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Posted: 15 years ago
i am back and reserved yaar
soumya dear jappiz yaar
mere jaan wah kya update thi yaar
i love u alot and alot and alot dear
maneet moments are really amazing awsome dear
ye lo geet thought what is maans next move kya geet itne x-rated haila
and maan what r u abt to do ha yaar thoda sambalo apne aap ko
maaneet went to lunch and that to his favourite restaurant nice
chalo it is filled with foreiners warna pata nahi geet kya kardeti maan ko
so maneet moment right i mean eye staring yaar
ab pata chala geet itne x-rated kyon hogayi hai
1. jab usene forieners ko kiss karthe deka
2. jab maan ne usse rose diya wo bhi kiss kar ke
3. wo lady calling him hubby and wify
4. maan taking a suit and placing geet on it
yeh sab kuch geet ko bhigad diya yaar
so double bonus geet wants right twins geet is turned out to bhi rajdhani express yaar
geet geet pehle shaadi karo maan se baad soch na twins ya circket team ya football team ok
hubby wify talk abt kids so nice yaar
"haan agar use bhi meri geet jaisi geet mili tho, woh gaya. Phir saans , bahu ke beech mein hum dono baap bte salad ya chutney ban ke reh jayenge". it really cracked me
Maan touched her back and asked, "kaha hai dard?" and she moved his hand to the centre of her back and pressed his finger there and said, "yaha" so maan doent hesitate to touch her so he is changing into perfect husband form so great to see maan in this avtar soumya dear a special jappiz and muah to u yaar to good and adore it dear
Maan shook his head giving up yes what else he can do when he is around geet ha ha ha joru ka gulam banke rahna hai maan ha ha ha
"Since when have you had trouble saying something geet?" wah kya line mara maan ne
"I cannot stay without you too, why don't you realize that", He asked loved it soumya dear
@ bold and underlined -wah soumya so heart touching lines so true maan rewrite her past and her memories wow i appericiate it alot soumya they way u wrote it dear really nice esp maan thinking daadima words u r realy great soumya i love u alot for this
this esp this differs maan yes soumya the man who listens to the elders and remembering those persons who directed him to right part and thanking them is really a great and rare quality which is seen in maan i love him alot dear
soumya u r great dear i love u alot coz of these as u keep these intense things in mind dear
and passionate kiss oh my god soumya x-ratedness mein to aap ne sab ko pecha chodiya yaar
wah what a kiss i had fainted dear
"Mr. Maan Khurana, aapko kisi bhi kaam ko adura chodne ki aadat nahi hai". oh my god ye geet ko kya hogaya hai itne boldness ......... faints....... wake up pause oh my god yeh kya ho raha hai
lagta hai maneet ki story reverse hai yes soumya
pehle bachhe useke baad suhag raat uske baad shaadi ha ha ha
thank god kisne phone kiya warna pata nahi kya haal mera hota yeh update padkar
geet sambalo apne aap ko "I need a massage for my body aches", geet control dear if not i will be dead thats for sure
chalo acha hua sense aye geet ko warna shamat aajate maan ko geet ki x-ratedness sambalne mein (maan ki raging harmones jo itne saalo se........... sab kam padjata i know i am becoming besharm i need to control ) aur mere haal behaal ho jata
so romantic and sexy update dear
loved it and enjoyed it soumya
"geet, suno tuo!" soumya i want to know what maan thought to say to geet at the time yaar
i know its along but i know u will like my comments ha ha
dear please agle baar caution dena yesi updates par
sravs
note : sorry dear for taking so long time actually i cleared the comments after editng inorder to update ha ha ha maneet ne mera haal behaal kar diya yaar
again i had wrote it sorry typed it ha ha ha






Edited by sravani899 - 15 years ago
BadGirlKiss thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Atlast I can comment it was toooo good. Updte soon. Xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
I can't express my awe....i am in a daze....in Lala land....

Looking forward to the next update
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi lovely update...
keep update soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
great part di
plz continue soon
eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hayee soumya……😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

tunaay waqai marr daala---🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢

OMG OMG OMG---*hyper-ventilating*

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!I still cant get over it! Ahhhhhh!!! Itsss toooo hawwwtt to handle!!! M burning, my screen is burning!! Sum1 call the fire brigadier!!!*faints*

Yaara I haf lost count of how many times I read this bit!!👏⭐️ Ufff---soumya---
teray dimag main kaisi kaisi cheezain aatee hai😆😆😆---meray massom dimag bechara hazaam nahi ker paaraha!!😆😆😆

Buh oh my……wat a part!! Dil khush kerdiya yaaar!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Mujhe nahi pata tha tu itnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa x-rated bana deygi!!! Ufff----toooo tooo too gud!!!! ---⭐️

And wooooohooo!!! Finally geet confessed!! Sirf geet kay confession perh itna romance I wonder wat will happen once maan confesses!! *goes off to lala land*😆

*cumz bk from lala land* Ok I will stop describin my feelings now, werna I will post a comment which will be as long as ur ff!!😕😳

Ok I jus love how things progressed and thanx to the baby maaneet resort pohonch gaye!!!😉 And oooo the waitress waz lovely!!!⭐️ Lagta hai waqai kissi dhang key restaurant main gaye donnoo!!!😆😆
I realli loved how maan paid heed to watever dadi sed and did everythin in the right manner😳---m soo glad geet no longer has any sorts of memories in her heart related to dev cuz now her heart is dominated by dusht dhak dhak!!🤪


and then!! Dha dha dha dhum!!!😍😍 Bedroom scene!! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
geet ney maan ka khawab pura kerdiya!! Wah wah wah!! Kya baat hai yaar!!
uskay baad jo ussnay kiya, ussay hamara khawab pura hogaya!!🤣🤣🤣🤣

soumya miss hosiyapur toh barrriii demanding hai!!😲😲
kamar main dard hai phir be baaz nahi aarahe!! Lmao!! Bechara maan bar bar puch raha hai---laykin geet kay serh perh nasha, hoth perh maan aur kamar main dard charha huwa hai!!!😆😆😆
OMG soumya—this part waz awesssssssssssssssssuuuuuumm!!!!!👏

Ok, cumin bk to my fav dialogues: yaara har bar tum purii cheez he itni zabardast likhti hoo—dil kerta hai saari lines yahan mention kerdo!!!😆

Maan looked at his watch before geet completed her sentence. "I'm so sorry darling. Jab tum saamne ho tuo duniya ko bhool jaata hoon".

Hayee maan---tumhare yay dialgoue sunh ker hum duniya ko bhul gaye hai!!😉😆😆

Maan looked into the menu and asked, "Tumhe, mujh jaise dusht danav chahiye, bte ke roop mein?"

"Nahi, mujhe aap jaise dhak dhak beta chahiye, mere bte ko dekh kar log ye kahe ki dhak dhak aa gaya. Bilkul aap ki tarah handsome, haate katte nau jawan hoga, bahar se sadoo aur andar se komal".

"haan agar use bhi meri geet jaisi geet mili tho, woh gaya. Phir saans , bahu ke beech mein hum dono baap bte salad ya chutney ban ke reh jayenge".

Soumya hadh hogai yaar!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣OMG I cant stop crackin up!!! HILARIOUS!!!

"I cannot stay without you too, why don't you realize that", He asked

"Maan" she said almost whispering now.

"hmmm, bolo" he said romantically.

Ufff----how romantic can one get….😍😍😍😍😍
I jus love it wen he goes like "hmm, bolo" ---its like one of his signature dialogues…😍😍

"I think I'm falling in love with you!",

"I don't know how this happened and when, but I just cannot stop thinking about you. I feel so safe and secured in your strong arms. I feel nothing can go wrong when you are around. I'm so in love with you that even your anger only reflects your love and concern. Anything I see reminds me of you, everything I do is only for you, and everywhere I go I feel like having you by my side. What have you done to me? After everything that happened to me a few months back, I decided never to trust any man in my life, I decided never to allow anyone close to me- but Mr Maan Khurana you forced me to break my resolutions and thoughts. You've done some magic and now every sad memory in my life is re-written with a happy memory connected to you!".

OHMYGOD!!! How beautifully u portrayed her feelings!! 👏WAOWW—kaisay kerti hoo yaar!! 😲This is realli realli well written—aisa lag raha hai kay tumne geet kay dil ka interview kerkay yay likha hai!!🤪😆😆

Sorry m getting realli random…"lagta hai main sach main pagal hogai hoon"🤣🤣🤣

Overall, as usual well done⭐️….the x-rated parts were yummier then chocolate mousse ice-cream will fudge and choco chips on top!!😉😆 (let me tell u m a choco maniac)

Soumya---teray x-rated surprises are getting bigger and better!!!

Lagaey raho!!!

Muazzzz

Love yaaaaa "too infinity and beyond!!"🤣

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Posted: 15 years ago
superb part
damn cool
update next part asap
uzmakhan thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hayee soumya……😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

tunaay waqai marr daala---🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢

OMG OMG OMG---*hyper-ventilating*

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!I still cant get over it! Ahhhhhh!!! Itsss toooo hawwwtt to handle!!! M burning, my screen is burning!! Sum1 call the fire brigadier!!!*faints*

Yaara I haf lost count of how many times I read this bit!!👏⭐️ Ufff---soumya---
teray dimag main kaisi kaisi cheezain aatee hai😆😆😆---meray massom dimag bechara hazaam nahi ker paaraha!!😆😆😆

Buh oh my……wat a part!! Dil khush kerdiya yaaar!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Mujhe nahi pata tha tu itnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa x-rated bana deygi!!! Ufff----toooo tooo too gud!!!! ---⭐️

And wooooohooo!!! Finally geet confessed!! Sirf geet kay confession perh itna romance I wonder wat will happen once maan confesses!! *goes off to lala land*😆

*cumz bk from lala land* Ok I will stop describin my feelings now, werna I will post a comment which will be as long as ur ff!!😕😳

Ok I jus love how things progressed and thanx to the baby maaneet resort pohonch gaye!!!😉 And oooo the waitress waz lovely!!!⭐️ Lagta hai waqai kissi dhang key restaurant main gaye donnoo!!!😆😆
I realli loved how maan paid heed to watever dadi sed and did everythin in the right manner😳---m soo glad geet no longer has any sorts of memories in her heart related to dev cuz now her heart is dominated by dusht dhak dhak!!🤪


and then!! Dha dha dha dhum!!!😍😍 Bedroom scene!! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
geet ney maan ka khawab pura kerdiya!! Wah wah wah!! Kya baat hai yaar!!
uskay baad jo ussnay kiya, ussay hamara khawab pura hogaya!!🤣🤣🤣🤣

soumya miss hosiyapur toh barrriii demanding hai!!😲😲
kamar main dard hai phir be baaz nahi aarahe!! Lmao!! Bechara maan bar bar puch raha hai---laykin geet kay serh perh nasha, hoth perh maan aur kamar main dard charha huwa hai!!!😆😆😆
OMG soumya—this part waz awesssssssssssssssssuuuuuumm!!!!!👏

Ok, cumin bk to my fav dialogues: yaara har bar tum purii cheez he itni zabardast likhti hoo—dil kerta hai saari lines yahan mention kerdo!!!😆

Maan looked at his watch before geet completed her sentence. "I'm so sorry darling. Jab tum saamne ho tuo duniya ko bhool jaata hoon".

Hayee maan---tumhare yay dialgoue sunh ker hum duniya ko bhul gaye hai!!😉😆😆

Maan looked into the menu and asked, "Tumhe, mujh jaise dusht danav chahiye, bte ke roop mein?"

"Nahi, mujhe aap jaise dhak dhak beta chahiye, mere bte ko dekh kar log ye kahe ki dhak dhak aa gaya. Bilkul aap ki tarah handsome, haate katte nau jawan hoga, bahar se sadoo aur andar se komal".

"haan agar use bhi meri geet jaisi geet mili tho, woh gaya. Phir saans , bahu ke beech mein hum dono baap bte salad ya chutney ban ke reh jayenge".

Soumya hadh hogai yaar!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣OMG I cant stop crackin up!!! HILARIOUS!!!

"I cannot stay without you too, why don't you realize that", He asked

"Maan" she said almost whispering now.

"hmmm, bolo" he said romantically.

Ufff----how romantic can one get….😍😍😍😍😍
I jus love it wen he goes like "hmm, bolo" ---its like one of his signature dialogues…😍😍

"I think I'm falling in love with you!",

"I don't know how this happened and when, but I just cannot stop thinking about you. I feel so safe and secured in your strong arms. I feel nothing can go wrong when you are around. I'm so in love with you that even your anger only reflects your love and concern. Anything I see reminds me of you, everything I do is only for you, and everywhere I go I feel like having you by my side. What have you done to me? After everything that happened to me a few months back, I decided never to trust any man in my life, I decided never to allow anyone close to me- but Mr Maan Khurana you forced me to break my resolutions and thoughts. You've done some magic and now every sad memory in my life is re-written with a happy memory connected to you!".

OHMYGOD!!! How beautifully u portrayed her feelings!! 👏WAOWW—kaisay kerti hoo yaar!! 😲This is realli realli well written—aisa lag raha hai kay tumne geet kay dil ka interview kerkay yay likha hai!!🤪😆😆

Sorry m getting realli random…"lagta hai main sach main pagal hogai hoon"🤣🤣🤣

Overall, as usual well done⭐️….the x-rated parts were yummier then chocolate mousse ice-cream will fudge and choco chips on top!!😉😆 (let me tell u m a choco maniac)

Soumya---teray x-rated surprises are getting bigger and better!!!😆😆

Lagaey raho!!!😆

Muazzzz

Love yaaaaa "too infinity and beyond!!"🤣

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Posted: 15 years ago
But yes, the nights are all ours", he grinned and winked at her....aye haye....... ki gall hai ..mar jawaan!!!...
i felt bad for maan as he couldnt kiss her ..but he understood her so well...ise kehte hai ....understanding .....
kash aisa understanding har ek couples me ho..
very well described....m feeling so much contented at heart.....i loved the update ......wait ...will be back again after reading the next parts..
brb
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Posted: 15 years ago
Soumya yaar? yeh kya hain? where's the update?

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