Maan self-dialogue 27 July..

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys!!

Apologies for yday...Not much to articulate at 3 Am for MAan I think..LOL

plus i was tired from college..

Anyways..here is it for today

MAan(brain)- Okay..so eyes have searched everywhere...nope..I think I was dreaming...again..
Anyways, can you feel something HEarty?

MAan(heart)- ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Brainy I know she was here..but have no idea where she is...

Geet screams..

MAan(brain)- oh teri.. ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
MAan(heart)- ab kya hua? ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜†

Maan(brain)- GOD knows...no..GEET knows...Kya hua?
MAan(heart)- kahin woh bathroom mein toh nahi fisal gayi... ๐Ÿ˜•
MAan(brain)-main jaau kya?!
MAan(heart)- CONtrol your hormones Man!

MAan(brain)- what happened Geet?

Geet tells him and gives him gaalis

MAan(brain)- she's abusing me?!!! ๐Ÿ˜ก
MAan(heart)- toh...sahi toh hai bechari..you are..seriously..ullu da patha sometimes..wait..scratch that- most times with her..And also about the problems part...really, you are a huge one..but she might have other problems...the biggest being her clumsiness..๐Ÿ˜†

MAan(brain)-fuvaara?
MAan(heart)- ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† oie soul!!! check it out!! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Geet talked about fuvaara.. ๐Ÿ˜†

MAan(soul)- hai main mar jaawan! well..I would have if I wasn't eternal.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†

Geet asks MAan to give him her clothes

Maan(brain)- Dude..she's giving me orders?!
Maan(heart)- um...TOH!? You're anyways going to do what she says sooner or later..better be sooner..bet she's feeling cold in there..

MAan(brain)- I wonder what she's wearing....
MAan(soul)-besharam! chup kar!

Geet comes out..to ask if he said something..
MAan(heart,brain and soul)- WOw..
MAan(heart)- aww..those eyes
MAan(soul)- that pure innocence
MAan(body)- those lucky droplets clinging to her face...

Maan(brain)- oo! I have an idea..
MAan(heart)- hey soul! news news- MAan ke dimaag ki batti finally jal gayi!
Maan(soul)- HI 5!
MAan(brain)- She has to come outside and get her clothes..or leave the house..
Maan(heart)- DO you want the house or ....

MAan(brain)- She will never come outside!!
MAan(soul)- um..you might want to rethink that...She's Geet..Aka..opposite of what you do..always..so..yeah..reconsider your foolish notion

Maan(brain)- it's not foolish...let's see how much spunk she's got!

Maan(heart)- well..we are always happy to see her..so..ha..

MAan(brain)- uh oh.. ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ oh my god...she's ...her legs!!Is that RED nail paint? was it there yday??

MAan(heart)- Dude...You look scared...

MAan(brain)- main jaa raha hoon...god..she's completely..I don't trust myself...my hormones...aaghhh...

MAan leaves the room
MAan(heart)- ๐Ÿ‘ waah meri jaan!!MAan Singh Khurana ko dara ke bhaga diya!

MAan(brain)- Mujhe koi nahi dara sakta..

Comes back in! and sees Geet in his clothes and dancing!!

Maan(heart)- oie hoi...so this is how she is gonna look...after.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Maan(brain)- oie shut up! I haven't slept and she's making me go crazy..now she's in my clothes..

Geet's locks shower Maan with water..awww ๐Ÿ‘

MAan(brain)- incoming from face- droplets kissed us..LOVe her hair!!LOve her!

Maan(brain)- is duniya mein koi mere saath nahi hai? ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ

MAan(heart)- ha haha..sorry dude, but you did this to yourself..Now go do something sexy! Be MAAN!

Maan(brain)- DADIMA!!!!

Geet stops his way...

MAan goes and brushes Geet's locks off her face..leading to her oh so noticeable reaction to his proximity

MAan(heart and soul)- KISS HER KISS HER!!!

MAan(brain)- I'm having a hard time here...the least you could do is support me! ๐Ÿ˜ก
MAan(heart and soul)- that's what we're doing...that's what you are signalling us to feel..ask your poor lips...

They snap out...

Maan(brain)- Dadi ke saamne...in kapdo mein??You don't care abt your repu..but I do!

MAan(brain)- give me my clothes!

Maan(heart)- Control paaji! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Geet goes to change..

Maan(brain)- ohh no...these flashbacks are gonna kill me one day.. ๐Ÿ˜ญ

MAan(brain)- what the hell is happening to me??It seems ki kismat ne thaan li hai..ki yeh mere hi gale padne waali hai...UGHH... ๐Ÿ˜ก

Maan(heart)- so Maan...

MAan(brain)- No such thing as kismat..MAan ke haath mein hai Sab KUchh

Maan(heart)- nahi MAan...dadi ke haath mein.. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

MAan-dadi- Geet

MAan(brain)- WHY HER??!! why her??!!
You didn't even ask.. Geet se pehle to aapka haq banta hai to make my life difficult!

MAan(heart)- GIVing yourself away here...you agree Geet ka haq hai..waah Maan.. ๐Ÿ‘

Maan(brain)-Okay..why isn't she saying anything??DADI??!

MAan(heart)- to quote yourself "tum kisi ko mauka det(i) ho kuchh bolne ka ?!"

Pandit comes in!

MAan(brain )- ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ What in the world...

MAan(heart)- pandit?? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† maan ko Geet ka bhoot chad gaya hai Panditji...help karo!!

Maan(brain)- Dadi..you've kept a maun-vrat...excellent!
MEre gale mien ghanti baandh kar aap khud chup baithi hain!!?Ab main ghanti bajata rahoon??

MAan(heart)- ๐Ÿ˜† MAan...brainy..paagal hai..Geet bani Ghanti...waise your dil definitely beats with her every adaa...!! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Geet comes... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† aww scene really

Geet- aap nki baat nahi sun sakte...aapko pata hai na yeh kitne bade dusht danav hain

MAan(brain)- ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก GEET!!
MAan(heart)- ๐Ÿ‘ awesome..beta..yeh hone waala hai aapka shaadi ke baad ka haal...it's not only bed and cute fights Mr Maan..it's Geet-Dadi alliance

Maan(brain)- well..then...I'm the boss for a week...and I will make sure that you...

Geet runs away screaming!!

MAan(heart)- ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Geet..!!geet...suno!!! arre..sunno!!!

Maan(brain)- oh my god...What am I going to DO with her?
Dekha dekha iski harkatein..Isliye main isse apni life se....

Maan(heart)- galti hui!!.. ๐Ÿ‘ Mr MAan- no mistake- Khurana

MAan(brain)- I won't let this happen!! I won't let her stay in My OUTHOUSE!
MAan(heart)- haha...hey Soul..want another bet??

MAan(soul)- no bets needed..shh..brainy is too crazy right now...listen to me..
(whispers)- they are gonna fall for each other completely during their fights..
So we both win! I know their destiny! and it's each other that they belong with! ๐Ÿ˜‰ So don't worry

MAan(brain)- What is that? why is she stopping me??

Geet- yeh Geet rekha hai!

Maan(heart)- ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Geet rekha!!

MAan(brain)- rekha toh tum cross kar rahi ho..Get out of my way!

Geet asks for saboot..

Maan(brain)- she's asking for saboot!!FrOM ME??! BIRth certificate??!

Abhi dikhata hoon

Maan haath marodta hai

MAan(heart)- leave her leave her leave her... ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ

MAan(brain)- for all of you here- tum wahi karogi jo main chaahonga!! ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก

Leaves Geet finally

MAan(heart)- yeah...fine. don't hurt her..it hurts me! though I have no hands...i do have arteries you know...

Maan(brain)- stop messing with me Geet..I will make your life hell!!

MAan(heart)- YOU GO girl!!!Love you!!
We'll have fun this week hopefully


Thats it guys..sorry if it's not the best work!!

I love you guys!

comment away!

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beforesunrise thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oye gal very beautiful update ................thnx for update ๐Ÿ˜Š
muskanp thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#3
hi geet
how have u been
thanxs for this..i was just looking for this..
i searched & searched the forum!!
now i have to go read ur FF..time nahin hain..
can't wait to read that..
thanxs for the PM
love
muskan
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: geet.a

glad you liked it anu!

i alwz love ur update

u really did put a lots of effort n alwz do ..........maan self dialogue is ma fav topic on this forum even b4 the fiction stories of maneet
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Posted: 15 years ago
#5
lovely..u have awesome hearty dialogues..
a full tug between heart and brain...i am so waiting for heart to win
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: geet.a





Maan(brain)- oo! I have an idea..
MAan(heart)- hey soul! news news- MAan ke dimaag ki batti finally jal gayi!
Maan(soul)- HI 5!

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hahah..just loved this one ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
-Priyaa- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#7
haha lol Love it Geet.
Rolzz thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#8
I missed this yesterday!! Thank you sooooo much ๐Ÿค—
adoremevirgo thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#9
nice....maan is so conscious about his repu that he was about to take his shirt off her with his own hands....i was like ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜

geet is truly making maan crazy like hell....his temper is always near the boiling point....and this geet rekha....hilarious....


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jasmeet khaneja thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sooo adorable.....i think no one could ve describe Maan ki...dil aur dimaag
ki ladai...like u did.

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