ott maaneet madness continues....

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Posted: 15 years ago
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<font size="3">this post is continued from http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1461788
please read the first part so you know whats going on again please dont kill me dont know very good hindi

geet sits on the bed "babaji deko kaise kaise maahnge hai inke" she looks at the ceiling and asks. "ladki ki lambe bal nahi hone chaiye tha ki kaam karthe karthe uske cheri peh na aa jaye bar bar" she reads aloud "aye ley" she looks in the mirror at her hair then starts shaking her head furiously "nahi nahi babaji mujhe apne bal ache lagte hai next wala dekte ho" she continues to read "ladki ka dress sense classy aur modern hona chaye". again geet stares at herself in the mirror nahi mere salwar kameez toh mere pind di nichani hai issko nahi badlo gi main lekin..." she stares at her shoes "shiyad mein apne jote to badal sakte ho".

suddenly geet smiles, she walks out of her room and goes to dadi. "dadi aap ki paas koye high class shoes hoge?" dadi looks confused for a moment and then realises, "ha hai usse cupboard mein hai kyu tume kyu chaye" she asks innocently "err woh tasha uske shoes toot gaye ha toh usko aur chaiye ok thank you bi" she says quickly while grabbing the shoes and running out the room. she goes to her room and trys on the shoes but everytime she tries to walk she keeps on falling.

she walks and falls when suddenly two strong and masculine arms go around her crushing her to his chest so that she doesnt fall. geet grabs onto the first thing she feels which is maans shirt and they both turn to face each other (mahi music) "geet yeh tum kya kar rahe ho agar tumhe lag jata toh..." maan says his eyes full of concern geet cant hear him though all she can do is stare at his eyes so deep that she could make a house for him and her to live inside together forever, but then her trance is broken when she feels her feet on the ground and her body position upright.

"Aur vaise bhi yeh tumhare bas ki baat nahi hai so tum yeh sab chod do tum aur high class saath saath achee nahi lagte" maan continues. suddenly geet realises that she had been letting him take the upper hand she opened her mouth to protest and begin another long speech on maan and his dustness when he stopped her and said "chalo neeche mujhe tumhe kisse se milvana hai".

geet follows maan downstairs where dadi and a girl about geets age were talking they both stood up when they saw maan and geet. (link to her clothes at the bottom) geet stared at her with wide eyes. "geet this is parineeta my finance" you can call me pari she said with a smile.... TO BE CONTINUED


link to pari's dress http://www.fashionjour.com/fashion-brand/fashion-summer-dresses-2010/



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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: .sireesha.

Thats Awesome

pls continue



thank you soo much glad you like it 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heheeh... nice.. continue.. loved her going an falling on Maan...!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: anufa

awsum!!!

update sooN!!!



thanks guyz 4 awsome comments next part is up please read
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I want that fall scene to be in the episode...it gona b so cute....geet trying to be "classy"...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: maanmeet1

good job pls continue



thank you 4 the lovly comments the next part has been posted please read and comment

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