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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
Superb.. amazing.. mindblowing.. incredible.. outstanding.. fabulous update sweety ..!!
even though I said all these words ... they are nothing compared to your creativity jaanii ... loooved this update soo much .. haha it was so funny when maan was like geet's tears *water tank) always leaks anywhere 🤣 ... n den geet was like "instead of this huge farmhouse, you found a parking area to romance with me" 🤣 🤣 .... awesome work jaanii ... cant wait for da nxt update!! hope itz soon!
-Mahi ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
hey jaan!!

WOw ..new thread and all haan!?
Proud of you honey!!

Great going with the updates...kya karun..aaj kal my colg going absolutely mad...pressure is building up day by day...

:(

Loved the updates!!

Whenever you can update next,waiting for it!!

Thankie for the PM

lots of love!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
Awesome update!! Loved it...do cont.soon and congratz on the new thread
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
Great part!!
Thanks for the PM..
And congrats for the New thread!!
Continue soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
kya jhakas update thi Soumya. can't wait to see what happens. pata nahi Maan ab kya karega.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
excellent part
now Geet will work at Farmhouse........she will be away from Maan....:(
loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
hello people,

so most of you were waiting for a sizzling update at the farm house, but i changed the location..!!! hope you dont mind.... 😉...

without further ado, here's part 48:

Part 48

He then pushed her hair back and said, "chale ya is dhoop mein, is sadak pe aur baitna hai tumhe. Geet, itna bada farmhouse chod ke tumhe yahi jagah mili thi baithne ke liye?"

Geet rolled her eyes, "tuo aapko bhi itna bada farmhouse chod ke, parking area mili thi romance karne ke liye?" and shut her mouth with her hand.

She thought to herself, "geet, tu pagal hai. Kya bol diya?"

"tuo, aap chahte hai ki main yeh sab farmhouse mein karu?theek hai chalo phir andar" and pulled her hand and slowly made her stand. Geet looked at him in horror, "now, what was he upto? This man never fails to surprise her".

Geet kept looking at him wondering what his next move would be. Maan simply smiled at her and he went close to her again. He caught her by her shoulders and slowly moved her close to him away from the car door. He looked into her eyes and said, "geet main yeh kehna chahta tha ki."

Geet's heart started racing. She was worried what he would tell her. His eyes had so much emotion and passion. His grip on her shoulders was only getting tighter and he was getting closer. Maan knew he was causing her inconvenience but he did not want to let her go.

Before he could say anything, she stopped him, while also putting a break to her anxiety.

"Maan, kuch mat kahiye".

"geet, suno tuo!"

"Nahi please! Ab nahi. Ab mujhe thoda rest chahiye. Bahut der se hum dhoop mein khade hai aur humne kuch khaya bhi nahi".

Maan looked at his watch before geet completed her sentence. "I'm so sorry darling. Jab tum saamne ho tuo duniya ko bhool jaata hoon".

Geet kissed his cheek and said, "chale?" and was about to turn to the car when Maan stopped her.

"ek minute! Kaha jaana hai tumhe khane ke liye?"

"jaha aap le jaaye" she said opening the car door and getting in.

Maan smiled and thought of a perfect place to take her. He drove her to a resort close by. He definetely knew that this place would be secluded at this time of day. He remembered, the last time he went to a restaurant with his daadima, his daadima was frustrated with the attention they got. People ran to their table for autographs and daadima thought that girls and young women could not take their eyes off him. They could hardly eat anything and he hated going out after that, as people did not respect his privacy.

He did not want attention, atleast not when he was with geet. He wanted privacy when he was with her. He stopped the car near the entrance and handed over the keys for valet parking. He placed his hand on geet's back and led her in slowly. To his relief, the lobby had a lot of foreigners and other strangers and no acquaintances. He was happy. He pulled a chair for geet and this time pointed out that she takes this place. He sat opposite to her.

She looked around the restaurant. They were sitting beside a huge glass window and the entire ceiling was made of glass. The glass ceiling had water splashing all over giving them an impression of sitting under some waterfall. The restaurant had a delightful ambiance and slow romantic music played. She then looked at the people at the other tables. There were three couples; one of them seated right behind them, the other at last table, closer to the fountain in the restuarant. The third couple was sitting on the other end of the restaurant on the opposite side. They were kissing each other and geet quickly turned her gaze away to see the exteriors of the restaurant.

Outside the glass window was a huge swimming pool surrounded by palm trees. The area around the swimming pool was filled with white sand, giving it a beach look. The sunshine made the water in the swimming pool sparkle and the fountain at the other extreme end of the swimming pool looked heavenly. She could see some children sitting by the rocks near the fountain and hitting their legs against the water in the fountain. She smiled at that and put her hand on her tummy as if feeling the baby inside.

Maan fixed his gaze at her, while she ventured the new place with her eyes. He could see the curiosity in her to explore the new place and the surroundings they were in and he did not disturb her. This was one of his favorite restaurants because it was far away from the city and was serene. To him, tranquility mattered the most, being used to solitude all his life. This place for perfect for that. He would come here often when he wanted to get some rest or just stay away from everyone, quietly sip some wine and have his lunch or dinner.

However, today, the situation was different. For the first time, he was seated in this restaurant with another person, who was important to him, more than his own life. He smiled and his eyes beamed with happiness.

Geet after feeling contended looking around turned to look at maan and the table they were seated in. her gaze immediately fell on the red roses placed at the centre of the table. Her smile disappeared and maan noticed it. She moved the vase away to the side and looked at maan. He questioned her with his eyes and she lowered her eyes and shook her head in denial as though saying "nothing wrong". He placed his hand on her and pressed it gently still looking into her eyes and she knew she had to answer it. He got his answer when he looked at the watery eyes.

He moved the vase back to the centre, took one rose from it, and kissed it. He then gave it to her with a smile and shook his head a little. She took the rose and kissed it. She kept it on the table to her right. While they kept looking at each other, a lady walked up to their table.

"Good afternoon, Sir!" and placed the menu card smiling at maan and quickly turned to geet and greeted her with the same smile, "Good Afternoon Ma'am! Hope you are comfortable here!"

Geet smiled back and replied, "Yes! Thank you".

The woman then turned back to Maan and said, "Sir, whenever you're ready, I'll take your order". Maan nodded and looked into the menu card.

She turned to geet and asked her, "So, Ma'am are you expecting a baby girl or a baby boy?" she asked smiling.

Geet looked at her, said, "I don't know!", and looked at Maan, who looked up from the menu when the woman had asked geet that question.

She turned to Maan asked him, "What about you Sir?"

"I want a pretty, cute little baby girl" he said smiling.

"Oh! A replica of your "wife", that's adorable!" she exclaimed. Geet and maan looked at each other when the word wife was used. They did not feel like correcting her.

"So, do you want a replica too?" she asked excitedly looking at geet.

"I actually want twins now," said geet, "a baby girl who is my replica and a baby boy who is a replica of my "husband" ," and pointed towards Maan specifically when she said, "husband". She did not want maan to think she was talking about the man she was supposedly married to, when she mentioned "husband".

Maan looked at her lovingly when she said she wanted a replica of a baby boy like him. The woman spoke again, "Sir, you can call me, whenever you're ready to order".

She bent down to geet and slightly held her shoulder and said, "Ma'am, we can accomodate any special requests you may have for your diet. Any help, you can always wave to me. I'll be standing right there" and she pointed to a black counter at the entrance of the restaurant.

Geet nodded and said, "Thanks!"

After she left the table, Maan looked into the menu and asked, "Tumhe, mujh jaise dusht danav chahiye, bte ke roop mein?"

"Nahi, mujhe aap jaise dhak dhak beta chahiye, mere bte ko dekh kar log ye kahe ki dhak dhak aa gaya. Bilkul aap ki tarah handsome, haate katte nau jawan hoga, bahar se sadoo aur andar se komal".

"haan agar use bhi meri geet jaisi geet mili tho, woh gaya. Phir saans , bahu ke beech mein hum dono baap bte salad ya chutney ban ke reh jayenge".

Geet pointed the fork at him angrily and demanded, "Mr. Khurana mujhe khana chahiye, bhook lagi hai".

Maan nodded and quickly ordered some food. The food was ready in about 15 minutes and both of them did not bother to talk anything as both of them were starving. They finished the food and cleared the bill.

Geet sat there unwilling to get up and walk. He realized she was tired and said, "ghar chalna hai?"

"nahi, abhi I cant sit in the car for 2 hours, my back hurts and I want to lie down for sometime. But I guess we don't have a choice, so let's leave".

"Geet, agar tum chahte ho tuo thodi der hum farm house mein rukh sakte hai".

"Par waha itni shor mein kaise? Isse accha hai ki mein car mein baitu".

Maan thought for sometime and walked to the woman who had served them food. He discussed with her for sometime and then walked back to geet.

"geet, chalo! Suite mein tum aaram karo aur mein bahar laptop pe kaam karunga".

"theek hai" she said slowly getting up. Maan touched her back and asked, "kaha hai dard?" and she moved his hand to the centre of her back and pressed his finger there and said, "yaha"

"Alrite, I'll see if I can arrange for any medicines and I think it is time for you to visit the doctor sometime this week".

He slowly led her to the suite and made her sleep on the bed while adjusting the cushions for adequate support and comfort. He pulled the quilt over her and told her to call him whenever required.

He was about to walk out with his laptop when geet said, "Maan aap bahar kyun jaa rahe hai? Yahi kaam kijiye, mujhe koi disturbance nahi hogi".

"Nahi geet who.." and geet cut him, "aap yahi rahenge, bas!" and turned to the other side of the bed.

Maan shook his head giving up, placed his laptop on the desk, and sat down. He got to work immediately and geet rolled away to sleep due to fatigue. After what seemed like 3 or 4 hours, geet woke up slowly to see what maan was doing. He was immersed in his work and kept replying to text messages too. He looked adorable when he was busy she thought. She looked at him for a couple of minutes and recollected the woman in the restaurant addressing him as her husband. She blushed at the thought. She looked at the red rose on her hand bag and took it into her hands. She placed it close to her heart. This piece of the past too was now filled with maan's memories. She walked to him very quietly and he did not even realize how close she was to him.

She pulled his chair back and sat on his lap closing the laptop. She pulled away the phone from his hand and placed it on the table when maan yelled, "geet, I was midway through a text message, let me finish it, else I have to type the whole thing again".

"No" she said in a very commanding voice. He looked at her angrily and pushed his chair back a little. She moved towards him and placed his hands around his neck and her head on his shoulder.

He remembered the night, when he imagined geet sitting on his lap in his study and doing the exact same things as today and he confessed that he loved her.

Maan held her waist and said, "dard kam hua?"

"hmmm" she replied.

"thodi der aur so jao. It's just 2:30pm. We'll leave at around 4pm".

"no, I don't feel sleepy anymore! Am I too heavy maan?"

"No, why do you ask?"

"Because I'm on your lap".

"no, you're fine" he replied softly.

"Maan, can I say something?" she asked even softly.

"Since when have you had trouble saying something geet?" he asked, making circles on her back with his hands.

"Maan, you just cannot stay without taunting me, can you?" she asked.

"I cannot stay without you too, why don't you realize that", He asked

"Maan" she said almost whispering now.

"hmmm, bolo" he said romantically.

"I think I'm falling in love with you!", she said kissing his cheek. He did not say anything. He wanted her to continue. He had finally heard what he wanted to all these days. She had confessed that she loved him.

As per his wish, she continued, "I don't know how this happened and when, but I just cannot stop thinking about you. I feel so safe and secured in your strong arms. I feel nothing can go wrong when you are around. I'm so in love with you that even your anger only reflects your love and concern. Anything I see reminds me of you, everything I do is only for you, and everywhere I go I feel like having you by my side. What have you done to me? After everything that happened to me a few months back, I decided never to trust any man in my life, I decided never to allow anyone close to me- but Mr Maan Khurana you forced me to break my resolutions and thoughts. You've done some magic and now every sad memory in my life is re-written with a happy memory connected to you!".

At this point Maan remembered his daadima's words , "if you think something you talk or something you do will remind her of her past, then change what you do. Change it to an extent that her memory is re-written with just you and only you"

He silently thanked his grandmom for the advice she had given him that day. If she had not told him these words, he would have given up geet long time back.

Geet continued, "I hated Italian, but these days, it only reminds me of you. I hated red roses after that dreadful night, but you've erased that memory completely today. I am not scared of red roses now because it does not remind me of my past, instead it reminds me of my present and future with you!"

She stopped to look at him. His eyes were glowing and she could see love and passion in them.

He held her close to him and she spoke again, "Maan Khurana, I am ready now!" and she slowly brought her lips to his and stopped at a very little distance away from him waiting for his assent.

He did not waste, anytime, he pulled her even closer. Geet licked his lips with her tongue first and then kissed him gently. Geet's tongue played with his tongue for sometime and then the kiss changed into a passionate one, both unable to hold it back anymore. Both of them were falling short of breath due to the intensity of the kiss but did not want to stop even for a nano second. The passion, the desire was all finding its way out through the kiss and they kissed they like there was no tomorrow. Finally geet pulled away and caught her back tight due to the pain. Maan quickly carried her to the bed and placed her carefully, pulling the quilt over her and pushing the cushions under her back for some relief. He wanted to call the reception but geet caught his hand.

"Mr. Maan Khurana, aapko kisi bhi kaam ko adura chodne ki aadat nahi hai".

Maan was stunned. "geet, take rest!" he said.

She refused to do so, pulled him by his collar and made him sit beside her. She removed his tie, and unbuttoned his shirt a little.

"aapko gharmi nahi lagta?" she asked teasingly.

"nahi, I didn't realize. I was working all this while".

"So, what are you doing now?" she asked playfully.

He bent towards her and placed his hand at the back of her head and lifted it towards him, "kissing the love of my life," he said, continuing the kiss. He took her lips into his mouth and felt the softness of those sinuous lips. Geet unable to control herself held onto maan's vest and he could feel her hand through his shirt on his bare chest. That charged him. He moved from her lips to her throat and geet pushed the pillows away giving him more access. She removed her duppata and threw it to the side and maan kissed her collarbone very passionately. They were brought to their senses by the phone ring. He moved away and bent away from her to take the call while geet pulled his right hand and placed it her cheek

He covered the receiver and asked her, "Do you think you will need a doctor for the back ache?"

She nodded her head in denial. He told them the same and ended the call. He got up and went to the other side of the bed.

He put pillows between them and asked her, "Are you sure about your back ache?I do not want you to neglect your health".

"I'll be fine" she said.

He said, "Sleep for some more time honey!"

"I need a massage for my body aches", she said softly.

"What? Then why didn't you tell me before, I could have asked if you could get that done in the spa. He got up to go to the phone again and she said, "I don't want anyone else doing it maan" and looked at him hopefully.

"geet, I cannot do that!" he said point blank.

"Why not?" she asked.

"Geet are you kidding me? You are pregnant and a massage has to be done with utmost care and effort. I don't think I have the patience".

"okay, never mind" she said turning to the other side.

"Get, honey you need to understand".

"yes maan I understand!" she said.

"geet!" he said angrily and turned her towards him slightly, "Looks like you are taking the words of the waitress too seriously".

"What did she say now?" she asked.

"Husband" he responded.

Geet looked at him thoughtfully. He was right. She was completely mad to ask him for a massage. Since it was Maan Singh Khurana, he stopped her and told her a "no" directly. Had it been a rogue like the NRI, he would have certainly taken advantage of her weak situation, just like that dreadful night. She looked at his decency and charisma and smiled. He could not tell her that directly and hence gave an excuse of not being patient enough. She realized she had fallen in love with the right person, she made no mistake in choosing- Maan Singh Khurana!


alrite, i'm not sure how much the update sizzled, but i hope u liked it..!!! u know what to do next....

i was impressed with your long comments so keep doing the same.... 😉


Soumya


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Posted: 15 years ago
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yayayay! amaazing... she confesseeed and haha dont worry it was definitely sizzling 😉
loved how he was being so careful...and i abs. cant wait for the next part! do continue soon :)

~Naina
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
Dear this part is way toooo romanticccccc.
Sizzzling update.
Waiting for the next part.
Continue soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.


Fatima
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
OMG!!! what a passionate scene between maan and geet!!! loved it so much!!!! cant wait for the next update!

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