A lifetime of Gratitude-ff maneet updt-149,154 - Page 37

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Posted: 15 years ago

i am soo happy reading your update geet jealous wow !!!!!!!!!!!

please update faster i waiting checkingv for it to come after every hour please hurry up
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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry sorry sorry for the delay...

Okay, I read all your comments and thanks you guys!! LOve you all loads!!

To Rinky- you didn't like it too much? No Maaneet scenes? Well..kudi starting to be jealous..toh base banana tha na..that's why..

Richa- Thnks for bringing this up..

See..Geet being angry..I don't really mean it as serious serious angry..rather exasperated , like in the show..their nok-jhoks are not very serious...except the one about Dev..

The rest- Geet doesn't know what's happening to her..she is being as a result as unpredictable as Maan..nd now she is also jealous but doesn't know why...so..that's why.

Plus, didn' t want to show her as completely sweet sweet..because she is a woman who stood up for herself and married to protect her baby. She doesn't and will not be dominated by MAan..or anyone..so I guess this bit of feminist character I have added to Geet...

Tell me if you guys are not comfy with it too much !!

keep the suggestions coming in!!

love you all

next update will be up v soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely update.... Loved the coffee scene...... Loved it when Maan said"you are finally catching on"....

Geet jealous...... Mann unaware of it .......Nice touch...... It would be a change to have Geet jealous and possessive..... Till now it was Maan's prerogative.....

Its OK for Geet to get angry on Maan at times..... She is his wife now.... Usko itna to haq bantha hai....

And also Geet is pregnant..... So she is bound to have mood swings..... Let's see how the unflappable Maan is going to deal with it....

Ann.

Edited by celestae143 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Okay..so here's the update...

Maan is driving very slowly..Geet finally looks at him and asks

Geet- Maan..Please drive.
MAan- I'm not in the mood to go home so soon..
Geet- why? Aren't you in a hurry to go to that dinner of yours? with that client?
Maan-hmmm
Geet- so...stop thinking and start driving so that you cand rop me, get ready and go.
Maan- Geet...She is very important for Khurana constructions.
Miss Rashmi
Geet(to herself)- Rashmi..important toh hoyegi hi...Modern Churail.. hmph
MAan- kya ? Ddi you say something?
Geet- Nahi..MAin toh kuchh bolti hi nahi..
MAan stops the car

Geet- MAan...yeh gaadi kyun rok di?
MAan- Bas..shhh..5 minutes, just stay quiet. Close your eyes and see what comes to your mind.

Geet- nahi. I don't want to.

Maan moves closer to Geet...very close...she can see herself reflected in his eyes

Maan- look into my eyes then. What do you see?
Geet- uhh...uhh..I see me.
Maan- look deeper...

HE moves closer...
Geet is getting lost in his eyes..
Maan- ab...
Geet- ab kya...
Maan is finding it very hard to keep track of what he was saying so he puts his finger on her lips

MAna-shh..

They keep staring at each other..with Maan's finger on Geet's lips..

He starts to say something, when Geet cups his mouth with her hand..

Geet- mhh mhh..
Maan- hmm?

Maan and Geet slowly remove each others' hands from their mouths and MAan..

Maan-ahem...yeah..um..
Geet looks away a little shy

MAan- Geet...You know what I see when I look into your eyes?
Geet- kya?
Maan- that you are scared.. No, let me continue please. Geet, everyone you loved has hurt you, very much. You have faced a lot in your life and I admire you for the strength with which you live. But you are scared of opening up. You are scared of revealing your emotions...aren't you?

Geet- Maan. Yeh aap keh rahe hain? You yourself have created sucha huge block that it's so difficult for you to even talk kindly to someone...Using your anger you have made yourself so aloof. Your eyes show your kindness..but also show a vulnerability...I don't know- maybe people don't see it..

MAan- Geet..I don't let anyone see inside. But some how you have always been able to...

Geet- MAan..hum dono bohot thede hain..LEt's leave this topic alone.

Maan- Okay. LEt's go

Geet- suniye...is baar..please drive..you really will get late for dinner.

Maan- Geet... I don't want to go..But I have to..

They drive in silence...thinking of what the other had said..

At home, they go to their respective rooms..

MAan is so lost thinking of Geet, he wears his clothes, but is unable to concentrate on knotting his tie

Geet enters his room to say bye and sees him struggling.

Geet- laao..main kar deti hoon
Maan doesn't say anything, just stares at her while she is tying the knot

He feels like a kid again..when every time before he went to school, Dadi used to tie his knot and told him to finish his lunch and study hard that day

Geet was saying something to him..

MAan-hmm..?you said something?
Geet- Maan..khana achhe se kha lena okay? kahin kaam ke chakkar mein bhookhe reh jaayein aap.

Maan thinking of the client smiled faintly and said

Maan- Geet...we won't be working the entire night you know...

This really annoyed Geet and she said

Geet- Fine. Okay then. Bye. Have FUN during DINNEr with your CLIENT

She stalks off to her own room leaving a slightly bemused and comfused Maan

He goes off to dinner and Geet hearing him go says to herslef

Geet- Bye bhi nahi karke gaye. UFf..Fine.

She gives Dadi company at dinner but says she will eat later as she isn't hungry now. she doesn't eat and then goes to Maan's room. She had wanted to spend more time with him. But he had his work...and that churail client..

Geet- thik hai...I don't care. Hmph..I am simply going to spend some time here, and go back and sleep.

She looks around his room- immediately feeling him around her- she feels safe and happy, and knows her baby does too

she talks to her darling

Geet- So you like it here...Your papa is too busy baby...for both you and me..busy with HER. But we feel okay here alone, don't we.. We're used to it now..aren't we?

The baby nudges her and she realizes she had been going off track

Geet- anyways...he isn't that bad..is he?
Baby nudges back

Geet- you like him? that khadoos?

Baby nudges again and she takes that as a yes..

Geet (softly)- I will just lie down a bit

She does..and goes to sleep in MAan's bed...

To be continued in the evening!

Love you guys!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
Completed 50 pages!!

LOVE YA All!!

Thanks a lot really for reading this ff...
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved the last part of the update
thanks
please update soon
thanks a lot
congrats on 50 pages and please know that we all love your story
and will continue reading
dont ever stop okay
thanks again
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great update Yaar..... I can't imagine Maan's fave when he comes back and sees his wife sleeping on his bed... 😳 😳 😳

Ann.

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Posted: 15 years ago
awsum....

can't wait to see maan's xpression!!!!

update sooN!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update. loved it.
geet miss maan.....
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Aww... this part was sooo sweet. Loved it. waiting for the next one.

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