Posted:
kashish dear lo main aagayi apne comments lekar on my favorite fanfic... sachchi kashish dear tumhare saare fanfics mein Saahir is my most favorite..sorry main woh thoda sa late hogayi.. woh i was stuck up in some work..hope you understand..now i'll type the comment on the parts which i have missed giving my comment on.. hope you like it..😊 ab pehle coming to the part jahaan sujal,kashish project khatam karne ke liye office jaathe hai.. first let me talk about this part, that is the strange night between the two of them..pehli baat tho mujhe yeh samaj mein nahii aathi kii kyun yeh dono sujal, kashish sab kuch jaan kar bhi anjaan bann rahe hai.. uff patah nahii yeh dono sujal,kashish kab apni dil kii baat ko zubaan par laayenge.... dono ke dil mein kahiin na kahiin ek dusare ke liye feelings tho zaroor hai, lekin phir bhi dono hii chup rahenge..kuch na kahenge.. they both want the other one to express their feelings first.. jaise kashish ke dil mein yeh darr hai kii agar woh sujal se apne dil kii baat kahegi tho sujal usse dhutkarega.. aur waise hii sujal ke mann mein bhi yeh baat hai kii agar woh apne dil kii baat ko kashish se pehle kahega tho shayad kashish uske pyaar ko samaj na paaye.....aur yeh dono issi baat ke beech uljhe hue hai aur issi wajah se unke beech kii woh jhijhak hai.. i'am very sure jab sujal, kashish ek dusare se apne dil kii baaton ko share karne lagenge tho unke beech kii har wall toot jaayegi.. aur unke beech kii jhijhak bhi nikal jayegi... waise unke beech kii woh strange night kii shuruwaat bohat hii achche tarike se hui.. joh baatein sujal, kashish ke beech hothi hai, i can see that unke beech kii durriyaan dheere-dheere hii sahi lekin mitt tho rahii hai... they are opening up to each other.. aur phir kya tha woh dono milkar kaam karne lag gaye the.. i'am very sure sujal, kashish kaam karthe hue ek dusare se nazdeeki bhi mehsoos kiye honge.. dono ne hii yeh baat zaroor mehsoos kiya hoga kii woh log ek doosre ke kareeb aa rahe hai... aur phir bhi , ab thak sujal, kashish ka bachpana nahii gaya hai.. they are still very young , at heart.. bachche ke bachche rahenge dono.. jis tarah se they chase each other around the office.. aur phir jaise sujal, kashish ko corner kartha hai not allowing kashishto go anywhere else... un dono ka ek dusare ke itne kareeb hona, kashish ka apni aankhon ko band kar lena and waiting for sujal's next move.. sujal ka moving away from kashish and telling kashish things which meant like jab thak kashish nahii chahegi woh uske kareeb nahii aayega.. waise kashish ko dekh kar tho mujhe aisa lag raha tha kii shayad woh chahthi thi kii sujal usse kiss kare.... and it seemed like she was waiting for it... lekin koi baat nahii jab baat yahaan thak aagayi hai tho woh din bhi durr nahii jab sujal, kashish ek dusare par apna beintahaan pyaar nyochavar karenge.... aur bhi sujal, kashish ka phir se kaam par lag jaana... aur dekhthe hii dekhthe subaah ka ho jaana aur woh dono tho raat bhar kaam karr rahe the... aur phir sujal ka dekhna kii kashish looks tired... uska kashish se kehna kii woh kavya ke kamre se file lekar aayega and then uska returning back with a cup of coffee for kashish... hyeee..hyeee... kya baat hai sujal maan gaye aapko...he is really such a sweet heart.. such a sweet husband.. aur waise is baat par main sujal se pooch na chahthi hoon kii kyun sujal, bata kar kyun nahii gaye kashish ko kii tum uske liye coffee laane jaa rahe ho..sharam aathi hai kya tumhe... hehehe.. aur waise sujal ne achcha kiya kii usne kashish ko nahii bataya kii woh uske liye coffee laane jaa raha hai, kyunke agar sujal, usse batatha tho kashish usse rokhthi.. kyunke kashish bhi yeh baat jaanthi thi kii sujal bhi raat bhar nahii soya aur wog bhi tired hai so woh sujal ko koi kaam nahii dena chahegi.. she also does not want to trouble him... yeh dekho yeh dono ek dusare kii itni parwaah karthe hai, lekin phir bhi dil kii baat ko apne zubaan par nahii laayenge... ab phir finally sujal, kashish ka kaam khatam ho jaatha hai.. goodd.. waise unka kaam hotha kaise nahii aakhir dono milkar joh kaam karr rahe the.. woh kehthe hai na kii agar apne saathi ka saath mil jaye tho kaam aur bhi achchi tarike se poora ho jaatha hai.. aur yahii hua sujal, kashish ke saath.. they are slowly learning kii un dono ka saath kii un dono ke liye unki sabse badi taakat hai.... waise jab sujal,kashish raat mein office mein hothe hai na, aur woh light jaathi hai.. kashish ka sujal ko darr kar gale lagana.. sujal ka kashish ko tease karna.. all this was shoooo veryy sweettt........aur joh waade sujal, kashish ek dusare se karthe hai na woh tho ek dum mast.. totally zabardast.... loved that completely... me so khush dheere dheere sujal, kashish ke beech ka rishtha aur bhi ghehra hotha jaa raha hai...aur isse khushi kii baat tho aur koi bhii ho hii nahii sakthi..... aur ab jab sujal, kashish ghar ke liye nikalthe hai.. ghar pohanch kar, kavya, prerna aur anjali kii baatein.. khaas karke anjali kii baatein all this was perfect.. absolutely emotional... dekha jaye tho ab kashish sharmaane bhi lagi hai.. isse kehthe hai pyaar ka jadoo.. aur ab tho sujal ke pyaar ne bas apna rang dikhana shuru kiya hai.. socho kashish ka tab kya haal hoga jab yahii pyaar unke sarr chad kar bolega... tab tho kashish sharam se aani , paani ho jaayegi...aur phir the room ka scene between sujal, kashish.. sachchi keh rahii hoon dear sujal, kashish ke beech lafzon kii tho zaroorat hii nahii hai... bas unki dil kii dhadkane, unki aankhein hii ek dusare se saari baatein keh dethi hai.... ab tho sujal bhi yeh baat jaan ne ke liye betaab hue jaa raha hai kii kashish ke dil mein uske liye kya feelings hai... waise the scene jahaan sujal newspaer padthe so jaatha hai and then kashish coming to him.. this was very nice.. good.... ab than sujal ka washroom mein chale jaana.. aur yahaan kashish ka sujal ke liye kapde nikal ne ka scene.. is scene par tho main marr jawaa.. kitna achcha tha yeh scene.. kashish ka har ek shirt ko sujal ke tasveer ke agge rakh kar dekh na....very damn nice... and then kahish ka keeping sujal's court closer to herself.. mujhe tho aise lag raha tha kii kashish sujal ko apne kareeb mehsoos karr rahii hothi hai..aur tabhi sujal ka wahaan aana and catching her red handed with his shirt... ab tho i'am sure kashish ko yeh baat tho samaj mein hii nahii aayii hogi kii woh ab kya kare.. how will she explain herself to sujal.. ab phir sujal ka kashish ka tease karne ke andaaz mein sawaal poochna.. kashish trying to avoid the topic... yeh sab tho bohat hii zyada achcha tha..... xaur phir sujal kii woh tie kii scene.. kashish ka sujal ke itne kareeb hona.. kashish kii palkein jhuki hui hai aur sujal kii tho maano jaise uski nighahein kashish se hath hii nahii rahii thi.. aur phir sujal kii parwaah regarding kashish.. then sujal ka kashish ko mrs.garewal kehna.. kashish ka sujal ko dekhna.. sujal ka kehna kii kashish usse baad mein dekh le, lekin ab pehle woh apni dawayi le le... waise baat tho sahii hai kashish tumhare pass saari umar padi hai sujal ko dekhne ke liye... lekin ab agar tum usse dekhthi hii rahogi na tho woh tumhe chod kar kahiin nahii jaa paayega... aur ab uska meeting mein jaana bohat zaroori hai na, tho tum usse baad mein dekh lena.... hehehehehe..... all this was just superb.. brilliant.. excellent.. mazza aagaya poori tarah se.... aur phir woh scene jahaan sujal,kashish mandir jaathe hai.. aur phir un dono kii prartna.. finally sujal ne khud yeh baat, atleast khud se sweekar karr hii liya kii woh kashish se pyaar kartha hai.. aur ab woh Bhagwaan se pray kartha hai kii he gets to know kii kashish uske liye kya feel karthi hai... howwwww cuteee.... and then kashish ka saying kii she wants to stay there for sometime & pray for his success.. kya baat hai... kashish tho poori tarah se sujal kii patni banthe jaa rahii hai... aur phir woh old aunties kii baatein.. all this was too good.... mujhko bohat achcha laga.... very well written.... and then dekhthe hii dekhthe shaam ka waqt aa jaatha hai.. kashish sujal ka intezaar karr rahii hai.. aur jab sujal aatha hai tho kashish sujal ke chehre se uske dil kii khushi pehchaan sakthi kya baat hai.. this is a very good improvement in their rishtha...and then sujal ka apni khushi ka izhaar karna... he telling kashish things like kashish ke bina he would not have achieved the project.. aur aaj kashish ne ek patni hone ka farz bohat hii khoob tarike se nibhaya hai.. i'am very happy kii sujal ko woh contract mil gaya hai.. it is time to party seriously... au phir sujal ka kashish ko hug karna... even kashish pulling sujal closer to herself.. unke is hug mein kuch tho naya ehsaas hai.. woh ehsaas joh unke naye rishthe kii shuruwaat bann ne jaane waali hai.. balle..balle.... i'am toooooooooooooo happyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.... and then kashish aur sujal ka sinha house jaana.. wahaan jaakar yeh baat hona kii kripa dubara maa bann ne waali hai.. yeh baat tho khushiyaan lekar aayi hai.. aur phir jab they try to ask kashish about a kid.. kashish just like a kid says kii agar woh log aise baat karenge tho woh apne ghar chali jayegi.. well mere hisaab se kashish ne aise kaha kyunke woh apni sharam chupana chahthi thi.. waise isse ek baat tho saaf hogaya kashish sujal ke ghar ko apna manne lagi hai.. yippeeee.. time to party.... ab then the next scene.. i mean the next part jahaan.... party hone waali hai contract milne kii khushi mein.. sujal ka pehli baar kashish ke liye gift laakar dena.. aur phir sujal kii hichkichahat, kii na jaane kashish ko woh saree pasand aayega ya nahii.. aur phir woh scene jahaan kashish apni dori nahii baand paa rahii hothi hai and finally she has to ask sujal to do it.. aur sujal ka kashish ko choona... kashish ka having her eyes closed.. sujal ka seeing that and smile karna.. and then saying hogaya.... hyeee.. is mouke par ek gaana yaad aa raha hai mujhko... "it's rocking..yaara kabhi ishq tho karo..." ab tho kashish madam ko bhi apne pyaar par yakeen ho chala hai.. and she has started feeling kii even sujal has feelings for her... this is just awesome... absolutely amazing... then party ka scene.. anjali , sujal, kashish kii baatein.. the teasing which is going on... ohhh..i loved all of this... it is completely super... duper.... sujal ka surprising kashish, by asking her to dance with him.. yeh sujal na, keeps giving kashish sweet surprises... and then sujal, kashish ka woh dance.. this dance was of perfect mutual understanding.. and the song played was also perfect.. apt to the situation..... i loved their dance.... hyeee..hyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.................. then the last sene of the part.. jahaan sujal , kashish se kehtha hai kii his friend is getting married in Amristar.. and he has invited both of them.. then sujal ka kashish se kehna kii he understands if kashish does not want to come... kitna samajtha hai sujal, kashish ko... and then kashish being the goody-goody, sweet wife, says woh sujal ke saath jaayegi....yaaaaaaaaaaayyy... and then kashish kii woh shartein... maann gaye kashish ko bhi... and even sujal agress... kitna pyaara couple hai yeh... in dono ne abhi thak ek dusare se apne pyaar ka izhaar bhi nahii kiya aur yeh haal hai.. na jaane tab kya hoga jab yeh dono ek doosre se apne pyaar ka ikraar kar lenge.. tab tho pyaar kii bouchaar hogi.. aur sujal, kashish us pyaar kii bouchaar mein, bheeg-bheeg jaayenge... anyway very good going... extremely well written parts.... tooo gooddd..
🤪ab dear coming to my guess on the forth coming parts.. i think in the forth coming parts sujal, kashish's trip to Amritsar will begin.. and this journey will be like joh sujal, kashish kabhi nahii bhool paayenge... this journey will give both of them many answers.. to the questions, joh un dono ne apne dil mein chupakar rakhi hui hai... is trip mein sujal, kashish ek doosre ke aur bhi kareeb aayenge... sujal, kashish just need some alone time with each other.. they just need to spend some quality time with each other.. and this trip will provide them the best oppurchunity to be together and spend some quality time together.. i think this will be the trip joh sujal, kashish kabhi apni zindagi mein nahii bhula paayenge... shayad sujal, kashish ke beech saarti durriyaan mitt jaayengi is trip ke douraan, aur woh dono ek doosre se apne pyaar ka izhaar bhii kar denge... so in short according to me this trip will be very eventful..full of masti, dhamaal...and loads of romantic momentsbetween sujal & kashish... so kashish dear kya mera yeh guess sahii hai.. mujhe zaroor batana.. i really want to know if i'am right or wrong...😉 dear next part jaldi se post karna.. i'am waiting for the next part very damn eagerly...😊
🤪ab dear coming to my guess on the forth coming parts.. i think in the forth coming parts sujal, kashish's trip to Amritsar will begin.. and this journey will be like joh sujal, kashish kabhi nahii bhool paayenge... this journey will give both of them many answers.. to the questions, joh un dono ne apne dil mein chupakar rakhi hui hai... is trip mein sujal, kashish ek doosre ke aur bhi kareeb aayenge... sujal, kashish just need some alone time with each other.. they just need to spend some quality time with each other.. and this trip will provide them the best oppurchunity to be together and spend some quality time together.. i think this will be the trip joh sujal, kashish kabhi apni zindagi mein nahii bhula paayenge... shayad sujal, kashish ke beech saarti durriyaan mitt jaayengi is trip ke douraan, aur woh dono ek doosre se apne pyaar ka izhaar bhii kar denge... so in short according to me this trip will be very eventful..full of masti, dhamaal...and loads of romantic momentsbetween sujal & kashish... so kashish dear kya mera yeh guess sahii hai.. mujhe zaroor batana.. i really want to know if i'am right or wrong...😉 dear next part jaldi se post karna.. i'am waiting for the next part very damn eagerly...😊
Shiv Shakti
Anupamaa
Hindi TV Shows
Love Friendship Dating and Relationships
Udne Ki Aasha
324