FF:You complete me-2!!!P62,pg145+imp msg on pg150 - Page 74

Wow, great. It has come out really good. It didn't look any bad despite she was in water and totally soaked. It didn't affect him too much as he was sensible and was trying to put some wisdom and sense into her brain. They felt adorable. For a change you made Geet suggesting to leave early to reach home which was against there regular schedules. So what ever you held back ( 2days kisses) you shell all those together in one shot. ummmmmmm

I don't feel like commenting on Dev but still pity his condition. I know it serves him right to feel that awkwardness but some where a tiny part of me is sympathetic to him.

Every thing was OK, Why did you feel like leaving us in the middle of water by telling you will not update till Saturday? 😭😭😭😭 One side you fill wild thoughts in everyone and on the other side you say, stay in the cliff hanger for 2 more days. Too bad Soumya but still do we have a choice, will wait patiently.

Jaya

Originally posted by: pickle6586

Jaya,
u''re bosses are sitting few feet away or tum maneet ke FF pad rahe ho????? 😆

bad jaya...very bad....!!!! yes, it was ur idea, MSK doing all the work.. and i wanted dev to know first..!!! because maan or geet knowing will just take the story a differetn way, lead to misunderstandings and all that,., but dev knowing first would be an interesting angle..lets see what he does ????

and yes, so u do not want XX rated stuff?? is that what u meant???

Hey nothing like that. I do enjoy xx rated stuff but I prefer the hints than the openly said ones. Do you know why there you will have the choice to imagine, you can have your fantasy . It is like mentioning his eyes roamed all over her face and halted @ one place and could not move them any further which will hint that he stopped at her lips without even mentioning that part. So every one has the choice of their own some might enjoy his caressing eyes on the forehead, some on the nose, eyes and ultimately every one will reach the spot. But by the time they reach that place, they would have mesmerized with the thought of his eyes grazed all over and they will turn pink. But I know on a open forum, you have to write some things keeping in mind which will keep the readers glued. And still no where I have seen it has crossed the limits. So no offense. please continue.

btw, in my previous post I had not complained about the XX rated stuff but had told you even when you said it is not good always, you had told them by hints. which served their purpose.

lovely dear
glad dev is realizing his mistakes and feeling guilty
best part he stopped NT Dracula from entering delhi.
man and geet were so comfortable and adorable
do continue
bye sumi

Nice parts 56 & 57..Dev find out that Geet is Maan 's secretary.. I don't have a word to describe what Geet feel for Maan..you written really good..Maan not sleep two days because he wants to spend time with Geet. How nice..
Dev find out about Geet & Maan..I hope Dadi help him to solve his puzzle..The way Dadi think i don;t think so she help him..
Now i am worry about when Maan find out about Dev, how he react..
I hope you not planning to disclose too early to Maan..

Soumya,

Sorry for the late review, wow what chapters... i got goosebumps with the whole bedroom scene, just brilliant. Dev finally realizing his mistake, but i think he is genuinely happy for both geet and maan. Maan is such a romantic at heart, getting everything ready for her for college. The advice he gives her to stand up on her own, when he will be not there for her.. wow..

no worries about updating.. sometimes real life can take over the FF life.. ha ha.. u take ur time.

Always looking forward to ur chapters:)

Hi di...sorry for the late reply....really loved it
it was so sexy and sweet at the same time...nice..no words to express myself....

thanks a lot for this....please update soon

promise i will give a long comment next time
however,my fav part was when she was acting not to know what he was saying in the room about his things....naughty....such x-rated thoughts sirf aapke mind me aate hain...love you

bye
please please please update soon

Soumya di
plzz add me to ur pm😃

heyy

soumyaa!!! main phirse annoy kernay aagai!!😆😆😆

"Thanks Daadima and sorry for not making you happy all these years!

I'll make up for all of it, I promise.""

u really know how 2 keep ur readers happy... this update was just mind blowing, magnificent, majestic, and just wow u really deserve 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏... seriously ur writing is intoxicating & ur just superb terrific... 👍🏼... i wanna give u a biiiggg 🤗 4 making my day by giving ur luvly updates,,,,, but awwww i wont get 2 read ur update till saturday... well u hav 2 give us another loonnggg update 4 testin our patience ok... i understand ur bussy but wat can i do im crazy abt ur ff 😕.. so plzzzz update soon... me eagerly waiting.. 😍 ❤️ 😊