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Posted: 14 years ago
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REFLECTION
Wondering through the woods,
Reviving past memories,
Wishing you were near,
Escapes a lone tear.
Mistakes were committed,
Promises were made,
Time passed by and they too ruptured,
A lonely trail left behind.
You were raring and ecstatic,
And I was over the moon,
Life took a turn and landed you in pain,
And my heart too flinched with the same.
Time flew by and you moved,
Leaving me ruffled and wounded,
Feelings were shrouded,
And miseries were uncovered.
Today too I walk in the woods,
Where cacophony has replaced euphony,
Reminiscing the past memories,
Silently praying you were near.
-GEET
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fabulous poem dear

thnx 4 d pm
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Fantastic job Fatima,

It conveys the pain so subtly.

TC
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dis is so gud dear.....lkd it.....
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@Shabnoor: *smiles* I agree with Bdgt 👏👏👏 beautifully written :) Keep writing!

LOVED the last stanza 😍⭐️
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@Fatima . aww 😍😍😍 poor Geet 😭

I loved it yaar⭐️ .. beautifully written 👏


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This is really nicely written hun 😉 fab job👏👏 loved it!😳
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woooww... thats so beautiful.... but ya extremely sad...
time has separated Maaneet & Geet cant stop thinking abt all the good times that she spent with Maan...
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thnx a lot friends for liking it :) I don't have words to thnk u all....:)
-fatima
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Wonderfully written, man! Melancholy at it's best. This so suits the condition the Geet gal has gone through. Fantastic job!

I love poetry too but, I am not as good with words as you are. Hoping to have a writers-in-the-house conversation with you and improving on my skills. 😳

-Kanky

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