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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 part 👏

plz coninue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanku guyzz for ur commentz..aray aray Kavya ko itna bura bhala bhi mat kaho aap log yaar heheh..well heres da next part hope u guyz will like it n yeah do comment plzzzz....

Friend : kya tere liyeh yeh sab mazaq hai...tu kissi bhi larki k sath kuch bhi ker sakhta hai ..

Kavya : kisi bhi larki nahi sirf Anjali k saath...wat does she think of herself..ab pata chale ga mujhse panga liya tha na us ne ..

Friend : is wajah se tu ne us ki izzat k sath ...tu ne us ko barbaad kerdia...

(One of Anjali's friend was listening this ...aur yeh sab record ker k woh chali jaati hai )

Kavya (all shocked) : kya baqwas ker raha hai ..

Friend : kya tu ne Anjali ka rape nahi kia haan... tu is hadh tak kaisay gir sakhta hai ..

Kavya : tumhara dimagh theek hai ...meine to Anjali ki presentation k notes chori....matlab Anjali ka rape...

Kavya apne dost ko pakarta hai ..aur kehta hai .. : KAHAN HAI ANJALI..BATAO MUJHAY

Friend : wo ..wo City Hospital mein Kashish bhi hai us k saath..

Kavya runs towards da hospital...

tab tak wo larki Kashish k paas pauhanch chuki hoti hai ..jis ne Kavya k friend ki batein sunni theen...

Anj's Friend : Kashish Di yehi hai ...yahi hai Kavya Garewal ...

Kashish Kavya k paas aati hai ...n slapz him...TIIIIISSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHH

Kashish : kya milaa tumhe ek larki ki zindagi barbaad ker k haaan ...jab bhi Anjali mujhay tumhare bare mein batati thi ...to mujhhay lagta tha k tum ek achay per thode shararti se larkay ho...meine kabhi nahi socha tha k tum itne girray hue niklo ge Mr Kavya Garewal..!! huh!!

Kavya : aap..

Kashish : plzz ...ek meherbani kerdo hum per ...yahan se chale jao...

Kavya : magar ap..

Kashish : plzz (us k saamne haath jorti hai )

Kavya wahan se chala jaata hai ...

Kashish wahan roti rehti hai...

Kashish to one of ANjali's friend : tum Anjali ka khayal rakhna mein abhi aayi ...

Kashish ghar jaati hai ..

Prerna all worried : Kashish kahan reh gayi thi tum...kya hua Anjali ka kuch pata chala ..kahan hai wo tumhare saath nahi aayi .?

Kashish ko kuch samaj mein nahi a raha hota ...woh roye jaa rahi hoti hia ..

Prerna : kya hua Kashish ...kuch to bolo kahan hai Anjali ..

Kashish : Ho..Hos..Hospital...

Prerna : KYAAAA..?(hell shocked)

Kashish : ha..haaan..

Prerna : kya hua usse ?

Kashish : mama wo...

Prerna : bolo KAshish ...

Kashish : ra...rape!!

Prerna k pairon talay zameen nikal jaati hai ....and she losts her concious...woh behosh ho jaati hai ...

Kashish : MAMA....uthein mama plzz mama...

Phir Prerna ko bhi hospital le ker jaaya jata hai ...

Doctor : i m sorry...aap ki ma comma mein chali gayi hain...

Kashish pooori tarah tooot jaati hai ...us se lagta hai jaisay us ki zindagi khatam ho gayi hai...

Nurse : Miss Kashish ...aap ki behan ko hosh aa gaya hai ..aap chahein to us se mil sakhti hain ..

Kashish Anjali k pass jati hai ...Anjali apni nazrein Kashish se nahi mila rahi hoti..

Kashish consoles Anjali..

Kashish : tum kyun nazar chura rahi ho haan...tumhari kya galti hai is mein..?

Anjali (with tears in her eyes) : Di...mein ..

Kashish : chup...kuch nahi sunna mujhay..

Anjali : Di..mama??

Kashish burst out crying...: Comma!!

Anjali (shocked) : Kya...DI nahi ..aisa nahi hosakhta..

kashish Hugs Anjali...

Anjali : Di ab hum kya..?

Kashish : pata nahi ...

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Veena : Sujal dekho na Kavya ko kya ho gaya hai ...na kuch keh raha hai ..na kha raha hia ...aur na hi kissi larki se baat ker raha hai ..

Sujal : kya...? mein dekhta hun usse..

Sujal Kavya k paas jata hai ..

Sujal : aur bhayi ...kahan gayab hain aap aaj kal..?

Kavya didn't answer..

Sujal : aray kya ho gaya hai mere bhai ko..?

Kavya hugz Sujal...

Kavya (crying) : Bhaiya mujh per ek ilzaam hai..

Sujal : ilzaam kaisa ilzaam?

Kavya : rape??

Sujal : (shocked ) : kyaaaaaaaaa?

Kavya : haan..

SUjal : kis ka ?

Kavya : ANJALI...

Sujal : kyaaaaaaaaa? kya Kavya tu ne sach mein ..

Kavya : (crying) nahi bhaiya ...meine aisa kuch nahi kia...wo mujh per ghalat ilzaam laga rahi hain...

Sujal : kaun?

Kavya : Kashish ...Kashish Sinha

Sujal becharay k jaisay saaray armaan toot jaate hain ...as he know Kashish ..

Sujal : Kavya ager tum ne waqai mein kuch nahi kia hai ...to koi tumhara kuch nahi bigaar sakta..yeh tum se mein Sujal Garewal keh raha hun...lekin ager tumne aisa kuch kia hai ...to tumhe sab se pehlay saza denay wala mein honga yaad rakhna...

yeh keh ker Sujal wahan se chala jaata hai ..

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Yeh khabar har jagah pauhanch chuki hoti hai k Anjali k saath aisa hua hai ..

At the college ..

Principal : Sorryy Anjali aap ko yeh college chorna hoga..

Anjali : per Sir..

Principal : i m sorryy...hum ek rape victom ko apne college mein nahi rakh sakhte..humein bhi to apni izzat k baare mein sochna hai ..

Kashish : dekh li aap ki choti soch Sir...I m sorryy to say..per aap jaisa girra hua insaan meine apni zindagi mein nahi dekha...chalo Anjali..

Kashish Anjali ko wahan se le ker chali jaati hai ..

Anjali : Di...kab taq bachayein gi aap mujh ko ...yeh baat to sach hi hain na k mein ek rape victom..

Kashish : shut uppp....tum behan ho meri...tumhe aisay hi kaisay chor sakhti hun mein ..

Anjali : us Kavya ka maqsad pura ho gaya ...huh mujhay college se bhi nikal dia gaya aur ...(starts crying)

Kashish : rone se kya hoga Anjali...

Anjali : per Di...

Kashish : us ek insaan ki wajah se hamarii saari khushiaan ek pal mein chali gayin...bhagwan us ko kabhi khush nahi rehnay de ga..us ka pura parewaaar aisay hi daur se guzre ga jis se hum guzar rahe hain ...tum fiker mat kero...bhagwan insaaaf kere ga hamare saath...

Kashish then hugs Anjali...aur donon rone lagti hain ...

Anjali : ab hum kya kerein ge..

Kashish : mujhay job dhundni hogi...

Kashish aur Anjali har jagah naukri ki talash mein bhatakti rehti hain ...

per Us haaadse ki wajah se donon mein se kissi ko bhi job nahi miltiii...

Finally Kashish Garewal Group OF INDUSTRIES mein aati hai...usse nahi pata hota k yahan ka boss Sujal hai ..

Kashish : Sir may i come in?

abhi sirf Sujal ki back nazar aa rahi hoti hai ..

Sujal : yeah come in ..

Kashish : Sir is se pehlay aap mera interview lena shru kerein...mein aap se yeh kehna chahti hun..k mein wahi Kashih Sinha hun...jo..

Sujal ek dum se palat ta hai ...

they both kept on luking each other..

Kashish ( interupts) : ahh..mein wo.

Sujal : ji..ji ..

Kashish : i mean ..mera interview lenay se ager ap ka time zaya ho to..

Sujal : nahi nahi ...aap jo bhi hon...jo bhi kerti hun..mujhay bas aap ki qualifications dekhni hain..

Kashish (impressed) : ji sir ye lijiyeh (handsover da file to Sujal )

Sujal : hmmm....Congrats u r appointed..

Kashish (happy) : thanku so much...

Sujal (to himself) : shuker mein yeh muskurahat laanay mein kamyab ho gaya..

Kashish wahan se jaa hi rahi hoti hai ..k receptionist Sujal se kehti hai : Sir aap k liyeh Kavya sir ka phone hai ..

Kashish k kadam ruk jaatay hain ..

Sujal : us se kaho mein thodi der mein usse call back kerta hun..

Kashish : achaa matlab aap Sujal Garewal hain ...Kavya Garewal k bhaiii....aap apne bhai ki ghalti hum per ahsaan ker k chupana chah rahe the...

kitnay ghatiya insaan hain aap...tabhi mein kahun..aisa kaun ho sakhta hai..jisse sirf meri qualifications dekhni hon...aap to huh....jitni mein aap k bhai se nafrat kerti hun na ...us se dugni nafrat mujhay aap se hai ...Bhagwan aap jaisa insaaan kabhi na banaye..jis k paas dil hi na ho...dusron k jazbaat aur izzat koi mainay nahi rakhti na aap k liyeh...bhagwan ne bohat paisa diya hai na aapko...lekin meine aap jaisa gareeb insaan aaj tak nahi dekha...huh...

yeh sab kuch sunna k Kashish wahan se chali jaati ha

Sujal kuch nahi keh pata ..

*iMan..

Edited by beauty_queen - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
I knew Kavya ne kuch nahi kiya.....mera guess sahi nikla 😆 😆 😆 !!

Kashish to bewajah sujal pe bhadak gayi !! Poor Sujal! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice part 👏 .bt really kashish to bina soche samjhe hi shuru hogayi 😆 ...........i hope ye lariyi jayadi lambi na chale..............plz coninue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank god kavya is innocent... 😊 Wonderful part 👏 Very eager to knw wht happens next..Plzz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey very nice part......i am so happy to know that kavya is not the one....but i am so sad that kashish and sujal misunderstand each other..😭..i hope ki jaldi se sab kuch thik ho jaye.......kashish bechari to tut hi gayi hai...😭..ek aur se anjali aur dusri aur prerna......ab aage kya hoga in dono behno ka......ple jaldi se continue karo...thanks

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kashish
Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lovely part ....................kashish didn't release bs shru hogi.........i m very sad 4 her 😭 ...........con't soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 part. 👏

plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59

Thank u guyz...for theses lovely comments...hope u all will like da next part..!!

so heres da next part

Sujal apne ghar mein enter hota hai ...

Veena : aray tum aa gaye...chalo khana khalo...

Sujal : mujhay nahi khana..

Veena : dekho zidd mat kero Sujal chalo kahan khalo...

Sujal (shouts) : kaha na nahi khana ...

Veena : kya ho gaya Sujal...tum itne gusse mein kyun ho ?

Sujal kuch kahe baghair apne kamre mein chala jata hai ..

Veena : (to herself) : yeh sujal ko kya ho gaya hai ...is se pehlay to kabhi us ne is tarah behave nahi kia..

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yahan Kashish apne ghar aati hai ..

Anjali :Di aap k interview ka kya hua..?

Kashish : mein select ho gayi ..

Anjali : wow Di..em so happy mujhay pata tha ....(Kashihs beech mein bolti...aur us ki aankhon mein aansoo hote hain )

Kashish : per meine mana kerdia..

Anjali (shocked) : kyun Di..itni mushkil se kuch intezam hua aur aapne usse mana kerdia..

Kashish : Haaaan!! kyunki wo ussi ka bhai tha..jisne tumhare saath...

Anjali : kyaaa? matlab Sujal..??

Kashish : haaan ..!! (aansoo beh rahe hote hain lol)

Anjali Kashish k brabar mein aa ker beth ti hai ..

Anjali : dekhein Di..kissi ek ki waja se aap sab ko bura to nahi keh sakhti na ..

Kashish : per..mujhay kissi ka ahsaan nahi chahiyeh ...mein nahi chahti koi muj per taras khaye..

Anjali : Di aisa zaruri to nahi hai k woh aap per taras kha rahe hon...ho sakhta hai unhun ne aap ki qualifications dekh ker hi aap ko appoint kia ho...

Kashish : haan ho sakhta hai ...per mein us admi ko bardasssht nahi ker sakhti..

Anjali : Di yeh ghalat baat hai ...aur hamare paas aur koi raasta bhi nahi hia ..

Kashish : to mein usse phir bat kerun .?

Anjali : haan ..aur aap unhe sorry bhi kahein gi..

Kashish : kyaaaaaaaaa? kabhi nahi ..

Anjali : Di please....mere liyeh ..

Kashish : huhhh...theek hai ..lekin sirf tere liyeh ...

Anjali : thanku Di...(hugz her) Di abhi jao..

Kashish : abhiii?

Anjali :haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan...

Kashish : ok ok ..

Kashish wapis office jati hai ..

Kashish to da receptionist...

Kashish : erm...mujhay Sujal Garewal se milna hai..

Receptionist : sorry Mam...wo to ja chuke hain ..

Kashish : watt..? ja chuke hain ....hmm ok thanku..

aur Kashish wapis jaa rahi hoti hai ..k uski takkar Akshat se ho jaati hai ..

Kashish : dekh ke nahi chal sakhte ?

Akshat : dekh k to chal raha tha...per aap ko dekhne ki waja se hi yeh ..

Kashish : wat..? tumhara dimagh thek hai ?

Akshat : abhi taq to theek tha..

Kashish : Godd!! kis kis tarah k cartoon paaye jate hain is office mein ...

Akshat : heylo!! i m Jerry..i mean i m Akshat..

Kashish stares him with disgust...aur wahan se chali jati hai ..

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Kavya Sujal k paas aata hai ..

Kavya : bhaiyaa aap ko mumma neechay bula rahi hain ..

Sujal : unse kaho mujhay bhuk nahi ..

Kavya : per mumma

Sujal ( shoutz ) : meine kaha na bhuk nahi hai ...samajh mein nahi aati ek baat tumhe...

Kavya : relax bhaiya kya hua ..

Sujal : uhh kuch nahi

Kavya : batayein na..

Sujal tells him da whole story...jo jo office mein hua..

Kavya : i m sorry bhaiya..meri wajah se aap ko yeh sab..

Sujal : jab teri koi ghalti hi nahi hai ..to sorry kehnay ki kya zarurat hai ..

Kavya : bhaiya mein apne aap ko be gunnah sabit ker k hi rahunga..

Sujal : all da best!!

Kavya : thank u..magar ab aap khana to khalein..

Sujal : han han chalo..bohat bhuk lagi hai ..

Kavya : Achawwwww ? abhi to keh rahe the k bhuk nahi hia ..

Sujal : woh kehna perhta hai ...(smiles)

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Anjali : Di aap itni jaldi aa gayin..? kya unhun ne sorry kehdia kya ..? heheh

Kashish : itni himmat kahan us mein ...bhag gaya ..

Anjali : kyaa? mein samjhi nahi

Kashish : mera matlab hai ..ghar jja chuke the..

Anjali : ohh....

Kashish : per haan ek aur cartoon bhi dekha meine..

Anjali : cartoon..? kaun kaun

Kashish : Akshat naam bata raha tha apne haha..

Anjali : hahaha ...Di thanku aap mere liyeh

Kashish : plzzzz shutup...

Anjali : ok ok ..!!

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NEXT DAY..!!

Sujal to da receptionist..

Sujal : Good morning...

Receptionist : Good morning Sir...Sir..

Sujal : ji

Receptionist: Sir kal aap k jaanay k baad koi larki aayi thi

Sujal : larki ...kaun..

Receptionist : i guess Kashish naam tha unka..

Sujal (shocked .) : Kashish ...

Receptionist : yes sir..

Sujal : ohh acha thanku...

Sujal goes to his cabin..

Sujal (to himself) : kuch kehna baqi reh gaya tha kya..jo dobara aayi thi..per dobara...

Phir koi door knock kerta hai ..

Sujal : come in..!!

Kashish cabin mein enter hoti hai ...n she was luking absolutely stunning...wearing a complete white dress with little embroidery on it...

Sujal to bas usse dekhta hi reh jaata hai..

Kashish : ermm woh mujhay yeh kehna tha k..

Sujal : ji kahiyeh ..(being a little arrogant)

Kashish : aa...i m sorryy..

Sujal : kya kaha aap ne ?

Kashish : i said i m sorry!!

Sujal : waise yew better be...aur haan miss apna gussa dusron pe mat utara kerein got it!!

Kashish : kaha na sorryyy

SUjal : Excuse me aap muj per ahsaan nahi ker rahin hain samjhi...aap ki hi galti thi ..to aap hi sorry kahein gi na...

Kashish : lissen i dont wanna argue with yew..mujhay ye job chaiyeh..

Sujal : aap order to aisay de rahi hain ...jaisay aap k baap ka office hai ..

Kashish : Shut upp...aap ko koi haq nahi banta aap mere baap k baare mein kuch kahein ..

Sujal ko lagta hai k us ne kuch zyada hi keh dia..

Sujal : ohh i m sorryy..

Kashish : yew better be...i want this job..

Sujal : aur ager mein na dun to ..

Kashish : Fine!! i dont mind...thanku..

Kashish jaane lagti hai ...

Sujal : uhhhhhh rukko

Kashish : kyaaa.?

Sujal : i mean rukiyeh...fine u r appointed..

Kashish :(to herself) thank GOD aqal aa gayi ..

SUjal : kya kaha...?

Kashish : none of ur business..

Sujal : mere baare mein hi kuch kaha na..

Kashish : aap ko khush fehmi kuch zyada hi hai ..

Sujal : fine..ab aap ja sakhti hain..

Kashish : mujhay rukne ka shauq bhi nahi ...

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Do comment!!!

*iMan!!

Edited by beauty_queen - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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kya zabardast part tha......👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻.....kya ladte hai dono bacho ki tarah..AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry..isse achcha to anjali aur kavya hai......ConfusedConfusedConfusedConfused....ab asli maza aayega sujal aur kashish ek saath pura din...AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry...kya hoga aage.......mujese ab aur intzaar bhi nahi hota....🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰.....ab jaldi se agla part likh do......StarStarStarStarStar for this part....thanks
love
kashish
Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago

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