Pyaar, Jadu, Masti aur Gadbad- END. plz comment!!! - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: pinky_5

hey it was very emotional........liked the way u expressed AR's point of views.........i enjoyed reading it..........👏 - thank you so much. 😊😊😊

thanksssssssssss a lot for the pm............😊 - its ok. i will PM you whenever i update

Originally posted by: redi50

mindblowing part- thank you

but y do they start wit frendship
they know that they love each other - they know they love eachother but just love is not enough to live together, they still have some difference of opinions. they cleared the misunderstandings they had till now, but they may have to make shure that they would never have any misunderstandings further. so i felt that they should live as friends for some days so that they can understand each other in better way, so that they will never breakup again.
plz continue soon
luv heli

Edited by sony_123 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52

hey sonia!....

found out about ur FF...
n till now its going great!...
u hv a great writting hand girl!...
ur awesome!....
keep going!...
upd8 soon...
n if possible plz do PM me!...
thanks
tc
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
hey sonio awesome update sorry fr the late reply as i cudnt read ur ff then but i must say u potryed it so well gal keep going and especially the terrace scene..i just loved it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
please update soon and pm me when ever you update.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: dmglovernimisha

hey sonia!....

found out about ur FF...
n till now its going great!...
u hv a great writting hand girl!...
ur awesome!....
keep going!...
upd8 soon...
n if possible plz do PM me!...
thanks
tc
hugs & luv
Nimisha

thank you. i will pm u when i update.

Originally posted by: coolgal04

hey sonio awesome update sorry fr the late reply as i cudnt read ur ff then but i must say u potryed it so well gal keep going and especially the terrace scene..i just loved it

thank you

Originally posted by: monadarling2628

please update soon and pm me when ever you update.

i will pm u.
Edited by sony_123 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56

Precap : AR have a heart to heart talk. They sort out the misunderstandings.

Part 5

AR decided that though they love each other; there were many things that they need to know about each other. Before they take their relation to next level or make their relationship public they decided that they should have more understanding. They had decided to be friends from now on. They thought that they would be themselves and they will not try to impress each other. Armaan understood that just being in love is not sufficient to live happily. While ridz understood that misunderstandings can never be solved by ignoring them. She understood that 2 different people can be together if they have understanding between them and love each other. AR promised themselves that they would never let any misunderstandings come in between them. They decided that from now on they would neither lie nor hide anything from each other.

After a long time both AR had a peaceful sleep. They woke up at the same time feeling the warm sun rays on their skin. They had a smile on their lips remembering their previous night conversation. They get ready and leave to the hospital.

-------*******--------

The next 2 days went very well for AR. They were very happy being friends. They were just themselves. Neither did Armaan try to be extra caring and extra lovely towards ridz, nor did ridz run away of hide from Armaan. They used to spend time together during their breaks, conversing and knowing each other. Anjali, Atul, Rahul, muskaan were a bit surprised and sad as they were missing AR's fights.😆😆

-------*******--------

One day AR decided to go on a date.

AR got ready and came to the main hall where others were watching TV and chating.

Anjali : ridz, tum kahi ja rahe ho kya?

Ridhima : ha di.

Atul : are Armaan, tum bhi bahar jarahe ho kya??

Armaan : ha champ.

Atul : kya, baat hai yaar, tum aur ridz ko ek hi time pe bahar jana hi.😆

Anjali : atul!! What is soo funny about it.

Muskaan : kahi to dono saat me to nahi jarahe ho na!!! haha😆haha(her usual loud laughter)

AR : ha, hum dono ek saath hi jarahe hai.

Anjali : cmon. Stop joking ok. Tum dono!!😆😆 Aur eksaath!!😆😆 Thik hai to tum batavo kit um log eksaath kaha ja rahe ho?😆😆

Atul : ha bolo bolo.😆😆 Date pe jarahe ho kya!!😆😆

AR : ha, hum log date pe jaa rahe hai.

Anjali, atul muskaan : stop joking. This is not april 1st ok.😆😆

Armaan : hum sach keh rahe hai anjali. Mai aur Ridhima date pe jaa rahe hai.

Anjali, atul muskaan : kya?????????

Muskaan had her jaw droped to her knee.😲 Anjali almost fainted😲😲 while atul actually fainted😲. Rahul was the only one who was totally enjoying their conversation. Rahul and Armaan helped atul to sit properly.

Atul : are Armaan, tum mujhe istarah ki heart attacks mat de yaar. Agar me chalagaya to mere bacho ka kya hoga. 😭

Anjali : stop it atul. Ridz, ye sab kya hai?? 😕 Tum aur Armaan??😕 Aur wo bhi date pe?😕😕? Kya ye sach hai??

Ridhima : ha di, ye sach hai. mai aur Armaan sach me date pe jana chate hai. Aur di, mai aap ko yahi batane aayi hoon.

Anjali, atul, muskaan are still in shock and they couldn't speak anything.

Rahul : common. Kuch to bolo.

Anjali : kya bolu?😲😕😕? Mujhe abhi tak samajh nahi aa raha hai ki ye sab kya ho raha hai.

Armaan : relax anji. Tum itna kyu sooch rahi ho. Hum dono sirf date pe jaa rahe hai.

Atul : tum dono to hamesha ladte rehte ho. Mujhe abhi tak yakeen nahi hota ki tum dono eksaat aur wo bhi date pe jaa rahe ho!!😕😕

Armaan : chill guys. Hum dono sirf date pe jaa rahe hai. Tumlog to eisa hiraan horahe ho jise hum ne tum se ye kaha ki hum dono ekdoosere se pyaar karte hai aur hum dono bhag kar shadi karrahe hai.

Anjali : its not funny Armaan.😒😒

Armaan : relax anji. It is just a friendly date. Tum bhi to atul ke saath date pe gayi ho. Iska matlab ye thodina hai ki tum atul se pyaar karti ho. Hum dono hamesha ekdoosere se ladthe the na, isiliye hum ne socha hai ki hum ekdoosere ke saath thoda time spend karthe hai. so that we can know about each other.

Anjali, atul muskaan

Rahul : good one Armaan.😉

Armaan : thank u.😉

Armaan : ok guys. Hum baki baate baad me karenge. Hume late ho rahi hai.

Ridhima : bye di.

Anjali, atul, muskaan ' still not able to understand what had happened.😕

Rahul : Anjali, atul, muskaan, tum log itna kyu sooch rahe ho?

Anjali : pata nahi.

Rahul : see AR could have easily gone for a date lying to us. But they didn't do that. They trusted us and told us the truth. What is wrong if they go for a date? That too they said it is just a friendly date right??

Anjali : may be u are right Rahul. May be I am over reacting.

Rahul : ok, now leave this topic.

Atul : thik hai yaar.

Muskaan : Mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai. chalo khana khate hai.

Rahul : tujhe kab bhook nahi lagti?? Tu to din bhar khati rehti hai.

Muskaan : oye Rahul, tu chup kar. Agar mai khana khati hu to tujhe kya problem hai? Mai tera khana thodi na kharahi hoon.

Atul, anjali : tum dono plz apni ladayi band karo.

Atul : I think tum dono ko bhi AR ki tarah date pe jana chahiye. Kum se kum tab to tum ladna band karoge.😆😆😆

---------*******--------

AR's date :

AR went to a restaurant. They were having their dinner.

Armaan : hum kitne dino ke baad eksaath hai. mai bahut khush hoon Ridhima.😊😊

Ridhima : mai bhi bahut khush hoon Armaan.😊😊

Armaan : mujhe ab tak yakeen nahi ho raha hai ki ye sab sach hai. tum nahi janti ki maine tumhare bina wakt kise kate.

Ridhima : tum se door rehna mereliye bhi aasaan nahi tha Armaan. Lekin hamare beech me itne galat fami hai ki'.😭😭

Armaan : ab ye purani bate chodo Ridhima. Hum apna rista inta mazboot banayenge(strong) ki aage se hamare beech mai koi misunderstandings nahi hogi.😊

Ridhima(smiles)😃 : Armaan jab hum sab se hamare date ke bare me kaha, tum sab ke chare dekhne layak the. Anjali di to ekdum shock hogayi.😆😆

Armaan : aur atul to behosh hi hogaya. Jab usko hamara pyaar ki bare me patachalega, tub uska haal kya hoga!😆😆

Some slow songs were being played. AR went to the dance floor after their dinner. (I know u may feel it to be weird for AR to dance after dinner, but I wanted to include this song. So plz bear with me)

I feel this song "jee le" from the movie U me aur hum suits the situation

Venga Yahogate Un Este Amor

Mora Si Querea, Pero Uneste Amor '' (2)

Jinko Jinko Bhi, Milna Hai Likha

Ishq Milwayega,

Jinko Jinko Bhi, Milna Hai Likha

Ishq Milwayega,

Door Door Se Dhoond Dhoond Ke

Pass Le Aaye Ga

Kahin Bhi Jaake Chuppo, Ishq Wahin Aayega,

Kitna Bhi Na Na Karo Uttah Ke Le Jaayega

Maano Ya Na Maano, Yeh Saari Hi Duniya

Isi Ke Dum Pe Chala

Oooo Ooooo

Jee Le Jee Le, Jee Le Ishq Mein

Marna Hai Toh Aa Mar Bhi Le Ishq Mein

Jee Le Jee Le, Jee Le Ishq Mein

Marna Hai Toh, Aa Mar Bhi Le Ishq Mein

Esloy Enarnorada, Te Quiero Baila Baila

(female)

Jaate Jaate Hum In Palon Ko Bhi, Saath Le Jaayenge

Saath Le Jaayenge,

Baaton Batoon Mein, Jo Bani Hai Woh

Baath Le Jaayenge, Le Jaayenge

Umm'

Zara Bhulakkad Hai Dil, Yeh Bhool Jaye Agar

Yaad Dilana Humein, Yeh Paaniyon Ka Shaher

(male)

Yeh Pal Na Kam Na Ho, Kabhie Khatam Na Ho

Waqt Kahin Bhi Chale

Jee Le Jee Le, Jee Le Ishq Mein

Marna Hai Toh Aa Mar Bhi Le Ishq Mein

Jee Le Jee Le, Jee Le Ishq Mein

Marna Hai Toh, Aa Mar Bhi Le Ishq Mein

Que Pasa Senorita, Venga Yahogate Ahogate

Ahogate Un Este Amor, Mora Sisliennes Que

Morir Pero Un Este Amor, Baila Baila

Venga Yahogate Ahogate, Ahogate Un Este Amor

Mora Sisliennes Que, Morir Pero Un Este Amor

Jab Sahil Pe, Hum Pahonchange

Toh Kidhar Jaayenge

Apne Apne Ghar Jaayenge Yaar,

Ho Apne Ghar Jaayenge

Jaayenge

Issi Safar Mein Se Hee, Naya Safar Lenge Hum

Jahan Bhi Bolenge Tum, Wahin Uttar Lenge Hum

Gaali Bhi Doge Toh, Gali Na Chodenge

Aise Padenge Gale'

Jee Le Jee Le, Jee Le Ishq Mein

Marna Hai Toh Aa Mar Bhi Le Ishq Mein

Jee Le Jee Le, Jee Le Ishq Mein

Marna Hai Toh Aa Mar Bhi Le Ishq Mein

Aa Mar Bhi Le Ishq Mein, Aa Mar Bhi Le Ishq Mein

Aa Mar Bhi Le Ishq Mein, Aa Mar Bhi Le Ishq Mein

Jee Le

After the song AR leave to their house.

Sorry for the delay. I know this was very boring update. I am sorry. I promise that next part is going to have a lot of masti. Plz leave your honest comments. Waiting for ur views. I am tired now. I will send pm's tomoro.

Edited by sonia-kashian - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
hi sony
thks for the pm dear
nice part
AR date was sweet
angi and atul reaction were worth watching
update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
luv soumya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
waoh its really a nice⭐️ and sweet one😊 mind blowing😊😛😉 AR is so sweet one😊😊 and Atul😆 and Anjali😆 reaction is superb😆 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉 i think😳 sayad apne galti se muhje pm kar diya😳 as i dont know about it how😳 but if u can send pm to me next time😳 when ever u update😳 as i like ur ff😊 plz send me😳

"Teri dosti da main satkar kitta,
teri har nazar nu main pyar kitta,
kasam rabb di na bhula devin es dosti nu,
main apne to vi jyada is rishte te aitbaar kitta.."


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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
gng 4 a date n d rst gang nt believngg.. dat was a gud 1.. thnxx, 4 d pm.. update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
hey
hilarious one yaar n a very cute ar part
actually my coll has started yaar so just cant space out my time right now so my comments myite be delayed n short sorry

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