FF 'THE DEAL'prt 1 pg 1

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Posted: 17 years ago
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HEY GUYS i'm knew to this forum and yet i have read many fanfics well i got a dream last night so i thought of writing a fan fic on it well i'm knew to this stuff so if there are mistakes please forgive and forgeto😭 but opinions are always welcome ya plz don't mind ma spelling mistakes.

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~ SUMMARY~

armaan and riddhima friends😆~fall in love😳~armaan rich bussiness woman's son😉~ridz orphan😭~talented artiast😊~armaan's mom against ridz~sweet moments😳😳~decide to get married👏👏👏~ammy to tell his mom🤢🤢🤢~mom and ammy fight😡~armaan says lets get married😃~not willing to marry till ammy's mom agrees😭😭~ridz talks to armi's mom~buh in vain~finally decide to get married😊~horrible accident~armi in coma~😭😭😭~riddz loses her face expect her lips😭😭😭~ridzz and armi mom deal~ammy think riddz dead~armi sad~ridzz sad~ridzz plastic sugery~rahoooooool fall in luv wid rizd~muski with amy~finally meet after 5 yrs~ammy not reconise ridz~ridz sad~armi gets to know da thuth~fight wid mother~mother sad~armi meet ridz and tell her da truth~wat will ridzz say??

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to know more please comment and tell wether u like it min 6 comments i will begin da story. i would also like to tell other FF writers dat i am inspired by u all.don't know ur names browmbutt, catwoman,jia,music_chic,afifa,rhea,sonia,jenny,sandhya,inshi ra,jasnoor,shifali,

kanu,kdrs,bheegi,swansea,dramaholic,veildbeauty,naina,tia,an kita,pinky

hina,numera,ravishing_gal,sheenu....AND NOW MY FAV SPLN,D101

you'll all gr8 writters i hope i do justice do my readers and all the FF writers

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PART-1

the early morning sun streamed through the window on to th bed where a beautiful girl with ivory skin lay asleep slowly she opened her long lashed emrald green eyes as her long black hair shone in the sun she had a very attractive face with preety eyes sexy pink lips and skin as soft as velvet it was early may with perfect weather not too hot not to cold the flowers were just blooming just as her life slowly at its pace but just as she wanted it 2

slowly she got up and a smile broke on her face thinking about today,TODAY *sigh* it was a big day HER day today only if everything would go perfectly PREFECT wass a word used very little in her life how she wished she would have a faqmily who would be there for her at her happy momments sad moments and she was lost in her own world when she heard the alarm ring .........

she picked up the alarm switched it off as her eyes fell on the time she stopped smiling as her eyes widened it was 10:00am and she had to reach her show at11:30 omg she was soo late she jumped out of bed and ran into the shower..........

she came out of the shower looking breathtakin she was wearing black pants wid a red colour halter neck top wid little make-up including light blush,kajal ,mascra,and a tintg of gloss her hair left open curled at the ends and killer black stillotes though she was not rich she looked beautiful as her dress showed her curves at the write places😳😛 she ran out of her house and into a cab to reach her gallery as soon as possible

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in an other house in a room a rather messey one lay one hot hunk😳😳 fast in his sleep wrapped in silk sheets 😳😳

'ARMAAAAAAAAAAAN yar get ur ass out of bed man i know u were drunk last night but u promised to accompany me and trina to the new art gallery'said atul who was carryind his rose plant in one hand and a glass ohf water in the other😆😆😆

'ya champ i am takin a shower' replied armaan lying on the bed🥱 with his eyes closed not knowing about his presence in his room😆😆

atul puored water on armaan as armaan woke up wid a start rolling down from the bed and on to a pile of magzines😆😆 only wid his boxer shorts😳😳(ya....i know hes so hot man *sigh* welli'm not giving any disp coz u and i will start blushin😳😳....alot and we can imagine him like dat)

armi'champ is dat a way to wake anybody up' 😡😡

champ'i know but its perfect for you'😉😉

armi 'aa my head hurts'

champ'it will after all u were sooooooooo drunk and jus to wake u up i wasted so muvh water'😆😆

armi'ya one glass'

champ'get up u promised me'

champ'i cleant this room last night and jus look at it(picking up his mess)😲 and wat to i get in return here see my pen and this is my fav novel.........."

chanp jus kept on yapping and cleaning not knowing dat armi aldery left the room to take a shower😆😆

when armi came back he found champ still talkin to himself

armi'champ you'll be worse than a wife'

champ'ya write see i cleant ur whole room and wat do i get in return not even a thank you'😆😆

armi'thanks'

champ'wellcome'

champ'wat are u doing in ur towel(ahh those muscles kk CHILL!!!)😳😳 OTHER GIRLS WILL FAINT LOOKIN AT U NOT ME!!!😆😆go to ur room and change

armi'(hands on his ears) champ ur in my room'😕😕

champ'ok srry(meekly) but get ready fast'😭😭

armi 'ya sureeeeee'😊😊

armi changes into a rfed silk shirt wid a few buttons opened and a black suit wid black pants and shoes😎

armi'champ u can come in'

champ'ya...ya comin

atul enters his room only to find it in a mess agaiin atul gets angry😡😡😡 and starts mumbling again he jumps on armi and the both start wrestling armaan sitting on top of atul and atul in tears😭😭

armi'ha ha seen never fight wid armaan the gr8 otherwise u'll repent it'😆😆

champ'srry sob sob sob'😭😭

armi'getting off atul srry ya'

armi'i promise after we come back i will clean the whole room😉😉(getting off atul)

champ'promise'(wiping off hi tears )aww

armi'promise'

champ(lookingat the time)'OMG were getting sooooooo late lets go'

armi'ya surrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeee'

they both leave the house armi not knowing that he will sooooon meet his lady love😳😳.........

well i hope this was long enough and also i hope that you'll like it and i know it was very bad so please critzie freely and help me improve i will update as soon as possible please comment

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Posted: 17 years ago
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😭 😭 😭 no replys
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Luvely concept!

Do begin soon and plz PM me 2!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sounds good cnt w8 to read but lol u just told us everything
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice but why did you tell us everything??? Suspense kaayam rakhna chahiye na!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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woow sounds gd
lkin 4wrd to readin it 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice ff
cant wait to read more
can u plz pm me when u update the next part 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: kdrs

Nice but why did you tell us everything??? Suspense kaayam rakhna chahiye na!!!

srry😭😭 well tis ma first FF so got a bit to excited😳😳😳 in tellin da story srry again i hope i won't do it and thank you fr trying to improve me 👏👏

u know wat i feel weird is i am saying srry as if i have commited a murder 😆😆😆neways srry

and srry if i am boring u with srrys i am used to sayin srrys

-vanessa &nbs p; &nbs p;

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Posted: 17 years ago
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srry for the delay i will be updating in sometime 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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no replys guys i think i should not continue 😭 😭 😭

-vanessa

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