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Posted: 15 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: *mittu*

Thanks for the PM lali. I would like you to continue this fic. I like this concept a bit more. Enjoy your trip darling.


hey thanks for replying i think im gona continue with this one lol.. thank u hopefully will have a good time but will miss GEET
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nirjhor105

if you have a pm list then plz add me


sure will add u thank u!
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Originally posted by: NIDIZ

Lali u have created a complex situation for me.,hmm I don't know which f.f to choose.. I wanted to read both of them soon so,
I leave the decision on u..as the writer knows it very well which one is more important.. choose the one which is very very much close to u're heart..
But try to update both soon..


lol nidzu thank u soo much for replying... well think im gona continue with this one for now... lol dont leave the decision on me cause im bad at it actually the worst cause i wanna continue all for me every single work of mine r simply the best u see lol... but jokes apart thanks yaar for liking my work this much means a tons to me... 😳
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----------------------- Part 02 -----------------------

He put his feet out which were covered with expensive shoe wear. He holds on to the window bar, while his luxurious silver watch came hanging down. He got out of the car as he rubbed off the dust on his pricey dark suit. He stood outside his car in a straight posture. His tall figure well built body, messed short cropped thick black hair, tanned skin with his eyes hidden under a black tint sun shades. His lips curled into a thin smile revealing a faint dimple. Wearing black jeans with red shirt with two top button open and over that a black unbuttoned jacket which had a design on the back. He took off his shades revealing the perfect deep blue eyes identical to an ocean shimmering under the hot sun.

Geet's attempts failed as her view got blocked due to the sun. Under the oversized helmet she frowns trying to take a proper look at the man who was coming towards her. He slowly took his step. The sound of the boots was coming closer to Geet, for unknown reason her heart beat was also rising. Finally it came to a stop as he stood right in front of Geet and her scooty. Geet was finally able to take a proper look at the handsome guy who any girl will fall for just like that in front of her and blocking the sun rays which were hurting Geet's eyes earlier.

Geet can feel her goose bumps as the wind got stronger blowing her hair to sides. Seen his confident smile she felt as if the world came to a stop. His dimples, the handsome hot looks with cute baby expressions just melt Geet's heart. For a while she was lost in his deep blue eyes which was expecting her to say something, until she remember the reason of each others' encounter. As he stare at Geet's annoyed face he flashed his dimples and turned to go but before he could turn Geet shot her question 'what were you staring at?' questioned Geet. The guys turned his attention back to her stunned she didn't knew if he was admiring her or if he was mocking her but it was clear that she wont easily give in for his looks. 'I was looking at that person who dared to shout at ME' he said calmly which irritate Geet and it was clearly visible on her face. Geet was really angry as he was giving too much importance to himself and it was obvious the way he mentioned about himself. 'Me… Maan Singh Kurana' he continued confidently, Geet wasn't able to make eye contact with him as she felt disgusted about these rich spoilt brats but the way he introduce himself made her to look back at him, for her the name was so familiar but she couldn't recall how and why but as she noticed his sly smile her hand turn into a fist but she didn't cross her limits so she controlled herself. 'kyun? Tum bhagwan ho?' She asked mockingly, Maan frown his eyes brows towards Geet's unexpected question 'nahi… magar han…' he replied making Geet confuse more. 'tumhe kya 'Cant. Make. Up. My. Mind.' bimari hai?' she shot back pronouncing it slowly so Maan will understand her but in reply Maan shook his head 'I like it' he replied 'I like your confidence' he looked at her from top to bottom disgustedly but hiding it with a smile, as he rest his hand on the scooty Geet felt uncomfortable and frown at him under the helmet 'haath mat lagao' she said as she slightly hit his hand but before she could reach him he took his hand away not scared but dismayed, 'you know I was this close to come under your car… this close' she continued showing a little space between her thumb and her index finger. In reply he look at his palm and noticing the dust on his hand he looked here and there he saw a silk fabric on the side he snatch it and brush his palm on it,

Geet's eyes widen as he took her dupatta to wipe off the dust. She pulled it back instantly 'ok enough alright… stop all this smart replied ok I am not here to play kaun banega karor pati' she said confirming it with him but he was not giving her any attention but was looking here and there at the road to make sure there aren't any cars lining up behind them. 'oyeh I am talking to... how dare you? Who gave you license? Do you think this is your father's road? Amir hua toh kya hua… kaise logo se specially ladkiyon se baat karthe hai yeh bhi nahi seekha?' she continued with her angry tone 'hold on hold on… tell me first… for what are you blaming me... not talking to you properly or not driving properly' he questioned her 'bohot smart samjhthe hona apne aap ko?' Geet shot back 'nahi nahi smajtha nahi… hoon, smart AND rich' Maan said with satisfaction while Geet growled under her breath 'by the way if I wanted na I can even buy this road too' he replied mockingly 'oh toh aab tum mujhe bataraha hai ki tum kitni badi millionaire ho? You cant scare me get it straight Mr...' she replied knowing he isn't even listening to her 'by the way thank you… thank you very much' this instantly caught Maan's attention and Geet felt proud about it in a way 'thanks for telling me your name Maan Singh Kurana ab toh mujhe koi problem nahi hogi tumhare kilaf police main entry likhane main… you know I wont have any problem' Geet continued proudly smiling but her smile vanish as soon as Maan chuckle at her in reply 'yeh that's OK I mean its another story nobody will believe you…' Maan reply mockingly showing off 'oh just shut up... if no body believe me I will make them believe me' Geet shot back.

'But our story is different because you're going to complain about yourself not me' Maan also shot back as if he was challenging her 'hun?' Geet questioned like he was speaking another language. In reply Maan turn towards his BMW car Geet too slightly bend to take a good view at what he was showing. Her face flushed in pink with embracement because she realised that she was blaming Maan all this time for no reason as it was actually her fault. The right side of the car was still flashing with the bright yellow light and because they both were turning to the same side and being on a one way road she should have been more careful. She bit the corner of her lip nervously; unable to make eye contact with him she kept her stare at the ground. Maan tried to peep into her eyes but it was difficult because her head was lowered. There was nothing left for Maan to hear or Geet to say so Maan start walking back towards his car Geet slowly lift her head to see Maan walking away but he stopped in his track and turned around. Geet immediately looked away as if she was busy with getting her scooty started and flew away on her scooty. Maan watch her disappearing away surprised at the different reaction he has received from this girl but he was jerked out from his feelings as he heard his phone vibrating. He took his phone out from the pocket checking the ID a smile came upon his face

'Hello…' he greet the person in the other end but his smile began to disappear as the person on the other end continued speaking 'what?! Ok I am coming' he got into his car and drive off as fast as possible.

Maan's white BMW stopped outside the closed gates. A second or two later the closed gates open heading it way into a long path which ends at a big mansion. Giving a frown evil look towards the security guard, who was near the gate he drove toward the white painted house which had beautiful interior decorations just outside the building. As Maan's car went further away the guard pick up the phone receiver. 'Hello Pinky mam... ji Maan sir abhi enter kiya hai…' the guard spoke to the receiver 'Thanks!' said Pinky from the other end. 'Badi Ma!' Pinky who was at her late twenties shout on top of her lungs. A middle aged lady dressed in brown and white salwar kurta with her head covered in a dupatta stood at the balcony which was built inside the house 'han Pinky batao...' the lady reply 'Maan is coming' she said in a hurry as soon as the lady heard this she got disturbed 'thank you beta' she replied as she turned to go but a old aged lady came and stood in front of her. She looked really nervous as she looked with her puppy eyes toward the lady. She was royally dressed in a beautiful off white sari, with her hair put into a bun. 'Pammi kya humara plan kamiyaab hoge?' asked the old lady 'hun savitri Ji trust me... mujhe Maan par pura barosa hai' Pammi replied with confidence while taking the old lady into her room.

'Guys! Maan bus bees meters away' he said shouting, he took his position next to Pinky his hands around her shoulder. Both were staring towards the main door. His short cropped hair neatly brushes to the side. The boy was dressed smartly on a black and yellow jumper with short sleeves which reach to his elbows. They heard the sound of Maan's boots coming closer. Both Adi and Pinky's faces fall. 'Don't worry di don't worry DM will be fine' he said consoling Pinky who suddenly start crying 'oh look Maan bhai is here' he said nudging Pinky with his elbow. Pinky at once ran toward Maan who was entering the house. Pinky tightly hugged him, Maan also put his hand around Pinky to console her. Pinky's face got even more miserable with Maan's unqualified support as he thump hard on her back in process of consoling her. 'Maan bhai DM ko tumhe milna hai abhi' said Adi immediately to divert Maan's attention and to rescue Pinky.

Without a second thought Maan sprint towards the stairs leading it to the second floor of the house while Adi and Pinky also came following Maan, almost running upstairs into DM's room. He enters the room where he saw Pammi in the corner looking very upset as she held her forehead. He looks toward the bed which was in the middle of the room. The same old lady was lying on the bed with the doctor by her side. DM had her eyes closed and the doctor shut his suitcase as he got up. 'Daadima!' Maan shout running toward his Daadi Ma. 'Daadima! Daadima!' he repeat shaking her by her shoulder 'oyeh ulluke pateh aab tak toh mein mara nahi hoon' said Daadi opening her eyes slowly. Pammi's eyes widen as it wasn't on their plan. Soon Daadi too realise this and she brought back her painful expressions. 'Maan aap agaya...' Daadi said taking Maan's face in her hand 'haan Daadima I am here' he said kissing Daadi's forehead. 'Mr. Maan Singh Kurana can I please talk to you?' asked the doctor 'yeh sure doc' Maan said in reply getting up but he was stopped by Daadi 'doctor please joh kehena hai mera saamne kaho mujhe pata hai ki mere paas itna waqt nahi hai' Daadi request the doctor while Maan looked clueless at Doctor then at Daadi. 'Mr. Maan Singh Kurana please take a good care of her… she is right and don't give her any tensions in any sort of way… I am sorry' doctor replied as he got up to go 'but doc how can that be possible we went for a check up the day before and she was absolutely fine' Maan questioned back. 'But Mr. Kurana illness are wired things we can't plan when they are coming' said the doctor and a smile appeared on everyone's' tension faces 'ok then I'll take your leave' said the doctor, Adi move towards the doctor and took his suitcase showing him towards the main door. Maan sat back down next to Daadi holding her hand on his 'Maan beta… tum mere akhri kwaish puri karsakthe ho? My last dieing wish?' asked Daadi, seen her tearful eyes Maan instantly blurt out 'Daadima! don't you dare!' 'but beta the truth is the truth.. mera akhri kwaish thi ki main tumhare beta yah beti dekhna magar laktha hai woh sach nahi hogi magar kya tum tumhare Daadima keliyeh jaldi shaadi karsakthe hai?' asked Daadi, Maan looked at her drum struck he doesn't know how to reply or react to this. His answer was a clear NO and he knew every one knew this he looked at Pinky who was very quiet, he looked back at his Daadima who was expecting for an answer. He closed his eyes tightly and opened his mouth agreeing with himself for whatever that will come out of his mouth. 'OK Daadima... I will get married' he opened his eyes as his reply slip out of his mouth he was even shock hearing what he said but seen his Daadi's happy face he too became happy. 'sach?' ask Daadi with a grin which reach from her left ear to right ear. 'Promise Daadima promise' he reply with a nod.

'Pammi!' said DM as she got out of the bed and ran towards Pammi. Adi who was back to listen to their conversation also start dancing on the spot with Pinky. Pammi too was very happy while she hugged Daadi. But in all this left Maan confused who was looking from one to another expecting an answer for what is happening in the house. 'Pammi Maan haan kaha!' Maan's attention turns towards Daadi's loud voice 'Daadima aapka tabiyaat?' Maan question innocently 'arey bhaad pe gaye mera tabiyaat mujhe koi heart attack wattack nahi hai' with so much excitement it just slip out of Daadi's mouth, everyone stopped on their track as their faces fall. Slowly Maan understood everything. Adi took a glance at Maan's angry face, Maan look at Pinky and Adi and instantly Adi hid behind Pinky feeling scared, Pinky looked at Maan helplessly. Maan look at Daadima who looks at the ground with embarrassment, he look towards Pammi who also wasn't able to make eye contact with him. Maan looked back at his family with so much anger and feeling very depressed. 'That's it!!' he screamed walking out of the room 'but you promised' said DM to Maan. 'No! you all lie to me' said Maan as he stormed away.

Maan sat down on the sofa and stretched out his legs thinking very hard about what happened a while before in Daadi's room. He sank into the sofa in his large bedroom, which was simple but very attractive Maan closed his eyes tired at thinking over and over again how his family lie to him. As soon as he closed his eyes he saw her. The owner of the beautiful almond shaped hazel eyes who he met this morning. The way her long black hair was flying to the wind. How she frowned at him under her over sized helmet. The way she looked at him expecting him to give her attention. Her images were flashing in front of his closed eyes as a thin line of smile appeared on his tension face. But suddenly he was distracted as the wind burst into his room through the open window, Maan was confused, he was confused at what he saw as he closed his eyes, 'no, no, Maan no!' Maan slap his cheeks to wake himself up from the nightmare 'woh ajeeb wajeeb ladki aur urgh!!'.

Geet slowly took her steps towards her house, she looked very depressed as well as hurt dragging her feet on the ground. As she realised she was just outside the door step she blink a few times to make her tears to disappear. With a fake smile Geet enter the house but for her luck it was only Rajji there still dressed in her pyjamas. Rajji's head shot up hearing the foot step. She stare at Geet stunned 'arey Ridzi tu toh jaldi wapas aagayi' said Rajji checking her watch 'arey you only took 2 hours… kya yaar I thought aaj tumhara pehela din bhi hoga… kaisa raha interview' asked Rajji but seen Geet's fall face she realised something is not right 'mein abhi aaya' said Geet as she went towards her room 'but di?' said Rajji following Geet to her room and for her shock she found tears running down on Geet's cheek endlessly and saw her sitting down on her bed helplessly. Worried Rajji ran towards her sister and engulf her in a tight hug. 'kya hua Geet di' Rajji began her questioning, after a while when Geet got controlled over her tears she start to tell the whole story.

How she bumped into Maan, how she survived without an accident and how they had a fight regardless about the time. As she enter the building where her job interview was held and asked the receptionist about her interview in reply Geet got to hear lots of things, and was refused to take even into the interview room because she was late. Geet blurt all that out to Rajji who was listening her each word carefully at the same time consoling her 'its ok yaar…' said Rajji after a while silence. 'That's the not the only job… after all this is Mumbai meri jaan yeh nahi toh koi aur…' she continued consoling Geet, Geet stare at Rajji's face and burst out in laughter hard to control seen her little sister's funny expressions trying to give her advice. Rajji to burst out laughing knowing how silly she might have looked, she whiped off Geet tears and brought a smile back on her face as they hug again tightly. They both were disturbed in their sisterly hug when they heard a lively voice form the living room.

'M se Mein aagaya!' said the cheerful voice. Both Rajji and Geet looked at each other surprised and loked back at the direction they heard the voice from with open mouth.


Well as you guys have replied to me many of you wanted this FF to be continued if possible so I decide i will continue this FF when ever possible, Thank u for all for replying and thank u very much for well wishers i will share my holiday for sure with u guys... Thanks! As I dont have a proper PM list or some of u guys might not be added as my friends I will PM each and individual of you of updates according to your comments... basically no matter if u have comment earlier I will pm u next part to those people who have replied on the previous part... Hope I am not being mean cause this is really easy for me... I will try to update one more part before I leave on Friday so get your comments here and please anything is welcome!!!!


Edited by .Lali - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: angelic shaz

love the concept lali

amazin keep it up!!


thanks glad u liked it!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
wow lali fab update:)👏 loved all the tu tu mein mein. i already told u this that u write extremly well!!! welldone done. keep rockin gal and thanxs hun for the pm:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Really enjoyed reading it!!...Thnx for the pm....waiting for ur next update😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thnks...for continuing!!!!😊

update soon n pm me!!!!😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank you for continuing this fic and for the PM lali. Enjoyed reading this part. Loved their first meeting. Can't wait to read more. Please continue.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lali,

Thanks for continuing this FF. Loved the update. Their bickering was simply fabulous. Dadi maa is like an over-excited kid. lolz...

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