FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet.Part 48..pg190 - Page 121

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Posted: 15 years ago
looks like Muskaan is enjoying her weekend... dear, if you get time pls update today itself....
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Posted: 15 years ago
i hve no idea what was the 2nd spoiler..😃.. but i can't wait for ur updates..........i m pretty sure she'll say no to Armaan... but she will be so heart broken..thinkin Maan supported this idea. .. i m sure...
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanxs friend for all ur responses...
maan closed his eyes in pain & geet held his hand tighter...
geet said ..oops!!!with tears dripping..

Part 44

she slowly pulls her left hand up...& places it between armaan & her
(maan pulls away his hand walks out...)
with the palm facing her...she points at the ring on her hand
with her thumb & says...looks like I already have one..with a very
heavy voice...armaan understoods every unsaid word there...
geet rushes out behind maan
maan opens the car... geet closes the car & stands infornt of him
maan - move out of my way
geet - I was never on ur way maan
maan he tries to push her away...
geet - maan I am not done yet...she yells back..
(that was the first time she ever raised her voice)
maan - I have nothing to do with u..leave me alone(trying avoid looking at her)
geet - I know!!!
maan - then wat is all this
geet looks into his eyes..her hands were pulling his shirt & coat
from his chest..
geet - mana ki aap hamer rishte ko nahi manthe
mana ki hamare beech koi ehsaas ki gunjash nahin hai
mana ki aap ke liya main kuch bhi nahin hoon
mana ki hamre beech kuch nahi hain! na tha !na hoga!
phir bhi how could u maan...??
how could u?
maan - think wat ever u want..I don't want to get into all this
geet - jaanthi hoon aap mujh se nafraat karthe hoo
she pulls him closer & says itni nafaraat??? (his eyes meet hers..)
why maan why do u hate me so much??? (he almost melted into those eyes & said nahin)
maan - haan I hate hate u from bottom of my heart(his voice breaks..)
he just leaves from there...
armaan sees geet breaking down...he just holds her..
maan hi tumhara Mr.lover haina..she breaks down compltely into tears..
armaan - I am sorry geet..I really did'nt want to hurt u
geet - I am sorry about all this..I did'nt know how to tell u
armaan - u don't have to explain any thing to me...
come lets go for a coffee
geet - nahin aaj nahin..

geet goes to daadis room & hugs her..& says can I sleep with u today..
daadi - sure beta..

Maan comes back to his room..geets questions keep haunting him
itni nafraat?? he remebered every beautiful time he spend with her..
-how her eyes always finds their answeres looking into his eyes
-how she shies with his touch & closeness
-how she never complained about his rudeness, mistakes, anger, passion
maan says..how can I ever hate u GEET?
every thing around seem to remind him of geet..his room no longer belonged to
him..niether did it have traces of priya..all he could see was geet
all he could feel was geets presence in the room every were..he could feel
her exoctic seductig scent in the air...that touches passes his every senses
maan felt suffocated in there
maan takes his stuffs & pushes off for camping for few days

geet gets going with her exam preparation..and helping daadi with
the rennovation work in the mansion..
geet spoke to priya once & told her about armaan proposing
& how broken she was..after that she sounded little worn out
and every time they spoke geet insisted that she comes back
priya avoided..as much as she could..

geet completed her exams..& was getting restless & lonely
reh reh kar use bas yahi khayal atha...
khabhi maan se shikayat hai
khabhi kudh se gila hai
samajh main yeah nahin aatha mujhe key
tumay khona he ya pana
nahin humko khabar key kahan hum jarahe hein
kahan manzail hain aapni kahan humko hai jana...

daadi noticed this change in geet for last 3 months..
initially she assumed it to be due to exams..but now it was alarming
after the rennovation work was completed daadi keeps pooja
for geet & for the house...

Maan over worked himself ..to avoid geets thought...
but there was not a single sec passed with out her thought..
he was ammused how he kept on thinking about her
..with out evenseeing her for last 3 months.
he still remebered how it left to touch her hand, her hair..wet hair
her bare back..her neck, her face..his lips went dry with the thought
how he could feel the pain in her eyes even today with the thought
the last time he met them....his eyes would moist..
how he read her client reports every single day
he did'nt let any one use that cabin..ever since she left..
every day he typed her number & deleted it...
har pal har taraf..sirf geet he geet basthi hai
dur reh kar bhi..usi ki fariyad kartha hai
aapni tanhai se uski baat kartha hain..
har ghari har phal usiko yaad kartha hain...
all this had just made maan..more reserved, more rude & extremely short tempered
forget talking..standing infront of him was impossible


precap
maan meeting geet after 3 months..

hope it was ok...I did'nt mean to sound depressed but..this was the plot to move the story
waiting for ur response😍
love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sweetheart, I have been waiting for your update. so thanks... now allow me to go and read the story 😃

Ahh! read it just in one breath. Loved it. Dear when are you letting Maan know about his wife. Tadap tadap kaar mar na hain keya? Let them have each other now 😳

Wonderful update. Thanks for the pm
Edited by hasiii - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

it was lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

brilliant and subtle yet greattttttttttt
thnxxxxxx for this wonderful update
reva
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey muski plzz update it today as it's weekends plz can't wait
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Posted: 15 years ago
brilliant and subtle yet greattttttttttt
thnxxxxxx for this wonderful update
reva
glad u liked it..just wanted to keep it real..
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Posted: 15 years ago
LOVED it yaar
I love how people manage to describe depression
I always feel like crying when i read gud description of depression
it touches my heart and today you have touched my heart
thanks for the update and please update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Brilliant .. Just Brilliant Yaar ... Looved Dis Unpate!! 3 Months??? Omg!! Itne Din Baad Woh Dono Milenge!! ... Plzzzz Yaar!! Update Soon! Wont Be Able To Wait! 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rinky70

hey muski plzz update it today as it's weekends plz can't wait

promise to give a rollercoaster weekend..promise😉

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