FF*Simply love*(Maaneet)pt27at pg14(note at pg153

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Innocent02

@Innocent02

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#161

awww.....cute update!
Maan : wispher " agar mujhe ko pata hota ka tumhari zuban ko yun break lag jai gai to mein tum se bohot pehla shadi kar lata. he smiled
this was really funny 😆

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suji

@suji01

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#162

oh wow. Maan and Geet married 😍😍😍

am eagerly waiting for ur next update😛

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XAiShBaBy08X

@XAiShBaBy08X

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#163

Too bad it was too dark for Sasha to see Maan and Geet like that. It really stinks for her! She deserves it though.

I can't believe they are married! I'm sure Geet won't stay away from Maan for long! Update soon!

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#164

wow finally they got married
too great sweety
do continue
bye sumi

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 15 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK
AWWWWW...how adorable😊
I love the way Geet runs away from Maan at the end! You've really kept Geet's childishness in perspective in this update. LOVE IT 😃 👏 😃
And OMG...Maan in a Sherwani 😳 😳 😳 That's just HOT 😳

P.S. Sorry for the delayed post 😊
BTW THANKS for the update and P.M. and update asap because I can't wait to read more about Maaneet after they're married 😆 😃

thnx for your cute comments dear ..........i really moved with such cute comments
love you all 😳 😳 😳

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 15 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93
hey

great part, so dadi turned out to be clever eh 😉
so glad that they're married now
cant wait for more
do continue soon

btw thanks for the pm

Maheen xx

yup dear if dadi had not played trick they must have played pull it more long 😳
sure i will Pm you

Originally posted by: Bul3
awwww..this is so freaking cute!!..LOVED IT A LOT!!..thnx for the sweetest/cutest part👏

thkx dear ... i really loved your comments
😳

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 15 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: Innocent02
awww.....cute update!
Maan : wispher " agar mujhe ko pata hota ka tumhari zuban
ko yun break lag jai gai to mein tum se bohot pehla shadi kar lata. he
smiled
this was really funny 😆

thnx you liked my naughty part 😉

Originally posted by: chullbulli
thanx sweets sunday shaam kat gayi...i loved the usage of song in the story..i can see teh picture ...

welcome i am glad i made your evening special....
nice to hear you liked song 😳

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 15 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: XAiShBaBy08X
Too bad it was too dark for Sasha to see Maan and Geet like that. It really stinks for her! She deserves it though.

I can't believe they are married! I'm sure Geet won't stay away from Maan for long! Update soon!

oh silly me i didn't though of that . it must be treat to watch Sasha reaction.
i just Hope so Geet come of her horrible past quickly

Originally posted by: sujsub
oh wow. Maan and Geet married 😍😍😍

am eagerly waiting for ur next update😛

yupi yupi yupi they are married ..

very soon dear 😳

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
wow finally they got married
too great sweety
do continue
bye sumi

thanks dear that you liked it

😳 it is your comments which make me write

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 15 years ago

#170

PART8

i am very happy that you liked it ......so sweet of you who liked , commented & PM me love you all.
Part 8
Maan: "Geet wait baat to suno daar pook mrs Geet Maan abhi dekhta hoon tum ko"
Kaise btaayein kyun tujhko chahe yaara btaa na paaye
Baatein dilo ki dekho jo baagi aankhein tujhe samjhaye
Tu jaane na... tu jaane na... tu jaane na... tu jaane n

Geet : ran in talking to herself " hi babji yeh Maan ko kya hogaya ha muhje ko un se duur rahna chahiya "
Dadima: "Geet beta zara mera kamra mein aana"
she obeyed her order

Maan who was trying to catch Geet felt his cell vibrated he checked there was an sms from an unknown number
" congrats MR Maan for marrying my Ex-wife don't tell anyone be in touch with you late "
Maan got suspicious he at once call at that number but it was switch off. Maan all happiness vanished away . He got worried " who the hell is this guy?"
he try that number several time but every time he found same reply " the number you are dialing is currently switched off"
for half hour he kept on walking in lawn and trying that number....he got irritated closed his cell & walked in.
He searched all every where but could not find Geet or Dadima.
Maan: "ab yeh kaha chala gai ha again hide and seek"
There was pin drop silence in home
Maan: "Geet ka hota hoya itni khamoshi ho nahi sakta.must be something wrong"
He walk in Dadima room
Maan: dadi bit loud
Dadima :shhh ask him not to make noise ( he saw geet sleeping

in Dadima lap she is running her fingers in her hairs she is

hugging her tight her arms around dadima. she asked Maan to

come to & sit .
Maan: was just looking at Geet whose face was telling she had

cried as tears marks was on her face.
maan sat next to dadi
Tum se na jaane kyun sapne hai
Palkon tale tum se na jaane kyun
Kaise btaayein kyun tujhko chahe yaara btaa na paaye
Baatein dilo ki dekho jo baagi aankhein tujhe samjhaye
Tu jaane na... tu jaane na... tu jaane na... tu jaane na
Dadima in very low voice : bechari bari dukhi larki ha ,she

told me everything that she was
not your wife ....she paused .... you just wanted to help

her.... her family made her marry to a guy who was in

Canada.... he on wedding night ask her to sign some

papers....paused.... the next day he left her ....He sold her

land to you. Her parents try to kill her as they found she is

expecting.... she ran from there & came here ....now she is

scared if the see your wedding Pictures they will create

problem...
Maan was continually staring at her face his eyes became red with anger and pain as he was witness to it he wanted to hug her & wipe away all her tears
Aaa...
Nigahon mein dekho meri jo hai bas gaya
Woh hai milta tumse hubahu
Ooo jaane teri aankhein thi ya baatein ki waja
Huea tum jo dil ki aarzoo

Dadima:"Please beta i have a request don't drag her in this new

relation she has gone through a lot of trauma in last 6 months.

she don't trust anyone give her some space.she couldn't say no for shadi today as there were so many people present aur yeh tumhari izzat ka sawal tha........paused"
Maan felt suffocated he try to hide his emotions he walk to window & open
Tum paas ho ke bhi tum aas ho ke bhi
Ehsaas ho ke bhi apne nahi aise hain
Humko gile tumse na jaane kyun
Meelon ke hain faasle tum se na jaane kyun
he composed him self turn back
Maan: "dadi i am a practical guy aagar mein na kal iss ki side lee thi tou iss ka pecha bhi wajha thi
bus mein iss ko khush dekhna chata hoon . yeh mujhe sub se zada taang karti ha lakin phir kuch na kuch iss tarah ki harkat karti ha ka iss per pyar aa jata ha aur mein ghuss bhool jata hoon"
Dadi smiled his statment
Khayalon mein lakhon baatein yun tu keh gaya
Bola kuch na tere samne
Ooo huea na be-gaane bhi tum hoke haar ke
Dekho tum na mere hi bane
Afsos hota hai dil bhi yeh rota hai
Sapne sanjota hai pagla hua soche yeh
Hum the mile tumse na jaane kyun
Meelon ke hain faasle tum se na jaane kyun
He walk out of the room as he was not able to stay there any more. Maan walk to his outhouse he want to be alone he lay down and for the first time he wanted to cry out loud. he felt tears coming out of his eyes he didn't stop it as he felt hating himself for being so rude with her.
dadima: pat geet face softly beta utho .... she felt Maan was very upset when he left .
Geet: quickly open her eyes "oh ! mein aap se baat karta karta sogai sorry dadi meri waja se aap itni daar se baathi ha."
Dadima: koi baat nahi tum sosakti ho meri goud mein kissed her forehead.
Geet: woh khidar ha (felt shy to ask like that)
Dadi: liked the way she asked." woh outhouse chala gaya ha tum sorahi thi
Geet: Dadi zaroo ghusa mein hoga
dadi smiled ha
Geet :kya mein yahan rah jao
Dadi : holding her hand nahi mein tum ko chor kar aati hoon. woh tumhara dosth ha na aur woh ghusa mein ha tum ja kar iss ko maana lo.
Geet: theek ha per aagar woh zada ghusa mein hoga to mein aap ka paas aajo gai theek hai
Dadi theek hai
on her way
Geet dadi mein to sirf taang kar rahi thi un ko ghusa aagya
Dadi: dekho to ja kar kya pata ghusa mein na ho.

Geet holding her saree and sandals in one hand seek in room there was totally dark in room she slightly moved curtain saw Maan lying flat on bed with his boots on his face was hiding under pillow.
she though he was awake she went to washroom to change her dress .when she came out she saw he was lying in same position. she sit near his feet and remove his shoes & socks.
Geet: i am sorry Maan... did not got any response she moved pillow from his face he was fast a sleep & he was sweating .she wipe his forehead with her duppata she slightly pick his head & placed pillow .she felt him very close to her
Geet: mummer koi sherwani pahan kar sota ha garmi to laga gi..... she slowly unbutton it pull it out from his one arm. she move to her side of bed slowly try to pull it without making him awake. she almost lying next to him ....as she drag out Maan trun and he placed his hand on her abdomen..... geet held her breath as she got strange feeling..... his breath was tickling her at her neck as he was very close
She was trying to move away .she heard him mummer "dadi mein iss se pyar karta hoon....mein nahi raha sakta iss ka bina"
Geet got why he is so upset dadi must have asked him to give me time. she placed her hand on his hand. Smiled and closed her eyes
now his present was making her comfortable
Baby :smiled see now i have both mama & papa

Moonlight spotted them while they slept..........

( I am very bad in writing romance sorry friends hope you like it do comment plz don't forget to press like button if you like it love you all)

Edited by naddiya26 - 15 years ago