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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sravani899

soumya

hai mere jaan
koi hume torture kar sakthe hai to sirf aap hai yaar
just kidding
wow different style of presenting update
i mean the way u wrote and the way u narated is really differnt and its really cool yaar
bring out the creativity in u dear really so
ok back to update
geet dreaming abt maan its cute
and maan dreaming abt geet its natural from both and liked it yaar
he is one women man thats me ha ha ha
maan and kaam ye lo words also rythm ha ha
chalo he placed all the things of geet on his bed i thought he will place all on him yaar ha ha
he wanted some time to give geet so he finished the work asap
so break fast at around 9:30 and he chatted for 3hrs so interesting
he said he wil be in 15min and came after 30 min ha ha ha ha
daadima and dev conv is really nice
and thank u alot soumya that churail is not here a extra jappiz yaar
daadima is smart and know to end topic at right place
yeh kaisi sawal hai geet", he said. It felt like his voice had come back even i felt that he is back yaar
3-4 hurs project ha ha ha talking to maan is a project then what abt meeting maan ha ha ha (just kidding)
geet and daadima cov is really nice and loved the professional relationship between them dear so cute soumya dear
ran to the car yaar soumya she is nearly 5 months preggy yaar please usse issye kaam math karwana yaar i know u forgot that she is preggy even sometimes i too forget abt the preggy issue ha ha ha
phone unreachable ha ha ha yaar u know it reminded me of my frds phone yaar
dev and abt to move to maans bed room soumya y did u stoped there yaaar
marne ke irada hai kya bata dena agar isa hai to
maan -He was multitasking or pagal yaar yes soumya around 3 pm koi swimming kartha hai kya ok i am not talking abt swimming in rain but swimming around 3 pm is a bit odd ok he is msk so he will only do things like these ha ha ha
i thought u and me sometimes forget abt geet preggy see geet to is forgetting abt preggy ha ha ha searching for another person ha ha ha so we r not wrong
challo now abt maan in the swiming pool with shots and bear body his muscles and his..... oh my god faints wake up faints wake up muaz soumya to u dear i am in maans lala land yaar
i hope he will not pull her in the swiming pool in that heavy rain if so no problem dear
by the way geet in black saree well i like to see her in that color so great that i find first in the ff actually all my dreams come first in ur ff and then in the serial yaar
spoiler well i loved it soumya this is for u
wow what a dialogue dear really soooooooo ............ i dont find correct words to praise u dear its really heart touching jappiz to u soumya
i dont know who says this if maan says its quite true he can do it and no problem if geet says this as any women can do if she is in maans arms no danger will never think to come near the women as danger to fears with name of msk ha ha ha
i love maan alot dear i cant say how much kash a person or sample like maan exists in real world haye
well really loved it alot dear
its really joy and pleasure to read ur ff i really love to read it dear thank u so much for each and every update of urs dear to u dear
i forgot remind u abt torture
torture - 1. dev was abt to enter maans bedroom what happened yaar
2. what is maan abt to do yaar
love u alot alot and alot dear
with lots and lots of
with loads of
sravs








hi sravs,

🤗

thanks im glad u liked the way i changed the narration in the beginning.... good to know u noticed it in the beginning....

yes, geet dreaming abt maan and maan dreaming abt geet is normal.. and we dreaming abt them is normal.... 😆

and regarding the tortures: den enters maan's room...!!!! aaaa haaaaaaa i'm not telling u what happens next... i guess u r smart enough to guess...... 😉

and regarding the next torture..... ahem ahem... some XXXX rated ness on its way honey..... 😉....keep waiting....!!!!!!

and u liked the spoiler line... i too liked it ...awwww... i so wish i cud actually tell that to some one in my lifetime........ 😆.....anyways, coming back......!!!!!

maan pullin geet in to the swimming pool????? he's a gentleman u know...... but do u seriously want that?????? 😳 lets see what he does.....!!!!!

thanks for the wonderful comments honey...!!!!! glad u liked it.. and today u were fast in commenting...how come?????

anyways, love ya....!!!!!!

😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pickle6586



priya,

sharam nahi aati???? fasting karti ho aur XXX rated ness chahiye tumhe???? 😆

anyways, there s lot of it coming up in the next update...keep waiting...😉......

yes, dev came into the outhouse, that s the mystery there..will be cleared in the next update....


oyye aaj meri fast nahi hain? haha in ur face 😆 jk. but I liked how u narrated the part in the beginning. the part kinda gave the feeling of a dream. and of course i'll keep waiting. that's what we readers do. and what the heck man? Dev's not watching them is he? he better not b. aur sharam ki toh tu baat hi mat kar main toh sirf padti hoon. tu toh likhti hain. main toh imagine kar sakti hoon par pata nahi apni ff mein aise likh payoongi ya nahi. itni sharam hain mujhme.😆 aur uzma kaha hain? tujhe sharam ki baat karte sunke bechari ko phirse heart attack na aajaye.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: loveangle_4ever


oyye aaj meri fast nahi hain? haha in ur face 😆 jk. but I liked how u narrated the part in the beginning. the part kinda gave the feeling of a dream. and of course i'll keep waiting. that's what we readers do. and what the heck man? Dev's not watching them is he? he better not b. aur sharam ki toh tu baat hi mat kar main toh sirf padti hoon. tu toh likhti hain. main toh imagine kar sakti hoon par pata nahi apni ff mein aise likh payoongi ya nahi. itni sharam hain mujhme.😆 aur uzma kaha hain? tujhe sharam ki baat karte sunke bechari ko phirse heart attack na aajaye.



so what....u still read them and ask for more.......😆 .... ab main kya karu???/tum sab ki khwaaishe poori karti hoon...... 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉....

thanks, i 'm glad u liked the beginning... what s the chakkar with the fast haaan???? for the last few days u were fasting and now u r not...!!! isiliye tuo achanak type karne ki patience bhi aa gayi aur gussa bhi.....!!!!!!! 😃

uzma ghayab ho gayi.. pata nahi kaha...!!!!! 😆😆😆😆😆😆.....woh waise bhi bechari ICU mein hi rehti hai....!!!!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey
great parts, lol just caught up 😛
anyway, lol im glad that maan does anything to make sure geet isn't angry at him, or upset, so sweet
and ohmygoodness! did dev see maan and geet's pics or something??
this is so intense and mysterious lool
do continue soon
Maheen xx
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93

hey

great parts, lol just caught up 😛
anyway, lol im glad that maan does anything to make sure geet isn't angry at him, or upset, so sweet
and ohmygoodness! did dev see maan and geet's pics or something??
this is so intense and mysterious lool
do continue soon
Maheen xx



hi maheen,

so glad u liked it....!!!! thanks honey... 😛

did dev see the pix?????? hmmmm.... i dont know..maybe he did or maybe he didn't .....😉 ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
kya hain ki last do din se fast ki waja se pet mein bohot dard ho raha tha so i thought aaj fast nahi rakhoongi toh shayad thik ho jayega aur also fridge mein ice cream cake aur ice cream, chips wagera para hua hain toh woh sab khaoonga aaj. toh yeah aaj type karne ka gussa karne ka sabkuch ka patience hain.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: loveangle_4ever

kya hain ki last do din se fast ki waja se pet mein bohot dard ho raha tha so i thought aaj fast nahi rakhoongi toh shayad thik ho jayega aur also fridge mein ice cream cake aur ice cream, chips wagera para hua hain toh woh sab khaoonga aaj. toh yeah aaj type karne ka gussa karne ka sabkuch ka patience hain.



theek hai..... then wait for like 10 minutes... i'll update the next part...!!!!!!! 😛.... ur ice cream and the update will rock together.... 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oh my god Sam loved it...... but y did u stop at such place... really mean...

The fact that u mentioned dev I felt the 2 would bump into each other.....

Pls get free soon so that u can updates

Ferns
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ferns82

Oh my god Sam loved it...... but y did u stop at such place... really mean...

The fact that u mentioned dev I felt the 2 would bump into each other.....

Pls get free soon so that u can updates

Ferns



thanks ferns....!!!!!!! 😛

i'll end the suspense... i'm updating the next part, immediately after this...!!!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
hello everyone,

so lot of things happened in the last update and lot of you were worried about dev';s entry...!!!! well this update should clear the doubts or atleast some of them....

Part 57

Maan moved his hand towards the gap between her blouse and her sari pleats and moved the sari a little away to the side. Geet thought she would faint. He placed his hand on her tummy and said, "both you and my baby!".

She smiled and ran her fingers through his wet hair and kissed his forehead, "I missed you too!You have no idea how much!"

He moved a little closer and kissed her stomach. She held onto his bare shoulders. The kiss was a little too much to take. Her nails dug into his bare skin. The water droplets on his lips created a blazing sensation when they touched the bare part of her stomach.

His placed his hands around her waist and asked her, "do you want to come into the water?"

She thought of it for sometime and said, "I don't think it is good for my health".

"ahem ahem" maan cleared his throat and said, "since when have you been worried about your health anyway?"

Geet looked him furiously. Maan continued, "you were not worried about your health when you came running in search of me, in the rain?"

"then what could I do? You and your weird habits. Koi bearish mein swimming karta hai kya?"

"geet, it started raining, after I started swimming. And I didn't feel like stopping. I have been working for the last two days and I wanted to do something else. So, I ended up coming here".

"so, it is you who has not taken care of yourself haan? Not me!just because I'm not here to remind you about lunch and dinners, you forget to eat. And who on the planet asked you to work so much?"

"you!", his answer was short and simple.

"Me? what did I do now? Maan, you never leave any chance to put the blame on me, do you?"

"no, I don't geet. I love blaming you for everything that happens in my life", he said mockingly. "I wanted to spend time with you so I had to finish all the work, I finished all the paper work for Mr. chopra's project so that you would not have trouble shuttling between the main office and the farm house! I got your class schedule ready".

"so, you made all plans to permanently keep me away from the main office? so, now I don't even have an excuse to meet my old boss!"

"since when did you need an excuse to meet your old boss, geet?" he asked her running his hands on her wet waist.

"Maan, stop it", she said holding his hands.

"what?" he asked.

"you're tickling me!" she said looking down blushing.

"alright, do you want to come in?" he asked again.

"maan, I'm not sure!"

"geet, I did not ask you to swim, so I guess you should be fine".

He held his hand tightly across her waist and slowly took her in. he made her stand against the wall and asked her, "are you okay with this?"

"hmmm, the pool water is warm!" she said. "it feels good!"

She ran her hand on his bare wet chest and she placed her head on it. He took a deep breath, "geet, you think you're touch does nothing to me?"

"maan, chodo na!" she said placing her hands on his back. "so, you got a schedule of my classes too, haan?"

"hmmm!" he nodded.

"thanks maan, remind me to take it when I leave tonight!"

"geet, can you find better ways to thank me, please!" he asked grinning.

She moved her hands from his back and placed them on either side of the pool wall behind her. She moved away from him to face him.

"Mr. Khurana, aapke niyat kuch theek nahi lag rahe hai mujhe" she said with a sly look on her face.

He cleared his throat again, "Okay! Lets get to business then! No more wasting of time". He held her by her waist and moved in closer to her, he kissed her wet eyes and lips.

Geet hit the water in the pool hard with her hands, unable to take the intensity of his kiss. The water splashed on the both of them, making them even wet. The downpour had reduced a little. Though, the sky looked cloudy and it looked like it could rain again any minute. She moved away from the wall, towards him and held onto his back again.

"are you scared of the water?", he asked her placing his cheeks to hers and holding her very close.

"its not that deep here!" she said softly, still recovering from his kiss, "I can touch my feet to the floor of the pool".

"hmmm, do you wanna go deeper in?" he asked her kissing her collar bone.

"what difference would it make?" she asked looking at him.

"you can see it for your self" he said slowly holding her and drifting deeper into the waters.

At one point, she could feel her feet floating much above the floor of the pool. That's when she felt a little nervous. She held onto him even tighter, almost hugging him now. She looked into his eyes. He looked extremely confident and held onto her firmly. She realized she was unnecessarily being worried.

"kya hua?" he asked.

"kuch nahi!" she said, realeasing her hold a little.

"geet, you're leaving your hold loose, aren't you scared now?"

"even if i were to stand in an ocean, with waves as high as the sky, i would do it bravely, as long as you hold me in your arms! And this is just a swimming pool, stagnant water. I wonder why I was being anxious".

He smiled. "I'm happy!"

"why, because I trust you so much?"

"No, because you've used your brain for once, this is just a swimming pool, what would happen here?" he said laughing.

She hit him hard and almost fell back into the water. He did not move an inch. She quickly drifted towards him and held him tight again.

"why didn't you react?" she asked him.

"I wanted to see how much you believe in the statement you just made, about waves as high as the sky and I would not let anything happen!"

"but you did not even move!" she yelled.

"hmmm, I didn't, but my grip is firm", he said pointing to his hand that was holding hers. "I was just holding you with one hand and that was sufficient enough for you to bounce back and stabilize your position. Geet! there's a learning here, I will stand by you, irrespective of the situation, and give you support and the required push- directly or indirectly, it is you who has to make use of all the support, believe in yourself and gain the confidence, to stand on your own feet".

"Maan, don't scare me! why are you telling me all this?" she said looking worried and moved in closer and hugged him.

"I'm not scaring you. I want you to realize that I will not be with you everytime, now that, you work in the farmhouse and you will also have to attend college from next week. You will have to remember that when you enter college, you will meet different kinds of people, you will come across different kinds of situations, Don't give up! there's going to be a lot of competition, but I want you to overcome all of that. You have a tougher task at hand, than most of the students you meet in college- and the reasons being, first, you are pregnant, so you are not in the best of health conditions, second, your pregnancy could raise questions too, but face them. Third, you will be working and studying, so unlike others you would be spending extra time on issues not related to your course work, so you have to efficiently manage your time. Fourth, there's going to be a little bit of stress in your workplace, in college and in your personal life as well, regarding your health, so think of what you can do to manage that!"

"Maan", she said, "I do not know what to say. By the way, are you done with your reasons?"

"no, there's another one! But an insignificant one, so you can ignore it! Keep these in mind for now", he said kissing her cheeks.

"what is it?tell me. and can I ask you another question?why did you choose the swimming pool, that too, standing in the middle of it, with feet hanging in the water, to tell me all this?"

"perfect location, ain't it?you cannot run away from here. You will have to listen to whatever I say".

"oh!so you thought I would not listen to you, unless you leave me hanging in the water like this?"

"No!i thought the situation was very symbolic. Even here, you are struggling to remain stable".

"but you are right here!" she said, "how would I not remain calm?"

"geet, I going to be with you in every step of your life, the presence need not be physical".

"hmmm, okay!" she nodded finally trying to comprehend and grasp everything he said. "so what's the trivial reason?"

He was about to say something when she said, "I think I know it!can I guess?"

"sure!go ahead".

"I am maan singh khurana's love! I cannot lose and there's no stepping back, irrespective of how deep the waters are, or irrespective of high the heights are for me to scale!"

"hmmm! Should we go back now?" avoiding answering whether it is right of wrong.

"Maan, I know I'm right and you're wrong. This is not insignificant, infact I would place this above all your reasons. Because this is the reason that makes me want to take care of all other reasons you just gave!"

She drifted back slowly and pulled him along. They were near the wall of the swimming pool again and geet had got very comfortable now with the waters. She leaned against the wall and pulled him.

"can I thank you now?", she said.

"yes, the unconventional way please!" he smirked.

She quickly bent forward and kissed him on his heart. She moved up to his throat and kissed him there. he pulled his head down a little and said, "what would I do without you?"

"I should ask you that!" he said pecking her on her forehead.

"I've done nothing to you, maan!"

"you've touched my heart and changed my life forever. That's enough geet. I smile because of you, today".

She looked at him as though asking for another kiss, he did not miss the signal. How would he? He kissed her once again and this time, went deeper into her mouth.

They came out of the pool, after ten minutes and maan put on his robe. He gave geet a towel and told her to wrap it. They walked to the outhouse slowly holding hands.

Khurana Mansion: Dev was devastated at what he saw in maan's bedroom. So, sasha was not maan's love, it was geet! How does maan know geet? She had been working all this while in khurana constructions, as his secretary and he did not know. She changed his brother completely and still he did not know. His brother loves her madly. It was very evident from the pictures. Does she love him too? But, what made her leave her home and come all the way to Delhi? He could not think straight. He was confused. He had deceived her and this same girl taught his brother to live. Maan was more human now, than ever before. What should he do now? What would happen when maan comes to know of the truth or geet comes face to face with him? Or do they already know the truth?

"No!" he said shaking his head. "that's not possible, otherwise, bro's anger would have brought down the entire khurana empire and he(dev) would be dead by now". He was sweating profusely. Does maan know geet was already married? How would naintara react?will his daadiji forgive him ever? A pool of emotions and feelings rushed to him. He wanted to cry his heart out, but to whom? His wife would never understand. If she comes to know, geet is maan's love, she would never leave geet alive.

He suddenly remembered, she would be taking a flight to delhi in a couple of hours. He had to stop her. He cleared his throat and gathered up courage to sound normal. He called her.

"dev, hum packing kar chuke hai! I will be leaving in another two hours. Humne last flight ke liye booking karwaye the".

"hello sweetheart! Main abhi tumhe yeh bolne ke liye phone kiya kit um flight cancel karo. Main kal subeh aa raha hoon".

"kyun, kya hua?" she asked doubtfully.

"kuch nahi hua sweetheart! Main yaha daadiji ke saath time spend karne ke liye aaya tha, lekin daadiji bahut busy hai. She's busy with all the farmhouse work and with the red cross activities. She hardly had any time for me. she was telling me that she would be busy for the next few weeks. Ab main yaha baite baite bore ho raha hoon. Atleast shimla aunga tuo kaam khatam hoga".

He knew he had said the right words, naintara would never refuse him discourage him, when it came to work, business and money.

"theek hai. I'll cancel my tickets. Aap jaldi se aa jaaeye".

Dev tried to sound as normal as possible. He did not want even a seed of doubt in her mind. So he had to play very carefully with his words. Afterall, his one mistake had put five lives in a very tough and horrible situation.

"you know what, shimla mein rehne ke baad, delhi is just so noisy and polluted. Gosh, I've been dying to get back to shimla. I'm sure you'll feel the same too, when you come back to delhi".

"hmm" she said smiling. "ab aap kya karenge?"

"karna kya hai?packing karunga aur dinner karunga. I have to catch the very first flight tomorrow".

"theek hai! Phir main aapse kal milungi, aur haan, hamare travel agent ko phone karke ticket cancel karwa denge?"

"sure!", he said. He had to make sure she would not step into delhi, not for some time atleast.

He locked his room door. He wanted to stay alone for sometime. He did not want to see anyone, scared his secrets would be revealed. He called the agent and cancelled naintara's tickets and asked him to buy a ticket for him. He was still not sure how he would act normal in front of naintara. But for the time being, he had to make sure, he would not go in front of geet. He had to first figure out how she entered maan's life and if she loves maan too, the same way he does!

Outhouse: maan and geet walked into the outhouse. Geet was dripping. She quickly went into the bedroom and shut the door. She yelled out, "maan abhi aati hoon".

Maan waited outside for her on the couch in the living room. She came out after sometime. She was dressed in another sari. She had no accessories and her hair was wet. She had a towel in her hand. She quickly walked to him and said, "aap ab tak aise hi baite hai?kam se kam hair tuo dry kar lete!"

She put the towel over his head and tried to dry his hair. He loved the feeling. It was like she was massaging his head and it made him relax. He asked her, "tum hamesha aise hi hair dry karte ho?"

"haan!kyun?" she asked moving the towel away from his face to see him.

"nahi, aacha lag raha hai, infact neend aa raha hai. Its so soothing", he said gesture her to continue doing it.

She did it for sometime and then stopped and said, "chaliye ab, change kijiye. I'm hungry".

Maan walked into the room and found everything clean and back in its place. He yelled, "geet!"

She went to him and looked at him questioningly. He pointed to the bed and asked her,"kya hai yeh?"

"yeh poochne ke liye bulaye the?yeh bed hai!", she said rolling her eyes and turned away to go. He held her by her arm and asked, "mazak sooj rahi hai tujhe?main jaanna chahta hoon, ki mere saare cheezon ko yaha se kaun gayab kiya?"

"yaha bed pe aise kaunsi cheeze the maan?" she asked acting all surprised.

"geet, bataoge ya nahi!" he asked again.

"mujhe sach mein nahi pata!" she said looking all innocent. He said,"accha??? Theek hai!"

He lifted her and made her sleep on his bed. He thought, "Main bhi dekhta hoon tu kaise nahi bolegi!" He moved towards her and kissed her gently on her stomach. Geet tried hard to control herself. She caught hold of the pillows around her. He then licked the area around her belly button and geet moaned, "Maan, stop it" and tried pushing him away. He said,"batao!kaha hai sab kuch!"

"nahi!" she said coming back to her senses. "theek hai!" he said and moved his lips on her stomach for some more time. finally she could not take it anymore, it was too intense. She spoke up with great difficulty, "maine sab kuch settle kiya. I left all of them in their respective places, maan, chod dijiye mujhe!"

He smiled and got up, "har baath ke liye nautanki karna zaroori nahi hai geet!"

"aapko har baat pe aisa dhamki dene ki kya zaroorat hai?samajte kya hai apne aap ko?" she said sitting up on the bed.

"geet, main kya samaj tha hoon, batadoo?" he said moving close to her.

She pulled her self away from the bed and said, "pagal ho gaye kya?jaaeye ab" and walked out of the room closing the door behind her.

He smiled and thought to himself,"I love her!"

Geet and maan had supper and geet wanted to go home early. Both of them walked out of the outhouse and were standing in the lawn in front of the mansion and talking. Dev, who was frustrated with the sudden entry of geet, was walking in the balcony of his room and saw geet and maan talking. He had seen geet after a long time. She looked happy with his brother. She smiled and laughed. Her proximity with his bro did not bother her. He saw maan give her some papers and she looked through them, maan then explained stuff to her. Dev stood there looking at the both of them. He was dumbfounded how well they got along with each other, how happy they were with each other. A smile came on his face automatically when he saw both of them smile and laugh.

He did not know what he felt at that moment- was he happy that maan and geet were happy? Was he sad that he betrayed the both of them? He wished someone could help him solve the puzzle in his mind. But there was no one. He had to do it himself. he remembered leaving geet alone at the airport and she cried. Today, he was all alone, but she had a support that would probably be equal to a 1000 dev's or even much more.

okay people, that's it for now...i had to write a really long update because i am not sure when i would update next...!!!! 😛....i'm going to be busy the next two days, so i might just come back on saturday ...!!! i'll try if i can update any earlier but i cannot promise...!!!!

hope u liked this update...!!!!!! do leave ur comments ....


Soumya
Edited by pickle6586 - 15 years ago

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