that... all hv been hoping for u know what'.☺️☺️☺️☺️ Well am perfectly happy with what was shown' no special demands here' it will come sometime after confession'☺️☺️ I shall make my demands'

Maan has finally realized that there is a big baggage from her past which Geet is carrying and hasn't opened that up yet' now he kind of knows that there is a reason why she hasn't yet accepted him as her life partner.. but he is willing to wait ' he is hoping that there will be sometime when she will trust him enough for her to share her past with him' 😊

I love this phase' its going slow and steady' preparing Geet and maan to be equipped to fight adversities that might arise' giving them time to understand each other'.

Well today as well some parts of parineeta metaphor, saat vachans have been fulfilled but I shall leave that to doodle 'explaining that is her job'. 😉😆😆

Now coming to Dev ' NT track

Dev feeling all guilty???😡 Well I think not' suddenly guilt n all'doesn't go too well' I am inclined to think that dev is just scared of his brother's wrath and wants to tell him everything himself as he fears that if Maan comes to know about it from elsewhere then punishment will be more severe.😡 If he was really guilty he wud have tried calling at hoshiarpur and wud hv tried speaking to geet's family or the so called family'NT is shocked that y suddenly Dev's conscience has started hurting him? But says whatever she wants will happen' so we can be sure that Dev doesn't tell anything to Maan'

Now now now'here comes my danda' after giving such an awesome episode how can you make such mistakes'. Was this shoot done is sleep?? If I could point it, why didn't editing team point it?? When maan lifted geet from the car her head was in his right hand.. when he entered the bed room her head was in his left hand' kya beech mein staircase par he changed hands??? Oh god' when will u guys stop these bloppers?? 😡😡

I was in full mood of giving 10/10 today n u guys know I had said I never shall give 10/10 as there is always scope for improvement ' ur stupid bloppers r forcing me to stay at 9/10'. There is definitely scope for improvement'.

Well coming to the acting' Gurmeet, Drashti you both were brilliant'.👏👏 Direction, script, dialogues '.. everything brilliant'.👏👏 CVs take a bow' ⭐️Nissar please take a bow too'⭐️ but please no bloppers'😡 it spoils my mood'

Some issues for upcoming track ' Take is at a slow pace' the current pace is good' maintain it please' don't rush into things' Remember geet's status quo should be known to maan before she moves on in relationship with him'.so no confession from her side till maan knows bout NRI duping her into a fake marriage and her pregnancy' Dev's name need not be known till Dev and Geet come face to face'.

Over to all for discussion....

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Posted: 15 years ago

Damnnn i can't stop watching the scenes from Today's episode!! 😳

I need to go off now..but i STILL want to watch it again!! 😆...I mean for the first time i'm interested in re-watching the WHOLE episode (minus NT and Dev😆)...It's always been selected scenes..but today.....almost everything..This is a serious issue!! ....😳😆
G'nite all..🤗 Will check all the remaining takes tmrw, including yours Caco.....😉😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
govindaa ke din sab ho gaye hain govindaa ke sang...
are samajhe har taraf hai ye shor...
hai aayaa gokul kaa chor...
aalaa re aalaa govindaa aalaa...

happy janmashtami to all...


Sorry, I couldn't reserve earlier… 😳😳😳

Hmmm… what should I say…!!! It was a fantastic episode…!!! Loved you all for this…!!!👏 👏 👏

So lost in the confession that I can't even think of a song…😳 😍

Scene 1 – Let's fight baby…

Maan v/s Gang… starting from yesterday… our munda comes to rescue his kudi… and he bashes… and he thrashes… single-handedly… Do I like that… Hell yeah… I am so elated to see our old MSK back to dhobi-pachad the gundas… As I had said he was ready to go all out and do anything for her… Held the sword in his hand… took the bullet (almost) on his shoulder… As much OTT it must've felt given that I saw the fight at least 3 times… but it was impactful… Missed Brij here…!!!

Scene 2 – "Maan"

Continuing… Seeing MSK in danger… the fear of seeing him hurt was already lurking in her subconscious… And this one blow had to bring it out… "Maan"… Yes… fear & hurt brings out the deepest feelings from your heart… and that's what happened with G… Her scream and his immediate reaction… that of a shock… 😲 😲 😲 This was the first time she had ever called him 'Maan' (since HP) knowing the emotional involvement… And it told him what she felt for him… This was enough…

Scene 3 – "Kaante Nahi Kat te Yeh Din Yeh Raat… Kehni Thi Tumse Jo Yeh Dil Ki Baat" ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

As much clich the title is… the execution of the non-clich confession was the best we all wanted… 👏 👏 👏 hurting him was also necessary… else G's protective outburst wouldn't have happened… Yes it's her protective nature that makes her blame herself all the time… Her protective nature even gives her the right to reprimand him for coming to HP… That's what love is about… You love them so much that you want to protect them… when they get hurt… you care for them but then you reprimand them for getting into trouble, if it's for you…!!!😊 😊😊

I just loved the way CVs brought the confession out of MSK's mouth… typical MSK style… absolutely unconventional… It's the reprimand from her that brought the confession out… I just loved the way he grabs her and almost shakes her… as if shaking the self-blaming out of her…


"Jab tak mein hoon… woh jitni baar bhi tumhare aas paas aayenge… tab tab… who mujhe tumhare samne khada payenge…" – I will always stand between you and any problems ❤️ 🤗

"Until I am alive… your past will not even come close to you…" – no problems will even touch you until I am with you ❤️ 🤗

"Kyunki… meri zindagi tumhare bina adhuri hai…" – If you aint there, then how will I be there, for whom will I be there ❤️ 🤗

"Adat ho gayi meri zindagi ko tumhari…" – Yep that's what happens… You become a habit of each other…
❤️ 🤗

This reminds me of the confession promo… No flowers, no ring, no support… You will be my fianc… Absolutely on par… He confessed without any of the above… this is the unconventional style that I was talking about…

Another promo that just played indirectly… G's self-thinking… Should I relive my life again…??? Yep… I see that track coming soon enough… This was the perfect turning point in G's outlook towards MSK... Until now she had all the faith in him since he was her savior… this confession will help her take a step forward (towards love) in opening up to him… Yesterday she felt comfortable as a friend… Today his confession has given her the strength to be able to give into the relation… I am glad the truth didn't come out this soon… As much as we all wanted it… This will be helpful for both of them to get comfortable and become strong to accept each other's past and not create misunderstandings in the future…

Anyways back to the track… I found this very symbolic… G taking MSK's hand in hers (to tie the bandage in his hand)… it felt like an acceptance from her side… Another side of this could be… Earlier he always used to protect her honor… Now she is willingly giving him the right to protect her honor… This somewhere symbolizes some of the marriage rituals… I am referring to Doodle's & Jyo's Parineeta Thoery…

Kanyadaan – Girl's family gives away to the guy by putting her hand in his… G herself takes his hand in the absence of her family…

Gathbandhan – Tying the knot with girl's saree/dupatta & guy's kurta… G ties the dupatta around his hand

Anyways back to some of the intermediate scene – The sense of pride on his face (a million dollar expression) was worth watching when she tells him she followed his path… 👍🏼Was this an indication of 6th phera where if she wants he would accompany in punishing her sinners…??

What a perfect time to mention that her family isn't there… Another indication of why she did all those rituals… the expression from both of them were mind-blowing where they were getting tied to each other – as a soul… which is what happens when we are getting married…!!!

Last phera – Guy leads the girl… MSK walks with G holding her hand and takes her home… their home… Absolutely mind-blowing when he says 'Ghar laute Geet' And note one thing… she isn't walking with him subconsciously… she is walking with him willingly now… wanting to start a new life with him…

All I await is the Mangalsutra/Sindoor ritual… Taveez could be used here as a substitute for the Mangalsutra… I am not how Sindoor would be substituted…😍 😍 😍

Scene 4 – I feel Sunggly… Cuddly 🤗 🤗 🤗

Ahhh…. So peaceful she looked having been in his shelter… his comfort… his warmth… I just loved the part where he extends himself to touch/kiss her and stops midway looking at her dupatta… reminding himself of her honor here...!!! He is her savior… She is his responsibility, protecting her honor is his duty… She herself has given the right to save her honor…

As I said earlier… she is looking so peaceful, comfortable in his presence now… that she just snuggles him when he is about to lift her in his arms… Just loved the way he carries her with pride and takes her home… To me this was another symbol of Grih Pravesh – their home… There was a faint smile of success on his face of having her with him now and forever…

Scene 5 – Let our love light up our lives

Perfect entry into their home with lights on… Actually this reminds me of Ramayan… where Ram walks with Sita after 14 years of vanvaas and their entire path is lit with diyas…!!! That's the entry MG had when they entered… lights lit up (automatically)… lighting up their lives too...

Did you see how she held onto him when he laid her down… implies now she won't let him go… from now on their life will be different since G will give in to his love… slowly and steadily instead of resisting…

Last but not the least… MSK reminiscing the fight in FB… and assuring himself that he is ready to wait for the day when she tells him everything… Yep… the two of you need that time to become strong enough and be so deep in love that each other's flaws (pasts) also seem like attributes…

Miscellaneous Scene – DNT

Dev is guilt conscious these days… Well some day this had to happen… he is not cold-hearted & vicious unlike NT, after all MSK's partial blood is running through him too… Dev's admittance to NT… Yaar he truly is Shekhchilli's student… He for sure is going to lead to some disaster for himself… Will wait-n-watch what happens here…

Precap – 'Kuch to hua hai… Kuch ho gaya hai'

Don't want ot say anything… just want to feel today…

Overall it was an absolutely great episode… My heart, eyes & brain all are ready to ignore the bloopers if there were any… Kudos & hats off to CVs and dialogue-writer for some wonderful dialogues… Bigger round of applause to Nissar for handling such delicate scenes beautifully… And another round of applause to Drishti & Gurmeet for power-packed performances… I don't think anyone else could justice to their roles except for them… 👏 ⭐️

And I am still thinking of a perfect song…

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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks Vandana. The episode was awesome. you'll love it!!!

@caco seems like you have an interesting analysis. will go read now.

Byee Gouri!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Arwen!! 🤗Thanks!!
What happened to lappy??

49erfan!! That line was like the best line today!! Perfect timing, perfect expressions, just perfect!!

Anvi - The forum is afraid of the misunderstandings?? I guess because her truth isn't out and they have pretty much confessed. I am sure no matter how awesome Maan is, it will take him a moment to process the fact that she is pregnant when he finds out. I hope it doesn't turn into a mess.

I miss Dadi!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
@D - i have not read u r analysis but, am gonna kill u! 😡😡 CELINE DION?!😡 We keep throwing her over the Border, but you lot have to give her bak don't ya😡🤣🤣🤣 Sowwie - she is as tacky as VEGAS😵
Edited by AnjanaToronto - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cacoethes

Doooooooooo 🤗 fantastic as always.....i always have to read ur takes twice 🤣 such high thoughts😆it goes over my head i read it the first time😆as always it was brilliant...someone seems to be very happy with a certain someone 🤣



Hmm I stpooed talking to him since last thurs...check my analysis I didn't take his name at all..

Since then he started to manoofy me by giving all things I love...in each episode..today I thought chalo...enough.. he will be so happy... 😆 😆 😆
Edited by doodleberry - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Pooja i love how u always weave poems in ur takes👏 fabulous!
oh and Doooo me also dont like Celine Dion but that song was so apt!
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Posted: 15 years ago
me just read shonuu's half take 🤣 🤣 holyyyyyy 🤣 🤣 i cant stop laughing 🤣 AAJAA GUFAON MEIN AA...AJA GUNAH KAR LE 🤣 🤣 she is too good 🤣 🤣

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