LOVE STORIES part 18 Fun moments pg 27 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
its really cute!!
i find ur script really interesting👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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your script is really good. cant wait for your next update. i know that it is gonna be really interesting.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good part.... even loved this one and believe me it isn't boring....
I wanted to ask u if you could make your parts a bit longer.... that is if you could ..... thanx anyways
I'll be waiting for the next update
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
it was so very sweet..please continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey its really good story
i loved reading it👏👏
plz continue.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Love Stories.......
Part 4:The yatra begins
Next morning all the boys woke up early in the morning and got ready for their journey to Avdhi.Av and Sumitra gave their sons blessings and granted permission for leave.
All three mounted their horses in royal style and started their journey.
V:Dharam,Tumhe kya lagta hai,agar raaste mein tumhe tumhari wo gudh si meethi rajkumari mil gayi,to tum kya karoge?
D:Veer,tumhe hamesha hum hi milte hain kya?Pratik ko to tum kabhi is tarha se nahi chedte.
V:Ab Pratik ko main is baare mein kaise chedun.Use to apni rajkumari mil gayi hai,bas tumhi ek akele intezaar main baithe ho.
D:Tum bhi to akele ho.Hum tumhe to nahi chedte.
V:Aur chedna bhi nahi chahiye,yeh kaam choton ka hota hai.
D:Ek baar tumhe kisi ladki se pyar hone do,phir hum bhi tumhe dekh lenge.
D gets so angry that he rides ahead of them quickly.
Pratik and Veer share a hearty laugh and give a high 5.After a few hours they caught up with Dharam.They were almost in Avdhi.It was just a few miles now.Veer starts teasing again.
V(to dharam):Mili?
D:Nahi abhi bhi dhoondh rahe hain.
V:Acha?
They all laugh out.
P:Bhaiya thodi der ruk ke chalte hain,bahot thak gaye hain.
D:Hmnn...theek hai.
They all dismount their horses and walk with them for a while.
V:Mujhe bhuk lagi hai.
D:Koi nayi baat nahi hai.Waise to mote ho,khake aur mote ho jaaoge.
V:Tumhare jaisa toh nahi hoon,ki dekh kar machar bhi bhaag jaayein.
P:Ab bas bhi karo tum dono.Waise hume bhi bhook lagi hai.Chalo kuch dhoondte hain khane ke liye.
So, they kept on walking for some food.
On the other hand,the three rajkumaris had come out of their capital to get flowers and other decoration items for the welcoming of the guests.Rajkumari Kiran was looking very dreamy and was in deep thoughts.
S:Kiran,kya soch rahi ho?
A:Hogi koi faaltu ki baat...
K:Hum apne rajkumar ke baare mein soch rahe hain!!!!!
A:Acha,Sia dekho humari pyari si behen kitni badi ho gayi hai.Abhi to rajkumar ke bare mein soch rahi,kuch din baad pyar ke baare mein sochegi,phir shaadi aur phir apne chote-chote bachon ke baare mein.
Sia and Ananya laugh heartily.
K:Kya kaha apne???
She had a stern look on her face.Sia and Ananya knew when Kiran was angry and this was surely it.They ran for their lives.Sia turned left and Ananya turned right with Kiran just behind her.
On the other side Dharam and his brothers were coming in exactly the same direction as Sia was running.They were not very far from each other.Dharam could see someone running towards them and she was getting closer and closer,the sound of her anklets getting louder ,the sound of her laughter getting clearer and clearer.Sia coldn't see that there was somebody infront,approaching her,as she was looking ouy behind for her sisters.She didn't notice a large stone,and tripped over it into Dharam's arms.Veer and Pratik were just behind them and were shocked to see such a sight.Pratik had his mouth wide open and Veer was trying hard to control his laughter.
Yes!Dharam had found her girl.Anyone could tell that now.The way he was staring into her beautiful eyes with love and passion in his eyes.Even the nature seemed romantic.Birds and butterflies were flying in pairs and had never seemed so bright before.The two kept looking into each other's ees.Sia was very confused about what happened and how it happened.That moment she was running from her sisters,and the very next,she was in the arms of a stranger.She didn't know how to react,but still shefelt a little strange.***It had been love at first sight for Dharam,but not for Sia.So,how did they fall in love.Let's see.***
A few moments later Ananya called out for Sia.Sia realised that she must go.
S:Umm....Hume jaana hoga.Ap hume chodenge?
Dharam came back to his senses.
D:Um....Haan(He helped her stand up)
She ran in the opposite direction and he kept looking at her as she went away.The sound of her anklets were slowly fading away.Somehow,he felt that this was not their last meeting.
Precap:Three princes reach Avdhi and meet the rajkumaris with proper introduction.
I'll try updating in the weekend.But please do read it and comment.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
it was fab keep goin i love it.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
wooow...kuul...cnt wait for da next part! xxx
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
aw!! dharam meets Siya!!
ananyas dialogues "hogi koi faltoo baat" 😆😆 im eager to know how do veer and ananya fall in love
nice part!👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww dharam and sia met.....
This part was funny.... loved the wholle update
I read your recap and now i can't wait to read your next part...
Update soon dear....

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