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Part 40
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PRECAP
Armaan is annoyed wid riddhima :
"then wat did u say??????" but armaan noticed riddhima's gaze switching to some one behind her... getting even more pissed at the fact tht she was hardly even listenin to him... he turned around....

"WHAT THE.....???!!? oh my god.. wats he doing?????" armaan said as he saw rahul
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15 minutes ago
Rahul walked into the cafeteria ... trying to balance himself on his heels, and walked straight for the centre table.
"oh my god !!! i cant believe im doin this!!! Hai bhagwan!!! " rahul murmered to as he realised tht he had grabbed enough attention to last him a life time. Muskaan nudged at her friends next to her who turned around just to burst out laughng at rahul.
Rahul was dressed in a bikini top wid a long flowy indian skirt... and a wid long enough hair to throttle himself with.. whic was somethin he wished he could have done.
Rahul being one of the most popular boys at college... seemed to get more attention."Okay umm... i umm... amm.. dressed like thi.. because.. i " whispereing suddenly " to bring out the woman inside me..."
"KYA????" Atul yelled from the crowd.
"TO BRING OUT THE WOMAN INSIDE ME!!..." rahul yelled... suddenly getting the confidence in himself." aur umm.. is khushi mein... im gonna perform a dance...HIT IT!!!" he said pointing to muskaan ...
mera chain bain sab ujda ,jaalim nazar hata le
mera chain bain sab ujda ,jaalim nazar hata le
barbaad ho rahe hai ji
barbaad ho rahe hai ji
tere apne shaher wale
mera chain bain sab ujda ,jaalim nazar hata le
meri angdai na toote tu aaja
meri angdai na toote tu aaja
kajra re kajra re tere kare kare naina
kajra re kajra re tere kare kare naina
ho kajra re kajra re tere kare kare naina
ho mere naina mere naina mere naina judwa mere naina
kajra re kajra re tere kare kare naina
Rahul twisted and turned.. shaking his hips and flaunting the boys in his moves .... making everyone crack up.. guys were blowing whistles and muskaan was literally rolling on the floor wtching rahul dance.
"oh my god... muskaan ur a genious " karishma whispered in between her laughs
" i no.. i cant believe he is dancng on the very dance he made fun of... last year during which we danced on during the college fest...."
"good one!!!!!"

surmain se likhe tere wade, aankhon ki jabani aate hain
mere rumalo pe lab tere ,bandh ke nishani jaate hain
(ho teri baaton main kimam ki khusbu hain
ho tera aana bhi garmiyon ki lu hain )
ho tera aana bhi garmiyon ki lu hain
aaja tute na tute na aangdai
ho meri angdai na tute tuu aaja
ho meri angdai na tute tuu aaja
kajra re kajra re kajra re tere kare kare naina
kajra re kajra re kajra re tere kare kare naina
ho kajra re kajra re tere kare kare naina
ho kajra re kajra re tere kare kare naina
ho kajra re kajra re tere kare kare naina
ho mere naina mere naina mere nain main chupke rehna
ho kajra re kajra re tere kare kare naina
after the second verse... rahul bent down.. exhausted... while everyone cheered him on to continue... "tired... n-no wayyy.... c-cant continue...."
"awwwwwwwwwwwww....." muskaan yelled... making rahul stand up straight again...
"that reminds me.. now some serious business.... maine yeh sab.... sirf muskaan ke liye kiya tha... let me make tht clear..." rahul announced.. as he stepped of the table.. removing his wig.. muskaans face dropped..
Wait a minute.... he isnt supposed to do this!!!
"im here... to crrect all my errors... strting wid the time i made fun of a dance.... " rahul shrugged... " haan... aur yeh... magazines.... muskaan hates playboy..." Atul handed rahul some magzines..
"insult to women ryte???? muskaan.... they are outta my life... i promise..."
"OH HOY!!!!" some one whistled as rahul adjusted his fake bra...taking off the paddings..
"aur mujhe yah bhi kehna hai ki.. PLAYBOY ek achi cheez nahi hai....." rahul said... pulling up his skirt again for the fifteenth time.. "so.. i am...um...well... uh.. g-going t-to take thislighter.. and burn this!" he said taking out his magazine and setting it out on fire...
guys everywhere were laughing.....
"arrre... u didnt want it to give it to me na???" some guy yelled out just to b hit playfully by a female neighbour..
Rahul bowed down.. as the whole cafeteria burst into laughter... Muskaan stared in disbelief.. wat was he ding..
hai ram.... if hes ruining his rep... WHY AM I INvOLVED!!!!!
"And i di this all... for you muskaan... " immediately.. the entire cafeteria stopped laughing and turned to face muskaan....
shit....everyones looking at me.... omg... ur coming closer to me in a womans outfit??? noooooooooooooooo
"im sorry sweety if i hurt you.... " rahul said as he pulled off his short top and wore his GUY shirt again... "forgive me plz???"
"rahull... wat are u doin??? ur trya embarress me too???" msukaan hissed
"both....." rahul said as he came even closer to her... wearing a red shirt and skirt below.
"RAHUL!!! " muskaan hissed as he came even closer...
"sweetheart..... will u forgive me???" Rahul said bendign down on one knee...
"iske baad?????? KABHI NAHI!!! " muskaan frowned... making rahul grin even wider....
"yahi problem hai.... u dont give up and neither do i.... cmon sweety...." rahul said holding her hand tightly
"dream!!!"
"theek hai... to mein yahan hi bethta rahoonga ...why not?"
"ur crazy...!!!"
"crazy bout you...!!!" rahul whispered making the cafetria shout.. muskaan blushed...
" theek hai.. fine....i forive you... khush... now ab yeh sab natak band karo!!!" rahu got up to hug muskaan...
suddenly everyones attention turned... Armaaan and Riddhima stood near the door arguing in full swing..
"Armaan... wait!!!!!!!!! " riddhima yelled as she ran behind him and out of the cafeteria...
"wat was tht???" eevryone seemed to whisper just as riddhima left the hall...
"rahul?? armaan ko kya hua??" muskaan whisperd... rahul shrugged confused as ever....
how many things could happen in one day????
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"armaan.... Will u just listen to me for a second..." Rids said huffing and puffing behind him." you no wat.. come here... rids said pulling him to a near by storage room...
Armaan motioned to leave but then riddhima cornered him against the wall tightly...
"ab batao ... kya hua?? wat did chirag say????"
"you no wat rids??? im seriously not in the mood for this... so give me a break plz.." Armaan mummbld as he tried to push her away, which just made riddhima grip him down even tighter..
"just tell me wat he said! all i told him was tht i wa-"
"forgt it riddhima.. i dont wanna hear anythin... i told you.. im not in the mood..!!!!" Armaan siad pushin her to a side and walking out of the room... leaving riddhima dumbfounded at the spot
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"Rids where wee you??OMG!! ive been looking all over for you!!!!Oh gosh.. ur ccring??? " muskaan said rushing over to her when she finally found her near her lcker.
Instantly ridhima threw her hands around her crying silently.."kya hua??" muskaan said stroking her hair
"is it armaan?" riddhima nodded "because of chirag???"
"bataya nahi??? i mean chirag ko???"
"bataya tha...."
"to phir?? kya hua???
"armaan baat sunne ke liye tyaar kaha hai???? kehta hai ki.. chirag told him soemthin this moring..." riddhima sobbed..pulling herself off muskaan's shoulder
"kya kaha"
"bataya nahi..."
"to phir ek hi rasta hai.. chirag ko batana.. ask chirag to tell armaan the truth...ask him to tell hi bout ritu! if he deosnt listen to you he'll listen to chirag....After all he is his friend ryte??"
"you no wat.... ill do tht!!" riddhima said bravely,,..." kaha hoga???
"pata nahi.. lekin jaldi karna.... before lectures strt..." muskaan called out as riddhima went in search of him..
As riddhima searced for chirag she heard people whispereing arund her.. she suddenly realised tht her scene wid armaan had been a bit too public.. she had been so engrossed in telling armaan the truth tht she has been oblivious to her surroundings... suddenl she spotted a familiar face
"hey Ritu.. have you seen chirag???"
"oh hey.. ummm" ritu said trying hard to recollect..." he was in the basketball court.. he still might be there... try there..."
"ok thankz.." rids said running off to find hm.. before ritu ould even say another word...
"hey armaan.... wats up....wat ahppened you look tense..." Ritu said looking at armaan leaning against his locker..
"oh.. yea sorta.. can u tell me where riddhima went...i eman do you no????/"
"she went to te basketball court..... oh crap... i forgt my note book.... gotta go.. by armaan..." Ritu said waving goodbye hastily..
"What was dat armaan?????" Atul burst out the second Ritu was out of sight...
evidently he had been speaking about wat had happend in the cafeteria hall.." oh.. dont ask...!!" armaan sighed heavily..
"alright... then wats up??? u and riddhima...???"
"i hate this dude!!!!"
"wats it bout???"
"riddhima and chirag......soemthings happening..."
"wat did she say bout it??"
"wat will she say??? she said no..... "
"did rids tell you everythin??"
"no..." atul raise his eyebrows.." i didnt let her...look wats the point... ive herd everythin i need to already..."
"seriously just go talk her... dude shes not tht kinda gurl...u havent seen anythin"
"Alright.. fine.. ill go..." Armaan said weakly as he let himself be pushed all the way to the court.... for soem reason he knew it was he right thing to do... although he just wanted to stay angry and let it heal over time.
"tht good for nothin.............." Armaan muttered under hs breath... just as he approached the auditorium... Armaan saw chirag and riddhima talkin to one another as they sat next to each other on the bleachers.... just as armaan left the audi... Riddhima caught his gaze.. and asked chirag to run over to him... it was either now or never
Armaan walked fast enough to escape contact wid chirag...
"so wat happened??tht was really fast" Atul asked as armaan neared him...
"dont even ask...and i SAW it...wid my oen eyes!!!"
"can i stil??did u atleast talk to her???" Armaan raised his eyebros as though atul ah said the most ridiculous thing...
Just then some one tapped his shoulders..."hey armaan... i need to talk to you.."
"not now chirag....!!! seriously not now!!!its better off u back off... " armaan said trying to stare him down...
" Ok... Armaan... you left me no choice..... but i love...." even before he could complete the sentence chirag was knockd down by Armaan.
Riddhima who came was near by rushed to them
"Armaan!!! Tum paagal ho kya???" Riddhima burst out crying and knelt down to help the dazed chirag..
"IM CRAZZY??? what bout you??? huh??" armaan yelled.. unable to control tht temper from within him...
"what is wrong wid you.." riddhima was crying now.. unabe to eblieve tht he was the same armaan who made her feel so good last night...
"yea well wat about me???Stop playing around me... stop cheaing on me.." Armaan yeleld...
"what the hell is wrong wid you.. i never cheated on you....im not tht kinda person... you no tht.."
"i dont tink i no you any more... i ont think iw anna no you any more..." Muskaan rushed over... along wid rahul.... staring at them.. no one could even think of wat to say to ease the tension.. no one rellay knew wat was happenning... except for muskaan.
"A-Armaan wat was tht for... ??" chirag said rubbing his eye which armaan had blackened.
"suck it chirag..." Arman said as he was about to give chirag another punch to remember...befoe he was pulled back by atul and rahul.
"armaan... Ritu loves me!!! im sorry but we are togetehr..."
"no she..... Wh-WHAT???"
"she loves me rmaan... and we are goin out... "
"itu..." Armaan said looking at riddhima sobbing beside chirrag,,,
"an-and u cant take her away from me.... i can fight too..." chirag continued rather weakly.
"what bout riddhima.."
" she told me she loves you... but tht wasnt why she set me up wid er.. ritu sked her too.. its not her fault.... i swear...."
"wat bout you and riddhima..???"
"look.. armaan tht was a phase... we both werent ready.. and besides.. i have ritu " Chirag continued.. trying to make a point..
"wat are you talkin bout???" rahul suddenly blurted.. confused
"Armaan loves ritu...."
"what???? " rahul, Atul and muskaan blurted togetehr...
"no chirag... not even close... " mukaaan finally said....
"i-im sorry ch-chirag " armaan said helping chirag back to his feet.... "i ththought u and ri-ridhhima were... and .. riddhima.... im.. im really sorry.. i shouldve listened to you.. " armaan said bending down next to her... as riddhima had straightened herself..
"dont be.. " riddhima said coldly..
"please baby.... " armaan said getting up as well
"peeche raho...how did i no u were gonna do tht??" riddhima said backing away from him..
"riddhima im really sorry.... it was an honest mistake..."
"oh really??? thts why u ignored me all this while... u made a big scen in the cafeteria.. now u knock down some one.. and make an even bgger scene..!?!! this is wat u always do!!! u hurt me.. and then apologise!! i said peecha raho!!! pas aane ko hi mat sochna... " Riddhima said as she felt a fresh new set of tears fall across her face..
Armaan walked closer to her "i-im sorry.... but but i love you......" he whispered..
"b-but i hate you.." riddhima sid as she ran followed by muskaan who knew tht riddhima needed her the most now...
iddhima ra way leaving armaan behind in the crowd teary-eyed....
what had he done???
Edited by muzic_chick247 - 17 years ago
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Oh awesome update!
Oh poor Chirag
Rahul was soo cute 😃😆
Plz PM me next time u cont
Edited by sweet_JAY_FAN - 17 years ago

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