Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147

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Posted: 14 years ago

#841

Wow!

I nearly caught out at work today .. reading this .. my heart skipping beats and my stomach turning with excitement and anticipation only to realise my manager in a deep discussion with me about stock management!!

EEEEKKKK!!

Uzma concentrate!!

Anyway beautiful update .. so Maaneet .. i won't settle for anything less in today's episode!!

Uzma xx

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Posted: 14 years ago

#842

Oh...oh...Vrush...Do i smell Dev there...will he see Geet...and will all hell break loose again and so soon??? As for this scene...it was JHAKAS....thanks!!!!

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-Amrita2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#843

You took my breath away, Vrush...but is it Dev coming?😭

I have a complaint as well, Varu, why do you play with my emotions this way? I'm so touched😭 after reading this. Thank you so much for writing these for people like me😉

Love you alot for all these hard works🤗, though writing is your passion

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Doracake

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Posted: 14 years ago

#844

Vrush................ I was too tied up at work to give any comments.... but it is one of your best........................... 🤗

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sona rai

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Posted: 14 years ago

#845

🤗vrushali 🤗love u a lot sweety🤗kya update hai yaar 👏amazing👏waiting for next part😊and plz add me to ur PM list😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#846

Hey Vrush ...very well written ....like this change in Geet .....strong and assertive and would do anything for Maan ....after seeing him fight for yet again she now knows that she can never let him go....their kiss was so passionate and Maan actually saying all that aloud was WOW!!!!!.....really good ....i got goosebumps !!!!! 😊 so now Dev enters and creates more mayhem ?????

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Posted: 14 years ago

#847

ha ha ha.. I read the comments Vroom and I know who is coming , dont I 😉😉?? Is it Dev or the goons??? I ll keep ur secret safe 😆😆😆....

Coming to the update- wah kya baat hai...

mar jawan mar jawan... tere ishq pe mar jawan........

Geet has fallen all over in love with her love- he is sooo selfless for her, even in his pain he thinks of her!! And I loved the way she took the initiative, a shift in their relation - where she always was shying away , here she is taking the lead- a small glimpse of the new promo ??? When he was hurt, I could feel Geete's anguish.. Beautifully scripted. I loved the usage of Black and red to define their emotions--- Maan is a dark person - he sees shades of black in his life- so even his anger is BLACK... Geet is a colorful person - her anger see the obvious danger color - RED...

WOAH... Even such small details are soo beautifully taken care of... U are as good as and at times better than the CVS when it comes to poignant scenes!!

Edited by MaaneetDD - 14 years ago

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#848

wow that was cute..MMM so geet still in angry and protective mode..loved it..

wasie wht abt that truth thing i am waiting for that..really

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#849

@ Gouri - hmm i could weave truth here too...do you want me to do two versions? i can try them....see which one you like then..

@ Ah KA... thanks so much...

@Shaaranya.. thanks and yes i will add you now to my buddy list...

@Hemvb - sapno mein aayeke jaayeke oye re mundeya..hamri churaiy le nindiya, ... this is the song i dedicate to you my love...

Maan aayega..zaroor aayega... usko aana hi hoga...ek premika ki pukar ko usse sunana hi hoga..(karan arjun style Rakhee speaking)

@ ah BABES me not telling... Rev knows..so when i write... you all will know i am not cheating by changing who comes...

@ Amrita...ah..Dev...hmmm...lets see...woh aajaye..to saari jhanjhat ek saath khatam....Geet talwaar se usse maar de and Maaneet will live happily ever after..after Geet has spent 15 years in jail...or can i plead self defence and get away with it?

@Abi..thanks..so much... you all shirk work to read my work...i am so..honored..
@ Uzma - guys dont get into trouble for my work..it is not going anywhere..it is right here...waiting for you..all but then Maan is so much more tempting than Stock Management..eh?

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#850

@sona...thanks and sure..will add you

@ Rev...ah ek to idea deti hai..phir bolti hai ki mein boloongi nahi...par...yeah...lets see who comes ;-)

@ chopra thanks... and yes i know i have to complete that series...will try and finish it today itself...