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Posted: 15 years ago
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Plz bare with me i m writing for the first time and leave your comments whether i should continue writing or not.

Guys the story starts after today's episode

Geet is having sleepless night thinking how Mann stood up for her in front of everyone,even without worrying about the business deal.Whenever she was trying to close her eyes what she could think is Maan and only Mann,suddenly she got up from the bed and started cursing herself.

" Geet ................................Tu Jhalli hain ,pagal hai , tere mein akal naam ki koi cheez hi nahin hain.
Tujhe samjhaya tha na ki unse dur reh hai phir bhi tu unko thank you bolne unke Gym chali gayee haan.Gayi thi toh thankyou bolke wappis aajati nahin statue banke unhe dekhti rahi.

apni aankhon ka illaz kar va tujhe ghoorne ki bimari lag gahi hain.
hye Babaji aaphi Bataoon
main kya karoon😲

aur udhar Manssion mein Maan is thinking about Geet ," Iss ladhki ko kaya hogaya hai kabhi mere pichhee dargah mein pahunch jaati hain,kabhi mujhe dekh ke baat badlne lagti hai."

He could not justify his todays action he started thinking again and again.Maan Singh Khuranan kabhi apni personal aur professional life mix nahin karta par kyun asaj mere emotions mujh pe itne haavi hogaye ki main uski bezati bartdasht nahin kar paya? kyun ???????????????


continue or not


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ardhika16 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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continue plzzzzzzzzzz.....and add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yeah pls do cont. with it and pls add me to your PM list

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Posted: 15 years ago
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plz continue!!!

n pm me wen u do so!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Geet's dialogue is very well written....exactly like wht she says 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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plzz continue sooon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Plz continueeeee

And can you please add me o your PM list

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