FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet part 96 new thread - Page 12

awesome update

u made me cry di!!!!!!!!!! 😭
but u r d best 👏

awww....great update.....i am so sad😭.....nevetheless, plz cont soon so we can get out of the hospital! 😉

Hi ur ff s so gd...after every part mind s searching for d next part...so plz update soon
one small req no HOT in ICU...hw come tat should happen....maan has to realise geet's pain..
he has to take care of her which he left in d past 4 yrs...
keep going...
waiting for d next part yaar...

part 72

after a while daadi NT & dev left to the mansion..
priya & maan stayed back..
surgeon came out of the OT & we have done wat best we could..
can't say any thing untill evening..we will have to wait untill she regains
her conciusness..
maan - can i see her
surgeon - yah sure ..one at a time please..
maan slowly walks inside..his heart hurt..hurt like it would just pour out..
he held her hand...it was cold & lifeless...the feeling was so horrifying..
he remembered every time he kissed those hand..how lively & responsive
they used to be to his touch...his tears rolled down..please geet..
mujhe maaf kardo..he said & walked out..he went to the corridor &
cried ..cried out loud..geeeeeeeet....he fell on his knees
pulled his hair back & tears were rolling dow his eyes..priya touched his shoulder
priya - tum aise toot javoo ge to ..krish ko kun sambale ga..
armaan gets a coffee for them..maan refuses to drink it..& walks away

latter in the evening..maan & priya sitting next to krish
krish - maa abhi bhi nahi aayi(he started to cry)
maan - she was here all afternoon..ur were sleeping
krish - nahi.aap joot bol rahe ho..aap unse meri phone main baat karoo
maan pulls out the phone fumbling..pretends to call..
maan - i think she is sleeping..no response..
krish - dad mera phone se karo..she will never miss my call
& hands over his phone
(maan remembered every instance when geet had answered krish's call..infront of him
pricipal's office, conference room, dinner..how she never could avoid krishs call)
maan took his phone & dialed the number..& said..i think she is very tired
krish - maa ne mera call miss kardiya..he satrted to cry out loud
jab se khushi aayi hain maa badal gayi hain..
HAAN KRISH...ISE LIYA MAINE Doctors se kaha ki mjhe khushi nahi chahiya..
mujhe to aapne krish ke saath he rehna hain..geet walks in pretending to be fine..
she looked pale & could hardly walk..
she hugged him tight & said maine aapna bhi yanha bed book kar liya...& winks..
(maan & priya at first was relifed to see geet fine & then
were shocked to see geet..smiling & pretending to be fine..& cold)
krish - maa khushi..
geet - yaar woh..khushi mujh kuch raaz nahi aayi...(maans heart bleeded hearing those words)
woh..mujhe kuch aise rishtoo main jood rahin thi..(he knew wat she meant)
which did'nt mean any thing to any one..(maan closed his eyes in pain..)
emotional kar rahi thi mujhe..senti types...

nurse suggested geet to lie down on the bed ...geet tried getting on to the bed
she felt the pain..of stiches getting pulled..maan lifted her & placed her
on the bed...he was so scared ..his eye lids were opening & closing ..fearing to
to look into those eyes...but could'nt avoid..and their eyes met...
they did'nt complain..her eyes was blank..like they never met...
maan was shocked..those eyes could speak volumes to him...
but there was nothing at all..this was verse than he ever expected..
he was ready to take all her anger..tears..shouting..scolding..complains..pain
but there was nothig of that sought...she had drawn herself far far away..
from him...further than he could ever reach ...maan looked away..with mosit eyes
maan pulled the spread & tucked it around her..& he slowly kissed her forehead..
a tear rolled down his eyes...geet was cold to his touch...maan could'nt take
that ..he walked out ..& remembered how she used to cuddle up..or shied when he kissed
her forehead..closing her eyes..uske ankhee hi to thee uske dil ka aaeena..
maine ne aaj unhe bhi koo diya..umhe na use koi gam tha..na koi dard..na koi shikayat..na koi gila..
tha to ek anjaana ..ajnabi sa ..ehsaas..anjaan hain hum tum, ager anjaan hain hameri ankhen
maan could not relate to them...how much he wanted to be in them...

its been a week now in the hospital and maan has not moved a inch away from krish & geet
every time maan saw geet..he wondered..jaane kya hai dil ke andar jo chupke se toot raha hai,
kyun uska haath jaise hathon se chooth raha hai.. ankhon mein ashkon ka samandar nahi..
lagta hai jaise koi patta shaakhon se toot raha hai' ashkon ko Meri aankhon mein rehne
ki aadat si ho gayi hai ab toh jaise zindaghi hi mujh se rooth rahi hai''he wiped his eyes..

geet went & sat on krishs bed & they were playing chess..
krish was lossing the game..maan walks in..
krish - dad see i am losing..meri help karo na..
maan - that will not be right
krish - dad please..mom bolo na dad ko meri help karen
geet looks at maan....maan joins the game...
krish - hamari rani ..raja kuch nahi kar pa rahi hain..
maan looks at geet..
she moves her pond & says check mate..
geet - khabhi khabhi jo raja, rani nahi samjh pathe ..chote pyade samjha dethe hain..

nurse tells geet to rest for some time...
armaan comes to meet geet & krish
geet - hi doc..
(they have a warm hug..maan coud see the warmth in her eyes..he looks away)
armaan - how are u feeling geet
geet - great..i just won a game & winks to krish..(krish turns his face)
armaan - so jr..how are u?
krish - doing good uncle..

armaan calls maan out & says we need to talk..
armaan - yaar i am very worried about geet
maan - why wat happened?..doctors said her stiches drying now..
we could take them home tomorrow..
armaan - nahi yaar..I spoke to the Psychiatric as well...
she said geet is suffereing from masked depression
maan gets worried..why is that..wat is that ???
armaan - did u notice she did'nt cry over khushi..that is not normal
maan - probably to put a brave face with krish..

omg... 😭 how do u write such intense and powerful scenes - muskan, my heart's feeling so weak.. omg u'v made me super upset in both parts - i feel like all this is realllly happening to them.. omg... !!! this is so sad... but of course its a great story, and i'm enjoying it in such a sick way - i'm so silly but basically.. omg i cant bleieve this!! i'm glad maan has found out, and u'v really portrayed what he would have felt - its perfect. he's shocked, confused, doesnt know how to react and absolutely shattered. baby krishna aawww poor boy! and geet... poor geet! poor poor poor geet! i want to give her a hug right now!
omg another update! wait this ^^^^^^^^ was a comment about part 71! let me read part 72 and then comment again! 😳 i'm so happy i didnt have to wait long!

amazing....beautifully written, although it was sad......

wow again this waz an awesum update 😡 .............

yep i loved geet's "NO REACTION " but untill i knew she is in masked depression ........


this time i am crying for maan .......... 😭 felt so bad for both

this time maan wud have to work really hard to regain geet's trust i din mention love cuz i knw geet can nvr stop loving him .........:(



below part almost brought tears in my eyes

HAAN KRISH...ISE LIYA MAINE Doctors se kaha ki mjhe khushi nahi chahiya..
mujhe to aapne krish ke saath he rehna hain..geet walks in pretending to be fine..
she looked pale & could hardly walk..
she hugged him tight & said maine aapna bhi yanha bed book kar liya...& winks..
(maan & priya at first was relifed to see geet fine & then
were shocked to see geet..smiling & pretending to be fine..& cold)
krish - maa khushi..
geet - yaar woh..khushi mujh kuch raaz nahi aayi...(maans heart bleeded hearing those words)
woh..mujhe kuch aise rishtoo main jood rahin thi..(he knew wat she meant)
which did'nt mean any thing to any one..(maan closed his eyes in pain..)
emotional kar rahi thi mujhe..senti types...
nurse suggested geet to lie down on the bed ...geet tried getting on to the bed
she felt the pain..of stiches getting pulled..maan lifted her & placed her
on the bed...he was so scared ..his eye lids were opening & closing ..fearing to
to look into those eyes...but could'nt avoid..and their eyes met...
they did'nt complain..her eyes was blank..like they never met...
maan was shocked..those eyes could speak volumes to him...
but there was nothing at all..this was verse than he ever expected..
he was ready to take all her anger..tears..shouting..scolding..complains..pain
but there was nothig of that sought...she had drawn herself far far away..
from him...further than he could ever reach ...maan looked away..with mosit eyes
maan pulled the spread & tucked it around her..& he slowly kissed her forehead..
a tear rolled down his eyes...geet was cold to his touch...maan could'nt take
that ..he walked out ..& remembered how she used to cuddle up..or shied when he kissed
her forehead..closing her eyes..uske ankhee hi to thee uske dil ka aaeena..

i have no words to describe that what a great writer you are

it was really emotional