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Hi Fluiid! Its not easy to weave all of us into one story but you have done it!Good show! The plot reveals the type of books that have appealed to you and most girls that's why its easy to identify ourselves with the characters.

The casting was good especially with Meli as the angel and Roja as the kind, loving ruler - they do take care of the lounge! 😛

roja akka nenga leave utta Ck makkal thanka matanka

mokiyama naan 😭 😭

meli thanks for ur lovely comments.

i think u missed Ck on giri check out the archives

Originally posted by: Fluidd

IFiansMagicTown

Closing Scene 6:

Once they reached the Magicheaven, Giri, Kavi and Jas realized that as explained by Meli meeting her ancestor might be a very difficult task. Since Giri resembled like their queen, one nice girl from heaven, took all three secretly to queens separate bed room. There the queen, i.e. the ancestor of Roja patti, i.e. Ellu patti, is none other than our Sue Chechi. But Sue Ellu patti was happy to see her grand…grand child Giri and her friends Kavi and Jas. She immediately says that, I am not supposed to give the key as Roja patti has lost this to those evil trios. As per rule in heaven, you three will be punished to enter my room. She added that, even though I am queen here, this heaven is democratic. If the folks standing outside me door came to know this they will execute the punishment immediately. But for my Roja, who has suffered because of this lost key, I will give the key now. Saying this Sue Ellu patti, remove her necklace which has key attached to it and give the same to Giri and ask her to win the bad power in Magictown. Now Giri, Jas and Kavi vanished with the help of Sue Ellu patti.

Fluidd...you're simply great...I wouldn't be surprised if someone tries his hand into making this an interesting fictional movie....Thols-ke oru idea vandhudum-ma??? 👏 👏

I am so happy that Ellu Patti finally gave the necklace key to help Roja patti retrieve her lost powers in the IFian's MAGICTOWN..!!👏

Long live Roja Patti and Ellu Patti.to guide and keep their descendants lineage intact 😆..appada....ellorumey eppidio safe-aa vanthachu...😉

Once again thanks Fluidd for the hard work with your imaginary skill at its peak giving us an interesting travel around Magic-Town..!!👏.I started to visualise the kids cycling around the heavens above like in the 1990 movie Anjali....directed by Mani Ratnam..!!!.😳

Thanks a lot to Kavi, Giri akka, Meli, Pokkri, Pat akka, Jas, Nallu, Ho, and Sue Chechi for reading my fiction and encouraging me. Thank you once again.

uma: konjam konjam busy. vandhu read pannittu solren. Can't wait to read ma.

Aaahaaaaa, Fluidd.. Konjam lateaaa vandha ipadiyaaa????
Intha kalakku kalakkareenga!!!! 👏. I love to act, and act in plays 😳, so, for me it was like being on stage!!!!!

You have such a vivid imagination!!!! I could visualize scene by scene!!!! Wow...That was wonderful...Keep it up da! 👍🏼

Uma: kalakkalo kalakkal. oru jaganmogini movie range le ezhudhi thaLLitteenga. :) After reading this, I may go to my kitchen and wave my karandi thinking it is a magic wand and order a nice menu. I wish I have the magic wand and get things done easily. :)Nice imagination. karpanai kudhirai summa virrunu parandhirukku. Great job. What more do the IF members want when they have their super ellu, kollu and paattis and an angel to take care of them? 😉

Rojakka: we will miss you. seekram broadband ai sari pannittu odi vaanga.

well well, it is a hide and seek game
still - the broadband seems to have the upper
hand!!! Atlast, I managed to get a tech. to come
and rectify today - keeping my fingers/toes
crossed!!! Uma, when I get uninterrupted connection
for atleast 5 mins, i will copy yr CK to word and
read, I guess - of course, No CKs from me for a while
at least - awwww, so many grins and long sighs from
the IF ians - do I hear prayers from one whole
load" samy bhagavane, antha tech innum konja naal
varame parthukkoppa, kozhukattai, payasam ellam
tharom" ....... 😳 😳

What an imagination Fluid. Simply SUPERB 👏 👏. I enjoyed the whole story. Orru nalla movie partha thirupthi enake 😛

Jas, I'll enrol only for Saravanas and molagai bajji 😃