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Nupur9 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
I am wasted, I don't want to work. feels like weekend is Already here.
Will begin fresh on Monday.
Fresh to take more MAAN onslaught...oooppppsss....*ducking*
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyy Skep 😊 Heyy again Nups 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Arwen...

Heyy Skep 😊 Heyy again Nups 😆



I guess there is NO such thing as Sleep time for some nocturnal people like Toi??
Sleep Girl Sleep....it will make you dream....
& that would bring in Cream-de-la-cream....
read Max MAAN!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Nups i slept for an hr or so ... now i'll sleep after eating sehri ....😆 shd be in bd in another hour or so 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
and oh ..... when fasting i m totally shareef so dont tempt me 😆


EDIT"

gtg now 😊

tc nups 🤗
Edited by Arwen... - 15 years ago
Nupur9 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nu running behind ZuZu to collect all the "sharafat" that is takoing ........
Yeah Right!!! 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
ah Skep...

sorry have been out of the house and not around to say my hi's or give my 5 lines...have been watching the epi..too late...to do my take for you...

but..first..i will do the take on epi..and then your piece

Plan seems to be working
the girl is gawking

jealousy has raised its head
now she follows him instead

One gives him a drink, a spiked drink
Other tries to save him going over the brink

Oh time for some dance and swoon
they almost kiss we all moon

mission is almost complete
she will be his to bleat

Oh the serial hit a century
the magic will pall eventually?



Now for your piece

thoughts come in head, churning
to see both of them yearning

ah the first throes of love
is like releasing of dove

from a cage made of gold
a step he took was bold

to capture this in words ethereal
ah skep you are surreal

it was a beautiful piece.. loved the perspective...explored..loved the yearning portrayed..
Edited by rushtrip - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks Rush ................... it was nice reading yr post. 👏 👏 👏You remembered to write yr update in verse, one which I always read. ❤️ 🤗
And I also like to read yr appreciation of the paras that I post. Its so much more preferable to the claws that some sink into me ..................... 😲
Ah but then there are people and people .................... 😉
Edited by skeptical - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks Skep ;-)

hi all..

off again.for the weekend... will catch up with you guys on monday...

cheers

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Skep,
Loved the verses 👏👏... Too good... U are an amazing writer - both in prose and verse.. U know how to hook a reader and entrap them in the webs of ur fantasy writing!!
God - I feel like I am a fish and u the fisherman with a bait (story) to hook us- Am I corny or what !!
Loved the romatism in ur words - U name is an oxymoron for me--Ru skeptical about love too ? Ur writing says otherwise...
Now eagerly waiting for the next bait ..🤔 hmmmmm I mean the next update!! 😆
@Vroom - the way ppl are pressurizing for slow takes and not to rush the story line, but if there are filler epis, that too is a prob 😕😕😕...... I am thinking that palling would happen soon.. If the band is stretched beyond endurance, it would defo snap!!

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