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Originally posted by: WhiteFantasy

wow😲....HOT❤️.
My favorite part was the kissing🤣...You know why😉.
I love how you described it so innocently 😳 but so seductively ☺️. It made me grin when he grew agressive with her but it made me extra extra crazy wen he became a gentleman da next second she denied his ministration.😍
It was simply put.....just great. I loved reading it. And aw, you used Daadimaa's jewlery scene too. I stil remember wen she said dat dey wud bcom Geet's jewlery once Maaneet were married.
I ALSO remember his seductive way of taking it off. HOT!!!☺️
But I have one question for you. Whats up with the whole acting. They dun noe each other before dere SR or dey did noe each other but Geet is just ridiculous shy? 😕

Ur here to? LOL . . . Hmm . . Well I don't know the circumstances of the SR . . . This was my first piece as a request by Maaneet Paradise creater Lana Burak . . . SOOOO . . . Second part? Maybe since Maaneet haven't had their SR yet . . . Hmmmzzz

Hey people its Liz! Add this user if you want to be pmed for fanfics 😉

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Hi,

wow just chanced upon this os

i didn't know such a thing was possible...that u wrote something and i didn't press the like button.

woho...that was really romantic...fabulous os...

bookmarking...have to run now..will read later...

wow awsum os luvd it