What Geet should say at the dargah

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Posted: 15 years ago
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When Geet meets Maan at the dargah, she should disclose somewhat of a partial truth about her past. Something like the following:

Maan Sir, main jaanti hoon ki aap aurauton ka viswaas nahin karke hain, par hum abhi ek pak jagah par hain. Isliye meri baat sau phisdi sach hai. Aap mere ateet ke kuch hisoon ko jaante hain. Aakhir agar main aaj saans bhi le rahi hoon toh woh aapki wajah se. Main jaanti hoon ki aap jaanna chahte thei ki eisa kya hua tha joh meri jaan par ban aayi thi.

Sir, ek darinde ne apni laalach aur hawas ke liye mera sab kuch chhin liya, mera parivaar, meri zameen, aur meri izzat. Mujhe aur mere parivaar ko dhokha diya usne. Mujhe insaaf chahiye uss vehshi ke khilaaf . Brij Vir ji ke khilaaf report Police mein darj kara kar main apni zindagi ki nayi shuruat karne aur uss darinde ko dhundhne Delhi aayi. Ussay dhundhne ke silsile mein main Canadian High Commission bhi gayi thi, jahaan aap se mulakaat huyi thi.

Aap darriye nahin Sir. Main aapko apni taraf nahin kheenchna chahti. Meri zindagi khud itni uljhi huyi hai ki mera saara waqt ussay hi suljhaane mein beet jaayega. Aur mere saath haalaat kuch eise huye hain joh main Pinky ke yahaan bhi nahin reh sakti. Isliye maine aapko pareshaan kiya tha, kyunki mere upar chhath nahin thi, koi aur wajah se nahin Sir. Eisa toh kabhi mere khaayaalon mein bhi nahin aaya. Par Sir, jinka koi nahin hota, unke liye Rab hota hai. Baba ji meri maddad kareinge. Agar aapse nahin bhi milti main, toh bhi koi na koi raasta dhundh hi leti na?

Sir, aapne har mushkil mein mera saath diya jab mere apnon ne bhi mujhe chhor diya tha. Aapne har waqt mere hosle ko buland kiya, aur sahi raasta dikhaya. Par Sir iska yeh matlab toh nahin ki aap mera dard bhara ateet sabke saamne bakhaan karein aur mere charitr par ungli uthain? Sir, har aurat ek jaisi nahin hoti. Agar meri zindagi ko tabah karne jaise raksh iss duniya mein hain, toh aap jaise nek-dil insaan bhi. Aapne kadve ateet se ab eisa toh nahin soch sakti ki har mard uss darinde jaisa hi hoga. Yeh toh galat hoga. Hai na Sir?

I think this should be enough to knock some senses into MSK!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sweetie, English please...but Maan is going to know about Dev and Geet only later after the confrontation of Dev-Geet in Maan's office where she might go to pick up her PF or salary arrears or to back on her job
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: bDgT

Sweetie, English please...but Maan is going to know about Dev and Geet only later after the confrontation of Dev-Geet in Maan's office where she might go to pick up her PF or salary arrears or to back on her job



Hmm, if I wrote it in english, I think it would have destroyed the impact of Geet's emotions...hence hindi. Well, here she doesn't disclose much besides just saying she was cheated in every regard by a man who even cheated her honor and she's come to Delhi to get justice. And she never even thought about Maan in the way he mentioned to her. Plus just because he's always helped does not mean that he can bring up her sordid past in front of anyone nor make accussations on her character. Furthermore, not every woman is the same...if there are demon like men who've destroyed her life, then there are kind-hearted humans like him as well. Just because of her bitter past judging all men as malicious and mean would be wrong on her part.
Edited by Hot_Indo_Chilly - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

When Geet meets Maan at the dargah, she should disclose somewhat of a partial truth about her past. Something like the following:

Maan Sir, main jaanti hoon ki aap aurauton ka viswaas nahin karke hain, par hum abhi ek pak jagah par hain. Isliye meri baat sau phisdi sach hai. Aap mere ateet ke kuch hisoon ko jaante hain. Aakhir agar main aaj saans bhi le rahi hoon toh woh aapki wajah se. Main jaanti hoon ki aap jaanna chahte thei ki eisa kya hua tha joh meri jaan par ban aayi thi.

Sir, ek darinde ne apni laalach aur hawas ke liye mera sab kuch chhin liya, mera parivaar, meri zameen, aur meri izzat. Mujhe aur mere parivaar ko dhokha diya usne. Mujhe insaaf chahiye uss vehshi ke khilaaf . Brij Vir ji ke khilaaf report Police mein darj kara kar main apni zindagi ki nayi shuruat karne aur uss darinde ko dhundhne Delhi aayi. Ussay dhundhne ke silsile mein main Canadian High Commission bhi gayi thi, jahaan aap se mulakaat huyi thi.

Aap darriye nahin Sir. Main aapko apni taraf nahin kheenchna chahti. Meri zindagi khud itni uljhi huyi hai ki mera saara waqt ussay hi suljhaane mein beet jaayega. Aur mere saath haalaat kuch eise huye hain joh main Pinky ke yahaan bhi nahin reh sakti. Isliye maine aapko pareshaan kiya tha, kyunki mere upar chhath nahin thi, koi aur wajah se nahin Sir. Eisa toh kabhi mere khaayaalon mein bhi nahin aaya. Par Sir, jinka koi nahin hota, unke liye Rab hota hai. Baba ji meri maddad kareinge. Agar aapse nahin bhi milti main, toh bhi koi na koi raasta dhundh hi leti na?

Sir, aapne har mushkil mein mera saath diya jab mere apnon ne bhi mujhe chhor diya tha. Aapne har waqt mere hosle ko buland kiya, aur sahi raasta dikhaya. Par Sir iska yeh matlab toh nahin ki aap mera dard bhara ateet sabke saamne bakhaan karein aur mere charitr par ungli uthain? Sir, har aurat ek jaisi nahin hoti. Agar meri zindagi ko tabah karne jaise raksh iss duniya mein hain, toh aap jaise nek-dil insaan bhi. Aapne kadve ateet se ab eisa toh nahin soch sakti ki har mard uss darinde jaisa hi hoga. Yeh toh galat hoga. Hai na Sir?

I think this should be enough to knock some senses into MSK!

wow.. that's very well written... i really wish she conveys this in her meeting.. if not in these many words , atleast enough to make Maan curious , so he could also connect some dots from Hoshiarpur ...
last thing that should happen is misunderstanding and confusion
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow...I must say your Urdu / Hindi is very good 👍🏼
nice dialogues
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