~Yeh Ishq Nahi Aasaan~ (Updated - Pg. 24) - Page 11

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Posted: 17 years ago
AMYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!
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I m sooo sorry gurlz....I didn't tell u....Nahi bata ne ke liye maafi... 😭
Lekin I hv summer classes/camps @ Rutgers Univ. (My college) I hv 2 b here for a month....Will b bk 2 my home on 1st August.........But don't wrry I found Comp. Lab so I can come here evryday and post my parts........Lekin mere laptop dorm mein nahi chalta hai.. 😡 ..And mera schedule bahout tight hai.........Mujhe break fast subah 6:45 ko karna hota hai, lunch @ 12 and dinner @ 4:45 (Can u believe dat? and d food iz just 🤢 ).........Agar mein wahan per tym pe nahi pohnchi toh khana bhi nahi milta...My lyf suxxxxxx.........Plz bear wid me gurlz....I found this lab now....I will come here evryday 2 post my parts, okiez? Kaal meri birthday hai but i think IT WILL B THE WORST BIRTHDAYYYY OF MY LYF.......Now I hv 2 go to my Pre-clac class........Bye....c u later.... 😭 😭 😭

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey yaar amy....yeh kya ho gaya...but i hope u will keep updating for us 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awwwwh my poor amy! Don't worry Hun everything will be okie:)
awwwwww please don't ruin ur birthday! Make the best of it happy
early birthdayyy:)(k) hope to c u soon:d
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ohh no amy...ye kia ho gaya......shux maan......no problem...koi baat nahi..studies are more important...go on...thats okay.....atleast we'll get to see ur parts everyday...thank God u found a computer....anywayz a BIG HAPPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU FROM ME IN ADVANCE*....LOTS AND LOTS OF HUGGIES AND KISSES FROM ME*
TAKE CARE ⭐️ ..HAVE A BLAST ON UR BIRTHDAY
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~Part 12~

Recap:

R: Arman ek maa jaan jati hai kaab apne bacche ko bhook lagti hai....

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A: APNE EXCUSES DENA BANDH KARO RIDHIMAAA..... 😡

R: Arman? 😲

A: Jus STOP it Ridhima.....STOP ittt 😡

Itne mein door bell bajti hai.....It's Shashank.....Arman opens the door....Baade gusse mein hai........

A: Papa aap?

S: Haan kaise hoo bete? Mein woh Sanjeevniii.....Arre??? Yeh awaz kaisi? Pari roo rahi hai kya?

A: Jee papa....Kaab se roo rahi hai.......Aab toh 25 mins hoo chuke hai....Ridhima ne usse feed karwaya lekin woh aab tak nahi chup hoo rahi? 😭

S: Wht? 😲 Chalo uper chalo....Mujhe usse dekhne do?

Shashank & Armi runs up staris......

R: (Hugs him) Papa Pari ko dekho na? Roye jaa rahi hai? 😭

A: (Mad @ Ridhima) 😡 😡 😡

S: Ruko beta usse mujhe check kar ne do.....

After 8 mins

S: Lagta hai usse pet (Stomach) mein dard hai.....Shayad issi wajah seee....

A: Toh kya karee papa....

*Armidz* dono ghabra jaate hai.............

P: Uwaaaa..............uwaaaaa.......

R: Baas karo betaaaa........Mujhse aur dard dekha nahi jaata tumhara?

S: Shayad khana tym per na milne ki wajah se YA phir bahout khana khane ki wajah se yeh hoo sakta hai?

R: (Starts cryin) Yeh meri galti hai.... 😭 😭 😭

A: (Can't take it anymore 😡 ) KAHAN THA NA MEIN NE? LEKIN MERI BAAT TOH KABHI SUNTI NAHI? 😡 😡

S: 😲 Arman beta shant hoo jao? Ridhima tumhe uska khayal rakhna chahiye na? Itni samaj hai ki nahi tumme ki usse sahi tym per feed karwana padta hai? (Shashank & Arman both r mad @ Ridhima)

R: ******shocked******😲 😲 ***Shocked***

S: Arman tum jaldi se yeh daway le kar aao....Quick.......I think usse loose motion bhi hoo sakti hai.....Or she might throw up....Aur agar essa hua toh hamein gluclose ke bottles chadha ne honge.....Woh bahout weak hoti jaa rahi hai......Her condition iz nt gud Dr. Arman......Hurry up!

A: (Sooooooooooooooooooo sad) Kya? 😭 Papa usse kuch hoga toh nahi na?? (Goes near Pari) Tum theek toh hona???.... 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

R: ............ 😲 😲 (Hv no words) ***Shocked** 😲

S: Dr. Arman abhi baat karne ka waqt nahi....jaldi se dawayi le kar aao......Warna?

A: Nahi papa......Essa mat kahooooo.... 😭 😭 😭

Arman jaldi se gaadi nikal ta hai aur medicines lene jaata hai.....Sooo worried abt his daughterrr.....

Arman thinks "Agar tumhe kuch hoo gaya na Pari toh mein....." 🤢 Agge kuch nahi bolta aur tezzi se gaadi chalata hua jaata haii....

Udhar Ridhima ke koi hosh nahi....She doesn't know how 2 react on this situaion

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~Part 13~

Shashank calls everybody.....Saare family members wahan per aa jate hai.....They r shocked 2 c Pari lyk dattt....Uske halat dekh kar saab BAHOUT paresh ho jate hai.....Pure ghar ka mahol sirf ek ghante mein badal gayaaa 💔 😕 😭

Arman jaldi se daawai lekar aata hai.....Shashank calls another Doctor since he doesn't understand wht's going on in her bodyyyyy....The doc. iz more experienced than Shashak.....He quickly gives her injection wid the white medicine in ittt.....(The medicine dat Arman bought)

Arman can't c her jaan lyk dis....He cries his heart out.....😭 😭

AN: Ridhima tum uska khayal nahi rakh sakti thi? 😡 😡 Ek choti se baachi ko yeh saab sehna pad raha hai tumhari wajah se? 😡 How can u b so careless?

R: **********Shocked************

New Doc: (2 Armi) Hopefully app ki beti thodi hi der mein theek hoo jayegi...Aur agar nahi hui toh we hv 2 brin her 2 the hospital........

A: (Sits on his knees near Pari😒) 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 Kuch nahi hoga tumhe? Tum kahin nahi jaa rahi ho, samjeee? 😭)

Arman pura toot gaya hai...........🥺 💔 Evrybody iz worryin abt Pari

Peddy: Ridhima tum kar kya rahi thi? 😡 Waisse toh baada khayal rakhti hoo saab ka? Toh Aaj kya hua? 😡

AT: Aab esse baithi hai jaise kuch hua nahi 😡 (Anjee also starts cryin 😭 )

At: Hey Stop ittt Angie.........

(Atul iz d only 1 who can understand Ridhima's feelings ryt now.....)

Atul thinks "Mein tumhare saath hoon Ridhima.....Mein jaanta hoon tum koi galat kaam kar hi nahi sakti......I know iss mein tumhari koi galti nahi"

N: Ridhima tumhe essa nahi karna chahiye tha? 😕

Everybody iz blamin riddz widout knowin wht actually happend 2 Pari?

AT: Nani aap bhi? 😲 Kaam se kaam aap toh uska saath do?

(Riddz iz listenin everythingggg....But doesn't know how 2 react) 😲

A: KYA GALAT KAHA NANI NE? 😡 KHUD KA KHAYAL RAKH NE SE UPER AAYE GI TAAB BACCHI KA KHAYAK RAKHE GI NA? 😡 😡 SAAB TUMHARI WAJAH SE HUA HAI? SUNA TUMNE???? (Pointing towards Riddz) AGAR PARI KO KUCH HUA NA TOH MEIN TUMHEE....

Saab Arman ko esse pehli baar itne gusse mein dekhte hai....No1 dares 2 interfere b/w um...But Atul does

AT: Bass Armannn......... 😡

A: ATUL TU MERE GHAR KE MAMLOO MEIN NAHI PADE TOH BEHTAR HOGA......

S: Hey guyz Come downnn......Dekho Abhi tum dono nahi jante ki tum kya bol rahe hoo....Toh plzzz baad mein baat kar lena.....& Itna shor Pari ke liye aacha nahi hai.........

Ghar ka mahol dekh kar saab ghabra gaate hai......

Atul deere se Ridhima ke paas jata hai....She iz sittin alone in d corner (On d floor.....Sweat se puri gili hoo gayi hai aur ro ro ke kya halat bana di hai usne apni....Atul puts his hand on her shoulder)

A: Dekho Ridhima....

R: (Bahout zor se chilati hai....Louder than Arman) MUJHE KUCH NAHI SUN NA........KUCH NAHI 😡 .........U GET THAT? 😡 MUJHE KISI KI SYMPATHY KI ZAROORRAT NAHI......... 🤢

Evrybody iz shocked including Arman 😲

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~Part 14~

Recap:

Evrybody iz shocked including Arman 😲

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AT: Mein kahan tumhe s......?

R: EK BAAR MEIN SAMAJ NAHI ATTTTAAA TUMHE? 😡 MUJHE KISI SE BAAT NAHI KARNI.........SO 4 GOD'S SHAKE LEAVE ME ALONE.........😡 BAHOUT BADA GHOONA KAR DIYA MEIN NE YEH SOCH KAR KE AAP SAAB MERE SAATH HOO....LEKIN AFSOS 😡 AAJ DEKH LIYA KISI KO MUJH PER YAKIN NAHI HAI.....AAP SOCH BHI KAISE SAKTE HAI KI MERI LA PARWAHI KI WAJAH SE PARI..................CHEE...? (In low vocie) Mein maa hoon uski (Cries) 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 Mein uss per ek ancch bhi nahi......KHAIR U WILL NEVER UNDERSTAND......😭

Atul pats her bk.........

A: Shant hoo jao Ridhima.....

R: 😭 Cries even moreee 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Every1 feels bad ki un hono Ridhima ke saath essa bartav kiyaaa.......

Ridhima gets up 4rm there & tries 2 leave but b4 she leaves the room, Anjie holds her hand......Lekin Ridhima uske haath ko zor se hataa deti hai.......

R: Di? Ms. Anjali Shashank Gupta...Apko toh kaabhi samaj mein nahi aayega ki maa ka pyaar kya hota hai.....So don't even go thereeeee DI...... (So angryyy....She doesn't know wht she iz saying) 😡 😡 😡

AT: Riddz mein to baas? 😲

R: Jus keep ur mouth shut DI........ 😡 😡 😡 Mujhe apki koi bhi baat nahi sun ni......Apne kabhi meri baat suni jo mein aap ki baat suno? 😡 😡 😡

S: Yeh kiss tarah se baate kar rahe hoo tum dono? 😡

R: Kyun bura laga papa? (Sarcasticlly) Itne mein bura laag gaya? 🤢 Toh mujh per kya biti hoogi itna saare inzalm lag ne ke baad? Ek baar bhi socha aapne? Oh Yesss! Aap kaise soch te apni STEP DAUGHTER KE BAARE MEIN? Apni beti se phursad mile taab na?

All: 😲 😲

Padma raises her hand 2 slap Ridhimaaa...Lekin Dr. S stops herrrr......

R: Rook kyun gayi? Mariye na? Ek maa hokar ek maa ki baat nahi samaj payi? Kaisi maa hai aap?

Padma luks down.......Feels guilty 😕

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Originally posted by: meow23

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! superb n amzng.. jus luvd it.... 👏

Thnx hun

@Ram: I m glad dat u r lykin my FF

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: tina sehgal

hey ammy.............first of all congrats to u for ur first ff.............i'm so sryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy for replying so late...........ur parts r awesum, fabolus,superb.........i don't have words to describe......................plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue it soon...............
waise how u right so excellent & awesum parts i really don't know?????

Awwwww Tina I write so well coz u guyzzz support me......So it comes 4rm Dil se...U know 😳 i write it only 4 u my cutties ..............Stay tuned for my nxt parts.....keepin readin my FF

Tc

Amy

Originally posted by: sweet-niz

ok i had to lke catch up wiv da last4 parts
n luvin it its greta lkin 4wrd to da fight doh lool
c wot happens cnt wait
luvin ur wrk
updte sooon

Thnx dearrrrrrrrrrrr 😃

Originally posted by: loving_bird

wowwwwwwwwwwww! 👏
superb amazing parts
very nice ff updates ammy
&
promo is very goodddddddddd 👏

Thank you 😳 😛 😃

Originally posted by: ArmaanRidhima

omg all the 3 parts r AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
i luuuuuuuv them
1st part & the 2nd part r really cute & sweet
3rd part is gud too but its bit scary coz the huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuge fyt is on the way
the promo omg! yeh toh Dil tham dene wala promo hai 😕
aage parts ein pata nahi kaunsa Mahabharat hone wala hai

plz cum bak soo,i can't wait for the next part


😆 😆 Do u rem. how much I scared u last week? 😆 Hahahaaa....Poor Manpreet 😕 lol......I posted d fyt......Now read all d parts and lemme know ki kaisi thi? 😆 I know I know u don't lyk fyts but I think u will lyk this 1............Coz yeh bahout bahout bahout badi fyt thi I mean Hai...........Aur cute hone mein bahout der lage gi.... 😆 😉 Thnx 4 d sweet comments....😳

Edited by cute14us28amy - 17 years ago

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