newFF::BIN TERE......UPDT @page 149 - Page 24

both updates are awesome. loved them.continue soon.

wow maan what poetry
too good maan clicking geet pics
sneaky way
too good
all the parts were too good the pain, sorrow guilt cute banter everything
do continue
bye sumi

waoww lovely.. m impressed itnee jaldi jaldiupdate...OH GOSH m in love wid ur FF's ar frequent udates are really killing.. imaginative and rocking.. wish we could see mannet suchscenes on screen...
wasy teri dewanmi episode would be awesome.. both are looking cute yr.

Both last parts were fab

oh my god!this is the first time i am commenting on a fanfiction and belive me u have left me mesmerized and breathless.u made me see maan and geet dancing to that wonderful song.u described it so well.every part of the lyrics matched the scene.i actually played the song and noticed u described the dance and maneet feelings so well.i m full of praises for u.u should become the official script writer.love u for ur ff.muah muah muah.

part 11 is

He knew she will feel awkward if she finds herself sleeping in this position ..he perfectly knew she was carried away with him last night by the darkness of night ..guilt and pain.

He pushed a cushion below her head and got up.( tooo cute)

he noticed her looking for him...he smiled..

He called her out from upstairs....geet mere kapde kaha hai...?geet kya kar rahi ho...geet ...tumne breakfast ready kia..? .....geet mujhe sharma's ki shopping mall bali file ka review de do jaldise ...what was ur last finding about it ..

Geet where are u ..? offho geet I m getting late for the office ....tumhe na koi kaam nahi aata ...pata nahi dadima ne kislie tumhe sarpe chadhake rakkha hai !!!!

Geet rattled by so many orders....she ran to carry out his instructions...yelling "abhi layiii sir.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!"(oye hoeeeeeeee....... yeh kya ho raha he are yeh kya ho raha he)

Kaha thi ..?mai kitni der se ph kar raha hu ...? utha nahi sakti..

Aree sir ...saas to lene dijiye ..i was taking shower...

Whaat .!! I told u to remain ready ..15 min me tumhe mr Sharma ko brif karna hai ...and u r nt ready yet ...!!u r hopeless geet ...!!!he was in his usual form.!shouting at the pitch of his voice.

Offho sir....now dont give me tension..i will be there..waise meet kaha karna hai..office anise to mana kar rakkha hai..!! ( thank God every thing is normal)

Nahii...mai jaunga na tumhara body gurd bankar..!!!!!!!!!!he taunted.(oye hoeeeeeeee)

Ohh then its okay sir.!

Thank u miss geet ..i didn't know a young girl like you can handle these things so perfectly ..allthough I had a good recommendation about you from MR chopra..as well MR khurana..

Tumpe..? aur varosa...?mujhe pagal kutte ne nahi kata hai geet ..!!!maan pinched her.

Geet clenched her fist at it... u know what sir....u r the worst boss I have ever seen!!

Soon geet found her standing in front of gents toilet.!

She ran back to maan who was watching her and chuckling seeing her every movements from distant place..

Kya hua geet ..!!maan tried show mock seriousness.

"Ahem..." she cleared her throat.kuch nahi ...chale....!!

Just the word EXCELLENT script Reet...sorry this time am late...but this part is too good...its so romantic between the twosome..but I must tell you Reet ur words are so perfect to express the human emotions....thanks Jaan for gifting such a nice play of Maaneet........

I M SORRY SIR......! Geet whispered to herself,...

Mai bekar me pareshan ho raha tha...isko to koi fark hi nahi padhta...
thinking he proceeded towards the kitchen...hungry enough .

Yeh lo...pura din mai inke lie baithi hu...aur yeh hai ke koi bat nahi karna chahte mujhse...okay fine...samajhta kya hai apne aapko ...even I will not talk wid you..

Before maan goes out for the office she said in a low tone...lunch pe aajaiyega...mai banake rakhungi..

It was the end of 4^th day ....maan almost had no good conversation with geet ...he was tired fighting with himself.he was missing the naughty blabbering jovial geet .

Sir.....its about begin rain here...have the food its getting cold.."...this time louder...she stressed on the last word cold...knowing maan doesn't like cold food or that is heated after cooking (shooooo sweet)

Serving the food as she was about to go out of the kitchen....maan caught hold of her dupatta....silently ..(chor do anchal zamana kya kahe ga)

(guys.....our very own MSK is really very much passionate about her dupatta ....i don't know whether u have noticed it or not ...)😆😆😆

sir...mera dupatta chodiye..!!!!!!!adhi rat ko mera dupatta khichna...sharam aani chahiye aapko sir..!! I m here for job ....n nothing else MR MAAN KHURANA..!!! u better get it .....she chewed the words harshly ....

He had hit the glass almirah standing just behind him......all the glasses were broken...blood was oozing furiously from his hand..



part 10

Oye tuci kitthe chal diye..?todde hath ton khun beh reya hai ...ki hoya paji ...kivein edda haal bana lie.

For sometime he stood there still..neither soothed her nor moved a bit ...then threw her over the ground.

Maan said it again "...geet kha lo..." (not fair phir se oder)

luv d way u never leave a single comment unacknowledged😊, u reallly respect d views of ur readers,👏

comin 2 d update, it was a way better than those painful ones,👍🏼 i mean maneet r back 2 their original self,😆 likd that, actually loved.❤️

dont think tht i didnt like those painful update💔s, they r essential waise bhi "love wudout endurance isnt love"❤️,

excited abt d next update, n yes u hav n amazing speed of updating👏
so keep writing n making us feel gud😊

Originally posted by: kooliio

wow another update...

you are fast lol...

awesome as always...

cant wait for the next part...

and thanks for the PM

hellow there...