Maan: Meeting My Destiny (upd. Part 2 & 3, Pg. 1)

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He felt such murderous rage; rage to pummel his fists and destroy all those that cheated her to pulp. How dare someone despoil his innocent doe? How dared anyone lay a hand on her? He was forced to restrain his feelings because he felt that he was taking advantage of her innocence. How could someone be so cruel to the one he loves with all his heart and soul.

She is like a gazelle scared of the lions in the beastly jungle. And someone had already smeared her in their blood and clawed her. He felt like blue murder. Let him get his hands on that charlatan, he will rip him apart.

My beautiful, graceful, delicate angel. She makes me smile when I least want to. She warms my heart. She is like a sunbeam in his rage-filled darkened world. He never felt such an overwhelming protectiveness for anyone else.

Touching her is like awakening to the smell of ground coffee or the sign of drenched dew caught in the sunlight.

Her smile is as soft as a snowflake and as deadly as an earthquake. She could just shake the foundations on which he stood, on which people relied. He lost his balance when he was around her. She shook the tenuous hold he had on his surroundings. He was mesmerized, dazzled and bedazzled.

Is this love? Is this desire? Is this just wanting a woman so much that everything else fades into oblivion. Why does she twist his hearts strings? Why her? Why not all those sophisticated women? Why does she catch his breath and take it away? What makes her so unique that all women just fade from his vision? Is it her innocence? Or the strength that I see bubbling forth along with the enthusiasm and zest for life?

What makes her so special to him? It is that she is so perfect for him. His heart was filled with such rage and she twirled her way in to fill it with such longing for a love, a hearth and a home. Being with her or seeing her smile is like coming home to the place where love felt divine.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Beautiful Post!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗 I just loved the way you have described Maan's feelings for Geet, his loss of control over himself..his conflicting emotions, of how important Geet is to his life, the change she has brought in him, from an aggressive, no-nonsense attitude to a vulnerable, soft, sensitive person.

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Absolutely brilliant bridgette..... 👏

"She is like a sunbeam in his rage-filled darkened world" 👏👏
Being with her or seeing her smile is like coming home to the place where love felt divine😍
Why does she twist his hearts strings? Why her?
Why her...isn't that a million dollar question...why are you attracted to that one person when you know with all your mind that they are wrong for you,but feelings of love, attraction have nothing to with the mind, its an area where the heart is the ruler of the land.😉
So Maan will not find his answer from his mind/head but from his heart...if the stubborn man will only listen to his heart once.👍🏼
Maan thinks he could never love a girl like Geet, simple, sehmi si ladki, who breathes accor. to her family's wishes,
Geet thinks Maan is so harsh that no one could love such a person....
but what they both don't realise is that the moment they met, both of them started changing.....they had to, you know.....God has destined them to be together, so if they didn't like each other then and do so now its because unknowingly they are slowly transforming each other, and what a transformation its been so far......😍
Maan from an angry young man with no time for love and emotions, to a man falling for a girl probably for the first time in his life and fighting it tooth and nail, without realising that its already too late for him.
Geet from being a family burden(accor. to her family) to a strong independent woman standing up for herself and her unborn baby...

God chose wisely.... don't you think.....😉

Sorry rambled again.....😳
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Thanks dearies!

Part 2: My honor

A man lives by a code of honor all his own. He had a strict code of honor. No one could trample on that! He respected people, their hard work, their integrity. For him, truth and personality mattered. Courage mattered.

Geet made him want to come out of his shell, out of the place where he has hidden the soft core of his personality. His softer side is something that he had never allowed the world to see. He never let the world know he had. He guarded it lest people take advantage of it. It was sanctified. Only for Geet, he was willing to open that heart, the soft side flowed out of him in all naturallment. It just lit out like Geet had set a match to it.
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Part 3 - Maan's thoughts




Torture.
It was sheer torture waiting for her to decide.
Waiting for her to make up her mind.
Waiting for her to leave her past behind
Waiting for her to be mine
I can't wait
I can't NOT wait
Oh holy lord, give me strength
To stand by her
and to stand by IF
She chooses to forgo me
BUT
please make it so
That she may remain
With me
immersed in me
always and forever
with me


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Bri ....my dear ... you're outdoing yourself ..... 👏

Exceptional decreiption of Maan's emotions on know Geet's story !!!!
Have to read it once again ... will get back !!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: bridgette

Part 3 - Maan's thoughts




Torture.
It was sheer torture waiting for her to decide.
Waiting for her to make up her mind.
Waiting for her to leave her past behind
Waiting for her to be mine
I can't wait
I can't NOT wait
Oh holy lord, give me strength
To stand by her
and to stand by IF
She chooses to forgo me
BUT
please make it so
That she may remain
With me
immersed in me
always and forever
with me


Awwwww ... Bri .....
A cry / a plea straight from the heart .... !!! 👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely post do continue
dear
i don't have words to say anything else.
bye sumi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

im lost for words...its beautifully written, that's all i can say

😊
love,
kally
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Posted: 15 years ago
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The continuation of this is found in Maan: What Would It Take To Make You Mine?
Edited by bridgette - 15 years ago

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