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Tia

@tes_v1

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Liz,

Fantastic one-shot. Do I need to say that you have beautifully protrayed the emotions?! The whole scene was beautifully unfurled. The hesitance, the reluctance, the acceptance, the passion and the sweet end!

Loved it!

cheers,
Tia

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Anamika

@AnamikaSJain

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

What a wild imagination! But the Question is would there be a Suhag Raat as Geet is pregnant? If at all there would be I am sure there would not be any juicy bits displayed as this is a TV Soap.

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Challiya Bitch !! ;) !!

@-BlushaLicious-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Very Nice
Loved It
Please Continue😃

Edited by .AmeenaForEva - 13 years ago

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naina

@warriorprincess

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

wow...someone shud send this to the CV's (give them some direction!)

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VirIka4ever

@VirIka4ever

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Loved it ... amazing Job ... are you planning on continuing it ... If yes then can you please add me to your PM List :)

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Humera Anwar

@-Humera-

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Very beautifully written!!

:) xx

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Lena

@.Lina.

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

wow😲....HOT❤️.
My favorite part was the kissing🤣...You know why😉.
I love how you described it so innocently 😳 but so seductively ☺️. It made me grin when he grew agressive with her but it made me extra extra crazy wen he became a gentleman da next second she denied his ministration.😍
It was simply put.....just great. I loved reading it. And aw, you used Daadimaa's jewlery scene too. I stil remember wen she said dat dey wud bcom Geet's jewlery once Maaneet were married.
I ALSO remember his seductive way of taking it off. HOT!!!☺️
But I have one question for you. Whats up with the whole acting. They dun noe each other before dere SR or dey did noe each other but Geet is just ridiculous shy? 😕

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

loved this OS

so hot and romantic..oh maan;)

you should definitely write a 2nd part for this

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Shreya

@..shreyaa..

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

OMG THIS WAS AWESOME
LOVED IT
Uff Hot..
hayee

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Navpreet

@dimpzz

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#70

AMAZING!!
loved it sooo much
m like speechless!
it wz out of the world
tatz umm somewhat the case wid everyone i guess
cuz i havn't experienced it yet but it does happen....😳
beautifully written!

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