Maan Singh Khurana: The Wounded

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The pain is well hidden from prying eyes, the scars well concealed.
Now they are ripping apart at the seams.
The dense layers of camouflage are being torn apart
to unmask all those piercing wounds.

How am I going to survive?
Again the poking has started to deepen the pores of those wounds.
The turbulence has yet again begun
in the cosmic strain

I am breaking apart
Falling apart

I have to stop myself
I have to save myself

I can't let someone,
Walk in and shake the foundations on which I have built my survival

Oh lord, save me from myself
Save me from my inner demolition
Stop me from the internal combustion

No one can see what I am saving myself from
I can't go through all the pathos again

She is driving me insane
Her presence is tearing my soul apart

No! I will not let it happen
My determination is shook to the core
But I will stop the avalanche
I will stop it with all that I have in my power and arsenal
I will stop myself from being destroyed again
As this time I don't have the strength to come out
Of yet another explosion
As letting someone close to you
And opening your heart
Is nothing
NOTHING
but a self betrayal

Oh my self,

You have walked on shards of broken glass
You have been burnt by coals of raging fires

You have been bitten by venomous snakes
You have been tortured by vermin and bugs

BUT

You have emerged
Emerged out of the mire
The quagmire
The shallow pits

You have locked yourself safe
Protected your inner core
And divined a way
to face opposition and uproot it

You will survive this too
You will not fall prey
You will stay
Nothing can shake you

Please keep alive this illusion
Puzzle it over not
Protect me, preserve me, please let me be

- Maan Sing Khurana

The Departed

People come
People go
You are left behind
Hollow


The Punishment

How can I live with myself
After driving her away

To escape myself
I destroyed her

How can I stand up
When I have crippled her?

To protect myself
I have injured her



The Falling

I have tried to separate
the today from
the yesterday

I have tried
to resist the pull
of past memories

Have I succeeded?
I am like a deranged man
trying to make sense

of this new world
where everything
revolves around you

That is why I am
more than angry
what is this hold you have on me?


- Maan



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bDgT thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Edited by bDgT - 14 years ago
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Edited by bDgT - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow....keep it up....of how i wish maan wud forget his past pain and relive the sweet moments of falling in love again
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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved it.... the pain,agony,hatred & LOVE....
thanks for posting...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Bri...that was simply beautiful!!

I don't think Maan knows those many words..LOL..but they exactly describe the passion and intense emotion he showed yesterday...

Loved it!!!

i was about to write a poem..but reading this one...I won't anymore..
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Originally posted by: geet.a

Bri...that was simply beautiful!!

I don't think Maan knows those many words..LOL..but they exactly describe the passion and intense emotion he showed yesterday...

Loved it!!!

i was about to write a poem..but reading this one...I won't anymore..



Maan's self dialogues are one too many (your soul, heart, brain talk BTW, kudos) so I guess he has an invisible vocabulary too
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow wonderful language bridgette
really i liked the way u said the maans feelings👏
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Wonderful....... beautiful .... you are gifted, my friend !

thanks for giving the privilege of reading ,

VJ
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@sravani: thank you very much

@VJ: thank you for the encouraging words...Gurmeet's portrayal of Maan is inspiring...the intensity is mind blowing.

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